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2026-2027学年九年级上册英语以读促写训练案
Unit 5 Power of Ideas
Topic: My Favourite Invention
写作任务:按照开篇点题 → 发明初衷 → 研发过程 → 带来影响的结构介绍一项自己感兴趣的发明,包含发明初衷、研发过程、发明影响等,从而了解发明创造的意义,培养创新思维,学会用英语客观介绍事物发展与价值。
【Pre-reading 话题铺垫】
【阅读文本Section B 3a 】
The invention of the plane has greatly changed the world. However, it seems that its inventors, Orville Wright and Wilbur Wright, were not looking to change the world at all. Rather, they just wanted to fly like birds.
To solve the problem of heavier-than-air flight, the Wright brothers began working with gliders. There were two main challenges. The first was how to get the glider into the air. The second was how to control it once it was flying. For both problems, they found their solution by looking at how birds flew. After they solved these problems, they added an engine to the glider. Then, in December 1903, the world's first plane flights were made.
The invention of the plane has made our travels around the world much easier and faster. Journeys that once took days, weeks, or even months, can now be made in only a few hours. As a result, communication among people in different countries is now much easier, and the world has become a much smaller place.
【Task 1】Read the text and complete the chart.
Paragraph 1
What was invented?
Who were the inventors?
Why was it invented?
Paragraph 2
What challenges were met?
How was it invented?
When was it invented?
Paragraph 3
What was its effect?
【While-reading 解构文本】
1. Find out the structure of the text.
1. Opening 开篇:点出发明及重大意义
2. Reason 初衷:发明者最初的想法(并非刻意改变世界,而是源于简单愿景)
3. Process 过程:遇到的难题+解决办法+最终成果
4. Influence 影响:对生活、世界、交流的改变
2. Choose a great invention you are interested in. Do some research and make notes about it.
______________was invented by________________in____________
It was invented because____________________________________________________________
It was made of / from______________________________________________________________
The inventor had difficulties in______________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
. The invention was responsible for /led to_____________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
【Post-reading 读后仿写】
【五步训练法仿写专练】 原句精讲—结构拆解—场景替换—当堂仿写—核对答案
模块1:开篇引入(介绍发明、点明价值)
【原句】The invention of the plane has greatly changed the world.
【句型结构拆解】The invention of ________ has greatly changed ________.
【基础仿写练习】电话的发明极大地改变了我们的生活。
_________________________________________________________________________
【提升仿写练习】电话是历史上最伟大的发明之一,为整个世界带来了巨大改变。
_________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
模块2:描述发明初衷(人物、最初想法)
【原句1】Its inventors, Orville Wright and Wilbur Wright, were not looking to change the world at all. Rather, they just wanted to fly like birds.
【句型结构拆解】
________ were not looking to ________ at all. Rather, they just wanted to ________.
【仿写练习】
这项工具的发明者根本无意轰动世界,相反,他只是想让人们的日常工作更轻松。_________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
模块3:描述研发过程(困难+解决办法)
【原句1】 There were two main challenges. The first was how to get the glider into the air. The second was how to control it.
【句型结构拆解】
There were two main challenges. The first was____________ The second was _________.
【仿写练习】
研发电视主要有两大难题,第一是画质问题,第二是体积问题。_________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
【原句2】There were two main challenges. For both problems, they found their solution by looking at how birds flew.
【句型结构拆解】
________ faced many challenges. He found his solution by ________.
【仿写练习】
在研发过程中,发明者遇到了诸多难题,但他通过不断观察和实践攻克了难关。
_________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
模块4:描述发明影响(生活、交流、效率)
【原句】 Journeys that once took days, weeks, or even months, can now be made in only a few hours. As a result, communication among people in different countries is now much easier.
【句型结构拆解】
________ makes our life ________. As a result, people can ________ more conveniently.
【仿写练习】
1、它让我们的生活更快捷,因此人们可以更便利地沟通、出行。
_________________________________________________________________________
2、得益于这项发明,昔日耗时良久的事情如今转瞬即可完成,它极大提升了人们的生活质量,拉近了世界的距离。
____________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
【Writing 当堂写作】
My Favourite Invention 写作框架(四段式)
Paragraph 1: Opening 开篇点题
What is your favourite invention? What general influence does it have?
Paragraph 2: Original wish 发明初衷
Who invented it? What was the inventor’s original idea?
Paragraph 3: Invention process 研发过程
What difficulties did the inventor meet? How did he/she solve them?
Paragraph 4: Influence & feeling 影响+感悟
How does the invention change our life? What do you think of it?
My Favourite Invention
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
. 【Writing 写作训练】
1.在科技飞速发展的今天,新发明层出不穷。智能手机(the smartphone)、计算机(the computer)、互联网(the Internet)、人工智能(AI)这些发明,正深刻改变着我们的学习、社交和日常生活。
请你以______ Has Changed My Life a Lot为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈这项发明对你生活的影响。
内容提示:
1. What invention has changed your life a lot?
2. What do you think of the invention?
3. How does it change your life?
注意事项:
1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等个人信息;
2.标题空格处需补全你要写的发明名称;
3.词数80词左右(给出的开头不计入总词数)。
________ Has Changed My Life a Lot
The invention that has changed my life a lot is _____________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.假如你们的外教David布置了一次小组演讲任务,话题是“The Great Minds” ,以下表格是你们小组的讨论结果,请你根据表格内容,用英语写一篇发言稿。
组员
心目中的伟人
原因
Tina
爱迪生(Edison)
刻苦努力
他的发明改善人类生活
Jim
莎士比亚(Shakespeare)
英国最伟大的戏剧家(playwriter)
他的作品丰富人们的生活
你
?(请你补充)
?(请你补充至少两点)
要求:
1.短文应包括表中所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息:
3.词数: 80词左右。(开头已给出,不计入词数)
Dear fellow students,
I’m honored to share our group’s ideas about great minds with you. ______________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3. 发明改变了世界,改变了人们的生活。你们学校做了一项关于“我最喜爱的发明”的调查。请你就以下表格写一篇英语短文,报告此次调查的全部结果,并谈谈你心目中最喜爱的一项发明是什么及其原因,短文需包括以下要点:
The result of “What’s your favourite invention” and reasons
Your idea
Your favourite invention and reason(s).
要求:
(1) 100词左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 可适当发挥,但要注意语言通顺,流畅,准确;
(3) 不得透露班级、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Inventions changed the world. Recently, we did a survey on “What’s your favourite invention” in our school, and here is the result.
30% of the students ______________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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2026-2027学年九年级上册英语以读促写训练案
Unit 5 Power of Ideas
Topic: My Favourite Invention
写作任务:按照开篇点题 → 发明初衷 → 研发过程 → 带来影响的结构介绍一项自己感兴趣的发明,包含发明初衷、研发过程、发明影响等,从而了解发明创造的意义,培养创新思维,学会用英语客观介绍事物发展与价值。
【Pre-reading 话题铺垫】
【阅读文本Section B 3a 】
The invention of the plane has greatly changed the world. However, it seems that its inventors, Orville Wright and Wilbur Wright, were not looking to change the world at all. Rather, they just wanted to fly like birds.
To solve the problem of heavier-than-air flight, the Wright brothers began working with gliders. There were two main challenges. The first was how to get the glider into the air. The second was how to control it once it was flying. For both problems, they found their solution by looking at how birds flew. After they solved these problems, they added an engine to the glider. Then, in December 1903, the world's first plane flights were made.
The invention of the plane has made our travels around the world much easier and faster. Journeys that once took days, weeks, or even months, can now be made in only a few hours. As a result, communication among people in different countries is now much easier, and the world has become a much smaller place.
【Task 1】Read the text and complete the chart.
Paragraph 1
What was invented?
Who were the inventors?
Why was it invented?
Paragraph 2
What challenges were met?
How was it invented?
When was it invented?
Paragraph 3
What was its effect?
【While-reading 解构文本】
1. Find out the structure of the text.
Opening 开篇:点出发明及重大意义
Reason 初衷:发明者最初的想法(并非刻意改变世界,而是源于简单愿景)
Process 过程:遇到的难题+解决办法+最终成果
Influence 影响:对生活、世界、交流的改变
2. Choose a great invention you are interested in. Do some research and make notes about it.
______________was invented by________________in____________
It was invented because____________________________________________________________
It was made of / from______________________________________________________________
The inventor had difficulties in______________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
. The invention was responsible for /led to_____________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
【Post-reading 读后仿写】
【五步训练法仿写专练】 原句精讲—结构拆解—场景替换—当堂仿写—核对答案
模块1:开篇引入(介绍发明、点明价值)
【原句】The invention of the plane has greatly changed the world.
【句型结构拆解】The invention of ________ has greatly changed ________.
【基础仿写练习】电话的发明极大地改变了我们的生活。
_________________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】The invention of telephone has greatly changed our life.
【提升仿写练习】电话是历史上最伟大的发明之一,为整个世界带来了巨大改变。
_________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】The telephone is one of the greatest inventions in history, which has brought huge changes to the whole world.
模块2:描述发明初衷(人物、最初想法)
【原句1】Its inventors, Orville Wright and Wilbur Wright, were not looking to change the world at all. Rather, they just wanted to fly like birds.
【句型结构拆解】
________ were not looking to ________ at all. Rather, they just wanted to ________.
【仿写练习】
这项工具的发明者根本无意轰动世界,相反,他只是想让人们的日常工作更轻松。_________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】Its inventor was not looking to surprise the world at all. Rather, he just wanted to make people’s daily work easier.
模块3:描述研发过程(困难+解决办法)
【原句1】 There were two main challenges. The first was how to get the glider into the air. The second was how to control it.
【句型结构拆解】
There were two main challenges. The first was____________ The second was _________.
【仿写练习】
研发电视主要有两大难题,第一是画质问题,第二是体积问题。_________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】There were two main challenges. The first was the picture quality. The second was the size.
【原句2】There were two main challenges. For both problems, they found their solution by looking at how birds flew.
【句型结构拆解】
________ faced many challenges. He found his solution by ________.
【仿写练习】
在研发过程中,发明者遇到了诸多难题,但他通过不断观察和实践攻克了难关。
_________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】
During the invention, the inventor met plenty of difficulties. However, he managed to solve them by observing and practicing constantly.
模块4:描述发明影响(生活、交流、效率)
【原句】 Journeys that once took days, weeks, or even months, can now be made in only a few hours. As a result, communication among people in different countries is now much easier.
【句型结构拆解】
________ makes our life ________. As a result, people can ________ more conveniently.
【仿写练习】
1、它让我们的生活更快捷,因此人们可以更便利地沟通、出行。
_________________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】 It makes our life faster and easier. As a result, people can communicate and travel more conveniently.
2、得益于这项发明,昔日耗时良久的事情如今转瞬即可完成,它极大提升了人们的生活质量,拉近了世界的距离。
____________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】
Thanks to this invention, things that used to take a long time can be finished in a short while. It has greatly improved people’s living quality and connected the world closer.
【Writing 当堂写作】
My Favourite Invention 写作框架(四段式)
Paragraph 1: Opening 开篇点题
What is your favourite invention? What general influence does it have?
Paragraph 2: Original wish 发明初衷
Who invented it? What was the inventor’s original idea?
Paragraph 3: Invention process 研发过程
What difficulties did the inventor meet? How did he/she solve them?
Paragraph 4: Influence & feeling 影响+感悟
How does the invention change our life? What do you think of it?
My Favourite Invention
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
My Favourite Invention
The mobile phone is one of the most amazing inventions in modern history, which has greatly changed people’s daily life.
In fact, its inventor never aimed to create a world-changing product at the beginning. Instead, he simply hoped to break the limit of long-distance communication. During the research, he met lots of difficulties, but he finally solved them through endless practice and exploration.
Thanks to this great invention, people can communicate with each other anytime and anywhere. It shortens the distance between people and makes the whole world more connected. I truly believe it keeps improving our life quality.
. 【Writing 写作训练】
1.在科技飞速发展的今天,新发明层出不穷。智能手机(the smartphone)、计算机(the computer)、互联网(the Internet)、人工智能(AI)这些发明,正深刻改变着我们的学习、社交和日常生活。
请你以______ Has Changed My Life a Lot为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈这项发明对你生活的影响。
内容提示:
1. What invention has changed your life a lot?
2. What do you think of the invention?
3. How does it change your life?
注意事项:
1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等个人信息;
2.标题空格处需补全你要写的发明名称;
3.词数80词左右(给出的开头不计入总词数)。
________ Has Changed My Life a Lot
The invention that has changed my life a lot is _____________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文①
The Internet Has Changed My Life a Lot
The invention that has changed my life a lot is the Internet.
In the past, I used to buy books in stores and wait for a long time to hear from my pen friends. Now, the Internet makes my life much easier and more colorful.
I think it is one of the greatest inventions ever. With it, I can watch movies, play games, read e-books online and chat with friends anytime. It really changes my life for the better and I like the Internet very much.
例文②
AI Has Changed My Life a Lot
The invention that has changed my life a lot is AI.
In the past, I spent hours looking for information in the library or asking teachers for problems. But now, AI has changed my way of learning and living. I think it is not just a cool invention but a powerful helper.
With AI, I can use smart learning apps to improve my weak subjects. I can chat with AI robots to practice oral English. Besides, AI can check my study methods and offer good advice on time management. It’s amazing how AI has improved my life!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:议论文,时态混合一般过去时、现在完成时、一般现在时
明确要点:点明改变生活的发明;表达对该发明的看法;对比过去与现在,说明发明如何改变自身学习生活
确定人称:第一人称 (I/my)
注意事项:标题补全发明名称,词数80左右,开头不计入总词数;不得透露真实姓名、校名等个人信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:开门见山,点明改变自己生活的发明是AI
主体段:今昔对比,讲述过去学习的麻烦,表达对AI的整体评价
结尾段:分层列举AI在学习上的各类用途,收尾抒发赞叹,升华发明带来的便利
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:点明核心发明
发明选择:AI
要点二:对发明的看法
评价词汇:a cool invention/a powerful helper/useful/amazing/magical等
衔接短语:not just...but.../more importantly/besides/what’s more/in addition等
要点三:发明如何改变生活
过去状态:spent hours looking for information/asked teachers for problems/took much time to solve difficult problems等
当下用途:improve weak subjects/practice oral English/check study methods/offer advice on time management/help me study effectively/finish lots of work quickly and save my time等
作用效果:changed my way of learning and living/makes study easier/improved my life/made my daily life much more convenient等
2.假如你们的外教David布置了一次小组演讲任务,话题是“The Great Minds” ,以下表格是你们小组的讨论结果,请你根据表格内容,用英语写一篇发言稿。
组员
心目中的伟人
原因
Tina
爱迪生(Edison)
刻苦努力
他的发明改善人类生活
Jim
莎士比亚(Shakespeare)
英国最伟大的戏剧家(playwriter)
他的作品丰富人们的生活
你
?(请你补充)
?(请你补充至少两点)
要求:
1.短文应包括表中所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息:
3.词数: 80词左右。(开头已给出,不计入词数)
Dear fellow students,
I’m honored to share our group’s ideas about great minds with you. ______________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Dear fellow students,
I’m honored to share our group’s ideas about great minds with you.
Tina thinks Edison is great. He worked really hard, and his inventions like the light bulb have greatly improved people’s lives. Jim admires Shakespeare, the greatest English playwriter, whose works enrich our culture.
As for me, I respect Marie Curie. She was the first woman to win the Nobel Prize and discovered radium, which helped patients in medicine. Her perseverance and intelligence inspire many people.
These great minds teach us that hard work and creativity can change the world.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
② 时态:以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③ 提示:需涵盖表格中所有组员的观点,并补充自己的伟人选择及理由。注意语言简洁,逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,用给定开头句,表明发言目的;
第二步,分别介绍Tina、Jim和自己的观点;
第三步,总结伟人的共同品质,升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
① improve people’s lives 改善人类生活
② enrich our culture 丰富文化
③ perseverance and intelligence 毅力与智慧
[高分句型]
Jim admires Shakespeare, the greatest English playwriter, whose works enrich our culture.(定语从句)
3. 发明改变了世界,改变了人们的生活。你们学校做了一项关于“我最喜爱的发明”的调查。请你就以下表格写一篇英语短文,报告此次调查的全部结果,并谈谈你心目中最喜爱的一项发明是什么及其原因,短文需包括以下要点:
The result of “What’s your favourite invention” and reasons
Your idea
Your favourite invention and reason(s).
要求:
(1) 100词左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 可适当发挥,但要注意语言通顺,流畅,准确;
(3) 不得透露班级、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Inventions changed the world. Recently, we did a survey on “What’s your favourite invention” in our school, and here is the result.
30% of the students ______________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Inventions changed the world. Recently, we did a survey on “What’s your favourite invention” in our school, and here is the result.
30% of the students’ favourite invention is smart phones because they can use them to chat with friends. 25% of the students’ favourite invention is the computer because they can use it to do many important jobs. 20% of the students’ favourite invention is the car because it makes their life convenient. 15% of the students’ favourite invention is the air conditioner because it can keep the air cool. 10% of the students choose other inventions.
My favourite invention is the Internet. Because of it, the world becomes smaller and smaller. We can keep abreast of the latest events around the world anytime and anywhere.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本题是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文用一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:描述学校关于“我最喜爱的发明”的调查报告的结果,需要遵照所给要求,信息覆盖全面,适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明学校做了一项关于“我最喜爱的发明”的调查,引出下文;
第二步,描述调查报告的结果,注意用词准确,行文流畅;
第三步,谈谈自己心目中最喜爱的一项发明是什么及其原因,注意细节充分,三观正确。
[亮点词汇]
①chat with…和……聊天
②because of 因为,由于
③keep abreast of及时了解
[高分句型]
①30% of the students’ favourite invention is smart phones because they can use them to chat with friends.(原因状语从句)
② Because of it, the world becomes smaller and smaller.(使用比较级)
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