Unit 1 Changes in My Life 2026-2027学年九年级上册英语以读促写训练案（新教材人教版）

该初中英语导学案聚焦九年级上册“Changes in My Life”主题，以读促写训练为核心，通过Pre-reading阅读文本铺垫话题，While-reading解构文本结构与细节，Post-reading开展句型专练，搭建从输入到输出的学习支架，引导学生掌握过去与现在对比表达及“总-分-总”写作结构。 资料特色在于以读促写闭环设计，通过阅读问题、细节填空、句型仿写等梯度训练提升语言能力，结合生活实际话题培养思维品质，提供写作提纲和多样任务助力学习能力发展，含思维导图辅助话题梳理，有效帮助学生从模仿过渡到自主写作。

2026-2027学年九年级上册英语以读促写训练案 Unit 1 The Changing World Topic: Changes in My Life 写作任务：从 home / school / study / transport / neighbourhood / environment 六个话题中任选三个变化，写一篇短文描述，结尾点明一件始终不变的事物。 【Pre-reading 话题铺垫】 【阅读文本Section B 3a 】 Changes in My Life Now that I am older, my life is different from when I was in primary school. For example, my primary school was near my home, so I used to walk to school with my parents. Now my junior high school is farther from home. I take a bus every day with my friends. My home has changed too. My family used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a much larger one. My grandma lives with us now as well. She has her own room and her own TV set. I am glad that I get to see her every day. The way I study is also different. I have become more confident in my studies and often attend group discussions. I enjoy studying with my friends. It’s amazing how much we have achieved together. My life has changed in many ways, but one thing stays the same: the feeling of love and happiness shared by my family. 【Task】Read the text, and answer the following questions. 1. How did the writer go to primary school in the past? _______________________________________________________ 2. Why does the writer take a bus to school now? _______________________________________________________ 3. What kind of house did the writer’s family live in before? _______________________________________________________ 4. Who lives with the writer’s family now? _______________________________________________________ 5. What never changes in the writer’s life though many things are different? _______________________________________________________ 【While-reading 解构文本】 【Task One】速读寻主旨，梳理整体结构 1. Read the text，answer two questions （1）How many kinds of changes does the writer mention? ______________________________________ （2）What is the only thing that stays the same? _______________________________________ 2. Find out the structure of the text. 开头（总）：Overall, my life is different from primary school. 中间（分）：school life changes / home changes / study changes 结尾（总）：Many changes, but family love always stays the same. 【Task Two】精读析细节，突破核心句型 1. 细读文章，完成细节填空，精准感知过去vs现在对比表达： Aspects Past (used to) Present School life It was ________ home. He _______ to school with his parents It is ______________ home. He _______ a bus with friends. Home life Lived in a _______ flat Lives in a _______ flat; grandma lives with them Study less confident in study More __________, joins______________ study with __________ 2. 总结写作技巧，为写作赋能： ①结构清晰：三段式结构，总起—分点阐述（生活、居住、学习）—升华主旨 ②句式丰富：巧用对比句型、并列句、宾语从句 ③主题升华：不止写外在变化，结尾保留不变的情感，提升文章立意 3. Think back to when you were in primary school. In what ways has your lfe changed? Make notes in the table . Aspects Past (used to) Present 【Post-reading 读后仿写】 【六大话题基础句型专练】 1. Transport ①我过去每天步行上学，现在骑自行车上学。 I used to walk to school every day, but now I ________________________. ②过去没有校车，现在我们有便利的校车。 There used to be no school bus, but now ________________________. 2. Home ①过去只有我和父母居住，现在奶奶和我们同住。 My family used to live only with my parents, but now ________________________. ②过去我的房间很小，现在宽敞明亮。 My room used to be small, but now ________________________. 3. Study ①我过去独自学习，现在喜欢和同学合作学习。 I used to study alone, but now ________________________. ②我过去害怕难题，现在敢于主动提问。 I used to be afraid of difficult problems, but now ________________________. 4. School ①我的小学离家很近，但初中离家更远。 My primary school used to be near my home, but my junior high school __________________. ②过去学校课程很少，现在活动丰富。 Our school used to have few lessons, but now ________________________. 5. Neighbourhood ①我的小区过去很安静，现在整洁热闹。 My neighbourhood used to be very quiet, but now ________________________. ② 过去小区绿植很少，现在到处是花草树木。 There used to be few plants here, but now ________________________. 6. Environment ①这里环境过去一般，现在空气清新、风景更美。 The environment used to be poor, but now ________________________. ②过去街道有很多垃圾，现在干净整洁。 There used to be much rubbish on streets, but now ________________________. 【进阶合并句仿写专练】 1. 随着我长大，我的出行方式和学习方式都变了。 As I grow older, my ways of transport and study ________________________. 2. 我不仅上学方式变了，生活环境也改善了很多。 Not only do I go to school differently, but my ________________________. 3. 我过去内向安静，现在乐于交流、合作学习。 I used to be shy and quiet, but now I ________________________. 【结尾升华高分句仿写专练】 1. 生活在很多方面都变了，但家人的爱始终不变。 My life has changed in many ways, but ________________________ stays the same. 2. 虽然环境和生活改变了，但我对生活的热爱从未改变。 Although my life has changed, ________________________ never changes. 3. 万物皆在改变，但温暖与陪伴永远不变。 Many things change, but ________________________ always remains the same. 【Writing 当堂写作】 1. 请任选三个话题 作为你的作文内容 1. ______________ 2. ______________ 3. ______________ 2. 万能写作提纲（直接填空成文） Beginning（总起） Now that I am older, my life is quite different from when I was in primary school. Great changes have taken place in my life. Body（三处对比变化） First, in terms of ___________________, I used to _____________________________.But now ___________________________________. Second, about ______________________, I used to ___________________________________. However, now __________________________. Third, in my _______________ life, things are different. I used to ________________________________, but now ______________________________________________. Ending（不变的事物） My life has changed a lot, but __________________________________________________ always stays the same. 3. 当堂写作（80–100词） Changes in My Life __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  【Writing 写作训练】 1．马年春晚一首《来晒秋》不仅唱出了劳动人民的希望与梦想，更唱出了乡村振兴的发展与成果。假如你是李华，你校英语报社正在举行题为“The Changes in My Hometown”的征文活动。请根据以下思维导图，积极投稿。 要求：1.短文需包含思维导图中的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2.内容积极向上，不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 The Changes in My Hometown In recent years, my hometown has great changes. Now let me share some with you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．走过两年的初中生活，进入初三学习的你们在学校的方方面面都一定发生了巨大的变化。现在校刊的英语学习栏目正在向同学们征文，请你围绕自己在英语学习方面发生的改变，如在英语学习中的兴趣、方法、成果等，以“The Changes in My English Learning”为题，写一篇投稿。 参考信息： 注意： 1. 词数：80-120词，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 根据内容提示进行写作，可适当发挥；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 字迹工整，书写规范、正确，语句通顺，注意单词的大小写和标点等； 4. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 The Changes in My English Learning As I become a grade 9 student, there are a lot of changes in my life especially in my English learning. _________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．To improve is to change. To perfect is to change often. —House of Cards (《纸牌屋》) 知人者智， 自知者明，真正的成熟， 从自我改变开始。新换掉的牙齿，新学会的单词，新认识的朋友……一切的改变都将构成一个崭新的自己。学校英语报就“How I Have Changed!”为题征稿。请根据以下征文海报，从不同方面谈论自己进入初中以来的变化和感受， 完成稿件。 要求: 1. 80~120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: How have you changed since you got into junior high school? And how do you feel about that? Write and share! Send it to EnglishWeekly@163.com. How I Have Changed! Since I got into junior high school, I have changed a lot. ______________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假定你校英语社团正在开展以“Small Changes, Big Differences”为主题的征文活动，旨在分享生活中微小的改变带来的积极影响。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文投稿。 写作提示： (1)介绍你做出的一个微小改变(如坚持每日阅读15分钟、绿色出行、坚持晨练等)； (2)这个改变带来的具体积极影响；   (3)分享你的感悟或对他人的建议。 注意： (1)词数80~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Small Changes, Big Differences There is no doubt that small changes in life can bring us big differences. ________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．社会快速发展让人民的生活不断变化。你的生活发生了哪些变化呢？假设你是李华，学校社团举办主题为“Changes in Our Lives”的英语征文活动。请你根据以下提示内容写一篇90词左右的英语文章投稿，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Changes in Our Lives With the development of society, amazing changes have taken place in our lives. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 17 / 18 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2026-2027学年九年级上册英语以读促写训练案 Unit 1 The Changing World Topic: Changes in My Life 写作任务：从 home / school / study / transport / neighbourhood / environment 六个话题中任选三个变化，写一篇短文描述，结尾点明一件始终不变的事物。 【Pre-reading 话题铺垫】 【阅读文本Section B 3a 】 Changes in My Life Now that I am older, my life is different from when I was in primary school. For example, my primary school was near my home, so I used to walk to school with my parents. Now my junior high school is farther from home. I take a bus every day with my friends. My home has changed too. My family used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a much larger one. My grandma lives with us now as well. She has her own room and her own TV set. I am glad that I get to see her every day. The way I study is also different. I have become more confident in my studies and often attend group discussions. I enjoy studying with my friends. It’s amazing how much we have achieved together. My life has changed in many ways, but one thing stays the same: the feeling of love and happiness shared by my family. 【Task】Read the text, and answer the following questions. 1. How did the writer go to primary school in the past? _______________________________________________________ 2. Why does the writer take a bus to school now? _______________________________________________________ 3. What kind of house did the writer’s family live in before? _______________________________________________________ 4. Who lives with the writer’s family now? _______________________________________________________ 5. What never changes in the writer’s life though many things are different? _______________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. He/She used to walk to school with his/her parents. 2. Because his/her junior high school is farther from home. 3. They lived in a small flat. 4. The writer’s grandma lives with them. 5. The feeling of love and happiness shared by his/her family stays the same. 【While-reading 解构文本】 【Task One】速读寻主旨，梳理整体结构 1. Read the text，answer two questions （1）How many kinds of changes does the writer mention? ______________________________________ （2）What is the only thing that stays the same? _______________________________________ 2. Find out the structure of the text. 开头（总）：Overall, my life is different from primary school. 中间（分）：school life changes / home changes / study changes 结尾（总）：Many changes, but family love always stays the same. 【Task Two】精读析细节，突破核心句型 1. 细读文章，完成细节填空，精准感知过去vs现在对比表达： Aspects Past (used to) Present School life It was ________ home. He _______ to school with his parents It is ______________ home. He _______ a bus with friends. Home life Lived in a _______ flat Lives in a _______ flat; grandma lives with them Study less confident in study More __________, joins______________ study with __________ 【答案】 near; walked; farther from; takes; small; much larger; confident, group discussions; friends 2. 总结写作技巧，为写作赋能： ①结构清晰：三段式结构，总起—分点阐述（生活、居住、学习）—升华主旨 ②句式丰富：巧用对比句型、并列句、宾语从句 ③主题升华：不止写外在变化，结尾保留不变的情感，提升文章立意 3. Think back to when you were in primary school. In what ways has your lfe changed? Make notes in the table . Aspects Past (used to) Present 【Post-reading 读后仿写】 【六大话题基础句型专练】 1. Transport ①我过去每天步行上学，现在骑自行车上学。 I used to walk to school every day, but now I ________________________. ②过去没有校车，现在我们有便利的校车。 There used to be no school bus, but now ________________________. 【参考答案】 ①ride my bike to school ② we have convenient school buses 2. Home ①过去只有我和父母居住，现在奶奶和我们同住。 My family used to live only with my parents, but now ________________________. ②过去我的房间很小，现在宽敞明亮。 My room used to be small, but now ________________________. 【参考答案】 ①my grandma lives with us ② it is big and bright 3. Study ①我过去独自学习，现在喜欢和同学合作学习。 I used to study alone, but now ________________________. ②我过去害怕难题，现在敢于主动提问。 I used to be afraid of difficult problems, but now ________________________. 【参考答案】 ① I enjoy studying with my classmates ② I dare to ask questions actively 4. School ①我的小学离家很近，但初中离家更远。 My primary school used to be near my home, but my junior high school __________________. ②过去学校课程很少，现在活动丰富。 Our school used to have few lessons, but now ________________________. 【参考答案】 ①is farther away and has more colourful activities ② we have rich subjects and interesting activities 5. Neighbourhood ①我的小区过去很安静，现在整洁热闹。 My neighbourhood used to be very quiet, but now ________________________. ② 过去小区绿植很少，现在到处是花草树木。 There used to be few plants here, but now ________________________. 【参考答案】 ①it is tidy and lively ② flowers and trees can be seen everywhere 6. Environment ①这里环境过去一般，现在空气清新、风景更美。 The environment used to be poor, but now ________________________. ②过去街道有很多垃圾，现在干净整洁。 There used to be much rubbish on streets, but now ________________________. 【参考答案】 ①the air is fresh and the scenery is much more beautiful ② the streets are clean and tidy 【进阶合并句仿写专练】 1. 随着我长大，我的出行方式和学习方式都变了。 As I grow older, my ways of transport and study ________________________. 2. 我不仅上学方式变了，生活环境也改善了很多。 Not only do I go to school differently, but my ________________________. 3. 我过去内向安静，现在乐于交流、合作学习。 I used to be shy and quiet, but now I ________________________. 【参考答案】 1. are quite different from before 2. living environment has improved a lot 3. am ready to communicate and study with others 【结尾升华高分句仿写专练】 1. 生活在很多方面都变了，但家人的爱始终不变。 My life has changed in many ways, but ________________________ stays the same. 2. 虽然环境和生活改变了，但我对生活的热爱从未改变。 Although my life has changed, ________________________ never changes. 3. 万物皆在改变，但温暖与陪伴永远不变。 Many things change, but ________________________ always remains the same. 【参考答案】 1. the love from my family 2. my love for life 3. warmth and family company 【Writing 当堂写作】 1. 请任选三个话题 作为你的作文内容 1. ______________ 2. ______________ 3. ______________ 2. 万能写作提纲（直接填空成文） Beginning（总起） Now that I am older, my life is quite different from when I was in primary school. Great changes have taken place in my life. Body（三处对比变化） First, in terms of ___________________, I used to _____________________________.But now ___________________________________. Second, about ______________________, I used to ___________________________________. However, now __________________________. Third, in my _______________ life, things are different. I used to ________________________________, but now ______________________________________________. Ending（不变的事物） My life has changed a lot, but __________________________________________________ always stays the same. 3. 当堂写作（80–100词） Changes in My Life __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】（transport / neighbourhood / study） Changes in My Life Now that I am older, my life is quite different from when I was in primary school. Great changes have taken place around me. First, my transport way has changed a lot. I used to walk to school with my parents, but now I take a bus to school with my classmates every day. Second, my neighbourhood looks totally new. There used to be few trees here, but now flowers and green plants are everywhere. Third, I have changed a lot in study. I used to be shy and dare not share ideas, but now I am confident and take part in group discussions. My life has changed in many ways, but the love and happiness from my family stays the same.  【Writing 写作训练】 1．马年春晚一首《来晒秋》不仅唱出了劳动人民的希望与梦想，更唱出了乡村振兴的发展与成果。假如你是李华，你校英语报社正在举行题为“The Changes in My Hometown”的征文活动。请根据以下思维导图，积极投稿。 要求：1.短文需包含思维导图中的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2.内容积极向上，不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 The Changes in My Hometown In recent years, my hometown has great changes. Now let me share some with you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The Changes in My Hometown In recent years, my hometown has had great changes. Now let me share some with you. The environment has changed a lot. The houses are newer and brighter, and the roads are wide and clean with beautiful flowers on both sides. As for people, they live a happier life. They are more confident and kind. Our farm products are rich and sell well online, bringing more money to us. I am proud of these changes. I love my hometown and hope it will become more and more beautiful in the future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意］ 确定文体：记叙文，以一般现在时和现在完成时为主 明确要点：人们的变化、房屋道路的变化、农产品变化、个人感受 确定人称：第一人称（李华） 注意事项：不得透露真实人名和校名，内容积极向上 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出家乡变化（已给出） 主体段：分点描述人们、房屋道路、农产品的具体变化 结尾段：表达感受与展望，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：people 变化描述：happier / more confident / kinder / more hardworking / more united等 具体表现：wear nicer clothes / smile more often / help each other / work together / live a better life等 要点二：houses, roads 房屋变化：newer / brighter / taller / more beautiful / modern等 道路变化：wider / cleaner / smoother / lined with trees / with street lights等 位置/环境描述：on both sides of the road / in front of houses / around the village等 要点三：farm products 产品种类：rice / fruits / vegetables / tea / honey / flowers等 销售方式：sell well online / shipped to big cities / sold in supermarkets / exported abroad等 带来好处：bring more money / improve living standards / make farmers proud等 要点四：your feelings 感受词汇：proud / happy / excited / hopeful / thankful / amazed等 2．走过两年的初中生活，进入初三学习的你们在学校的方方面面都一定发生了巨大的变化。现在校刊的英语学习栏目正在向同学们征文，请你围绕自己在英语学习方面发生的改变，如在英语学习中的兴趣、方法、成果等，以“The Changes in My English Learning”为题，写一篇投稿。 参考信息： 注意： 1. 词数：80-120词，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 根据内容提示进行写作，可适当发挥；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 字迹工整，书写规范、正确，语句通顺，注意单词的大小写和标点等； 4. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 The Changes in My English Learning As I become a grade 9 student, there are a lot of changes in my life especially in my English learning. _________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Changes in My English Learning    As I become a grade 9 student, there are a lot of changes in my life especially in my English learning.     I used to be afraid of English and often failed exams. I didn’t dare to speak English in class. However, a long talk with my English teacher changed me. She encouraged me to take up reading English stories. Also, with the help from a classmate, I found a better way to learn English. Now, I am not afraid anymore. I am brave enough to face challenges in my study. I am well prepared to take the coming exams and I am confident about my future.     In a word, these changes make me a better English learner. 【详解】# 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙类作文，以一般过去时、一般现在时为主 明确要点：过去英语学习的困难、转变的原因、现在的学习状态与成长收获 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：运用今昔对比，注意时态区分，不得透露个人真实信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起全文，点明升入九年级后英语学习发生了很多变化 主体段：先描述过去英语学习的困境，再写老师和同学带来的帮助，最后介绍当下的学习状态 结尾段：总结全文，点明这些变化给自己带来的成长 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：过去英语学习的困境 情绪状态：afraid/nervous等 学习表现：failed exams/didn’t dare to speak English等 要点二：学习发生转变的原因 帮助人物：English teacher/classmate等 改善方式：encourage me to take up reading English stories/find a better learning way等 要点三：如今的学习变化与收获 心态表现：brave/confident/not afraid anymore等 学习准备：be well prepared for the coming exams/take up reading English articles every day after school.等 成长感悟：become a better English learner/I will do better in English in the future./make great progress/improve my English skills等 3．To improve is to change. To perfect is to change often. —House of Cards (《纸牌屋》) 知人者智， 自知者明，真正的成熟， 从自我改变开始。新换掉的牙齿，新学会的单词，新认识的朋友……一切的改变都将构成一个崭新的自己。学校英语报就“How I Have Changed!”为题征稿。请根据以下征文海报，从不同方面谈论自己进入初中以来的变化和感受， 完成稿件。 要求: 1. 80~120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: How have you changed since you got into junior high school? And how do you feel about that? Write and share! Send it to EnglishWeekly@163.com. How I Have Changed! Since I got into junior high school, I have changed a lot. ______________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文                                                How I Have Changed! Since I got into junior high school, I have changed a lot. First, I’ve grown taller—some of my old clothes don’t fit me anymore! Second, my study habits improved. I listen carefully in class and review notes every day. My test scores are much better now, especially in English and science. Third, I’ve made more friends. Joining the art club helped me meet kind classmates. We chat, share snacks, and help each other with homework. These changes make me feel more confident. I used to be quiet, but now I enjoy school life. I’m glad to become a better me! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：人物变化类记叙文，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 明确要点：介绍自己的变化；表达自己的感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：词数不少于80，不得出现真实人名、校名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，进入初中后自己产生诸多改变 主体段：分别介绍自己的外貌、学业、人际交往等变化 结尾段：抒发变化带来的感悟与收获 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：各项变化 外貌：grow taller/stronger/put on weight/fit/healthy figure/slender 学业：carefully/form good study habits/make advances/review daily/put off homework 人际交往：shy/lonely/make more friends/cooperate with others/outgoing/share feelings 日常作息：stay up late/get up early/cut down screen time/follow regular schedule 课余爱好：indoor/outdoor activities/read books/go hiking/play games 要点二：内心感受 感受：confident/gain valuable experience/become a better version of myself/feel lucky/be thankful for 4．假定你校英语社团正在开展以“Small Changes, Big Differences”为主题的征文活动，旨在分享生活中微小的改变带来的积极影响。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文投稿。 写作提示： (1)介绍你做出的一个微小改变(如坚持每日阅读15分钟、绿色出行、坚持晨练等)； (2)这个改变带来的具体积极影响；   (3)分享你的感悟或对他人的建议。 注意： (1)词数80~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Small Changes, Big Differences There is no doubt that small changes in life can bring us big differences. ________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Small Changes, Big Differences There is no doubt that small changes in life can bring us big differences. I have such an experience and I’d like to share it with you. I used to spend much free time on phone games. A month ago, I made a small change—reading for 15minutes every night before bed. I chose some short English stories. Gradually, my reading speed improved a lot and I understood English passages more easily at school. This small change teaches me that small efforts make a big difference. Don’t look down upon small changes. Just start with one small thing, and you will surprise yourself finally. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时和一般现在时为主 明确要点：①介绍自己做出的一个微小改变；②阐述该改变带来的具体积极影响；③分享个人感悟或对他人的建议 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）。 注意事项：词数80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；不得透露真实姓名及学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接已给开头，引出个人经历，点明主题 主体段：介绍具体微小改变，说明改变带来的积极影响 结尾段：总结感悟，点明主旨，给出建议 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：介绍微小改变 对比引入：used to spend time on phone games/used to waste time online/used to stay up late 具体改变：reading for 15 minutes every night/reading for 15 minutes daily/reading before bedtime/chose short English stories/picked simple English articles/read interesting English passages 要点二：说明积极影响 效果体现：reading speed improved a lot/reading skills got better/reading fluency increased/understood English passages more easily/understood texts better/got better grades in reading 要点三：分享感悟与建议 个人感悟：small efforts make a big difference/small changes lead to big progress/little steps lead to big success 他人建议：start with one small thing/take the first small step/begin with a tiny change 5．社会快速发展让人民的生活不断变化。你的生活发生了哪些变化呢？假设你是李华，学校社团举办主题为“Changes in Our Lives”的英语征文活动。请你根据以下提示内容写一篇90词左右的英语文章投稿，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Changes in Our Lives With the development of society, amazing changes have taken place in our lives. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Changes in Our Lives With the development of society, amazing changes have taken place in our lives. First, people had to go to the market to buy things, but now they are used to shopping online. Second, they used to walk to other places, but now they take buses or the underground. Third, people communicated by letter before, but now they make video calls on mobile phones, just like talking face to face. Finally, there were small old houses, but now you can see many tall buildings. All in all, as time goes by, people’s lives are getting better and better. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 明确要点：变化应包括：购物、交通、通讯、居住环境等 确定人称：第三人称 (they) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、地名和学校名称，词数控制在90词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开篇点题，总领全文 主体段：分述变化 结尾段：结尾总结 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：购物方式 过去：go to the market to buy things等 现在：shop online/online shopping等 要点二：出行方式 过去：walk to other places/on foot等 现在：take buses or the underground/by taxi/by plane等 要点三：通讯方式 过去：communicate by letter等 现在：make video calls on mobile phones等 要点四：居住环境 过去：small old houses等 现在：many tall buildings等 17 / 18 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $