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D too mill's friend Raymond wrote to her about his problem with school bullying. Miley wrote an email telling him how to deal with IT read her email below. Hi Raymond. I'm so sorry to hear that you're having trouble with a school bully. Bullying is a serious problem and causes a lot of pain. No one should have to put up with that. Do not let a bully get you down. Bullies like to make others feel bad about themselves. But my dear friend, remember that you are a kind person and that matters. Be strong and stand up for yourself. I understand you are filled with shame and fear when you are bullied, but don't be afraid to tell people what is going on. Talk to an adult, you trust they can help you. Remember that you are not alone. If you need someone to talk to, please reach out to me. I'm always here for you with love and support waning you.
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课型:写作课
Integration D+Further study
Unit 2
Teenage problems
读懂建议信范文,梳理书信篇章结构,依托表格梳理各类青少年烦恼对应的解决办法,理清共情安慰、提出建议、主动提供帮助的行文逻辑。(学习理解)
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运用本课话题词汇、提建议句型复述范文,借助范文框架搭建写作提纲,完成段落仿写练习,围绕成长烦恼交流可行对策。(应用实践)
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参照范例自主构思朋友遇到的难题,梳理写作思路并撰写回信,条理清晰地表达安慰与建议,完成逻辑连贯、语气得体的书面表达。(迁移创新)
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学习目标
Lead in
01
Pre-writing
02
While-writing
03
Post-writing
04
Summary
05
Language points
06
Exercises
07
Homework
08
Contents
Lead in
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Lead in
D
A friend of yours is experiencing a problem. Write a letter to give advice on the problem.
When giving advice to your friend, what should be included?
Let’s learn from Millie.
Daniel: To be honest, I often feel lonely lately.
Millie: I'm sorry to hear that. Maybe you could spend more time with friends.
Would you like to go to the library with me after school?
Daniel: Great! I'd love to.
Offer to help
Give advice
Show your care
Pre-writing
02
Pre-writing
Read the notes about how to deal with common teenage problems. Add your own advice on each problem.
D1
P31
D
Take deep breaths to relax
Keep a positive attitude
Ignore the bullies if possible
Listen to soft music before sleep
Try to make new friends
Discuss and give advice
Pre-writing
subject
Address your friend
Give your advice
Offer to help
Conclude with a sign-off and your name
主题
和朋友打招呼
给出你的建议
主动提出帮忙
结束语与署名
Show you care about his/her problem
表达出你在意他 / 她遇到的难题
You seem to be having trouble with…
My advice is…
Have you tried …?
Why not…?
Let me know if I can help in any way.
I’m here to help.
I hope things get better soon.
Pre-writing
D3
Suppose one of your friends wrote to you about a problem. Write a reply telling him or her how to deal with it based on the information in Part D1. Use Millie's email as a model.
While-writing
03
While-writing
D3
Suppose one of your friends wrote to you about a problem. Write a reply telling him or her how to deal with it based on the information in Part D1. Use Millie's email as a model.
Post-writing
04
Post-writing
Hi friend,
I’m sorry to know you suffer from exam worries. It’s common for teenagers to feel nervous before exams.
Don’t push yourself too hard. Try to study a little bit every day instead of cramming. You can also join a study group to share ideas with classmates. Besides, take short breaks to relax when you feel tired.
I understand you feel stressed. Try taking deep breaths to calm down before exams.
You are not alone. Whenever you feel anxious, you can come and talk to me. I’m ready to listen.
With love and support,
xxx
Post-writing
Aspects Assessment criteria Scores
Structure Does the passage have a clear structure? (2 points)
Content Does the passage show your care about his/her problem? (2 points)
Does the passage give your advice? (2 points)
Language Are there any grammar mistakes? (2 points)
Is the handwriting neat and tidy? (2 point)
Post-writing
Share your articles in class, evaluate your classmates’ article and learn from each other.
Exchange articles with your partners for review and give each other marks.
Post-writing
Post-writing
Language points
05
Language points
遭遇校园欺凌
带来很多痛苦
不要让欺凌击垮你
让别人自我否定
为自己发声
把事情说出来
Summary
06
Summary
Exercises
07
Exercises
1. – When the older kids made fun of my little brother, I had to _________ him.
– That was really brave of you. He us lucky to have you as a sister.
stand up to B. stand up for C. stand by D. stand with
2. – I forgot my mum’s birthday yesterday. I feel such a deep ________ for hurting her feelings.
– You can cook her a nice dinner today to make up for it.
pity B. shame C. problem D. mistake
3. My grandmother has to take medicine every day because she __________ high blood pressure.
A. suffers from B. dies from C. feels from D. comes from
Exercises
4. –Do you know how to __________ stress from so many teste?
–Sorry. Maybe the youth worker can tell us what to _________ it.
A. deal with; do with B.do with; deal with
C. deal with; deal with D. do with; do with
5. –What do you think of my new haircut? Do you like it?
–Well, _________, I like your old hair better. But it will grow back quickly!
A. tell the truth B. to be honest
C. in my opinion D. I believe that
Homework
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A 层・基础巩固层
1.默写词汇表31-33页生词,并标注中文释义。
2.完成配套习题。
3.对照课堂思维导图,梳理本节课单词、句型笔记。
B 层・能力提升层
完成 A 层全部作业。
2.背诵D2。
Homework
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