2025-2026学年6月衢州市高二期末教学质量检测英语读后续写讲义

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；递进句，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 2026年6月衢州市高二期末教学质量检测 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 At sixteen, Leo felt lost. He had recently suffered a severe leg injury, forcing him to quit the school soccer team, and he struggled to express his feelings. The once-lively home had become a place of silence and tension as his parents carefully avoided mentioning anything about sports. He locked himself in his room, hiding from his friends. He felt like a stranger in his own life, unable to find the words to describe his sadness and confusion. One rainy afternoon, his childhood friend Mia visited. She found him sitting on his bed, staring blankly at the window. Without saying much, she noticed a dusty copy of The Little Prince on his shelf. The book that once brought them joy now sat untouched on his shelf, gathering dust. She picked it up and sat on the floor beside him, flipping through the familiar pages. "You used to love this story," she said softly, not looking at him. Leo shrugged, his voice barely a whisper. "That was before everything fell apart." Mia didn't push him to talk. Instead, she began to read from the book. Her voice was calm and gentle, filling the quiet room. "What is essential is invisible to the eye," she read. The familiar words seemed to hang in the air. Leo listened, his chest tightening with emotion that he had buried for weeks. After a long silence, he finally spoke. "I feel like the little prince… lost on a strange planet," he admitted, his voice trembling. Mia looked up, her eyes kind but serious. "Leo, your worth was never just in your legs. It's in your passion, your courage, and your heart. You are still you, with or without soccer." Smiling gently, she added, "And you are not alone. You have your 'fox'." At that moment, the wall Leo had built around himself began to crack. Tears welled up in his eyes. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1:For the first time in weeks, he opened up.  Paragraph 2: From that day on, reading became a routine for them. 2026年6月衢州市高二期末教学质量检测 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 At sixteen, Leo felt lost. He had recently suffered a severe leg injury, forcing him to quit the school soccer team(现在分词短语做伴随动作), and he struggled to express his feelings. The once-lively home had become a place of silence and tension as his parents carefully avoided mentioning anything about sports. He locked himself in his room, hiding from his friends(现在分词短语做伴随动作). He felt like a stranger in his own life, unable to find the words(adj.短语做主语补语)to describe his sadness and confusion. One rainy afternoon, his childhood friend Mia visited. She found him sitting on his bed, staring blankly at the window(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Without saying much, she noticed a dusty copy of The Little Prince on his shelf. The book that once brought them joy now sat untouched on his shelf(无灵主语句), gathering dust(现在分词短语做后置定语). She picked it up and sat on the floor beside him, flipping through the familiar pages(现在分词短语做伴随动作). "You used to love this story," she said softly, not looking at him(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Leo shrugged, his voice barely a whisper(独立主格). "That was before everything fell apart." Mia didn't push him to talk. Instead, she began to read from the book. Her voice was calm and gentle, filling the quiet room(现在分词短语做结果状语). "What is essential is invisible to the eye," she read. The familiar words seemed to hang in the air.(无灵主语句) Leo listened, his chest tightening with emotion(独立主格) that he had buried for weeks. After a long silence, he finally spoke. "I feel like the little prince… lost on a strange planet," he admitted, his voice trembling(独立主格). Mia looked up, her eyes kind but serious(独立主格). "Leo, your worth was never just in your legs. It's in your passion, your courage, and your heart. You are still you, with or without soccer." Smiling gently(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she added, "And you are not alone. You have your 'fox'." At that moment, the wall Leo had built around himself began to crack(无灵主语句). Tears welled up in his eyes. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1:For the first time in weeks, he opened up.  Paragraph 2: From that day on, reading became a routine for them. 参考范文（作答示例） For the first time in weeks, he opened up. He talked about the severe pain of his injury, the despair of watching his teammates play without him, and his deep fear(名词并列) that he was now completely useless. Mia sat quietly beside him, listening without judgment(现在分词短语做伴随动作), just like the fox patiently accompanying the little prince(此处应该有联想). She offered no magic solutions, only a comforting shoulder to lean on. That night, they finished the book together. When he closed the cover, Leo didn't feel so lost anymore. He realized that sharing his grief could open doors that words alone couldn't. In that small room, the lingering tension finally began to lift(无灵主语句), replaced by a quiet sense of relief.(过去分词短语做结果状语) From that day on, reading became a routine for them. They would settle on the floor together, picking a new story from his once-forgotten shelf.(现在分词短语做伴随动作) Through the adventures of different characters, Leo found a safe way to explore his own feelings. The dusty books were slowly cleaned, and along with them, the dust on his heart was gently wiped away. He started stepping out of his room, replying to his teammates' messages, and even smiling more often. He knew his leg would take time to heal and his athletic dreams might have to change, but he no longer felt like a stranger on a lonely planet. With his "fox" by his side, Leo finally found the courage to rebuild his world. Part 1 高考英语读后续写分析 一、文章类型分析 分析项目 内容 文章类型 人与自我——成长感悟类（心理疗愈+友情陪伴） 子类型 挫折成长类 / 心理治愈类 / 阅读改变人生类 核心主题 真正的价值并非来自外在能力，而来自内心；陪伴、倾听和阅读能够帮助人成长。 情感主线 迷茫→压抑→倾诉→治愈→成长→重新面对生活 写作重点 心理变化描写远重于事件描写 高考考查重点 情绪递进、人物成长、主题升华、伏笔回扣 二、文章整体故事结构 阶段 内容 Beginning Leo受伤退出足球队，陷入自我封闭。 Rising Action Mia带着《小王子》来看望Leo，引导其重新阅读。 Turning Point Leo第一次说出自己的真实感受："I feel like the little prince..." Climax（续写第一段） Leo彻底敞开心扉，释放压抑情绪。 Resolution（续写第二段） 阅读成为习惯，Leo重新面对生活，实现心理成长。 整个故事属于心理成长型故事，高潮不是事件，而是情绪爆发。 三、高考续写构思分析 第一段（Paragraph 1） 段首句For the first time in weeks, he opened up. 这一句已经规定：不是发生事件，而是"开始倾诉"。 因此第一段应该围绕：倾诉——倾听——理解——释怀 展开。 推荐结构： 顺序 内容 ① Leo倾诉压抑已久的痛苦（受伤、失去梦想、自我否定） ② Mia认真倾听，不打断、不说教 ③ 《小王子》的"狐狸"形成照应 ④ Leo情绪释放（哭泣） ⑤ 第一段结尾完成第一次心理松动，为第二段阅读铺垫 注意： 不要突然： · 去医院 · 去踢球 · 父母回来解决问题 这些都会破坏故事节奏。 第二段（Paragraph 2） 段首句From that day on, reading became a routine for them. 说明：第一段一定已经完成："第一次真正交流" 否则第二段突然一起读书会很突兀。 第二段重点应该是：阅读→成长→重新面对生活。 推荐结构： 阅读↓共情↓表达情绪↓重新联系朋友↓重新规划未来↓主题升华 四、续写布局 第一段 第二段 倾诉痛苦 阅读陪伴 Mia倾听 阅读理解自己 情绪释放 重建生活 心墙崩塌 心灵成长 整篇属于："心理变化推进式续写" 而不是"事件推进式续写" 五、续写承接原文必须注意事项 原文伏笔 续写必须回应 severe leg injury 可以恢复，但不能突然痊愈 quit soccer team 接受现实，而不是立即回归球队 silent home 家里的氛围逐渐缓和 The Little Prince 必须继续发挥作用 fox Mia继续成为"狐狸"式陪伴 invisible to the eye 点题升华 You are not alone 第二段要体现 六、高考阅卷 原文 续写呼应 dusty book books重新被翻阅 lonely planet 不再孤独 fox Mia持续陪伴 invisible to the eye 真正价值来自内心 silence conversation locked himself walked out of his room 这叫：首尾照应（Circular Ending）属于高考优秀作文常见特点。 七、巧妙设计续写的方法 建议采用：第一层：情绪释放 不要马上振作。 先哭。 先说。 先表达。 这样真实。 第二层：陪伴疗愈 Mia不是老师。 不是心理医生。 而是：陪伴。 高考特别喜欢：Listening is healing. 第三层：阅读治愈 书不是解决问题。 书只是：帮助Leo重新认识自己。 第四层：成长 成长不是：腿好了。 而是：心好了。 第五层：主题升华 可以借《小王子》中的思想：What is essential is invisible to the eye. 升华：真正重要的是勇气、友情、内心。 八、故事核心脉络 1）故事核心脉络 受伤↓失去梦想↓封闭自己↓Mia来访↓《小王子》↓表达真实情绪↓获得理解↓阅读陪伴↓重新面对生活↓ 成长 九、关键线索梳理 项目 内容 人物 Leo、Mia、父母（背景人物） 核心道具 《The Little Prince》 核心象征 Fox（陪伴）、Planet（孤独）、Dust（封闭）、Book（治愈） 情感基调 压抑→温暖→治愈→希望 最大冲突 Leo否定自己的价值 真正解决方式 阅读+倾诉+陪伴 主题 真正的价值来自内心而非能力 十、全文分析表 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 Leo敏感、自卑、压抑；Mia温柔、耐心、善于陪伴 He felt lost. / Mia didn't push him to talk. 情感层次 迷茫→痛苦→触动→倾诉→希望 Tears welled up in his eyes. 关键情节点 受伤、读书、引用《小王子》、第一次表达自己 "I feel like the little prince…" 语言特色 大量心理描写+象征描写+引用经典 What is essential is invisible to the eye. 关键词分析 injury、soccer、lost、fox、book、essential、heart 全文多次重复出现 心理描写 自我怀疑、孤独、压抑、释放 unable to find the words... 动作描写 staring、picked up、flipping、read、looked up She picked it up... 环境描写 rainy afternoon、quiet room、dusty shelf One rainy afternoon... 隐含主题 阅读疗愈、友情陪伴、重新认识自我 your worth was never just in your legs 情感转折 Mia引用《小王子》后Leo开始倾诉 At that moment, the wall...began to crack. 空间转换 家→卧室→阅读空间（始终保持单一场景） sitting on his bed 时间过渡 weeks→that afternoon→that night→From that day on For the first time in weeks... 十一、苏格拉底式提问（引导学生构思续写） 第一段（围绕"Leo终于倾诉"） 问题 引导目的 Leo为什么一直不愿说话？ 挖掘人物心理 他最害怕失去的到底是什么？ 找到真正冲突 如果终于开口，他最先会说什么？ 第一层情绪 Mia为什么没有急着安慰？ 理解"倾听"的重要 Mia还能怎样回应，而不是讲大道理？ 合理人物行为 《小王子》中的狐狸意味着什么？ 回扣原文 Leo哭出来意味着什么？ 心墙开始瓦解 第一段最后应该留下些什么？ 为第二段铺垫 第二段（围绕"阅读成为习惯"） 问题 引导目的 为什么他们会坚持一起读书？ 合理承接段首句 阅读除了消磨时间，还有什么作用？ 深化主题 Leo会有哪些细微变化？ 描写成长过程 他会怎样重新面对父母和朋友？ 外化心理成长 足球梦想还能实现吗？ 避免生硬圆满结局 如果不能踢球，他还能怎样热爱足球？ 成长而非奇迹 "dust"可以象征什么？ 运用象征手法 最后一段如何再次照应"The Little Prince"？ 首尾呼应 "What is essential is invisible to the eye."还能怎样理解？ 提炼主题 故事最后Leo真正找回的是什么？ 完成主题升华 十二、本题续写黄金思路 第一段 第二段 倾诉伤痛 阅读陪伴 Mia倾听 阅读治愈 心墙崩塌 重新面对生活 情绪释放 重建自我价值 与《小王子》呼应 再次点题"真正重要的是内心" Part 2 高考英语读后续写语料积累 一、动作描写 适用于：倾诉、陪伴、鼓励、成长、治愈类读后续写 英文例句 中文翻译 1. He lowered his head, struggling to hold back the tears. 他低下头，努力忍住眼泪。 2. She gently placed a hand on his shoulder without saying a word. 她轻轻把手放在他的肩膀上，一句话也没有说。 3. His trembling fingers slowly reached for the dusty book. 他颤抖的手慢慢伸向那本落满灰尘的书。 4. He buried his face in his hands, unable to hide his pain any longer. 他双手捂住脸，再也无法掩饰内心的痛苦。 5. She quietly turned the pages, allowing the silence to speak for itself. 她静静翻动书页，让沉默自己诉说。 6. He wiped away his tears and managed a faint smile. 他擦去眼泪，勉强露出一丝微笑。 7. Taking a deep breath, he finally found the courage to speak. 深吸一口气后，他终于鼓起勇气开口。 8. He slowly stepped out of his room for the first time in weeks. 几周以来，他第一次慢慢走出了房间。 9. Their eyes met, and neither of them needed another word. 两人的目光相遇，无需再多说一句话。 10. Closing the book gently, he felt a quiet strength growing inside him. 他轻轻合上书，感到内心悄悄生出一股力量。 二、心理描写 英文例句 中文翻译 1. A wave of sadness washed over him. 一阵悲伤涌上心头。 2. His heart felt unbearably heavy. 他的心沉重得难以承受。 3. For the first time, he no longer felt completely alone. 他第一次不再觉得自己孤单无助。 4. Hope quietly found its way back into his heart. 希望悄悄回到了他的心里。 5. His fear slowly gave way to relief. 他的恐惧渐渐被释然所取代。 6. He realized that asking for help was not a sign of weakness. 他意识到寻求帮助并不是软弱。 7. The words touched the deepest corner of his heart. 那句话触动了他内心最深处。 8. He finally allowed himself to feel everything he had been hiding. 他终于允许自己面对一直压抑的情绪。 9. Gratitude quietly filled his heart. 感激悄悄充满了他的心。 10. At that moment, he felt understood rather than judged. 那一刻，他感受到的是理解，而不是评判。 三、环境描写 英文例句 中文翻译 1. Rain tapped softly against the window. 雨轻轻敲打着窗户。 2. The room was wrapped in peaceful silence. 房间笼罩在宁静之中。 3. The fading sunlight filtered through the curtains. 夕阳透过窗帘洒进来。 4. Dust floated quietly in the golden light. 灰尘在金色阳光中静静飘浮。 5. Outside, the rain had finally stopped. 外面的雨终于停了。 6. Warm afternoon light filled every corner of the room. 温暖的午后阳光洒满房间。 7. The quiet room suddenly felt warmer than before. 安静的房间忽然比之前温暖许多。 8. A gentle breeze carried the smell of fresh rain. 微风送来了雨后的清新气息。 9. The heavy clouds slowly drifted away. 乌云慢慢散去。 10. Everything seemed brighter than it had been before. 一切似乎都比以前明亮了。 四、高考高频词高级替换 （一）心理描写 普通词 高级替换 sad heartbroken / miserable / devastated / downhearted / sorrowful happy delighted / overjoyed / thrilled / joyful / cheerful afraid terrified / frightened / anxious / uneasy / fearful surprised astonished / amazed / stunned / startled / speechless nervous tense / restless / uneasy / on edge / apprehensive （二）动作描写 普通词 高级替换 look gaze at / stare at / glance at / peek at / fix one's eyes on walk wander / stride / pace / shuffle / march say whisper / murmur / admit / remark / respond cry sob / burst into tears / weep / choke back tears / fight back tears smile beam / grin / wear a faint smile / smile warmly / flash a smile （三）成长主题 普通表达 高级表达 become better grow stronger change transform understand realize / recognize encourage inspire / motivate help support / comfort / accompany （四）友情陪伴 普通词 高级表达 friend companion / soulmate / trusted friend stay with stand by / remain beside / accompany listen lend an ear / listen patiently comfort reassure / console support offer encouragement / provide emotional support 五、固定搭配、词法解析与语料积累 搭配/短语 中文意思 词法解析 近义表达 反义表达 例句① 例句② suffer a severe injury 遭受重伤 suffer+名词 be injured seriously; sustain an injury recover completely He suffered a severe injury during training. She suffered a serious leg injury. quit the team 退出球队 quit+组织 leave the team; withdraw from join the team He quit the soccer team reluctantly. She never thought of quitting. feel lost 感到迷茫 系表结构 feel confused; feel directionless feel confident He felt completely lost. I often feel lost before exams. lock oneself in... 把自己关在…… lock oneself+介词 shut oneself away; isolate oneself open up He locked himself in his room. She shut herself away for days. stare at 凝视 stare+介词 gaze at; fix one's eyes on ignore He stared at the ceiling. She stared into space silently. flip through 翻阅 动词短语 leaf through; browse close She flipped through the book. He leafed through the magazine. open up 敞开心扉 动词短语 pour out one's heart; speak out keep silent He finally opened up. She opened up to her parents. burst into tears 突然哭起来 burst into+n. break down; sob hold back tears She burst into tears. He suddenly burst into tears. hold back tears 忍住眼泪 动词短语 fight back tears burst into tears He held back his tears. She struggled to hold back tears. build a wall around oneself 封闭自己 比喻表达 isolate oneself open one's heart He built a wall around himself. She finally broke down that wall. find the courage to... 鼓起勇气做…… find+抽象名词 summon the courage lose courage He found the courage to speak. She finally found the courage to apologize. step out of 走出…… 动词短语 walk out of stay inside He stepped out of his room. She stepped out of her comfort zone. regain confidence 重拾信心 regain+名词 rebuild confidence lose confidence He regained his confidence. She slowly regained confidence. brighten up 变得明朗 动词短语 cheer up; light up darken His face brightened up. The room brightened up. heal emotionally 心理治愈 heal+副词 recover emotionally break down Reading helped him heal emotionally. Time healed her emotionally. 六、重点词汇积累 单词 中文 近义词 反义词 例句① 例句② essential 本质的；重要的 vital, crucial, significant, important, fundamental trivial, unimportant Friendship is essential to growth. Confidence is essential for success. despair 绝望 hopelessness, misery, depression, desperation, sorrow hope, optimism He fell into despair. Despair almost defeated him. courage 勇气 bravery, determination, boldness, spirit, nerve fear, cowardice She admired his courage. Courage helped him move on. accompany 陪伴 stay with, support, stand by, attend, escort abandon, leave She accompanied him home. True friends accompany each other. comfort 安慰 console, reassure, soothe, encourage, relieve upset, discourage Her words comforted him. Reading brought him comfort. routine 日常惯例 habit, practice, custom, pattern, ritual exception, novelty Reading became a routine. Exercise is part of my routine. trembling 颤抖的 shaking, quivering, shivering, vibrating, unsteady steady, firm His trembling hands held the book. She spoke in a trembling voice. relieve 缓解 ease, reduce, lessen, soothe, lighten worsen, increase Talking relieved his pressure. Music relieved his anxiety. invisible 看不见的 unseen, hidden, unnoticed, concealed, obscure visible, obvious Love is invisible. The danger remained invisible. rebuild 重建 restore, recover, reconstruct, renew, revive destroy, ruin He rebuilt his confidence. They rebuilt their friendship. 七、可直接用于高考续写的高级语料 情绪递进句型 · A wave of warmth spread through his heart. · His heart gradually softened. · Tears blurred his vision. · His fear melted away little by little. · A sense of relief washed over him. 陪伴主题句型 · Sometimes, the greatest comfort comes from silent companionship. · Being heard is the beginning of healing. · True friendship shines brightest in difficult times. · A listening ear is often more powerful than countless words. · The best support is simply being there. 成长升华句型 · He finally realized that true strength comes from within. · What healed him was not time, but love and understanding. · Every challenge carries the seed of growth. · Though life had changed, hope never disappeared. · Sometimes, losing one dream is the beginning of discovering another. Part 3 Possible Versions Version 1 Paragraph 1: For the first time in weeks, he opened up. The words poured out(无灵主语句) before he could stop them, and with every sentence, the weight on his heart seemed a little lighter. He admitted how helpless he had felt when the doctor told him he could no longer play soccer for a long time and confessed that what frightened him most was not the pain but the fear of losing himself. Hearing every word patiently(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Mia remained beside him, nodding gently(现在分词短语做伴随动作), her eyes full of understanding(独立主格). Instead of offering empty comfort, she simply reminded him of the little prince, who kept searching for what truly mattered. It was not until then that (强调句)Leo realized someone had been listening to his silence all along. Tears rolling down his cheeks,(独立主格) he managed a faint smile. The rain had stopped, soft sunlight streaming through the window(独立主格), and the room no longer felt as cold as before. Before leaving, Mia quietly placed The Little Prince on his desk, and they agreed to continue reading it together the following afternoon. Paragraph 2: From that day on, reading became a routine for them. Every afternoon, they would sit by the same window and lose themselves in stories, each page opening another door to feelings(独立主格) Leo had never dared to face. Sometimes they laughed over amusing adventures; sometimes they sat in silence, allowing the words to settle naturally in their hearts(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Little by little, his confidence returned, and what had once seemed impossible gradually became manageable. He began replying to his teammates' messages, chatting with his parents during dinner, and even making plans for the future(动作并列). It was reading, together with Mia's quiet companionship, that helped him discover that his worth had never depended solely on soccer(强调句). Looking once more at the familiar sentence(现在分词短语做伴随动作), "What is essential is invisible to the eye," Leo smiled, knowing(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that although life had changed, the courage hidden deep inside him(过去分词短语做后置定语) had never disappeared. Version 2 Paragraph 1: For the first time in weeks, he opened up. His trembling voice broke the long silence(无灵主语句) as he confessed that every message from his teammates reminded him of everything he had lost. A deep sigh escaping from his lips(独立主格), he admitted that he had even begun to doubt whether anyone still needed him. Mia listened quietly without interrupting, just as she had done since she entered the room. Then she gently tapped the cover of The Little Prince and said that even the little prince had wandered through loneliness before discovering the meaning of love and friendship. Those simple words, carrying unexpected warmth(现在分词短语做后置定语), slowly melted the ice around Leo's heart(无灵主语句). By the time the afternoon light faded, they had finished another chapter together, and Leo found himself looking forward to opening the book again instead of hiding behind his closed door. Paragraph 2: . From that day on, reading became a routine for them. Their conversations gradually grew longer than the stories themselves(无灵主语句), for every character seemed to mirror a part of Leo's own journey. Each discussion helped him understand that setbacks could shape a person instead of defining one. Encouraged by those moments(过去分词短语做原因状语 ), he stopped avoiding the people who cared about him and slowly welcomed laughter back into the house. Not only did he regain the courage to face his injury, but he also rediscovered the confidence to imagine a different future. One afternoon, gently closing the familiar book(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he suddenly understood why the little prince treasured his fox so much. True friendship, invisible to the eye yet deeply rooted in the heart, had quietly led him out of the lonely planet he had built for himself. Version 3 Paragraph 1: For the first time in weeks, he opened up. Looking at the familiar illustration of the little prince,(现在分词短语做伴随动作) he confessed how empty he had felt since leaving the soccer field and how ashamed he was of becoming someone who shut everyone out. His words came in fits and starts, his voice trembling(独立主格), yet Mia never hurried him. She simply stayed beside him, listening with the same patience(现在分词短语做伴随动作) the fox had shown in the story. A comforting silence filled the room(无灵主语句), making every honest word easier to say(现在分词短语做结果状语). When Leo finally stopped speaking, he felt exhausted but strangely peaceful. The dusty book between them no longer seemed forgotten, for it had quietly become the bridge reconnecting two old friends(现在分词短语做后置定语). Before they said goodbye, they promised that the story would not end with that afternoon. Paragraph 2: From that day on, reading became a routine for them. The dusty shelf gradually turned into their favorite corner, where stories, laughter, and thoughtful conversations replaced silence day after day. With every book they finished(with复合结构), Leo became more willing to share his thoughts instead of hiding them. His parents were delighted to see him joining family conversations again, while messages from his teammates were no longer left unanswered. Time passing quietly,(独立主格) confidence growing steadily(独立主格) , Leo began to believe that life still held countless possibilities beyond the soccer field. One evening, he gently dusted off The Little Prince once again and smiled at its familiar words. Only then did (倒装强调)he truly understand that what was "essential" had never been his ability to play soccer, but the courage to accept himself and the friends who had never stopped believing in him. 练习题（默写与仿写包） 第一部分：原文佳句默写（根据汉语提示补全句子） He had recently suffered a severe leg injury, ___________ (迫使他退出了) the school soccer team. The once-lively home had become a place of silence and tension as his parents ___________ (小心翼翼地避免) mentioning anything about sports. He locked himself in his room, ___________ (躲着他的朋友们). He felt like a stranger in his own life, unable to find the words to ___________ (描述他的悲伤和困惑). She found him sitting on his bed, ___________ (茫然地盯着窗外). The book that once brought them joy now sat untouched on his shelf, ___________ (积满灰尘). She picked it up and sat on the floor beside him, ___________ (翻阅着熟悉的书页). Leo shrugged, his voice ___________ (勉强能听到，耳语一般). "That was before everything fell apart." Mia didn't push him to talk. Instead, she began to read from the book, her voice ___________ (平静而温柔). Leo listened, his chest ___________ (因情绪而收紧) that he had buried for weeks. "I feel like the little prince… ___________ (迷失在一个陌生的星球上)," he admitted, his voice ___________ (颤抖着). "Leo, your worth was never just in your legs. It's in your passion, your courage, and your heart. You are still you, ___________ (不管有没有足球)." At that moment, the wall Leo had built around himself ___________ (开始裂开). Tears ___________ (涌上了他的眼眶). He offered no magic solutions, ___________ (只提供一个可以依靠的安慰的肩膀). 第二部分：根据中文及关键词提示，写出完整的英文句子 要求：请根据所给中文意思和英文关键词，写出完整、通顺的英文句子，注意时态和语态。 几周以来他第一次开口说话。（open up, weeks） 他谈起了受伤带来的剧烈疼痛，以及看着队友们踢球时自己的绝望。（severe pain, watch, teammates, despair） 那天晚上，他们一起读完了这本书。（finish, together, cover） 他意识到，分享内心的痛苦能够打开那些仅靠语言无法打开的门。（realize, share, grief, open doors） 在那个小房间里，挥之不去的紧张感终于开始消散，取而代之的是一种平静的宽慰。（tension, lift, replace, relief） 从那天起，阅读成了他们的日常。（routine, from that day on） 他们会一起坐在地板上，从他曾经遗忘的书架上选一本新故事。（settle on the floor, pick, once-forgotten） 通过不同角色的冒险经历，Leo找到了一种安全的方式来探索自己的情感。（through adventures, safe way, explore） 那些尘封的书被慢慢清理干净，与此同时，他心上的灰尘也被轻轻擦去了。（dusty, clean, along with, wipe away） 他开始走出房间，回复队友的信息，甚至笑得更频繁了。（step out of, reply to, smile） 他知道自己的腿需要时间恢复，他的运动梦想也许得改变方向。（take time to heal, athletic dreams, change） 有他的“狐狸”在身边，Leo终于找到了重建自己世界的勇气。（by one's side, courage, rebuild） 第三部分：动作、环境、心理描写语料库（根据提示完成句子） 他低着头，_________________________________ （手指摩挲着书页），声音几乎听不见。 她_________________________________ （轻轻翻过一页），静静地坐在他身边。 午后的阳光透过窗帘的缝隙，_________________________________ （在地板上洒下金色的光斑）。 他_________________________________ （长舒一口气），像是卸下了千斤重担。 她的声音___________ （平静地）filled the quiet room, _________________________________ （像一只温暖的手抚过他的心头）。 他______________________ （抬头望着她），_________________________________ （眼眶里闪着泪光）。 窗外，雨不知什么时候停了，_________________________________ （几缕阳光从云层中漏了出来）。 他_________________________________ （缓缓合上书），感觉心里有什么东西悄悄松动了。 Mia______________________ （拍了一下他的肩膀），_________________________________ （什么也没说，但眼神里全是暖意）。 房间里______________________ （很安静），只有书页翻动的声音，_________________________________ （沙沙的，像时间的脚步）。 第四部分：高级句式仿写 句式1：感官先行 + 你的主要动作 + 即时结果 例句： Listening to her gentle voice, Leo felt a wave of comfort wash over him and relaxed his clenched fists for the first time. 仿写： 看着Mia平静的脸庞，Leo感到内心深处有什么东西被触动了，他张了张嘴，却说不出话来。 句式2：无灵主语句 + 现在分词 例句： The afternoon sunlight slid through the window, casting warm patches of gold on the dusty floor. 仿写： 泪水模糊了他的视线，让他看不清手中的书页。 句式3：adj. and adj., 动作链 例句： Nervous and hesitant, Leo lowered his head, opened his mouth, and finally let the words out. 仿写： 疲倦而迷茫，Leo靠在墙边，盯着天花板，一句话也不想说。 句式4：独立主格 + 句子 例句： Her voice soft and steady, Mia continued reading, never rushing him. 仿写： 他的手指颤抖着，Leo翻开了《小王子》的第一页，深吸了一口气。 句式5：强调句（It was...that...） 例句： It was Mia's patient company that gradually broke down the wall around Leo's heart. 仿写： 正是在那个下雨的午后，Leo的生活才开始发生变化。 句式6：递进句（not only...but also...） 例句： Reading not only filled their afternoons with stories, but also gave Leo a new way to understand himself. 仿写： Mia的陪伴不仅让Leo感到不再孤独，也让他重新看到了自己的价值。 参考答案 第一部分：原文佳句默写 forcing him to quit carefully avoided hiding from his friends describe his sadness and confusion staring blankly at the window gathering dust flipping through the familiar pages barely a whisper calm and gentle tightening with emotion lost on a strange planet; trembling with or without soccer began to crack welled up in his eyes only a comforting shoulder to lean on 第二部分：根据中文及关键词提示，写出完整的英文句子 For the first time in weeks, he opened up. He talked about the severe pain of his injury and his despair of watching his teammates play without him. That night, they finished the book together. He realized that sharing his grief could open doors that words alone couldn't. In that small room, the lingering tension finally began to lift, replaced by a quiet sense of relief. From that day on, reading became a routine for them. They would settle on the floor together, picking a new story from his once-forgotten shelf. Through the adventures of different characters, Leo found a safe way to explore his own feelings. The dusty books were slowly cleaned, and along with them, the dust on his heart was gently wiped away. He started stepping out of his room, replying to his teammates' messages, and even smiling more often. He knew his leg would take time to heal and his athletic dreams might have to change. With his "fox" by his side, Leo finally found the courage to rebuild his world. 第三部分：动作、环境、心理描写语料库 his fingers rubbing the pages turned a page gently casting golden patches of light on the floor let out a long breath calmly; like a warm hand touching his heart looked up at her; tears shining in his eyes a few rays of sunlight slipped through the clouds closed the book slowly patted him on the shoulder; saying nothing but with warmth in her eyes was very quiet; rustling like the footsteps of time 第四部分：高级句式仿写 句式1： Looking at Mia's calm face, Leo felt something deep inside him stirred, opened his mouth, but found no words coming out. 句式2： Tears blurred his vision, making the words on the page impossible to read. 句式3： Tired and lost, Leo leaned against the wall, stared at the ceiling, and didn't want to say a single word. 句式4： His fingers trembling, Leo opened the first page of The Little Prince and took a deep breath. 句式5： It was on that rainy afternoon that Leo's life began to change. 句式6： Mia's company not only made Leo feel less alone, but also helped him see his own value again. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $