2025-2026学年安庆二中高二月考英语读后续写讲义

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；递进句，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 2025安庆二中高二月考 定制 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 At the fanciest restaurant in town(环境描写), Emily's most recent date Nathaniel,talked about his boats, horses, and real estate(房地产)collection. He was exactly the kind of man her parents wanted her to marry, but she was unimpressed. Suddenly, a quarrel at the door caught her attention(无灵主语句)." Please, I just want some fries!" an old woman in cheap clothing begged. Emily fixed her eyes on her bare feet and frowned. Being barefoot was unacceptable at any restaurant. The waiter was displeased and tried to drive her out, but something in Emily's heart told her to stand up. "Wait a second," she said to the waiter. "She's with me."The waiter's eyes widened as Emily gestured for the woman to join her table. Nathaniel's face turned red. "What are you doing,Emily?" he demanded, whispering (现在分词短语做伴随动作)although the old woman could hear him. "I’m inviting this woman to sit with us. Is that a problem?" she asked sweetly.The old woman introduced herself as Martha."Yes, it is!" Nathaniel replied, throwing his cloth napkin on the table,standing up quickly and going out angrily(现在分词短语做伴随动作)."Bye!" she waved at him as she sat down. Her voice turned sympathetic and kind as she looked at Martha. "Now, what's going on? Can you tell me why you're here? And why are you barefoot?'Oh, madam. You didn't have to invite me to your table," Martha shook her head."I just wanted some fries for my grandson. He's just been so sick, and I can't get him to eat anything. He told me he only wants some fries. So I sold my shoes to a man walking by(现在分词短语做伴随动作) and he gave me enough for some." "May I ask, why not go to a fast food place?"Emily said gently. "Well, this place was closer. It's too hot outside for me to walk much farther without shoes." Martha answered. The woman continued telling her story. She and her grandson had been living on the streets for a few years since her daughter died, and they couldn't afford rent because no one would hire her. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1:Emily’s eyes watered as she took off her shoes.  Paragraph 2: The other guests put their shoes back on. 2025安庆二中高二月考 定制 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 At the fanciest restaurant in town, Emily's most recent date Nathaniel,talked about his boats, horses, and real estate(房地产)collection. He was exactly the kind of man her parents wanted her to marry, but she was unimpressed. Suddenly, a quarrel at the door caught her attention." Please, I just want some fries!" an old woman in cheap clothing begged. Emily fixed her eyes on her bare feet and frowned. Being barefoot was unacceptable at any restaurant The waiter was displeased and tried to drive her out, but something in Emily's heart told her to stand up. "Wait a second," she said to the waiter. "She's with me."The waiter's eyes widened as Emily gestured for the woman to join her table. Nathaniel's face turned red. "What are you doing,Emily?" he demanded, whispering although the old woman could hear him."I'm inviting this woman to sit with us. Is that a problem?" she asked sweetly.The old woman introduced herself as Martha."Yes, it is!" Nathaniel replied, throwing his cloth napkin on the table,standing up quickly and going out angrily."Bye!" she waved at him as she sat down. Her voice turned sympathetic and kind as she looked at Martha."Now, what's going on? Can you tell me why you're here? And why are you barefoot?'Oh, madam. You didn't have to invite me to your table," Martha shook her head."I just wanted some fries for my grandson. He's just been so sick, and I can't get him to eat anything. He told me he only wants some fries. So I sold my shoes to a man walking by and he gave me enough for some." "May l ask, why not go to a fast food place?"Emily said gently. "Well, this place was closer. It's too hot outside for me to walk much farther without shoes." Martha answered. The woman continued telling her story. She and her grandson had been living on the streets for a few years since her daughter died, and they couldn't afford rent because no one would hire her. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1:Emily’s eyes watered as she took off her shoes.  Paragraph 2: The other guests put their shoes back on. 【参考范文】 Emily's eyes watered as she took off her shoes. "First of all, take my shoes. You can't walk around barefoot," Emily said, trying to keep calm(现在分词短语做伴随动作). "No, let me give her my shoes," another customer at the restaurant told Emily, who had approached their table. Then, Emily noticed with wide eyes that everyone else had been looking at them and heard the entire conversation. All of them had their shoes in their hands. Finally, Martha put on Emily's shoes—a simple pair of flats. The other guests put their shoes back on. They collected money and gave it to Martha. The waiter came with an order of fries packed in a box and a few other boxes with more food. He apologized to Martha. Emily decided to do more for them. She helped Martha get her grandson admitted into a hospital and ensured they would give him as many fries as he wanted during his stay. She later got Martha a job at one of the local supermarkets. The scene in the restaurant was the most moving one Emily had ever seen. At that moment, she felt hopeful about the world. Part 1 高考英语读后续写分析 一、文章类型分析 项目 内容 主题类型 人与社会（Human & Society） 故事类别 善意帮助类 / 社会关爱类 / 爱心传递类 情节模式 善举引发群体效应（One act of kindness inspires many） 人物成长 Emily由"冷静独立"成长为"主动承担社会责任" 价值主题 Compassion（同情）、Kindness（善良）、Empathy（共情）、Hope（希望）、Love can spread（善意传递） 情感主线 冷漠→同情→感动→群体响应→希望 二、命题特点分析 这是近几年高考非常喜欢的一类： 一个人的善举 → 感染周围所有人 → 集体完成爱心接力 → 升华主题 典型结构：小人物（Martha）↓主人公发现问题（Emily）↓主动帮助↓旁人受到感染↓所有人一起帮助↓主人公感悟主题 三、原文故事核心脉络 Emily相亲→遇见赤脚老人被赶→Emily主动邀请老人→Nathaniel离开→ 老人讲述悲惨经历 →Emily被感动 （续写开始） 真正的冲突其实只有两个： 外在冲突：老人贫困、孙子生病。 真正需要解决的是： 内在冲突：社会冷漠 VS 人性善良 所以续写重点不是"如何帮助老人"，而是善意如何感染更多的人。 四、续写整体布局 第一段（解决眼前困难） 关键词：Immediate Help（立即帮助） 建议布局：① Emily脱鞋给老人↓② 周围客人发现事情经过↓③ 大家纷纷响应↓④ 老人接受帮助 第一段结束最好停留在：Everyone was touched. 因为第二段首句：The other guests put their shoes back on.刚好形成 说明：他们已经把鞋脱下来准备帮助。 第二段（解决根本问题） 关键词：Long-term Help（长期帮助） 建议布局：① 大家捐款↓② 服务员改变态度↓③ Emily帮助老人和孙子↓④ 找工作↓⑤ 升华主题 注意： 千万不要只写：给钱，而是要写：授人以渔 例如：医院/工作/住房/教育/未来都是长期帮助。 五、续写需要承接原文的注意事项 承接内容 续写要求 Emily善良 必须继续主动帮助，而不是旁观。 Martha贫困 不可突然变成富人或找到亲人。 孙子生病 必须回应这一伏笔。 Nathaniel离开 不建议再写回来。 服务员态度不好 后文最好有态度转变。 餐厅顾客 可以成为群体帮助的重要力量。 六、续写千万不要这样写 ❌ 新增人物帮助 例如：医生朋友/慈善机构负责人/市长/记者/富豪 均不建议。 ❌ 出现巨大反转 例如： 老人其实是富豪，考验Emily真人秀节目全部属于低分套路。 ❌ 感情戏 Emily和Nathaniel复合 或者Emily遇见新男友都偏题。 ❌ 直接结束 例如： Emily很开心。没有解决老人生活问题。 没有主题升华。 七、设计续写内容 建议采用 第一层帮助 鞋子↓食物↓捐款 第二层帮助 医院↓工作↓住所 第三层帮助 Emily感悟↓Everyone can change the world. 八、故事核心脉络 项目 内容 故事起因 Emily相亲时遇见赤脚老人被赶出餐厅 故事发展 Emily邀请老人同桌并倾听她的故事 故事高潮 Emily准备帮助老人（续写开始） 故事结局 善举感染众人，共同帮助老人一家 九、关键线索梳理 项目 内容 人物 Emily、Martha、Nathaniel、Waiter、Restaurant Guests、Grandson（未出场） 核心道具 Shoes、Fries、Money、Food Boxes 情感基调 Sympathy → Compassion → Warmth → Hope 续写伏笔 Emily脱鞋；客人一直关注；孙子生病；服务员态度变化；Nathaniel离开形成对比 十、文本分析总表 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 Emily善良、有主见；Martha坚强；Nathaniel势利；Waiter冷漠 "She's with me."；"I just want some fries!" 情感层次 冷漠→惊讶→同情→感动 Emily fixed her eyes...；Her voice turned sympathetic and kind. 关键情节点 邀请老人→Nathaniel离开→老人讲述经历→Emily感动 "She's with me."；"He only wants some fries." 语言特色 对话推动情节；情感描写细腻；冲突明显 多处人物对白 关键词分析 barefoot；fries；sold my shoes；grandson；restaurant；kind 全文反复出现 心理描写 Emily由反感赤脚到心疼老人 Something in Emily's heart told her to stand up. 动作描写 gestured；stood up；waved；shook her head 多个动作推动故事 环境描写 高档餐厅与贫困老人形成鲜明反差 At the fanciest restaurant in town. 隐含主题 善意能够感染他人；真正的富有来自善良 Nathaniel离开与Emily形成对比 情感转折 相亲→冲突→倾听→感动 Emily's voice turned sympathetic and kind. 空间转换 门口→餐桌→餐厅内部（续写仍在餐厅） at the door → join her table 时间过渡 晚餐进行时→讲述经历→续写即时发生 Suddenly...；The woman continued telling her story. 十一、苏格拉底式提问（引导学生梳理续写思路） （一）理解人物 1. Emily为什么会主动帮助一个陌生老人，而不是选择沉默？ 2. Nathaniel的离开说明了他怎样的价值观？ 3. Martha最需要的是食物、鞋子，还是尊重？ 4. 如果你是Emily，此时最想解决什么问题？ （二）寻找伏笔 1. 为什么作者特别强调老人赤脚（barefoot）？ 2. 为什么多次提到fries？ 3. 为什么作者交代孙子生病？ 4. 服务员最开始为什么态度恶劣？后面有没有可能改变？ 5. 作者为什么写"everyone had been looking at them"这一细节？它暗示了什么？ （三）设计第一段 1. Emily脱鞋后，Martha会立即接受吗？为什么？ 2. 周围顾客看到Emily的举动后，会有哪些不同反应？ 3. 为什么第二段段首是"The other guests put their shoes back on."？说明第一段中他们可能做了什么？ 4. 第一段应停留在哪一个情节点，才能与第二段自然衔接？ （四）设计第二段 1. 除了捐钱，还能怎样真正帮助Martha一家？ 2. 怎样回应"grandson was sick"这一伏笔？ 3. 服务员是否应该向Martha道歉？为什么？ 4. Emily还能采取哪些长期帮助措施，而不仅是一次性帮助？ （五）主题升华 1. Nathaniel拥有财富，却选择离开；Emily并不炫耀财富，却赢得所有人的尊重。作者想表达什么？ 2. 为什么一个人的善举能够感染整个餐厅？ 3. 如果最后一句由你来写，你会如何概括这场经历带给Emily的人生感悟？ 4. 本文真正想告诉读者的是"帮助一个老人"，还是"善意具有传递的力量"？为什么？ 十二、高分续写构思模板 第一段（眼前帮助） 第二段（长远帮助） Emily脱鞋送给老人 众人捐款、送餐 顾客纷纷响应 服务员道歉并改变 老人感动接受帮助 Emily帮助孙子就医 餐厅充满温暖氛围 帮助Martha找到工作 形成"众人脱鞋"伏笔 升华：善意会不断传递 这一布局既完整回应了原文所有伏笔（赤脚、薯条、生病的孙子、服务员态度、Nathaniel离场），又符合高考读后续写“解决眼前困难→解决长远问题→升华主题”的评分导向。 Part 2 高考英语读后续写语言积累 一、动作描写 适用于：帮助他人、善举传递、情感升温类续写 英文例句 中文翻译 1. Emily gently slipped off her shoes and placed them in front of Martha. Emily轻轻脱下鞋子，放在Martha面前。 2. She reached out and held Martha's trembling hands tightly. 她伸出手，紧紧握住Martha颤抖的双手。 3. Emily bent down and carefully helped Martha put on the shoes. Emily弯下腰，小心地帮Martha穿上鞋子。 4. One by one, the guests silently stepped forward with their donations. 客人们一个接一个默默走上前捐款。 5. The waiter lowered his head and handed over the packed fries. 服务员低下头，把打包好的薯条递了过去。 6. Tears rolled down Martha's cheeks as she accepted the kindness. Martha接受善意时，眼泪顺着脸颊流下。 7. Everyone gathered around Martha, offering whatever they could. 大家围在Martha身边，尽自己所能提供帮助。 8. Emily wrapped Martha in a warm embrace without saying a word. Emily一句话没说，给了Martha一个温暖的拥抱。 9. Several customers quietly took off their shoes and laid them beside Emily's. 几位顾客默默脱下鞋子，放在Emily鞋子的旁边。 10. Smiles gradually spread across everyone's faces. 笑容渐渐浮现在每个人脸上。 二、心理描写 适用于：感动、同情、希望、温暖主题 英文例句 中文翻译 1. Emily felt a lump rise in her throat. Emily感到喉咙一阵哽咽。 2. Her heart ached at the woman's heartbreaking story. 听着老人的故事，她心如刀割。 3. Tears blurred her vision. 泪水模糊了她的视线。 4. She could hardly hold back her tears. 她几乎抑制不住眼泪。 5. A wave of sympathy washed over her. 一阵同情涌上她的心头。 6. Emily was deeply touched beyond words. Emily感动得无法言语。 7. Hope slowly replaced the sadness in her heart. 希望渐渐取代了她心中的悲伤。 8. She suddenly realized how powerful kindness could be. 她突然意识到善良拥有巨大的力量。 9. Warmth filled her heart. 温暖充满了她的内心。 10. She felt proud to have followed her heart. 她为自己遵从内心而感到骄傲。 三、环境描写 适用于：餐厅、温暖氛围、感人场景 英文例句 中文翻译 1. Silence fell over the entire restaurant. 整个餐厅顿时安静下来。 2. Every pair of eyes was fixed on Martha. 所有人的目光都落在Martha身上。 3. The restaurant, once filled with chatter, became unusually quiet. 原本喧闹的餐厅忽然安静下来。 4. Warm sunlight streamed through the windows. 温暖的阳光透过窗户洒进来。 5. The air seemed filled with kindness and warmth. 空气里仿佛弥漫着善意与温暖。 6. The tense atmosphere gradually melted away. 紧张的气氛渐渐消散。 7. Soft applause echoed across the restaurant. 餐厅里响起轻轻的掌声。 8. A peaceful smile appeared on everyone's face. 每个人脸上都露出了平静的笑容。 9. Even the waiter stood silently, deeply moved. 就连服务员也静静站着，深受感动。 10. The restaurant became the warmest place in town that evening. 那天晚上，这家餐厅成了整个城市最温暖的地方。 四、高级替换词 （一）帮助类 普通词 高级替换 help assist help support help lend a hand help come to one's aid help offer assistance （二）看类 普通词 高级替换 look glance look gaze at look stare at look fix one's eyes on look cast a look at （三）走类 普通词 高级替换 walk make one's way walk step forward walk approach walk head toward walk stride toward （四）说类 普通词 高级替换 say whisper say murmur say remark say respond say reassure （五）哭类 普通词 高级替换 cry burst into tears cry choke back tears cry tears welled up cry be moved to tears cry eyes brimmed with tears （六）开心类 普通词 高级替换 happy delighted happy overjoyed happy relieved happy grateful happy heartened 五、文章中的高频固定搭配解析 原文搭配 词义 词法解析 可替换表达 catch one's attention 引起注意 catch+n. draw one's attention to fix one's eyes on 注视 fix+eyes+on gaze at / stare at stand up 起身 动词短语 rise to one's feet gesture for sb. to do 示意某人做 gesture+for motion to throw...on 把……扔到……上 throw+介词 toss onto shake one's head 摇头 动词短语 nod negatively keep calm 保持冷静 keep+adj. remain composed walk around barefoot 光脚走路 barefoot作副词 without shoes tell one's story 讲述经历 tell+n. share one's experience be moved by 被……感动 被动结构 be touched by 六、高考高频固定搭配积累 固定搭配 中文 同义表达 lend a helping hand 伸出援手 offer assistance be filled with 充满 be full of burst into tears 突然哭起来 cry uncontrollably hold one's hand 握住某人的手 grasp one's hand wipe away tears 擦去眼泪 dry one's tears make a difference 产生影响 have an impact warm one's heart 温暖某人的心 touch one's heart pass on kindness 传递善意 spread kindness be lost for words 感动得说不出话 speechless from the bottom of one's heart 发自内心 sincerely 七、本篇可积累的核心词汇、短语与语料 单词/短语 词义 近义词（多个） 反义词 例句1 例句2 compassion (n.) 同情；怜悯 sympathy, mercy, empathy, kindness cruelty, indifference Compassion inspired everyone to help.（同情心激励了大家去帮助。） She showed great compassion for the homeless woman.（她对无家可归的老人表现出极大的同情。） barefoot (adj./adv.) 赤脚的（地） shoeless, without shoes well-shod Martha walked barefoot in the heat.（Martha赤脚走在炎热中。） The child ran barefoot across the grass.（孩子赤脚跑过草地。） sympathetic (adj.) 富有同情心的 compassionate, caring, understanding, considerate cold, heartless Emily gave Martha a sympathetic smile.（Emily向Martha投去同情的微笑。） The teacher was sympathetic to his difficulties.（老师对他的困难表示理解。） approach (v.) 走近；接近 come up to, move toward, draw near leave, withdraw Several guests approached quietly.（几位客人静静走了过来。） She approached the old woman with a smile.（她微笑着走向老人。） donation (n.) 捐赠；捐款 contribution, gift, charity, offering refusal, taking The donations soon filled the box.（捐款很快装满了盒子。） Their donation changed the family's life.（他们的捐赠改变了这一家的生活。） kindness (n.) 善良；善举 goodness, generosity, warmth, benevolence selfishness, cruelty Kindness spread throughout the restaurant.（善意传遍了整个餐厅。） A small act of kindness can change someone's day.（一个小小的善举就能改变一个人的一天。） move (v.)（常用被动：be moved） 感动 touch, affect, inspire, stir discourage, disappoint Everyone was deeply moved.（所有人都深受感动。） Her story moved the guests to tears.（她的故事让客人们感动落泪。） hopeful (adj.) 充满希望的 optimistic, positive, encouraged, confident hopeless, pessimistic Emily felt hopeful about the future.（Emily对未来充满希望。） We remained hopeful despite the difficulties.（尽管困难重重，我们仍然充满希望。） 八、本篇主题高分语料 爱心帮助类 · Kindness costs nothing but means everything. · A small act of kindness can light up someone's world. · Compassion is the language that everyone understands. · Love grows when it is shared. · No act of kindness is ever wasted. 情感升华类 · At that moment, Emily truly understood the power of compassion. · Warmth spread from one heart to another. · One person's kindness inspired a room full of strangers. · Humanity shines brightest in difficult times. · The world becomes a better place whenever kindness is passed on. Part3 Possible Versions Version 1 Emily's eyes watered as she took off her shoes. Sensing the old woman's embarrassment(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she gently placed them in front of Martha and said softly, "Please wear them. No one should walk barefoot." Martha tried to refuse, shaking her head again and again(现在分词短语做伴随动作), but Emily smiled encouragingly. It was Emily's sincere kindness that(强调句) finally persuaded Martha to accept the gift. Meanwhile, whispers spread across the restaurant.(无灵主语句) One customer slowly stood up, followed by another(过去分词做后置定语). Silent and thoughtful, they walked toward Martha, carrying not only their shoes but also their respect.(现在分词短语做伴随动作) Even the waiter froze for a moment, his eyes fixed on the touching scene. A warm silence filling the room(独立主格), everyone seemed to understand that kindness could be more valuable than wealth.Before long, nearly every guest had quietly taken off their shoes, waiting for Martha to choose the pair(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that suited her best. Paragraph 2: The other guests put their shoes back on. Someone placed money into her hands, while others packed fruit, bread and drinks beside the fries. Deeply ashamed of his earlier behavior(过去分词短语做原因状语), the waiter apologized sincerely and refused to charge for the meal. Relief washing over Martha(独立主格), tears streamed down her face.(无灵主语句) Emily then accompanied her to the hospital, where her grandson received timely treatment and finally enjoyed the fries he had longed for. Later, Emily helped Martha find a stable job, giving her family a fresh start(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Never had Emily believed that one quiet decision at dinner could bring about so much hope.（倒装） As she was going back home, she realized that true richness had never been measured by boats or houses, but by a heart willing to care for others. Version 2 Paragraph 1: Emily's eyes watered as she took off her shoes. The sight of Martha's bare feet broke her heart(无灵主语句), and without hesitation she slipped the flats onto the old woman's feet herself. The moment Martha looked up, gratitude shining in her eyes(独立主格), Emily felt all her doubts disappear. Their conversation had quietly attracted everyone's attention. A young couple exchanged a glance before taking off their own shoes, and soon more guests followed. Moved and inspired(adj.短语做主语补语), people stepped forward one after another, offering whatever they could(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Even the waiter lowered his head, realizing how unfairly he had judged Martha(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Compassion spreading from table to table,(独立主格) the restaurant no longer felt like a luxurious place but a home filled with warmth.(过去分词短语做后置定语)Before anyone noticed, almost every guest was standing barefoot, smiling at Martha(现在分词短语做伴随动作).With tears, Martha put on Emily’s shoes. Paragraph 2: The other guests put their shoes back on. Warm applause filled the restaurant. Several guests collected enough money to cover medical expenses for her grandson, while the waiter packed extra fries and meals without asking for payment. It suddenly occurred to Emily that kindness could travel much faster than prejudice. She later helped Martha contact the nearby supermarket, where she successfully found work and gradually rebuilt her life. When Martha thanked Emily repeatedly, Emily simply smiled and replied that everyone in the restaurant had made the miracle possible. Walking out into the evening sunshine,(现在分词短语做伴随动作) she couldn't help remembering Nathaniel's endless talk about his possessions. Compared with the kindness(过去分词短语做方式状语) she had witnessed that night, those riches seemed surprisingly small. Version 3 Paragraph 1: Emily's eyes watered as she took off her shoes. Martha's lips trembled, yet no words came out(无灵主语句). The touching scene sent a wave of silence through the restaurant(无灵主语句), leaving everyone speechless(现在分词短语做结果状语). One guest quietly removed his shoes and placed them beside Emily's. Then another did the same. Calm and determined(adj.做主语补语), Emily simply watched as kindness silently multiplied.Even the waiter stepped closer, holding the long-awaited box of fries in his hands(现在分词短语做伴随动作). His face burning with shame(独立主格), he realized that compassion should never depend on appearance.By the time Martha finally smiled through her tears, dozens of pairs of shoes had already been laid neatly around her. Without saying another word, Emily knelt beside Martha and carefully helped her put them on. Paragraph 2: The other guests put their shoes back on. Seeing such a moving scene(现在分词短语做伴随动作), everyone smiled with tears. The waiter handed over the fries together with several boxes of fresh food and sincerely apologized for his rude attitude. Other guests raised enough money to help Martha through the difficult days ahead. Emily then accompanied her and her grandson to receive medical care and later helped Martha secure steady work. It was not the expensive restaurant but the ordinary people inside that made the evening unforgettable.(强调句) Looking around at the smiling faces(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Emily finally understood that hope often begins with one simple choice—to stop, to listen, and to lend a helping hand. The warmth she had discovered that night would stay with her far longer than any luxurious dinner ever could. Version 4 Paragraph 1: Emily's eyes watered as she took off her shoes. "Please wear these," she said gently, placing the flats in front of Martha(现在分词短语做伴随动作). "You shouldn't have to walk barefoot." Martha hesitated, embarrassed by so much kindness(过去分词短语做主语补语), but Emily smiled encouragingly and gently held her hands. Their conversation had already caught everyone's attention. A customer nearby stood up first and offered his own shoes. "Mine may fit better," he said warmly. Soon another guest followed, then another. Emily looked around in surprise and found every pair of eyes fixed on Martha instead of the delicious food on the tables. No one spoke loudly. Instead, everyone silently removed their shoes and waited for Martha to choose the pair she liked most. Deeply touched(过去分词短语做后组定语), Martha finally accepted Emily's simple flats, while the other guests continued holding their shoes with warm smiles. Paragraph 2 The other guests put their shoes back on. After Martha had gratefully chosen Emily's shoes, everyone smiled towards them. Several guests collected money and placed it carefully into Martha's hands, hoping to ease her burden(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The waiter returned with a large bag of fries together with several boxes of hot meals. Looking ashamed(现在分词短语做主语补语), he sincerely apologized for trying to drive her away earlier. Emily knew the family needed more than one warm dinner. She soon helped Martha take her sick grandson to the hospital and later introduced her to a nearby supermarket, where she was offered a stable job. Everything done(独立主格), Emily suddenly realized that true wealth was measured not by expensive possessions but by hearts willing to care for strangers. 练习题包（默写与仿写） 第一部分：原文值得积累句子默写（共15句） 说明： 根据汉语提示和部分英文，补全空缺的词汇或短语。 在这个镇上最豪华的餐厅里，Emily最近的一次约会对象Nathaniel滔滔不绝地谈论着他的游艇、马匹和房地产收藏。 At the fanciest restaurant in town, Emily‘s most recent date Nathaniel, talked about his boats, horses, and __________ __________. 他正是她父母希望她嫁给的那种人，但她并不为所动。 He was exactly the kind of man her parents wanted her to marry, but she __________ __________. 突然，门口的一场争吵引起了她的注意。 Suddenly, a quarrel __________ __________ __________ caught her attention. “求求了，我只想要一些薯条！”一个穿着廉价衣服的老妇人乞求道。 “Please, I just want some fries!” an old woman in __________ __________ begged. 她盯着她光着的双脚，皱起了眉头。 She __________ her eyes on her bare feet and __________. 服务员很不高兴，试图把她赶出去。 The waiter was __________ and tried to drive her out. 她内心有什么东西告诉她，她应该站起来。 But __________ in Emily‘s heart told her to __________ __________. “等一下，”她对服务员说。“她和我一起的。” “Wait a second,” she said to the waiter. “She‘s __________ __________.” 服务员瞪大了眼睛，Emily示意那位女士坐到她的桌旁。 The waiter’s eyes __________ as Emily __________ for the woman to join her table. “是的，这有问题！”Nathaniel回答，把餐巾扔在桌子上，迅速站起来生气地走了出去。 “Yes, it is!” Nathaniel replied, __________ his cloth napkin on the table, __________ up quickly and going out angrily. 她的声音变得同情而温柔，她看着Martha。 Her voice __________ sympathetic and kind as she looked at Martha. “哦，女士。您本不必邀请我坐到您桌旁的。”Martha摇摇头说。 “Oh, madam. You didn‘t have to __________ me to your table,” Martha __________ her head. 我把我的一双鞋卖给了一个路过的男人，他给了我足够的钱买一些（薯条）。 So I __________ my shoes to a man walking by and he gave me __________ for some. 她和她的孙子在街上流浪了好几年。 She and her grandson had been __________ __________ __________ __________ for a few years. 她眼里噙着泪水，脱下了自己的鞋子。 Emily’s eyes __________ as she __________ off her shoes. 第二部分：根据中文意思默写英文句子（共12句） 说明： 根据中文和括号内关键词提示，写出完整的英文句子。 首先，穿上我的鞋子。你不能光着脚到处走。（First of all / take / barefoot） “不，让我把我的鞋子给她，”餐厅里另一位顾客对已经走到他们桌旁的Emily说。（let / give / approached） Emily瞪大了眼睛，发现所有人都在看着他们，听到了整个对话。（noticed with wide eyes / had been looking at / heard） 所有的人都把鞋子拿在手里。（had their shoes in their hands） 最终，Martha穿上了Emily的鞋子——一双简单的平底鞋。（put on / a simple pair of flats） 他们凑了钱，交给了Martha。（collected money / gave it to） 服务员端着打包好的薯条和另外几盒食物走了过来。（came with / packed in a box / a few other boxes） 他向Martha道了歉。（apologized to） Emily决定为他们做更多的事。（decided to do more for them） 她帮助Martha把她的孙子送进了一家医院。（get her grandson admitted into） 餐厅里的那一幕是Emily见过的最感人的一幕。（the most moving one） 在那一刻，她对这个世界重新燃起了希望。（felt hopeful about the world） 第三部分：动作·环境·心理描写语料库默写（共10句） 说明： 根据中文和给出的英文框架，完成句子。 动作描写（脱鞋） 她弯下腰，解开鞋带，轻轻地把它们从脚上滑下来，然后放在老妇人面前。 She __________ down, __________ her shoelaces, gently __________ them off her feet, and __________ them in front of the old woman. 动作描写（众人效仿） 令Emily惊讶的是，周围几乎每个人都开始模仿她的动作——一个接一个地脱下鞋子。 To Emily‘s __________, almost everyone around began to __________ her action—taking off their shoes, one after another. 动作描写（穿回鞋子） 他们默默地穿回鞋子，系好鞋带，然后站了起来。 They __________ their shoes back on in silence, __________ their laces, and __________ to their feet. 环境描写（餐厅氛围转变） 原本嘈杂的高级餐厅变得异常安静，只有轻微的脚步声和压抑的抽泣声。 The __________ fancy restaurant __________ strangely quiet, with only the __________ of light footsteps and __________ sobs. 环境描写（聚焦餐桌） 暖黄色的吊灯灯光倾洒在她们身上，在白色桌布上投下柔和的阴影。 The warm yellow light from the __________ poured down upon them, __________ soft shadows on the white tablecloth. 心理描写（Emily的内心触动） Emily感到喉咙一阵发紧，她意识到这个她刚刚认识的女人所承受的远比她想象的多。 Emily felt a __________ in her throat as she __________ that the woman she had just met had __________ far more than she had imagined. 心理描写（旁观者的转变） 起初他们只是看客，但此刻，某种更深层的东西在他们心中被唤醒——一种他们以为早已丢失的共情。 At first they had been __________, but at this moment, something __________ had been __________ inside them—a sympathy they thought they had long __________. 心理描写（Martha的感激） Martha张了张嘴，却一个字也说不出来。泪水顺着她布满皱纹的脸颊无声地流下。 Martha __________ her mouth, but no words __________. Tears __________ silently down her __________ cheeks. 心理描写（Emily的希望） Emily看着眼前发生的一切，感觉自己内心深处某些冰冷的东西正在融化。 Watching all that was happening before her, Emily felt something cold inside her __________ __________ __________ __________. 综合描写（最终定格画面） 那一刻，精致的餐厅、昂贵的菜肴、赤脚的人们、装满食物的盒子——一切看起来既超现实又无比真实。 At that moment, the __________ restaurant, the __________ dishes, the __________ people, the boxes __________ with food—everything seemed __________ and yet __________ __________. 第四部分：高级句式仿写（共6句） 句式1：感官先行 + 主要动作 + 即时结果 原句参考：Suddenly, a quarrel at the door caught her attention.（先写感官对象，再写动作，最后写结果） 仿写： 突然，一个微弱的哭声从角落里飘来，吸引了她的注意，让她停下了脚步。 句式2：无灵主语句 + 现在分词 原句参考：Something in Emily‘s heart told her to stand up.（抽象事物作主语，表内心驱动） 仿写： 一种强烈的责任感涌上他的心头，驱使他走上前去。 句式3：adj. and adj., 动作链 原句参考：...throwing his cloth napkin on the table, standing up quickly and going out angrily.（形容词修饰状态，多个动作连续） 仿写： 她又累又饿，推开门，走进屋子，一下子倒在了沙发上。 句式4：独立主格 + 句子 原句参考：Her voice turned sympathetic and kind as she looked at Martha.（也可用独立主格表示伴随状态） 仿写： 她眼里噙满泪水，声音颤抖着，开始讲述她的故事。 句式5：强调句（It was...that...） 参考原文情感高潮处可适用的强调结构 仿写： 正是在那个时刻，Emily意识到真正的高贵不在于财富，而在于善良。 句式6：递进句（not only...but also...） 参考原文中善意的多层次影响 仿写： 她的行动不仅给了Martha一双鞋，还点燃了整个餐厅的善意之火。 参考答案（统一置于后） 第一部分参考答案 real estate collection was unimpressed at the door cheap clothing fixed / frowned displeased something / stand up with me widened / gestured throwing / standing turned invite / shook sold / enough living on the streets watered / took 第二部分参考答案 First of all, take my shoes. You can‘t walk around barefoot. “No, let me give her my shoes,” another customer at the restaurant told Emily, who had approached their table. Then, Emily noticed with wide eyes that everyone else had been looking at them and heard the entire conversation. All of them had their shoes in their hands. Finally, Martha put on Emily‘s shoes—a simple pair of flats. They collected money and gave it to Martha. The waiter came with an order of fries packed in a box and a few other boxes with more food. He apologized to Martha. Emily decided to do more for them. She helped Martha get her grandson admitted into a hospital. The scene in the restaurant was the most moving one Emily had ever seen. At that moment, she felt hopeful about the world. 第三部分参考答案 bent / unlaced / slipping / placed surprise / imitate put / tied / got previously / fell / sound / muffled chandelier / casting lump / realized / borne onlookers / deeper / awakened / lost opened / came out / rolled / wrinkled beginning to melt away elegant / costly / barefoot / filled / surreal / terribly real 第四部分参考答案 句式1： Suddenly, a weak cry from the corner reached her ears, catching her attention and making her stop in her tracks. 句式2： A strong sense of duty rose in his heart, driving him to step forward. 句式3： Tired and hungry, she pushed open the door, walked into the room, and threw herself onto the sofa. 句式4： Her eyes filled with tears, her voice trembling, she began to tell her story. 句式5： It was at that very moment that Emily realized true nobility lay not in wealth, but in kindness. 句式6： Her action not only gave Martha a pair of shoes, but also ignited a fire of kindness throughout the entire restaurant. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $