安徽省A10联盟2024-2025学年高二下学期3月阶段考英语试题读后续写徒步遇险救援故事续写讲义

读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was hiking with Sam and Kyle, both students in my youth group, to show them a cliff where you could feel the sea spray on your face. I knew the area could be dangerous, but I had hiked there many times before. We sat in the sun, watching the waves crash against the volcanic cliffs. I figured it was safe enough to get closer. I crept to the edge, Kyle right behind me, to feel the salty sea spray. Sam stood farther back, recording a video. Suddenly, a massive wave hit us. I was swept off the cliff and into the ocean. I gasped but felt nothing solid beneath me—no rocks, no shoreline. No safety. I screamed for help. I could hear the boys yelling, but couldn't make out a word. I shut my burning eyes and swam hard for the surface, but I could feel the current dragging me farther out. I wasn't a strong swimmer, but I remembered my diving training, which taught me not to panic. So I focused on staying calm, kicking with straight legs to save energy. I faced the 15-foot waves and tried to stay on top of them. After about 30 minutes, I was so tired that I started to lose hope. The sea was tugging at my legs, my shoes, my clothes, with the relentlessness of gravity. As the waves pushed me under, death seemed more likely than rescue. I thought about giving in, letting myself sink. But then I would think: *What if help is right over the ridge?* More importantly, I couldn't let my students see me as someone lacking courage. My will to survive kept me going despite the exhaustion and relentless tide. After over an hour, I held on, refusing to let go until help came. 续写要求： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Just as I felt I could no longer hold on, I heard the sound of a helicopter approaching... ___________________________________________ Later I learned that it was Sam and Kyle's calmness and quick thinking that saved my life. ___________________________________________ 徒步遇险救援故事续写 续写分析（两段）​ 第一段：此段以直升机出现为转折点，迅速扭转了 “我” 绝望的处境。“Just as I felt I could no longer hold on, I heard the sound of a helicopter approaching. Hope flared up in my heart.” 开篇营造出紧张又充满希望的氛围，生动展现出 “我” 在绝境中听到直升机声音时重燃希望的心理变化。接着，“The chopper hovered above me, and a rescue worker quickly lowered a harness. With my last bit of strength, I grabbed it. They hauled me up, and as I was pulled into the helicopter, a wave of relief washed over me.” 通过对救援过程的详细描述，如直升机盘旋、放下绳索、“我” 抓住绳索被拉上去等动作，使读者能直观感受到救援的紧张与有序，同时 “我” 被救起后的如释重负也让读者为 “我” 感到庆幸。“I lay on the floor, gasping for breath, my body numb from the cold water and the strenuous swim. The rescuers wrapped me in warm blankets, and I finally felt safe.” 进一步刻画 “我” 被救后的状态，身体的疲惫与麻木以及在温暖毛毯包裹下感受到的安全，从侧面反映出此次经历的惊险。这一段为故事的发展带来了转机，也为后续揭示救援背后的原因做铺垫。​ 第二段：主要揭示 “我” 被救背后 Sam 和 Kyle 的努力。“Later I learned that it was Sam and Kyle's calmness and quick thinking that saved my life.” 直接点明主题，强调两人在救援中的关键作用。随后详细描述他们的行动，“As soon as I was swept into the sea, Sam stopped recording and immediately called the emergency services. He provided them with our exact location, which he had carefully noted before we started hiking.” 突出 Sam 的冷静与果断，迅速停止拍摄并准确提供位置信息。“Kyle, on the other hand, kept an eye on me, constantly yelling words of encouragement, trying to keep me focused.” 体现 Kyle 对 “我” 的关心与支持，通过呼喊鼓励 “我” 保持专注。“Their actions not only alerted the right people in time but also gave me the mental strength to keep fighting.” 总结两人行动的双重意义，既及时通知救援，又给予 “我” 精神支撑。最后，“I was deeply grateful for their presence of mind and courage. From that day on, I held them in even higher regard and learned a valuable lesson about the power of calm in the face of crisis.” 通过 “我” 的内心感受和感悟，进一步深化主题，强调 “我” 对他们的感激以及从这次经历中汲取的关于冷静面对危机的宝贵经验。​ 故事线​ “我” 带领 Sam 和 Kyle 徒步，前往一处能感受海浪飞沫的悬崖，“我” 知晓此地危险但之前多次来过。​ 三人在悬崖边欣赏海浪，“我” 和 Kyle 靠近悬崖边缘感受海浪，Sam 在后方拍摄视频。​ 突然，巨浪袭来，“我” 被卷入海中，在海中 “我” 努力保持冷静，回忆潜水训练知识，挣扎求生，过程中多次面临绝望，但因不想在学生面前示弱以及对救援的期待而坚持。​ 就在 “我” 几乎坚持不住时，直升机出现，救援人员放下绳索将 “我” 救起，“我” 被裹上毛毯，感到安全。​ 后来得知，Sam 在 “我” 被卷入海中后立刻停止拍摄并拨打急救电话，准确提供位置信息，Kyle 则一直关注 “我” 并呼喊鼓励，他们的冷静与机智成功挽救了 “我” 的生命，“我” 对他们充满感激并从中汲取了面对危机保持冷静的宝贵经验。​ 短语​ hold on 坚持​ flare up 突然燃起​ hover above 在…… 上方盘旋​ lower a harness 放下绳索​ haul up 拉起​ a wave of relief 一阵宽慰​ gasp for breath 喘着粗气​ keep an eye on 留意，关注​ call the emergency services 拨打急救电话​ in the face of 在…… 面前​ 主旨升华句​ This heart - pounding narrative about a near - fatal hiking accident and the subsequent rescue serves as a powerful reminder that in the darkest moments of despair, hope can emerge from unexpected sources, and the actions of others, driven by courage and calm, can be the lifeline that pulls us back from the brink.​ 这个关于一场近乎致命的徒步事故及随后救援的扣人心弦的故事有力地提醒我们，在绝望的最黑暗时刻，希望能从未知的源头涌现，而他人在勇气与冷静驱使下的行动，能成为将我们从悬崖边缘拉回的生命线。​ Through the protagonist's arduous struggle for survival and the heroic efforts of Sam and Kyle, we are shown the transformative power of calm under pressure and the profound impact of simple yet decisive actions in saving a life, highlighting the strength of the human spirit in the face of adversity.​ 通过主人公艰难的求生挣扎以及 Sam 和 Kyle 的英勇努力，我们看到了在压力下保持冷静的变革力量，以及简单却果断的行动在拯救生命中的深远影响，凸显了人类精神在逆境中的强大。​ The story of this hiking incident is not merely about a physical battle against the elements; it is a profound exploration of the complexities of human emotions, the importance of preparedness, and the redemptive power of friendship and quick thinking in times of crisis.​ 这个徒步事件的故事不仅仅是关于一场与自然力量的身体对抗，它是对人类情感复杂性、准备的重要性以及在危机时刻友谊和敏捷思维的救赎力量的深刻探索。​ In a world often filled with uncertainties and dangers, this narrative stands as an inspiration, encouraging us to stay calm in the face of crisis, to be prepared for the unexpected, and to always reach out a helping hand to those in need, for it is in these actions that we truly demonstrate the best of humanity.​ 在一个常常充满不确定性和危险的世界里，这个故事是一种激励，鼓励我们在危机面前保持冷静，为意外做好准备，并始终向需要帮助的人伸出援手，因为正是在这些行动中，我们真正展现了人性的光辉。​ From the initial sense of security on the cliff to the terrifying plunge into the sea and the ultimate rescue, the story encapsulates the essence of resilience, the beauty of human connection, and the belief that even in the most dire circumstances, there is always a glimmer of hope and a chance for survival.​ 从在悬崖上最初的安全感，到可怕地坠入大海，再到最终获救，这个故事体现了坚韧的本质、人与人之间联系的美好，以及即使在最严峻的情况下，也总有一线希望和生存机会的信念。​ 写作示范​ 示范一​ Just as I felt I could no longer hold on, I heard the sound of a helicopter approaching. My eyes, stinging from the saltwater, strained to look up. The helicopter's blades churned the air, creating a powerful gust. The rescue worker tossed the harness with precision. I lunged for it, my hands barely able to grip due to the cold. They hoisted me up, and as I cleared the water, I felt a rush of air. Inside the helicopter, I was a shivering mess. The rescuers immediately started checking my vital signs and gave me a warm drink. I was alive, and the realization hit me hard.​ Later I learned that it was Sam and Kyle's calmness and quick thinking that saved my life. Sam, instead of panicking, calmly called the emergency services. He remembered every detail of our hike, which helped him give an accurate location. Kyle, meanwhile, never stopped shouting words of hope. He used a megaphone from his backpack to make his voice carry over the waves. Their actions not only ensured my rescue but also taught me a valuable lesson about courage and presence of mind. I was truly grateful to have such amazing students.​ 示范二​ Just as I felt I could no longer hold on, I heard the sound of a helicopter approaching. A spark of energy surged through my exhausted body. The helicopter circled above, and the rescue team wasted no time. They dropped a life - buoy attached to a strong rope. I clung to it with all my might. As they reeled me in, the wind from the helicopter's blades whipped my face. Once inside, I was surrounded by warmth and care. The rescuers massaged my cold, cramped muscles and gave me a thermal suit to wear. I felt a new lease on life.​ Later I learned that it was Sam and Kyle's calmness and quick thinking that saved my life. Sam had studied first - aid and knew exactly what to do. He called the coast guard and provided them with a detailed description of my condition. Kyle, on the other hand, marked the spot where I went into the water with a bright - colored flag from his bag. Their coordinated efforts were a testament to their courage. I was filled with pride and gratitude for these two young heroes. From that day on, I made sure to always be prepared for any adventure, just like they were. 参考答案 Just as I felt I could no longer hold on, I heard the sound ofa helicopter approaching. I waved my arms weakly praying to be seen. The helicopter circled above, and a rescue diver was lowered from it, and with practiced precision he reached me. I was lifted into the aircrat, shivering and exhausted, but alive. The medics immediately wrapped me in blankets and checked me over, providing much-needed first aid as we flew to the hospital. I kept thinking of Sam and Kyle, hoping they were safe and hadn't done anything reckless to try to save me. Later I learned that it was Sam and Kyle 's calmness and quick thinking that saved my life. As soon as I was swept into the sea, they didn't panic. Sam, still holding his phone, quickly called the emergency services. He accurately described our location and the situation. eanwhile, Kyle kept an eye on me, shouting words of encouragement to keep me going. This experience not only tested my survival skills but also strengthened the bond between us. It was a reminder of the strength found in unity and the importance of never giving up, no matter how desperate the situation seems. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$