浙江省台州市2025-2026学年高二下学期6月期末考试英语试题 读后续写 讲义

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；递进句，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 浙江省台州市2025-2026学年高二下学期6月期末考试英语试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 From the balcony（阳台）of our tenth-floor apartment, I combed the sky with eager eyes, hoping to catch sight of a shooting star(现在分词短语做伴随动作) drifting across the night(现在分词短语做后置定语). "Stars are afraid of city lights, but a little song is always good for something." My grandma, whom I affectionately called Nana, wrapped her arms around me and hummed（哼唱）a slow, gentle tune beside my ear. Her voice was soft and steady, like a quiet stream in the summer night. "Star light, star bright," I whispered, as a few pinpricks of light twinkled through the orange glows of the city night sky(无灵主语句). These ordinary stars were for little wishes — everyday wishes — like getting extra frosting on your cupcake or finding a quarter on the sidewalk. But shooting stars were different. They were rare and magical. "Shooting stars are lucky," Nana whispered softly with a tender smile. "They carry your wish across the sky." So I kept a special wish ready — something I had been hoping for a long time — ready for a shooting star to catch my wish in its tail and dance across the darkness(adj短语做补语). "There are too many lights tonight, sugarplum," she said, glancing down at the glowing city below(现在分词短语做伴随动作). "The stars are hiding." I nestled deeper in her arms, hoping for a few more minutes of her warmth(现在分词短语做伴随动作)as much as I hoped to see a shooting star. Time slipped away amid our soft chats and quiet waiting(无灵主语句). Just then, my stomach growled softly — a tiny betrayal of my peaceful moment. Nana chuckled and stood up, stretching her arms(现在分词短语做伴随动作). "A little song is good for something," she laughed, "but so is a little snack. Let's go down to the convenience store on the first floor. I remember you love those chocolate chip cookies." The next minute, we reached the store, grabbed a pack of cookies and headed home cheerfully(动作串描写). 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1:We were about to take the elevator when the power went off.  Paragraph 2: Back on the balcony, we gazed into the sky again. 浙江省台州市2025-2026学年高二下学期6月期末考试英语试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 From the balcony（阳台）of our tenth-floor apartment, I combed the sky with eager eyes, hoping to catch sight of a shooting star drifting across the night. "Stars are afraid of city lights, but a little song is always good for something." My grandma, whom I affectionately called Nana, wrapped her arms around me and hummed（哼唱）a slow, gentle tune beside my ear. Her voice was soft and steady, like a quiet stream in the summer night. "Star light, star bright," I whispered, as a few pinpricks of light twinkled through the orange glows of the city night sky. These ordinary stars were for little wishes — everyday wishes — like getting extra frosting on your cupcake or finding a quarter on the sidewalk. But shooting stars were different. They were rare and magical. "Shooting stars are lucky," Nana whispered softly with a tender smile. "They carry your wish across the sky." So I kept a special wish ready — something I had been hoping for a long time — ready for a shooting star to catch my wish in its tail and dance across the darkness. "There are too many lights tonight, sugarplum," she said, glancing down at the glowing city below. "The stars are hiding." I nestled deeper in her arms, hoping for a few more minutes of her warmth as much as I hoped to see a shooting star. Time slipped away amid our soft chats and quiet waiting. Just then, my stomach growled softly — a tiny betrayal of my peaceful moment. Nana chuckled and stood up, stretching her arms. "A little song is good for something," she laughed, "but so is a little snack. Let's go down to the convenience store on the first floor. I remember you love those chocolate chip cookies." The next minute, we reached the store, grabbed a pack of cookies and headed home cheerfully. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1:We were about to take the elevator when the power went off.  Paragraph 2: Back on the balcony, we gazed into the sky again We were about to take the elevator when the power went off. Darkness wrapped around us suddenly(无灵主语句，环境描写), and I froze in surprise, a little disappointed at this unexpected trouble. Nana squeezed my hand tightly and said with a smile, "Looks like we're taking the stairs — all ten floors." Hand in hand, we started climbing the dark stairs, and once again, her gentle humming filled the silence. "A little song is always good for something." Her soothing voice drove away all my unease(无灵主语句). We talked and laughed along the way, turning the troublesome blackout into a lovely little journey(现在分词短语做结果状语). Step by step, we returned to our apartment, hearts filled with warmth and joy(独立主格). Back on the balcony, we gazed into the sky again. With the city lights dimmed by the blackout(with复合结构), the night sky burst into a sea of stars. I took a bite at the cookies, chewing slowly(现在分词短语做伴随动作) as we gazed up. Then, without warning, a silver line swept across the sky and vanished. "A shooting star!" I cried. Nana turned to me, eyes shining(独立主格). "Make your wish, sugarplum." Closing my eyes(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I made my long-awaited wish, not for cupcakes or lucky surprises, but for more nights like this. "This moment is the wish," I whispered. My wish was holding tight to that star's tail, and I swore I could feel it flying. 一、文章类型分析 分类维度 类型 特点 题材 家庭温情治愈/个人成长类 借生活小事获得人生体验 主题 亲情陪伴+愿望实现+生活哲理 典型治愈系续写 情节模式 愿望型（Wish Fulfillment） 围绕"等待流星"展开 情感类型 温情治愈类 全文没有冲突，以情感递进推动故事 写作模式 铺垫—转折—实现—升华 高考最经典四段式结构 二、本篇续写属于哪一种经典模型？ "意外事件（Power Failure）→环境改变→愿望实现→情感升华" 整体结构其实十分经典： 期待（Looking） → 意外（Darkness） → 惊喜（Shooting Star） → 感悟（Love is the real magic） 整个故事真正的主线其实不是：看流星而是奶奶陪伴孩子等待梦想。 流星只是一个载体（symbol）。 真正要写的是：陪伴、希望、爱。 三、高考续写整体布局（最佳构思） 建议采用"双高潮结构"。 第一段（事件推进） 任务只有两个： 第一层 停电发生（Power went off）↓城市灯光全部熄灭↓整个城市突然安静↓天空一下子变亮（这里一定要利用原文：Stars are afraid of city lights.形成首尾照应。） 第二层 回家因为没有电梯↓走楼梯↓虽然累↓奶奶一路鼓励↓埋下第二段看星星伏笔，这一段不要出现流星。 因为高潮必须留第二段。 第二段（高潮+升华） 建议采用四步法： ① 回到阳台↓② 星空突然变得非常美↓③ 看见流星↓④ 愿望实现（不是愿望内容实现，而是"看到流星"这个愿望实现。）↓⑤ Nana最后一句升华 例如：Maybe the real lucky star was never the one in the sky. 或者Love shines brighter than any shooting star. 结束全文。 这是最高考喜欢的结尾。 四、续写最重要的承接关系（一定不能丢） （一）必须照应原文所有伏笔 原文伏笔 续写必须回应 shooting star 一定出现 city lights 停电导致灯灭 Stars are afraid of city lights 呼应全文核心 little song 奶奶可以再次轻轻哼唱 cookies 可以边吃边等星星 Nana's warmth 全程保持陪伴 wish 最终送给流星 （二）Paragraph1一定要承上 开头：We were about to take the elevator... ↓Power went off. 不能马上：They saw the stars. 中间一定要有：停电↓黑暗↓楼梯↓回家↓阳台 逻辑才完整。 （三）Paragraph2必须形成闭环 全文开头：Looking for shooting star. ↓全文结尾：Finally seeing shooting star. 这是首尾照应。 五、本篇最容易写偏的地方 很多学生容易写成： 停电↓大家害怕↓消防员↓救援↓恢复供电 这些完全跑题。 因为：本文不是灾难文。 停电只是：制造黑暗。 黑暗只是：为了让星星出现。 千万不要写成事故文。 六、续写设计技巧 技巧一：利用环境推动剧情 不是人物推动。 而是：灯光↓黑暗↓天空↓星星↓流星 整个剧情都是环境变化。 技巧二：让奶奶成为情绪发动机 全文奶奶一直：笑↓唱歌↓鼓励↓安慰↓陪伴 所以续写中：奶奶不能突然哭。 不能生病。不能摔倒。 人物性格必须统一。 技巧三：流星不要出现太早 建议： Paragraph1 只写：星星越来越多。 Paragraph2 最后三分之一：突然一颗流星划过。高潮自然。 技巧四：愿望不要写出来 原文已经说：a special wish 作者故意没有告诉读者。续写也最好不要写。保持留白。 例如：I silently made my wish. 不要写：I wished for a bicycle. 七、故事核心脉络 项目 内容 起因 "我"一直想看到流星并许下珍藏已久的愿望。 发展 奶奶陪伴"我"等待，却因城市灯光太亮无法看到流星，于是下楼买饼干。 转折 回家时突然停电，城市灯光熄灭，夜空条件发生变化。 高潮 回到阳台后终于看到满天繁星和期待已久的流星。 结局 "我"默默许愿，体会到奶奶陪伴比流星更加珍贵，主题升华。 八、关键线索梳理 类别 内容 人物 I（孩子）、Nana（奶奶） 核心道具 阳台、流星、普通星星、城市灯光、电梯、楼梯、饼干、歌曲 情感基调 温暖、安静、治愈、充满希望 续写伏笔 city lights、little song、special wish、shooting star、cookies、balcony 九、文本全维度分析表 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 Nana温柔、耐心、富有童心；孩子充满幻想与期待。 "wrapped her arms around me"; "hummed a slow, gentle tune" 情感层次 期待→温馨→遗憾→希望 hoping to catch sight of a shooting star; I nestled deeper in her arms 关键情节点 等流星→奶奶讲流星→买饼干→停电（续写起点） Let's go down to the convenience store... 语言特色 大量细腻环境描写+轻柔对话+儿童视角 soft, gentle, whispered, twinkled 关键词分析 shooting star、wish、city lights、song、cookies、warmth 全文反复出现 心理描写 渴望、相信、依恋奶奶 hoping...; I kept a special wish ready 动作描写 combed the sky、wrapped、hummed、nested、grabbed 动词自然细腻 环境描写 夜空、城市灯光、星星形成鲜明对比 orange glows; pinpricks of light 隐含主题 爱给予希望；真正的幸运源于陪伴而非奇迹。 Nana全程陪伴与鼓励 情感转折 无法看到流星→停电创造机会→梦想实现 Stars are hiding. → Power went off. 空间转换 阳台→便利店→电梯口→楼梯→阳台 场景转换自然清晰 时间过渡 夜晚等待→买零食→准备回家→停电→再次观星 Time slipped away...; The next minute... 十、苏格拉底式提问（引导学生构思续写） （一）理解原文 1. 作者为什么一直强调 shooting stars 与普通星星的区别？ 2. Nana为什么说 "Stars are afraid of city lights."？这句话后文可能有什么作用？ 3. 作者真正期待的是流星，还是和奶奶一起等待流星的过程？ 4. 原文为什么没有告诉读者那个 special wish 是什么？ 5. 奶奶反复提到 a little song is always good for something，这句话可以怎样再次照应？ （二）构思第一段 1. 停电以后，周围环境首先会发生哪些变化？ 2. 没有电梯，他们怎样回到十楼？这一过程能体现奶奶怎样的品质？ 3. 黑暗是否一定意味着危险？在本文中，它还有什么积极意义？ 4. 怎样通过环境描写自然引出夜空发生变化，而不是直接写“看见流星”？ 5. 饼干、歌声、奶奶的陪伴可以怎样穿插在回家途中，使情节更加温馨？ （三）构思第二段 1. 回到阳台后，夜空与之前最大的不同是什么？ 2. 为什么停电后反而更容易看到星星？ 3. 如果流星终于出现，"我"最可能有什么动作和心理变化？ 4. Nana此时会说一句怎样的话，既呼应全文，又体现她温柔乐观的性格？ 5. 结尾应该突出"流星实现愿望"，还是"陪伴本身就是最大的幸运"？为什么？ （四）主题升华 1. 如果没有停电，故事还会有这样的结局吗？作者为什么要设置这一意外？ 2. 这篇文章真正想告诉读者的是"幸运来自流星"，还是"幸运来自陪伴与希望"？ 3. 如果把题目改成 The Brightest Light，你认为这里的"Light"指的是星光、城市灯光，还是奶奶给予的爱？为什么？ 4. 文中的阳台、歌声、饼干和流星分别象征着什么？ 5. 如果用一句话概括全文主题，你会怎样表达？（例如："Sometimes darkness allows us to see what light hides." 或 "Love shines brighter than any shooting star."） Part 2-1 读后续写高频语料积累 一、动作描写 英文例句 中文翻译 I tightened my grip on Nana's hand and followed her into the darkness. 我紧紧握住奶奶的手，跟着她走进黑暗。 She gently squeezed my shoulder, offering silent comfort. 她轻轻捏了捏我的肩膀，无声地安慰着我。 We climbed the stairs step by step, breathing a little harder with every floor. 我们一层一层爬楼，每上一层呼吸便急促一些。 I tilted my head back, searching every corner of the night sky. 我仰起头，搜寻夜空的每一个角落。 Nana brushed a loose strand of hair behind my ear with a warm smile. 奶奶微笑着把我耳边散落的头发轻轻拨到后面。 I held my breath as a silver streak suddenly flashed across the sky. 一道银色光芒划过天空时，我屏住了呼吸。 My fingers instinctively reached for Nana's hand. 我的手指下意识地伸向奶奶的手。 She pointed quietly toward the sparkling sky without saying a word. 她默默指向闪烁的夜空，一句话也没有说。 I closed my eyes for a brief moment and made my secret wish. 我轻轻闭上眼睛，默默许下那个珍藏已久的愿望。 We stood shoulder to shoulder, wrapped in the peaceful silence of the night. 我们肩并肩站着，沉浸在夜晚宁静的氛围中。 二、心理描写 英文例句 中文翻译 My heart skipped a beat with excitement. 我的心因激动猛地跳了一下。 Hope quietly blossomed inside me. 希望悄悄在我心中绽放。 A wave of disappointment washed over me. 一阵失望涌上心头。 My curiosity quickly replaced my fear. 好奇很快取代了恐惧。 I couldn't help smiling from the bottom of my heart. 我忍不住发自内心地笑了。 My eyes widened in amazement. 我惊讶地睁大了眼睛。 I felt a comforting warmth spreading through my heart. 一股温暖缓缓流淌进我的心里。 My worries melted away in Nana's gentle voice. 奶奶温柔的声音让我的担忧烟消云散。 I silently treasured the precious moment. 我默默珍惜着这珍贵的一刻。 Joy overflowed like sunlight breaking through the clouds. 快乐如同阳光冲破云层般涌来。 三、环境描写 英文例句 中文翻译 Darkness gently settled over the city. 黑暗轻轻笼罩了整座城市。 One by one, countless stars emerged from the velvet sky. 一颗颗星星从丝绒般的夜空中浮现。 The city lights disappeared, leaving only the quiet glow of the stars. 城市灯火消失，只剩下星光静静闪耀。 A cool breeze brushed across my face. 一阵凉风轻轻拂过我的脸庞。 The night suddenly felt wider and quieter than before. 夜晚忽然变得比之前更加辽阔、更加安静。 Above us stretched a sea of glittering stars. 我们头顶铺展开一片璀璨的星海。 The silence of the night wrapped around us like a soft blanket. 夜晚的宁静像柔软的毛毯包围着我们。 A silver shooting star cut across the endless sky. 一颗银色流星划过无边夜空。 The stars shimmered like tiny diamonds scattered across black velvet. 星星像散落在黑色丝绒上的钻石一样闪耀。 The whole world seemed to pause for that magical moment. 整个世界仿佛都为这一神奇时刻停了下来。 四、高级替换词（分类总结） （一）表示"看" 普通词 高级替换 look gaze at see catch sight of watch observe look at stare at find spot （二）表示"说" 普通词 高级替换 say whisper say murmur say remark say reassure tell explain （三）表示"开心" 普通词 高级替换 happy delighted happy overjoyed happy thrilled glad pleased excited exhilarated （四）表示"走" 普通词 高级替换 walk make one's way walk head toward walk step forward walk climb walk wander （五）表示"黑暗" 普通词 高级替换 dark dim dark pitch-black dark shadowy dark lightless dark moonlit（相对环境） 五、环境描写万能素材 星空 · stars twinkled overhead · a blanket of stars · the velvet sky · a silver streak · glittering stars · sparkling sky · a breathtaking night sky 黑暗 · the city was swallowed by darkness · lights faded away · silence filled the air · everything became strangely quiet · darkness settled gently 温暖 · wrapped in warmth · shoulder to shoulder · hand in hand · a gentle embrace · comforting smile Part2-2 地道搭配、固定表达、词法解析 短语 含义 近义表达 反义表达 例句① 例句② catch sight of 看见，瞥见 notice, spot, glimpse lose sight of I caught sight of a shooting star. She caught sight of her grandmother downstairs. lose oneself in 沉浸于 be absorbed in, immerse oneself in be distracted from I lost myself in the beautiful sky. He lost himself in the music. wrap one's arms around 抱住 embrace, hug push away Nana wrapped her arms around me. She wrapped her arms around her daughter. nestle in 依偎 cuddle up, snuggle move away I nestled deeper in Nana's arms. The puppy nestled beside its owner. make a wish 许愿 wish for give up hope I quietly made a wish. She made a wish before blowing out the candles. hold one's breath 屏住呼吸 pause breathing breathe normally I held my breath as the star appeared. Everyone held their breath in silence. breathe a sigh of relief 松了一口气 relax, feel relieved grow anxious I breathed a sigh of relief. Nana breathed a sigh of relief after reaching home. point to 指向 gesture toward ignore Nana pointed to the sky. He pointed to the brightest star. light up 点亮；照亮 brighten, illuminate darken The stars lit up the sky. Her smile lit up the room. melt away 消散 disappear, fade away build up My worries melted away. The fear slowly melted away. 六、可积累的高级语料 表达 词义 近义表达 反义表达 例句① 例句② a wave of... 一阵…… a flood of, a surge of a lack of A wave of joy rushed over me. A wave of relief spread through the crowd. be bathed in 沐浴在……中 be covered in be hidden in The city was bathed in moonlight. The mountains were bathed in sunshine. emerge from 从……出现 appear from disappear into Stars emerged from the darkness. A rabbit emerged from the bushes. be filled with 充满 be full of be empty of The sky was filled with stars. Her eyes were filled with tears. shine brightly 闪耀 sparkle, glitter fade Stars shone brightly overhead. His eyes shone brightly with hope. whisper softly 轻声低语 murmur gently shout loudly Nana whispered softly beside me. She whispered softly in my ear. in the silence of 在……的寂静中 amid the quiet in the noise of In the silence of the night, we waited patiently. In the silence of the forest, birds sang gently. with every step 每走一步 step by step all at once With every step, we grew more tired. With every step, confidence returned. all of a sudden 突然 suddenly, unexpectedly gradually All of a sudden, the lights went out. All of a sudden, everyone cheered. before I knew it 不知不觉 in no time after a long time Before I knew it, we reached the tenth floor. Before I knew it, the stars appeared. 七、高分短语 短语 中文 catch sight of 看见 keep a wish ready 准备好一个愿望 be hidden behind city lights 被城市灯光遮蔽 a silver streak across the sky 一道银色流光划过天空 hold one's breath 屏住呼吸 make a silent wish 默默许愿 wrapped in peaceful silence 被宁静包围 shoulder to shoulder 肩并肩 a blanket of stars 满天繁星 the velvet night sky 丝绒般的夜空 hope blossomed inside me 希望在心中绽放 a wave of warmth 一股暖意 worries melted away 忧虑烟消云散 lit up the darkness 点亮黑暗 cherish the precious moment 珍惜这珍贵时刻 Part 3 Possible Versions Version 1 Paragraph 1: We were about to take the elevator when the power went off. The lights flickered once before everything was swallowed by darkness. I instinctively reached for Nana's hand, my excitement giving way to slight disappointment(独立主格). Instead of looking worried, Nana chuckled softly. "Well, sugarplum, it seems the stars are waiting for us tonight." With no elevator to rely on, we slowly climbed upward together. The stairwell was unusually quiet except for our footsteps and Nana's familiar humming, which floated gently through the darkness like a comforting breeze. Every few floors we paused, sharing a cookie and laughing at how quickly we became breathless suddenly felt amazing. Somehow, the ten-story climb no longer felt tiring. Wrapped in Nana's warmth and cheerful stories(过去分词短语做方式状语), I almost forgot the blackout. At last, we unlocked the apartment door, and without exchanging a word, headed straight for the balcony. Paragraph 2: Back on the balcony, we gazed into the sky again. The moment we stepped outside, I gasped in amazement. Freed from the city's dazzling lights(过去分词做原因状语), the sky revealed countless stars(无灵主语句) glittering like scattered diamonds across black velvet(现在分词短语做伴随动作). I leaned against Nana, nibbling another piece of cookie(现在分词短语做伴随动作) while silently admiring the breathtaking view. Suddenly, a bright shooting star streaked gracefully across the heavens, leaving behind a glowing trail(现在分词短语做伴随动作) before disappearing into the darkness. "Quick!" Nana whispered excitedly. "Don't let it get away." Smiling(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I closed my eyes and quietly made the wish I had treasured for so long. Opening them again(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I found Nana watching me with the gentlest smile. At that instant, I realized the shooting star had brought me something even more precious than luck—a night filled with love, laughter and memories(过去分词做后置定语) that would forever shine in my heart. Version 2 Paragraph 1: We were about to take the elevator when the power went off. Without warning, the building fell into complete darkness. Startled(adj做主语补语), I held the cookies tightly while letting out a disappointed sigh. Nana gently patted my shoulder and smiled as calmly as ever. "No lights, no elevator—but perhaps something even better is waiting for us." Her words sparked my curiosity. Hand in hand, we began climbing the stairs. Though the journey was much longer than expected, Nana kept humming the little tune she loved, occasionally telling me funny stories(现在分词短语做结果状语) that made us burst into laughter. Every step echoed softly through the quiet building(无灵主语句), while my earlier frustration gradually faded away. By the time we reached the tenth floor, the blackout no longer seemed like bad luck. Instead, it felt as though the night itself had prepared a secret surprise for us, drawing us eagerly back toward the balcony(现在分词短语做结果状语). Paragraph 2: Back on the balcony, we gazed into the sky again. This time the sky looked completely different. The orange glow that had hidden the stars was gone, replaced by endless darkness(过去分词短语做后置定语) filled with sparkling lights(过去分词短语做后置定语). We stood shoulder to shoulder, enjoying the peaceful silence(现在分词短语做伴随动作) while sharing the last few cookies. Then, as if answering all our waiting, a dazzling shooting star suddenly flashed across the sky. "There it is!" I whispered excitedly before quickly closing my eyes to make my wish. When I opened them, Nana was still smiling at me, humming the same gentle melody(现在分词短语做伴随动作). It suddenly dawned on me that perhaps the greatest magic had never belonged to the shooting star at all. It belonged to the loving hands that held mine, the familiar song that comforted me, and the unforgettable night that turned an ordinary blackout into the brightest memory of my childhood. Version 3 Paragraph 1: We were about to take the elevator when the power went off. In an instant, the cheerful lights disappeared, and silence settled over the building. Seeing my puzzled expression(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Nana simply smiled and gave my hand a reassuring squeeze. "Maybe the stars have finally found their chance," she said softly. Since the elevator had stopped working, we had no choice but to climb the stairs. The climb was slow, yet strangely pleasant. Nana's gentle humming echoed through the stairwell(无灵主语句), blending with our footsteps.(现在分词短语做伴随动作) Whenever I felt tired, she would encourage me with a warm smile or offer me another cookie, making me forget how many floors were left.(现在分词短语做伴随动作) Little by little, the darkness became less frightening and more peaceful. Reaching our tenth floor apartment at last,(现在分词短语做伴随动作) we walked straight toward the balcony, both curious about(adj.做主语补语) what the night might reveal. Paragraph 2: Back on the balcony, we gazed into the sky again. Above us stretched the most beautiful sky(完全倒装句) I had never seen before. Without the city's bright lights, thousands of stars twinkled quietly overhead(无灵主语句), filling the darkness with gentle wonder(现在分词短语做伴随动作). We stood together in comfortable silence until a brilliant shooting star suddenly swept across the sky like a silver brushstroke. "Now's your chance," Nana whispered with sparkling eyes. Holding my breath(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I closed my eyes and sent my long-kept wish into the night. Yet when I opened them again, I realized my wish had quietly changed. More than seeing another shooting star, I wished for countless evenings spent standing beside Nana(过去分词做后置定语), listening to her gentle song beneath a sky full of stars(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Long after the city lights returned, that warm, star-filled night continued to shine inside me(无灵主语句), brighter(adj.做补语)than any shooting star ever could. 默写与仿写包（练习题+参考答案） 第一部分：原文佳句默写（根据汉语及首字母补全单词） 我从十楼公寓的阳台上，用热切的目光扫视着天空。(c______) From the balcony of our tenth-floor apartment, I ______ the sky with eager eyes. 她的声音轻柔而平稳，像夏夜里一条安静的小溪。(l______) Her voice was soft and steady, ______ a quiet stream in the summer night. 这些普通的星星是用来许下小愿望的——日常的愿望。(e______) These ordinary stars were for little wishes — ______ wishes. 我蜷缩在她的怀里，希望能多享受几分钟她的温暖。(n______) I ______ deeper in her arms, hoping for a few more minutes of her warmth. 时间在我们轻声的聊天和静静的等待中悄然流逝。(s______) Time ______ away amid our soft chats and quiet waiting. 我的肚子轻轻地叫了一声——这是对我宁静时刻的一个小小“背叛”。(b______) Just then, my stomach ______ softly — a tiny betrayal of my peaceful moment. 星星害怕城市的灯光，但一首小歌总归是有用的。(a______) Stars are ______ of city lights, but a little song is always good for something. 她低头看着下方灯火通明的城市。(g______) ...she said, ______ down at the glowing city below. 它们在城市夜空橙色的光晕中闪烁着。(t______) ...a few pinpricks of light ______ through the orange glows of the city night sky. 流星是幸运的，它们带着你的愿望划过天空。(c______) Shooting stars are lucky. They ______ your wish across the sky. 奶奶轻笑着站起身，伸了个懒腰。(c______ / s______) Nana ______ and ______ up, stretching her arms. 她们到了商店，拿了一包饼干，高兴地往家走。(g______ / h______) ...they ______ a pack of cookies and ______ home cheerfully. 她把胳膊搭在我肩膀上。(w______) She ______ her arms around me. 我希望能看到一颗流星。(h______) ... ______ to see a shooting star. 她们正准备乘电梯时，停电了。(a______) We were ______ to take the elevator when the power went off. 第二部分：中文句子默写（根据中文及关键词提示完成英文） 就在那一刻，城市一片漆黑，仿佛被一块巨大的黑色天鹅绒覆盖了。 (as if / cover) Just at that moment, the city went completely dark, __________________ a giant piece of black velvet. 奶奶紧紧握着我的手，我能感觉到她的温暖正驱散我小小的恐惧。 (hold / drive away) __________________ my hand, and I could feel her warmth __________________ my little fear. 没有了城市的灯光，夜空展现出一幅壮丽的画卷，上面缀满了钻石般的星星。 (without / display / dot) __________________ the city lights, the night sky __________________ a magnificent picture, __________________ with diamond-like stars. 我们气喘吁吁地推开了阳台的门，被眼前的景象惊呆了。 (out of breath / push open / strike) __________________, we __________________ the balcony door and __________________ by the scene before us. 一颗流星无声地划过漆黑的夜幕，留下了银色的尾巴。 (slide across / leave behind) A shooting star silently __________________ the dark night sky, __________________ a silver tail. 我闭上眼睛，默默许下了那个隐藏已久的愿望。 (close / whisper / hide) I __________________ my eyes and __________________ the wish that I had __________________ for so long. 我希望奶奶永远健康，永远能够在我身边哼唱那首老歌。 (wish / stay / hum) I __________________ that my grandma could __________________ healthy and could always __________________ that old tune by my side. 当我们回到阳台，呼吸着夜晚清新的空气，我感到一种前所未有的宁静。 (breathe in / descend) When we got back on the balcony, __________________ the fresh night air, a sense of peace __________________ upon me. 奶奶脸上露出了熟悉的微笑，示意我抬头看。 (wear / motion) Nana __________________ her familiar smile and __________________ me to look up. 在那一瞬间，我意识到真正的幸运并不是看到流星，而是拥有奶奶的爱。 (realize / consist in) At that moment, I __________________ that true luck __________________ seeing a shooting star, but in having my grandma's love. 在黑暗中摸索着上楼，我们谁都没有说话，但心里都明白对方在想什么。 (feel one's way / know) __________________ upstairs in the dark, neither of us spoke, but we both __________________ what the other was thinking. 那一定是我所见过的最美的星空，因为那是奶奶陪我一起看的。 (must be / accompany) That __________________ the most beautiful starry sky I had ever seen, because it was the one my grandma __________________ me to see. 第三部分：语料库默写（动作/环境/心理描写） 动作描写（害怕时的动作）：我本能地______了奶奶的胳膊，但在黑暗中，我感觉到她轻轻______了______我的手，那一刻，我的心顿时安定下来。(grab / pat) I instinctively ______ my grandma's arm, but in the darkness, I felt her gently ______ the ______ of my hand, and my heart immediately settled down. 动作描写（爬楼梯）：我们一步一步地______着台阶，奶奶的呼吸声渐渐变得______。(count / heavy) We ______ the steps one by one, and grandma's breathing gradually grew ______. 环境描写（停电的街道）：窗外的世界______了，没有车灯，没有霓虹，只有______的月光______在空荡荡的街道上。(silence / pale / spill) The world outside the window fell into ______, with no headlights, no neon, only ______ moonlight ______ onto the empty streets. 环境描写（星空）：头顶上，______的银河像一条______的丝带，______了整片夜空。(immense / glittering / stretch across) Overhead, the ______ Milky Way was like a ______ ribbon, ______ the entire night sky. 心理描写（震撼）：看到如此______的景象，我______了呼吸，生怕一______就会打破这份完美。(breathtaking / hold / exhale) Seeing such a ______ sight, I ______ my breath, afraid that a single ______ would break the perfection. 心理描写（许愿时）：我______地______那个愿望，感觉它______我的心脏，______我的喉咙，最后______我的唇边。(silently / shape / fill / climb / reach) I ______ ______ the wish, feeling it ______ my heart, ______ up my throat, and finally ______ my lips. 动作+环境融合：我们______在阳台的栏杆上，______着微凉的夜风，______着这片属于我们的星空。(lean / feel / enjoy) We ______ on the balcony railing, ______ the cool night breeze, and ______ the starry sky that belonged to us. 情感升华描写：黑暗中，奶奶的歌声虽然______，却像______一样，了我心中所有的。(faint / lighthouse / light up / corners) In the dark, grandma's singing, though ______, was like a ______, ______ all the ______ of my heart. 动作链描写（看流星）：我猛地______一口气，______手指着天际，地：“看！流星！”(draw / point / excited / whisper) I ______ a sharp breath, ______ my finger at the horizon, and ______ excitedly, "Look! A shooting star!" 结局动作描写：我______头，______了奶奶，在她的耳边______说：“奶奶，你就是我的流星。”(turn / hug / whisper) I ______ around, ______ my grandma, and ______ in her ear, "Grandma, you are my shooting star." 第四部分：高级句式仿写 句式1：感官先行 + 你的主要动作 + 即时结果 例句：Hearing her soft hum in the silent stairway, I felt a wave of courage rush through my veins. 仿写：听到窗外传来的鸟鸣声，我睁开眼睛，看到了一缕金色的阳光。 ________________________, I ________________________ and ________________________. 句式2：无灵主语句 + 现在分词 例句：A sudden darkness enveloped us, making the familiar elevator seem like a strange cage. 仿写：一阵强烈的兴奋感抓住了我，使我几乎要跳起来。 A strong sense of excitement ________________________, ________________________. 句式3：adj. and adj.，动作链 例句：Curious and excited, we stepped out of the stairwell and pushed open the heavy door to the balcony. 仿写：疲惫但满足，我们走下了最后一级台阶，坐在了公园的长椅上。 ________________________, we ________________________ and ________________________. 句式4：独立主格 + 句子 例句：The power gone, the city lay silent and dark beneath the vast sky. 仿写：作业做完了，她关上了台灯，伸了个懒腰。 ________________________, she ________________________ and ________________________. 句式5：强调句 (It was...that...) 例句：It was in that moment of darkness that I truly understood the meaning of "lucky". 仿写：正是在那个阳台上，我许下了我最重要的愿望。 ________________________ on that balcony ________________________ I made my most important wish. 句式6：递进句 (not only...but also... 或 动作递进) 例句：The darkness not only hid the city's glare but also revealed the magnificent stars above. 仿写：这次停电不仅让我们看到了星星，也让我明白了陪伴的力量。 The power failure ________________________ allowed us to see the stars, ________________________ made me understand the power of companionship. 参考答案 第一部分：原文佳句默写 combed like everyday nestled slipped growled afraid glancing twinkled carry chuckled, stood grabbed, headed wrapped hoping about 第二部分：中文句子默写 as if covered by Holding my hand tightly, drive away Without, displayed, dotted Out of breath, pushed open, were struck slid across, leaving behind closed, whispered, hidden wished, stay, hum breathing in, descended wore, motioned realized, didn't consist in Feeling our way, knew must be, accompanied 第三部分：语料库默写 grabbed, patting, back counted, heavy silence, pale, spilling immense, glittering, stretching across breathtaking, held, exhale silently shaped, fill, climb, reach leaned, feeling, enjoying faint, lighthouse, lit up, corners drew, pointed, whispered turned, hugged, whispered 第四部分：高级句式仿写 句式1：Hearing the birds singing outside the window, opened my eyes, saw a ray of golden sunshine. 句式2：seized me, making me almost jump up 句式3：Tired but satisfied, walked down the last step, sat down on the bench in the park. 句式4：The homework finished, turned off the desk lamp, stretched herself. 句式5：It was, that 句式6：not only, but also 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $