福建省泉州市四校2025-2026学年高二下学期期中联考英语试题 读后续写 讲义

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；递进句，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 福建省泉州市四校2025-2026学年高二下学期期中联考试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Sweat poured down Mark's face(无灵主语句). He had just finished trying out for Oakwood High School's basketball team, and he knew making it to the team was a pretty sure thing. After all, he wasn't just good — he was excellent. Basketball ran in the family — his older brother Reggie was now playing at a top college, and Mark was expected to follow in his brother's footsteps. But Mark had a secret: his heart was in another sport(伏笔). Wiping the sweat from his forehead, Mark jumped on a bus heading home(现在分词短语做后置定语). Through the window, his eyes were drawn to the field where cheerleaders (啦啦队) danced effortlessly. He couldn't look away. For months now, cheerleading had been on his mind. Reaching into his bookbag, he pulled out a poster: CHEERLEADER AUDITIONS (选拔). This was what he really wanted. Mark knew pursuing cheerleading wouldn't just be a physical challenge. His family had poured so much hope into his basketball future. But he was tired of living in his brother's shadow. He was ready to carve his own path. Six months ago, Mark once told his best friend Darren about his dream. "Cheerleading is girly," Darren said. "You're so good at basketball. Why throw that away?" Mark stood his ground. "This is where I want to put my strength," he insisted. Over time, Darren began to understand and support him. Still, Mark kept his passion hidden from his family(过去分词做后置定语). Secretly, Mark trained with two cheerleaders. Cheerleading didn't come naturally — every move demanded more than basketball ever had. But month by month, he improved. Maybe, just maybe, he stood a chance of making it to the cheerleading team. But right now, after his basketball tryout, he had to face his family. As soon as Mark arrived home, his parents were at the door. "So…?" his father asked. "The tryout? It went well." Mark replied, staring at his feet(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Everyone in the family was smiling…except Mark. Still, he knew what had to be done. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1:Gathering courage, Mark announced, "I don't want to play basketball anymore."  Paragraph 2:A week later, it was time for the cheerleader audition. 福建省泉州市四校2025-2026学年高二下学期期中联考试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Sweat poured down Mark's face. He had just finished trying out for Oakwood High School's basketball team, and he knew making it to the team was a pretty sure thing. After all, he wasn't just good — he was excellent. Basketball ran in the family — his older brother Reggie was now playing at a top college, and Mark was expected to follow in his brother's footsteps. But Mark had a secret: his heart was in another sport. Wiping the sweat from his forehead, Mark jumped on a bus heading home. Through the window, his eyes were drawn to the field where cheerleaders (啦啦队) danced effortlessly. He couldn't look away. For months now, cheerleading had been on his mind. Reaching into his bookbag, he pulled out a poster: CHEERLEADER AUDITIONS (选拔). This was what he really wanted. Mark knew pursuing cheerleading wouldn't just be a physical challenge. His family had poured so much hope into his basketball future. But he was tired of living in his brother's shadow. He was ready to carve his own path. Six months ago, Mark once told his best friend Darren about his dream. "Cheerleading is girly," Darren said. "You're so good at basketball. Why throw that away?" Mark stood his ground. "This is where I want to put my strength," he insisted. Over time, Darren began to understand and support him. Still, Mark kept his passion hidden from his family. Secretly, Mark trained with two cheerleaders. Cheerleading didn't come naturally — every move demanded more than basketball ever had. But month by month, he improved. Maybe, just maybe, he stood a chance of making it to the cheerleading team. But right now, after his basketball tryout, he had to face his family. As soon as Mark arrived home, his parents were at the door. "So…?" his father asked. "The tryout? It went well." Mark replied, staring at his feet. Everyone in the family was smiling…except Mark. Still, he knew what had to be done. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1:Gathering courage, Mark announced, "I don't want to play basketball anymore."  Paragraph 2:A week later, it was time for the cheerleader audition. 官方例文： Gathering courage, Mark announced. “I don’t want to play basketball anymore”. The smile on his parents’ faces froze instantly(无灵主语句). “What do you mean?” his father asked in surprise. Taking a deep breath, Mark explained that his true passion was cheerleading although he was good at basketball. The room fell silent. His parents exchanged confused looks, struggling to understand(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Mark felt his heart pounding but continued, saying(现在分词短语做伴随动作)he had been training for months. Just when the tension seemed unbearable, his mother finally spoke gently, “If this is what you really love, you deserve a chance—and we’ll always stand by you.” His father hesitated, then nodded slowly. A week later, it was time for the cheerleader audition. Standing on the field(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Mark felt a mix of nervousness and excitement. Remembering the countless hours of practice(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he pushed aside his doubts and focused on every move. When the music started, he jumped, turned and lifted with confidence. His strength and determination impressed the judges and the crowd. When the results were announced, Mark heard his name among those selected(过去分词做后置定语). At that moment, he spotted his parents in the stands, clapping proudly(现在分词短语做伴随动作). He realized that by following his heart, he had finally stepped out of his brother’s shadow and started his own journey. Part 1 文章整体分析 一、读后续写题型分类 分类维度 类型 本文特点 故事类型 成长励志类（个人梦想） 主人公坚持梦想，突破家庭期待，实现自我价值 矛盾类型 梦想与家庭期待冲突类 篮球VS啦啦队；他人期待VS真实自我 情感主题 自我认同（Self-identity） 做真正喜欢的自己 人际关系 亲情+友情 家人的不理解→理解；朋友由反对→支持 写作模式 矛盾—冲突—解决—升华 高考最经典成长励志结构 二、"梦想选择类"续写 近年来高考读后续写非常喜欢这一类型： 内心真正喜欢某件事↓害怕别人反对↓鼓起勇气表达↓经历考验↓获得认可↓完成成长 因此，本篇并不是比赛类，也不是校园活动类，而是： 借一次Cheerleader Audition讲述少年寻找真正自己的故事。 三、全文核心冲突 整篇文章只有一个最大的冲突：Follow others' expectation VS Follow your own heart 所有续写，都必须围绕这一矛盾展开。 千万不要写成： · 啦啦队比赛过程 · 炫技动作 · 篮球比赛 这些都会偏题。 四、续写整体布局（高考最佳结构） 第一段（矛盾爆发） 中心：Mark坦白梦想。 建议布局： ① 鼓起勇气↓② 告诉父母↓③ 父母震惊↓④ 家人反对↓⑤ Mark解释原因↓⑥ 家庭态度开始松动 第一段一定是：家庭冲突。不是去参加选拔。 第二段（矛盾解决） 中心：Cheerleader Audition 建议布局： 参加选拔↓发挥训练成果↓获得认可↓父母来到现场↓看见Mark真正快乐↓理解支持↓主题升华 五、续写一定要承接原文哪些内容 原文伏笔 续写必须回应 basketball family 家人的反应一定很震惊 brother Reggie 最好再次提及哥哥阴影 living in his brother's shadow Mark必须表达自己的真实想法 Darren supported him Darren可以到现场支持 secretly trained Audition时体现训练成果 cheerleaders trained him 可以成为现场鼓励者 poster 最终实现梦想 father asked"So?" 第一段顺势展开家庭对话 六、续写重点布局分析 第一段重点 不是：家人吵架 而是：家庭冲突+真情表达 建议情绪变化： Mark紧张↓父母震惊↓质疑↓Mark解释↓父母沉默↓允许尝试，情绪逐渐缓和。 第二段重点 不是：比赛写很长。而是：比赛只是载体。 真正重点：父母看到：原来孩子真正热爱的事情，比赢球更重要。 最后完成主题：Love means respecting one's choice. 七、高分续写思路 建议遵循：Explain↓Convince↓Prove↓Accept 即：解释梦想↓说服父母↓证明自己↓获得认可 这是最自然的发展。 八、续写容易踩坑 常见错误 为什么扣分 第一段直接去参加Audition 没处理家庭冲突 父母立即支持 冲突太弱 写篮球比赛 偏离主题 啦啦队动作写很长 主旨弱化 获奖太夸张 不符合高中生活 Darren消失 前文伏笔浪费 哥哥完全不提 Shadow伏笔没回扣 九、主题升华 可以落到三个层面： 第一层：Follow your passion. 第二层：Be yourself instead of someone else's expectation. 第三层（最佳）：Parents finally realized that success is not becoming someone else, but becoming yourself. 十、故事核心脉络 模块 内容 起因 Mark真正喜欢啦啦队 发展 因家庭期待一直隐瞒 冲突 决定放弃篮球坦白梦想 高潮 参加Cheerleader Audition证明自己 结局 家人理解并支持梦想 主旨 勇敢做真正的自己 十一、关键线索梳理 （一）人物关系 人物 身份 作用 Mark 主人公 成长者 Father 家庭期待代表 冲突制造者 Mother 家庭成员 情绪缓冲 Reggie 哥哥 Shadow象征 Darren 好朋友 支持者 Cheerleaders 导师 梦想帮助者 （二）核心道具 道具 象征意义 Basketball 家庭期待 Cheerleader Poster 真正梦想 Bus Window 梦想萌芽 Bookbag 隐藏秘密 Cheerleading Practice 坚持努力 （三）情感基调 开始：压抑↓纠结↓勇敢↓紧张↓释然↓幸福 （四）续写伏笔 原文伏笔 后文回应方式 Living in brother's shadow 表达想走自己的路 Darren supported him 到现场鼓励 Secret training Audition表现优秀 Parents smiling 后来真正理解笑容含义 Cheerleader poster 梦想实现 十二、文章结构分析 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 自信但内心纠结，勇于追梦 He was excellent... But Mark had a secret. 情感层次 自豪→压抑→犹豫→坚定 He was ready to carve his own path. 关键情节点 篮球选拔→看到啦啦队→秘密训练→回家坦白 Still, he knew what had to be done. 语言特色 心理冲突推动故事，动作描写自然 He couldn't look away. 关键词分析 basketball, cheerleader, shadow, dream, courage 全文反复出现 心理描写 梦想与家庭期待冲突 His heart was in another sport. 动作描写 擦汗、望窗外、拿海报、低头 Wiping the sweat... stared at his feet. 环境描写 球场、公交、家门口构成空间转换 Through the window... As soon as Mark arrived home. 隐含主题 成为真正的自己 Carve his own path. 情感转折 从隐瞒到坦白 Still, he knew what had to be done. 空间转换 球馆→公交→训练场→家 全文场景推进明显 时间过渡 六个月前→秘密训练→当天回家→一周后 Six months ago... A week later... 十三、苏格拉底式提问 第一部分：理解原文 1. 为什么Mark虽然篮球优秀，却一直望着啦啦队训练场？ 2. 作者为什么强调哥哥Reggie？ 3. "living in his brother's shadow"真正说明了什么？ 4. Darren一开始为什么反对？ 5. 为什么Mark一直没有告诉家人？ 第二部分：分析第一段 1. 当Mark说"I don't want to play basketball anymore."后，谁最先说话？为什么？ 2. 父亲听到后第一反应可能是什么？ 3. 母亲会立即反对，还是先询问原因？ 4. Mark应该如何解释自己的选择，才能让家人理解？ 5. 怎样体现Mark已经成熟，而不是一时冲动？ 第三部分：分析第二段 1. 一周后的选拔现场，Mark最紧张的是什么？ 2. 秘密训练六个月，会在哪些细节中体现？ 3. Darren会不会来到现场？他的出现有什么作用？ 4. 家人有没有可能偷偷来到现场？这样安排有什么表达效果？ 5. 什么样的表现能够证明Mark真正属于啦啦队，而不仅仅是完成动作？ 第四部分：主题升华 1. 家人的态度应该如何自然转变，而不是突然改变？ 2. 为什么看到Mark发自内心的笑容，比看到比赛成绩更能打动父母？ 3. 文章最后一句如果点明主题，应围绕“成功”“梦想”“自我”中的哪一个展开？ 4. 如果你是Mark，你希望父母最终认可的是你的成绩，还是你的选择？为什么？ 5. 这篇文章真正想告诉读者：优秀是否只有一种标准？如何结合全文回答这一问题？ Part 2 读后续写语料积累 一、动作描写 英文例句 中文翻译 1. Mark lowered his head, avoiding everyone's eyes. Mark低下头，躲避着所有人的目光。 2. He clenched his fists, gathering every bit of courage. 他紧握双拳，鼓起全部勇气。 3. Taking a deep breath, he finally broke the silence. 他深吸一口气，终于打破了沉默。 4. His hands trembled slightly as he spoke. 他说话时双手微微颤抖。 5. He straightened his back and looked his father in the eye. 他挺直身子，直视父亲的眼睛。 6. Mark stepped forward without hesitation. Mark毫不犹豫地向前迈了一步。 7. He threw himself into every practice with determination. 他全身心投入每一次训练。 8. A broad smile spread across his face. 一抹灿烂的笑容浮现在他的脸上。 9. He exchanged a confident glance with Darren. 他与Darren交换了一个充满信心的眼神。 10. Mark lifted his chin, determined to follow his heart. Mark抬起头，下定决心追随自己的内心。 二、心理描写 英文例句 中文翻译 1. A wave of anxiety swept over him. 一阵焦虑涌上心头。 2. His heart pounded wildly in his chest. 他的心剧烈跳动。 3. Doubts crept into his mind. 怀疑悄悄涌入他的脑海。 4. He couldn't help wondering whether he had made the right decision. 他忍不住怀疑自己的决定是否正确。 5. Deep inside, he knew this was his true calling. 他内心深处知道这才是真正的梦想。 6. Fear battled with determination inside him. 恐惧与坚定在他心中交织。 7. Relief washed over him. 他顿时如释重负。 8. Confidence gradually replaced his nervousness. 自信逐渐取代了紧张。 9. His heart was filled with hope. 他的心中充满希望。 10. At that moment, he had never felt so certain. 那一刻，他从未如此坚定。 三、环境描写 英文例句 中文翻译 1. The afternoon sunshine streamed through the windows. 午后的阳光透过窗户洒进来。 2. Silence filled the living room. 客厅陷入一片寂静。 3. The gym buzzed with excitement. 体育馆里洋溢着兴奋的气氛。 4. Applause echoed across the field. 掌声回荡在操场上。 5. A gentle breeze brushed against his face. 微风轻轻拂过他的脸庞。 6. The audience held their breath. 全场观众屏住了呼吸。 7. The bright lights made the stage shine. 明亮的灯光让舞台熠熠生辉。 8. Cheers erupted from every corner of the gym. 欢呼声从体育馆四周爆发出来。 9. Warm sunlight wrapped everything in golden light. 温暖的阳光给一切披上金色光辉。 10. The whole room seemed frozen for a second. 整个房间仿佛凝固了一秒钟。 四、高级词汇替换 （一）"说"类 普通词 高级替换 say remark say declare say announce say whisper say respond 例："I don't want to play basketball," Mark announced. （二）"看"类 普通词 高级替换 look glance at look stare at look gaze at look peer at look fix one's eyes on （三）"走"类 普通词 高级替换 walk stride walk march walk step forward walk make one's way to walk approach （四）"开心"类 普通词 高级替换 happy delighted happy overjoyed happy thrilled happy excited happy joyful （五）"紧张"类 普通词 高级替换 nervous anxious nervous uneasy nervous tense nervous restless nervous apprehensive （六）"勇敢"类 普通词 高级替换 brave courageous brave determined brave fearless brave bold brave resolute （七）"努力"类 普通词 高级替换 try strive work hard devote oneself to practice polish improve sharpen train undergo training 五、可积累固定搭配 搭配 中文 follow one's heart 追随内心 chase one's dream 追逐梦想 gather courage 鼓起勇气 stand one's ground 坚持立场 carve one's own path 开辟属于自己的道路 step out of one's shadow 走出他人的阴影 break the silence 打破沉默 pour one's heart into 全身心投入 earn one's approval 赢得认可 stay true to oneself 忠于自己 hold one's breath 屏住呼吸 exchange a glance 交换眼神 burst into applause 爆发掌声 be filled with determination 充满决心 be lost in thought 陷入沉思 六、原文地道搭配解析 原文表达 词法解析 中文含义 可替换表达 run in the family run表示"流传" 家族遗传、世代如此 be inherited from one's family follow in one's footsteps footstep比喻人生道路 追随某人的脚步 take after one's heart is in... heart表示热爱 真正热爱 be passionate about couldn't look away away构成结果补语 移不开目光 be glued to carve one's own path carve比喻开拓 开辟自己的道路 make one's own way stand one's ground stand坚持 坚持立场 stick to one's belief put one's strength into strength抽象名词 把精力投入 devote oneself to month by month 时间递进 一月又一月 gradually stand a chance of 固定搭配 有机会 have a possibility of face one's family face动词 面对 confront 七、高频短语积累 短语 词义 近义词 反义词 例句① 例句② gather courage 鼓起勇气 summon courage, pluck up courage lose heart She gathered courage to speak. He gathered enough courage to tell the truth. follow one's heart 追随内心 chase one's dream, stay true to oneself follow the crowd He decided to follow his heart. She finally followed her heart instead of others' expectations. stand one's ground 坚持立场 stick to, insist on give in Mark stood his ground calmly. She stood her ground despite criticism. carve one's own path 开辟自己的道路 make one's own way, forge one's future follow others He wanted to carve his own path. Everyone admired her for carving her own path. step out of one's shadow 走出阴影 become independent, break free remain dependent Mark longed to step out of his brother's shadow. She finally stepped out of her parents' shadow. pour one's heart into 全身心投入 devote oneself to, commit oneself to neglect He poured his heart into training. She poured her heart into every performance. be filled with determination 充满决心 be determined, resolve firmly lose confidence His eyes were filled with determination. She was filled with determination to succeed. hold one's breath 屏住呼吸 remain silent, wait anxiously relax Everyone held their breath. The audience held their breath during the performance. burst into applause 爆发掌声 clap enthusiastically, cheer loudly fall silent The audience burst into applause. The gym burst into applause when he finished. earn one's approval 赢得认可 gain recognition, win respect disappoint He earned his father's approval. Her efforts earned everyone's approval. 八、成长励志类读后续写万能语料 （一）心理描写黄金表达 英文 中文 His heart skipped a beat. 他心头一震。 His mind went blank for a moment. 他大脑一片空白。 A sense of determination rose within him. 一股坚定感油然而生。 Every doubt faded away. 所有疑虑烟消云散。 He finally found the courage he had been searching for. 他终于找到了久违的勇气。 （二）动作描写黄金表达 英文 中文 He drew in a deep breath. 他深吸一口气。 He nodded firmly. 他坚定地点点头。 He squared his shoulders. 他挺直肩膀。 He lifted his head high. 他昂起头。 He flashed a confident smile. 他露出自信的笑容。 （三）主题升华万能句 英文 中文 Following your heart takes courage, but it is always worth it. 追随内心需要勇气，但一切都值得。 True success comes from becoming the person you want to be. 真正的成功来自成为自己想成为的人。 Dreams shine brightest when we dare to pursue them. 当我们敢于追梦时，梦想才会闪耀。 It is never too late to choose your own path. 选择属于自己的道路永远不会太晚。 Being true to yourself is the greatest victory of all. 忠于自我是人生最大的胜利。 Part 3 Possible Versions Version 1 Paragraph 1: Gathering courage, Mark announced, "I don't want to play basketball anymore." The smiles on his parents' faces froze instantly. His father stared at him in disbelief, while his mother asked softly, “What do you mean?” Taking a deep breath(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Mark finally voiced the secret he had kept for months. “Basketball has never been my dream. I love cheerleading, and I've been training for it in secret.” Hearing this(现在分词短语做伴随动作), his father frowned, unable to understand(adj做主语补语) why such a talented basketball player would give up a bright future. Instead of arguing, Mark looked him in the eye and said firmly, “I've always been following Reggie's footsteps, but I want to carve my own path.” His honest words filled the room with silence. Remembering(现在分词短语做伴随动作) how unhappy Mark had seemed after the tryout, his parents gradually realized that they had been focusing more on their expectations than on his happiness. After a long pause, his father nodded slowly. “If this is truly what you want,” he said, “prove it with your actions.” Encouraged by their response(过去分词做原因状语), Mark walked away determined to give everything(过去分词短语做主语补语) he had at the coming audition. Paragraph 2: A week later, it was time for the cheerleader audition. Walking into the gym(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Mark still felt his heart pounding, but this time nervousness was mixed with excitement instead of fear. Every difficult move he had practiced over the past months came naturally as he threw himself into the performance with confidence and energy. Standing quietly among the audience(现在分词短语做伴随动作), his parents watched in amazement as their son completed every movement with strength, balance and genuine joy. It was then that they finally understood(强调句) why basketball had never brought the same sparkle to his eyes. When the performance ended, warm applause echoed throughout the gym, and Mark caught sight of Darren giving him an encouraging thumbs-up. More importantly, he saw his parents smiling proudly, not because he had become another Reggie, but because he had become himself. At that moment, Mark knew that following his heart had not only led him to his dream but had also helped his family discover that true success means having the courage to choose one's own path. Version 2 Paragraph 1 Gathering courage, Mark announced, “I don't want to play basketball anymore.” For a second, no one spoke. The cheerful atmosphere at the door disappeared, replaced by a heavy silence(过去分词做结果状语). His father's smile faded first. “You're giving up basketball?” he asked, clearly shocked. Mark nodded and, with trembling hands, pulled the cheerleader poster from his bag. “This is what I really want,” he admitted. “I've been practicing for months because I was afraid you'd be disappointed.” His mother looked at the poster, then at the exhausted yet determined boy standing before her(现在分词短语做后置定语). Mark finally said what had been buried deep inside him: “I love Reggie, but I don't want to spend my whole life being compared with him.” The honesty in his voice softened the room. His father sighed, realizing(现在分词短语做伴随动作)that the son before him was not rebelling but searching for his own future. After a long conversation, his parents agreed to give him a chance and quietly promised that they would come and watch the audition. Paragraph 2 A week later, it was time for the cheerleader audition. When Mark stepped onto the gym floor, he immediately spotted his parents sitting in the audience. His nervousness eased a little. Music began, and he moved with a confidence that had never been shown on a basketball court. Every jump, turn and lift reflected the countless hours of secret practice(无灵主语句). Instead of trying to impress others, he simply enjoyed what he was doing. His parents exchanged surprised glances; for the first time, they saw their son not as “the next Reggie” but as Mark himself. When the performance ended, applause filled the gym. Darren stood up and cheered loudly, while Mark's mother wiped away tears she hadn't expected. His father smiled and said quietly, “I finally understand.” Walking toward his family(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Mark felt lighter than ever. The path ahead might still be challenging, but he was no longer walking in someone else's shadow. He was walking toward a future that truly belonged to him. Version 3 Paragraph 1 Gathering courage, Mark announced, “I don't want to play basketball anymore.” His words hung in the air(无灵主语句), leaving his parents speechless(现在分词短语做结果状语). Seeing the surprise on their faces(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Mark felt his heart racing, yet he refused to take back what he had said. Drawing a deep breath(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he explained that although basketball had brought him countless compliments, it had never brought him real happiness. Instead, cheerleading had taught him persistence, teamwork and confidence. “For years, everyone expected me to become another Reggie,” he said, his voice steady(独立主格). “But I don't want to spend my life chasing someone else's dream. I want to discover who I am.” His father remained silent for a while, while his mother gently took his hand. Looking at the determination in their son's eyes(现在分词短语做伴随动作), they finally realized that he had grown into a young man capable of making his own choice(adj做主语补语). Though still worried, they decided to respect his decision and wished him good luck in the audition the following week. Paragraph 2 A week later, it was time for the cheerleader audition. With his parents' words echoing in his mind, Mark walked confidently onto the performance floor. Gone was the hesitation(完全倒装句) that had troubled him only a week before. As the music started, he completed every movement with remarkable strength and graceful coordination, the result of months of secret practice. Watching from the audience(现在分词短语做伴随动作), his parents were deeply moved, for what impressed them most was not the difficulty of the routine but the joy shining in their son's eyes(现在分词短语做后置定语). When the performance came to an end, thunderous applause broke out across the gym, and Darren greeted him with an excited thumbs-up. Smiling proudly(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Mark's father walked over and gave him a firm hug. “You don't have to follow anyone's footsteps,” he said. “Just keep becoming the best version of yourself.” At that moment, Mark understood that true success was never about living up to others' expectations, but about having the courage to follow his heart and carve out his own path. 练习题与默写包 【第一部分】原文佳句默写（根据汉语提示及英文部分，补全空缺） 要求：根据汉语意思和英文提示，在空格处填入恰当的单词或短语。 汗水顺着Mark的脸流下来。 Sweat __________ Mark's face. 他知道进入校队是十拿九稳的事。 He knew making it to the team was a __________ __________. 篮球在他的家族中代代相传。 Basketball __________ __________ the family. 他被期望跟随哥哥的脚步。 Mark was __________ __________ follow in his brother's footsteps. 但他的心却在另一项运动上。 But his heart was __________ __________ __________. 他擦了擦额头上的汗，跳上了一辆回家的公交车。 __________ the sweat from his forehead, Mark __________ on a bus heading home. 他的目光被啦啦队员跳舞的场地吸引住了。 His eyes were __________ __________ the field where cheerleaders danced. 他无法移开目光。 He couldn't __________ __________. 他准备好走自己的路了。 He was ready to __________ his own __________. Mark坚持自己的立场。 Mark __________ __________ __________. 他开始逐渐理解并支持他。 He began to __________ and __________ him. Mark把这份热爱对家人隐藏了起来。 Mark __________ his passion __________ from his family. 每一个动作都要求比篮球更多的付出。 Every move __________ more than basketball ever had. 也许，仅仅是也许，他有希望进入啦啦队。 Maybe, just maybe, he __________ __________ __________ of making it. Mark盯着自己的脚回答。 Mark replied, __________ __________ his feet. 【第二部分】中译英（根据中文和关键词提示，写出完整英文句子） 中文：客厅里一片沉默，父母交换了一个困惑的眼神。（silence, confused look） 中文：Mark深吸一口气，直视着父亲的眼睛。（took a deep breath, directly into） 中文：他把手伸进背包，拿出了那张被翻旧了的选拔海报。（reached into, worn-out） 中文：父亲沉默良久，最终点了点头。（for a long moment, nodded） 中文：选拔那天，体育馆里挤满了观众和选手。（audition day, packed with） 中文：当音乐响起时，Mark感到一阵紧张，但很快集中了注意力。（music started, nervousness, focused） 中文：他与队友配合完成了那个高难度的托举动作。（teammate, lift） 中文：落地的那一刻，他瞥见了观众席上的父亲。（the moment he landed, caught a glimpse of） 中文：父亲没有鼓掌，但他没有离开。（applaud, leave） 中文：Mark笑了，他知道自己终于走出了哥哥的影子。（smiled, stepped out of, shadow） 中文：这是他人生中第一次为自己而战。（for the first time, fought for） 中文：无论选拔结果如何，他已经赢了。（regardless of, had already won） 【第三部分】动作·环境·心理描写语料库默写 要求：根据中文提示，补全英文句子中的空格部分。 心理·紧张：他的心_____________，手心全是汗。 His heart __________, and his palms were __________ __________ sweat. 心理·坚定：他_____________，告诉自己他不能退缩。 He __________ his __________ and told himself he couldn't back down. 心理·如释重负：一阵_____________涌上心头，他_____________松了一口气。 A wave of __________ washed over him, and he __________ a sigh of __________. 动作·说话：他_____________，声音微微颤抖地说：“我……” He __________ a deep __________ and said in a __________ voice, "I..." 动作·拿东西：他把手_____________，_____________那张海报。 He __________ his hand and __________ the poster. 动作·行走：他_____________走向场地中央，每一步都_____________。 He __________ towards the center of the court, each step __________. 动作·完成动作：他在空中_____________，稳稳地_____________。 He __________ in the air and __________ firmly on his feet. 环境·家庭：客厅里_____________，_____________。 The living room fell __________, and the __________ was __________. 环境·选拔现场：体育馆里_____________，_____________。 The gymnasium was __________ with __________ and __________. 环境·阳光：阳光_____________，在地上洒下_____________。 Sunlight __________ through the windows, __________ warm __________ on the floor. 【第四部分】高级句式仿写 句式1：感官先行 + 主动作 + 即时结果 例句（原创）：Hearing the music start, Mark closed his eyes and felt his fear melt away. 仿写：_____________ (听到) his father's silence, Mark _____________ (抬起头) and _____________ (感到一阵希望). 句式2：无灵主语句 + 现在分词 例句（原创）：The weight on his shoulders lifted, leaving him light and free. 仿写：A wave of nervousness _____________ (席卷了他), _____________ (使他) unable to speak for a moment. 句式3：形容词并列 + 动作链 例句（原创）：Nervous but determined, he stepped forward and spoke his truth. 仿写：_____________ (既累又兴奋), he _____________ (完成动作) and _____________ (看向观众席). 句式4：独立主格 + 完整句 例句（原创）：His heart pounding in his chest, Mark walked onto the audition floor. 仿写：_____________ (父母盯着他看), Mark _____________ (展开海报) and _____________ (开始解释). 句式5：强调句 例句（原创）：It was at that moment that he realized he was no longer afraid. 仿写：_____________ (正是在那时) that his father _____________ (微微点头) — a silent sign of approval. 句式6：递进句（not...but...） 例句（原创）：This wasn't a defeat of his family's hope, but a victory of his own truth. 仿写：This wasn't _____________ (一场选拔的失败), but _____________ (一次自我的发现). 【参考答案】 第一部分 参考答案 poured down pretty sure thing ran in expected to in another sport Wiping, jumped drawn to look away carve, path stood his ground understand, support kept, hidden demanded stood a chance staring at 第二部分 参考答案 Silence filled the living room as his parents exchanged a confused look. Mark took a deep breath and looked directly into his father's eyes. He reached into his bag and pulled out the worn-out audition poster. His father was silent for a long moment, and finally nodded. On the audition day, the gymnasium was packed with spectators and candidates. When the music started, Mark felt a wave of nervousness but quickly focused his attention. He completed the difficult lift with his teammate perfectly. The moment he landed, he caught a glimpse of his father in the audience. His father didn't applaud, but he didn't leave either. Mark smiled, knowing that he had finally stepped out of his brother's shadow. For the first time in his life, he fought for himself. Regardless of the audition result, he had already won. 第三部分 参考答案 pounded, covered with clenched, fists relief, let out, relief took, breath, trembling reached in, pulled out walked, heavy spun, landed silent, atmosphere, tense packed, spectators, candidates streamed, casting, light 第四部分 参考答案 句式1：Hearing, lifted his head, felt a surge of hope. 句式2：swept over him, leaving him 句式3：Tired but excited, finished his routine, looked toward the audience. 句式4：His parents staring at him, unfolded the poster, began to explain. 句式5：It was then, gave a slight nod 句式6：a failure of the audition, a discovery of himself 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $