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该高中英语高考复习讲义聚焦读后续写核心考点，按照“冲突解决-情感升华”逻辑层次梳理温情治愈类文本的续写框架，通过类型判定、线索分析、语料积累、真题演练四个环节，帮助学生建立“锁定冲突-设计行动-回扣伏笔-升华主题”的解题思路，系统突破情节构思与语言表达难点。 资料创新采用苏格拉底式提问与分层语料库结合的教学策略，如通过“回扣伏笔”训练引导学生关联原文慈善捐款等细节，培养思维品质，依托动作、心理描写语料及高级句式仿写包提升语言能力。设置默写、仿写、范文对比等分层练习，配合即时反馈机制，确保学生高效掌握续写技巧，为教师精准把控复习节奏提供实用指导。

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 江苏苏北六校G6（徐州一中，宿迁中学等校）2026届高三下学期4月联考 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a rainy, damp December day(环境描写), the cold drizzle pattering against my car window(独立主格) as I headed to the store to pick up another week’s worth of food. The gray sky hung low, and the air was filled with the chill of winter, making the whole day feel gloomy(现在分词短语做结果状语). I had put off shopping for Christmas presents until later in the month, fearing the chaotic crowds of holiday shoppers(现在分词短语做伴随动作)—they always made the store feel tight and overwhelming. As I drove, I kept the CD player on, turning up the soft music to drown out the radio news(现在分词短语做伴随动作), which always seemed to be filled with stories of division and conflict, leaving me feeling helpless and discouraged(现在分词短语做结果状语，刻画人物情绪). Still, I gave my young son a dollar, telling him to put it in the charity worker’s red container by the store door(现在分词短语做伴随动作)—a small act of kindness to ease the world’s divisions. We went in, and the warm air inside hit us(无灵主语句), a welcome relief from the cold rain outside. We quickly filled our cart with groceries—fresh vegetables, bread, and some treats for the upcoming holiday. Then we walked towards the self-checkout machines. I hated using them(伏笔); I much preferred chatting with the friendly cashiers, who always had a smile and a kind word. But the line at the regular registers was five deep, and I just didn’t have the time to wait. As I pulled my cart up to a self-checkout machine, I heard the man next to me complaining quietly(继续塑造冲突), his face lined with frustration(独立主格). He only had a few items—a loaf of bread, a carton of milk, and a jar of jam—but every time he put his wrinkled, well-worn twenty-dollar bill into the machine, it was rejected(继续刻画冲突). He sighed heavily, running a hand through his gray hair(现在分词短语做伴随动作), clearly trying his hardest not to curse(现在分词短语做伴随动作). I could tell he was growing more and more upset, his hands shaking slightly(独立主格) as he tried again and again to feed the bill into the machine. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: I quickly grabbed a newer twenty out of my purse. Paragraph 2: The old man waved goodbye, leaving us there with that torn twenty in hand. 江苏苏北六校G6（徐州一中，宿迁中学等校）2026届高三下学期4月联考 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a rainy, damp December day, the cold drizzle pattering against my car window as I headed to the store to pick up another week’s worth of food. The gray sky hung low, and the air was filled with the chill of winter, making the whole day feel gloomy. I had put off shopping for Christmas presents until later in the month, fearing the chaotic crowds of holiday shoppers—they always made the store feel tight and overwhelming. As I drove, I kept the CD player on, turning up the soft music to drown out the radio news, which always seemed to be filled with stories of division and conflict, leaving me feeling helpless and discouraged. Still, I gave my young son a dollar, telling him to put it in the charity worker’s red container by the store door—a small act of kindness to ease the world’s divisions. We went in, and the warm air inside hit us, a welcome relief from the cold rain outside. We quickly filled our cart with groceries—fresh vegetables, bread, and some treats for the upcoming holiday. Then we walked towards the self-checkout machines. I hated using them; I much preferred chatting with the friendly cashiers, who always had a smile and a kind word. But the line at the regular registers was five deep, and I just didn’t have the time to wait. As I pulled my cart up to a self-checkout machine, I heard the man next to me complaining quietly, his face lined with frustration. He only had a few items—a loaf of bread, a carton of milk, and a jar of jam—but every time he put his wrinkled, well-worn twenty-dollar bill into the machine, it was rejected. He sighed heavily, running a hand through his gray hair, clearly trying his hardest not to curse. I could tell he was growing more and more upset, his hands shaking slightly as he tried again and again to feed the bill into the machine. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: I quickly grabbed a newer twenty out of my purse. Paragraph 2: The old man waved goodbye, leaving us there with that torn twenty in hand. Part 1. 类型判定 + 续写构思 1文章类型判定 这篇属于典型的： “人与人之间的善意传递类（温情治愈型）读后续写” 常见子类型： · 陌生人互助（核心） · 小善举→情感升华 · 负面情绪→温暖反转 2 核心续写逻辑 基本结构 段落 功能 写作任务 Paragraph 1 冲突解决 “我”帮助老人，完成交易，情感开始转暖 Paragraph 2 情感升华 老人离开→留下“回馈/象征物”→主题升华 3 续写构思四步法 Step 1：锁定冲突 老人无法使用旧钞付款（外在冲突） 内心焦躁、无助（内在冲突） Step 2：设计行动（必须具体） “我”做什么？ · 换钱 · 帮忙操作机器 · 安慰老人 ✅ 要写动作链（grab → hand → explain → smile） Step 3：设置“回扣伏笔” 原文伏笔： · charity donation（善意） · gloomy mood（压抑） · world division（主题） 续写必须回扣： · 小善举 → 对抗冷漠世界 · 情绪变化：灰暗 → 温暖 Step 4：升华主题 可选方向： · kindness spreads（善意传递） · small acts matter（小事的意义） · hope in a divided world（在分裂中看到希望） 4续写内容设计 Paragraph 1（动作+情感缓解） 建议结构： 1. 我拿出新钞 2. 递给老人 3. 老人惊讶/拒绝 4. 我解释/安慰 5. 成功付款 情绪：紧张 → 放松 Paragraph 2（反转+升华） 关键设计点： 老人离开前留下“东西”： · 撕裂的20美元 · 或一句话 · 或一个微笑 象征意义： · imperfect kindness（不完美但真实） · giving back（回馈） 收尾： · 呼应开头“世界分裂” · 点出“善意修复世界” Part 2. 结构与线索分析表 1故事核心脉络 模块 内容 开端 阴雨天气 + 消极情绪 发展 超市购物 + 慈善行为 高潮前 老人付款失败 冲突 技术障碍 + 情绪焦躁 续写起点 “我”决定帮助 2 关键线索分析表 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 我：敏感、有同情心；老人：窘迫、焦虑 his hands shaking slightly 情感层次 压抑 → 烦躁 → 同情（待升华） gloomy / helpless / frustrated 关键情节点 老人多次付款失败 every time… it was rejected 语言特色 环境渲染+心理描写 gray sky hung low 关键词分析 gloomy / division / kindness / frustration stories of division and conflict 心理描写 “我”对世界失望 leaving me feeling helpless 动作描写 老人反复塞钱 tried again and again 环境描写 雨天 + 冷空气 rainy, damp December day 隐含主题 善意对抗冷漠世界 ease the world’s divisions 情感转折 从负面到潜在温暖 small act of kindness 空间转换 车内 → 商店 → 收银区 went in / self-checkout 时间过渡 连续即时发生 as I drove / then we walked Part 3. 苏格拉底式提问 第一层：理解冲突 1. 老人为什么会如此焦躁？ 2. 机器拒收钱，问题在谁？（人/物/社会？） 3. “我”是否必须帮助他？为什么？ 第二层：设计行为 1. 如果你是“我”，第一反应会是什么？ 2. “换钱”这个动作，具体怎么发生？ 3. 老人会立刻接受帮助吗？还是犹豫？ 第三层：深化情感 1. 老人的表情会发生怎样变化？ 2. “我”的情绪是否也发生改变？ 3. 这一刻和开头“gloomy”形成什么对比？ 第四层：主题升华 1. 为什么作者要写“charity donation”？ 2. 老人留下那张旧钱，有什么象征意义？ 3. 这个故事如何回应“a divided world”？ 第五层：结尾设计 1. 结尾是写“我”还是写“世界”？ 2. 用一句话总结主题，你会怎么写？ 3. 是否需要点出“Christmas spirit”？为什么？ 用一个“微小但具体的善举”，完成从“世界冷漠”到“人性温暖”的情绪反转，并通过“象征物”实现主题升华。 Part 2续写语料积累动作、环境、心理 一、动作描写 1. I quickly pulled a crisp bill from my wallet and held it out to him. 我迅速从钱包里抽出一张崭新的钞票递给他。 2. He hesitated for a moment before reaching out with trembling fingers. 他犹豫了一下，才用颤抖的手接过去。 3. I gently pushed the bill into the machine for him. 我轻轻地帮他把钱放进机器里。 4. He let out a long sigh, his shoulders finally relaxing. 他长舒一口气，肩膀终于放松下来。 5. I gave him a reassuring nod and a small smile. 我朝他点点头，给了他一个安慰的微笑。 6. He clutched the bag tightly, as if afraid it might disappear. 他紧紧抓着袋子，仿佛生怕它消失。 7. I stepped closer, lowering my voice so as not to embarrass him. 我走近一步，压低声音，避免让他尴尬。 8. He waved his hand slightly, trying to refuse my help. 他轻轻摆手，试图拒绝我的帮助。 9. I placed the new bill in his hand without another word. 我没有多说，把新钞放到他手里。 10. He gave a slight nod before turning to leave. 他轻轻点头，然后转身离开。 二、心理描写 1. A wave of sympathy washed over me. 一阵同情涌上心头。 2. I could feel his frustration growing with each failed attempt. 随着一次次失败，我能感受到他的沮丧不断加深。 3. I hesitated, unsure whether I should step in. 我犹豫了一下，不确定是否该出手。 4. Something inside me urged me to help. 内心有个声音催促我去帮助他。 5. I didn’t want him to feel embarrassed. 我不想让他感到难堪。 6. His helplessness reminded me of how fragile we all are. 他的无助让我意识到人是多么脆弱。 7. A quiet warmth spread through my chest. 一股温暖悄然在心中蔓延。 8. I suddenly felt lighter, as if the gloom had lifted. 我突然感到轻松，仿佛阴霾散去。 9. His gratitude was written all over his face. 他的感激之情写在脸上。 10. At that moment, the world didn’t feel so cold anymore. 那一刻，世界不再那么冰冷。 三、环境描写 1. The rain continued to tap softly against the windows. 雨仍轻轻敲打着窗户。 2. The gray sky seemed a little less heavy now. 灰蒙的天空似乎不再那么压抑。 3. The warm light inside the store felt comforting. 商店里的暖光让人感到安心。 4. A gentle hum of voices filled the air. 空气中弥漫着轻柔的人声。 5. The cold air outside lingered at the entrance. 门口还残留着外面的寒气。 6. The fluorescent lights flickered slightly above us. 头顶的灯光微微闪烁。 7. The atmosphere softened as the tension faded. 随着紧张消散，氛围也变得柔和。 8. The drizzle blurred the view outside. 细雨模糊了窗外的景象。 9. The store felt quieter than before. 商店似乎比刚才安静了些。 10. Even the cold December air seemed kinder. 连十二月的寒气似乎也变得温和。 （1）高级替换词 ✅ 情绪类 基础词 高级替换 sad gloomy / downcast / disheartened / low-spirited / somber happy delighted / overjoyed / warmed / uplifted / content nervous anxious / uneasy / tense / on edge / restless ✅ 动作类 基础词 高级替换 give hand / offer / pass / extend / present look glance / gaze / stare / peer / scan say murmur / whisper / utter / remark / respond ✅ 心理类 基础词 高级替换 think reflect / realize / figure / sense / perceive feel sense / experience / be filled with / be overcome by / register ✅ 场景总结 帮助场景核心表达 · step in to help · offer a hand · ease someone’s frustration · break the awkward silence 情绪转折 · from frustration to relief · tension melted away · a sense of warmth spread 主题升华 · small acts of kindness matter · kindness bridges the gap · warmth in a cold world （2）搭配 & 词汇深度解析表 词汇/短语 词义 近义词 反义词 搭配/用法 例句 frustration 挫败感 annoyance, irritation satisfaction feel frustration / growing frustration He couldn’t hide his frustration. / Her frustration built up quickly. hesitate 犹豫 pause, waver decide, act hesitate to do She hesitated to accept help. / He hesitated before speaking. relieve 缓解 ease, reduce worsen relieve tension/pain The gesture relieved his stress. / A smile relieved the tension. gesture 举动 action, move — kind gesture / small gesture It was a simple gesture. / Her gesture meant a lot. grateful 感激的 thankful, appreciative ungrateful be grateful for He was grateful for the help. / She felt deeply grateful. 地道短语 & 固定搭配 短语 含义 拓展 例句 a wave of… 一阵… a wave of relief/emotion A wave of relief washed over him. / A wave of sadness hit me. let out a sigh 叹气 sigh with relief He let out a sigh of relief. / She sighed softly. step in 介入 step in to help I decided to step in. / She stepped in to solve the problem. break the silence 打破沉默 awkward silence He broke the silence gently. / I didn’t know how to break the silence. be filled with 充满 be filled with joy/fear She was filled with warmth. / His eyes were filled with tears. 可积累“高分语料块” 语料 含义 his hands trembled slightly 手微微颤抖 a faint smile crept onto his face 浅浅的微笑浮现 his eyes softened 眼神变柔 tension melted away 紧张消散 warmth spread through… 温暖蔓延 he nodded silently 默默点头 words failed him 他一时说不出话 gratitude shone in his eyes 眼中闪着感激 the moment lingered 那一刻停驻 kindness made a difference 善意产生了改变 Part 3 Possible Versions Version 1： Paragraph 1 I quickly grabbed a newer twenty out of my purse. Without giving myself time to second-guess, I stepped closer and gently held it out to him, my voice low(独立主格) so as not to draw attention. For a brief moment, he hesitated, his tired eyes flickering with surprise and a hint of pride.(独立主格) Sensing his discomfort(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I offered a small smile and said softly that it was just an easier bill for the machine to read. After a short pause, he accepted it, his trembling fingers brushing against mine(独立主格). I helped guide the new one into the machine, which finally beeped in approval. A long sigh escaped him(无灵主语句), as though a heavy burden had been lifted. As he gathered his groceries, he looked at me, eyes shining faintly(独立主格), before quietly placing that torn twenty back into my hand. Paragraph 2 The old man waved goodbye, leaving us there with that torn twenty in hand. For a second, I simply stood still, staring at the crumpled bill(现在分词短语做伴随动作), its edges worn and fragile, yet strangely warm(独立主格). My son tugged at my sleeve, asking (现在分词短语做伴随动作)why he had given it back, and I found myself at a loss for words. Perhaps it was not about the money at all, but about dignity, about returning kindness in the only way he could. As we stepped outside, the drizzle still lingered(无灵主语句), yet the gray sky no longer felt so heavy. The world, which had seemed so divided and distant earlier, now felt a little closer, a little kinder. Slipping the bill into the charity container, I realized that even the smallest gesture, when shared, could quietly mend something unseen. 搭配与表达 表达 含义 替换 second-guess 犹豫 hesitate / doubt flicker with 闪现 show / reveal a heavy burden 重负 pressure / stress at a loss for words 无言以对 speechless mend something unseen 修复无形之物 heal / restore 情绪+动作亮点 类型 表达 情绪 a hint of pride / eyes shining faintly / warmth lingered 动作 held it out / slipped into pocket / guided into machine 升级语料 词汇 同义词 例句 dignity pride, self-respect He held onto his dignity. / She spoke with quiet dignity. fragile delicate, weak The paper was fragile. / His voice sounded fragile. gesture act, move A small gesture meant a lot. / Her gesture touched him deeply. Version 2： Paragraph 1 I quickly grabbed a newer twenty out of my purse. For a split second, I wondered whether I was overstepping, yet the sight of his shaking hands pushed me forward. Leaning slightly toward him(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I offered the bill with a gentle smile, explaining(现在分词短语做伴随动作)that the machine could be picky. He looked at me, his brows furrowed, as if weighing pride against necessity. Then, slowly, he nodded. As he took the new bill, I could feel the tension in the air easing. When the machine finally accepted the money, a faint, almost disbelieving smile appeared on his face(无灵主语句). He whispered a quiet thank-you, his voice barely audible(独立主格). As he finished, he pressed that crumpled twenty back into my hand, his eyes meeting mine with silent insistence(独立主格). Paragraph 2 The old man waved goodbye, leaving us there with that torn twenty in hand. I looked down at it, noticing(现在分词短语做伴随动作)every crease and tear, each one telling a story(独立主格) I would never fully know. My son asked softly why he didn’t just keep the new bill, and I realized that what mattered to the old man was not convenience, but respect. Walking out into the damp afternoon(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I felt a subtle shift within me. The cold drizzle no longer seemed as biting, and the world felt less indifferent. Tucking the worn bill into the charity container(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I understood that kindness was not a one-way gift; it moved quietly between people, bridging gaps(现在分词短语做后置定语)we often fail to see. 搭配与表达 表达 含义 替换 overstep 越界 go too far weigh…against… 权衡 balance barely audible 几乎听不见 very soft subtle shift 微妙变化 slight change indifferent 冷漠 uncaring ✅ 情绪+动作亮点 类型 表达 情绪 disbelieving smile / silent insistence / subtle shift 动作 leaned toward / pressed into hand / nodded slowly ✅ 升级语料 词汇 同义词 例句 insistence persistence, firmness He spoke with quiet insistence. / Her insistence surprised me. respect regard, esteem He showed respect. / Respect matters deeply. bridge connect, link Kindness bridges gaps. / Trust can bridge differences. Version 3 Paragraph 1 I quickly grabbed a newer twenty out of my purse. Not wanting to make a scene(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I leaned slightly toward him and placed it near his hand, saying(现在分词短语做伴随动作)quietly that some bills simply worked better than others. He paused, clearly torn between refusing and accepting(现在分词短语做伴随动作), his fingers hovering in midair(独立主格，刻画人物). Seeing his uncertainty(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I added with a reassuring nod that it would save him trouble. At last, he took it and carefully inserted it into the machine. This time, a soft beep followed, signaling success(现在分词短语做伴随动作). His shoulders dropped, and a relieved breath escaped him(无灵主语句). He murmured his thanks, almost under his breath, before gathering his few items. Then, after a brief hesitation, he gently pressed his worn, creased twenty into my palm, as if it mattered that the exchange remained fair. Paragraph 2 The old man waved goodbye, leaving us there with that torn twenty in hand. I looked down at it, noticing(现在分词短语做伴随动作)how thin and fragile it felt, as though it had passed through countless hands before reaching mine. My son glanced at it curiously and asked whether it was still useful. I smiled, realizing(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that its value no longer lay in what it could buy, but in what it represented. As we walked toward the exit, the cold drizzle met us again(无灵主语句), yet it didn’t feel as biting as before. Without saying much, I guided my son to the red kettle, where he carefully slipped the worn bill inside. In that quiet moment, I felt something shift—the world, once heavy with division, seemed softened by a simple act shared between strangers. Version 4 Paragraph 1 I quickly grabbed a newer twenty out of my purse. For a moment, I hesitated, unsure whether my help would embarrass him(adj做补语), but the sight of his trembling hands made the decision for me. Stepping closer,(现在分词短语做伴随动作) I offered the bill with a small, encouraging smile, explaining(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that the machine could be stubborn. He looked at me, his eyes clouded with both pride and frustration(独立主格刻画人物状态), before slowly accepting it. As I took his worn note and replaced it, I could almost feel the tension easing. When the machine finally accepted the money, he let out a quiet sigh, as though something inside him had loosened. He thanked me softly, then, after gathering his things, he pressed the old, crumpled twenty back into my hand, his gesture firm yet gentle.(独立主格) Paragraph 2 The old man waved goodbye, leaving us there with that torn twenty in hand. I turned it over thoughtfully, tracing the faded edges with my thumb(现在分词短语做伴随动作). My son, still watching, asked why he had given it back instead of keeping the easier bill. I realized then that, for the old man, accepting help did not mean giving up his sense of dignity. As we stepped outside, the gray sky remained(环境描写), but it no longer weighed on me the same way. The drizzle continued, yet it felt almost cleansing. Slipping the worn bill into the charity container(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I felt a quiet warmth settle within me, as if that small exchange had, in its own way, answered the unease I had carried all morning. Version 5 Paragraph 1 I quickly grabbed a newer twenty out of my purse. Acting almost without thinking, I stepped beside him and offered it, keeping my tone light so as not to draw attention(现在分词短语做伴随动作). He hesitated, glancing at the bill and then at me,(现在分词短语做伴随动作) as though weighing whether to accept help from a stranger. Finally, he nodded and took it, his movements slow but deliberate(独立主格). I exchanged it for his worn note and watched as the machine accepted the new bill without hesitation. A faint smile appeared on his face(无灵主语句), softening the lines of frustration(现在分词短语做结果状语) that had been there moments before. After thanking me quietly, smiling at my son, he gathered his groceries and, before leaving, placed the old, torn twenty back into my hand, completing the exchange in his own way(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Paragraph 2 The old man waved goodbye, leaving us there with that torn twenty in hand. Holding it gently(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I felt its rough texture and wondered how many stories it might carry(无灵主语句) My son looked puzzled, but I simply smiled, sensing(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that some lessons were better felt than explained. As we walked out into the steady drizzle, the cold no longer seemed so sharp, and the gray sky felt less oppressive. Without a word, my son dropped the worn bill into the red kettle, his small act echoing the one(独立主格) he had witnessed. In that quiet exchange, I realized that kindness does not erase the world’s divisions all at once, but it threads through them, one small, human moment at a time. 可直接讲的“点睛句” · kindness found its way forward · dignity matters as much as help · small acts soften a divided world · meaning lies beyond value 参考范文 I quickly grabbed a newer twenty out of my purse. It was crisp and clean, having just come from the bank that morning(现在分词短语做后置定语). I tapped the old man gently on the shoulder and handed him the bill with a warm smile. “Excuse me,” I said softly. “Try this one.” He looked up, his tired eyes meeting mine with a mixture of surprise and hesitation(独立主格). Then he took the bill and fed it into the machine carefully. This time, the green light flashed, and a soft whir announced its acceptance. He let out a long, quiet breath. “Thank you, ma’am” he murmured repeatedly before pressing his wrinkled twenty-dollar note into my hand. The old man waved goodbye, leaving us there with that torn twenty in hand. My son tugged my sleeve. “Mama, can we still put that in the kettle?” he asked. I smiled and nodded. As we walked out into the cold drizzle, he dropped the old twenty into the kettle as he usually did, hoping(现在分词短语做伴随动作) it could bring a little joy to someone in need. That torn, rejected bill had found its place(无灵主语句)—just like a small kindness on a gloomy December day. As we drove home, we heard a quote from Mother Teresa on the radio: "Help one person at a time and always start with the person nearest you." 默写与仿写包 第一部分：原文佳句默写（15句） 根据汉语提示和英文部分，填写空缺的单词或短语。 那是一个阴雨绵绵、湿冷的十二月天，冷雨啪嗒啪嗒地打在车窗上。 It was a rainy, damp December day, the cold drizzle __________ against my car window. 灰色的天空低垂，空气中弥漫着冬天的寒意。 The gray sky hung low, and the air was filled with the __________ of winter. 我一直在推迟购买圣诞礼物，担心假日购物狂潮中混乱的人群。 I had __________ shopping for Christmas presents until later in the month, fearing the chaotic crowds of holiday shoppers. 他们总是让商店感觉拥挤不堪，让人喘不过气。 They always made the store feel tight and __________. 我把CD播放器开着，调高轻柔的音乐音量，盖过广播新闻。 I kept the CD player on, turning up the soft music to __________ the radio news. 一个小小的善举，希望能缓解这个世界的隔阂。 A small act of kindness to __________ the world's divisions. 里面的暖空气扑面而来，让人从外面冰冷的雨中得到了解脱。 The warm air inside hit us, a welcome __________ from the cold rain outside. 我听到旁边的男人在低声抱怨，他脸上写满了沮丧。 I heard the man next to me complaining quietly, his face __________ with frustration. 每次他把他那张皱巴巴、磨损严重的20美元纸币塞进机器时，纸币都被退回来。 Every time he put his wrinkled, __________ twenty-dollar bill into the machine, it was rejected. 他沉重地叹了口气，用手捋了捋灰白的头发。 He sighed __________, running a hand through his gray hair. 他显然在努力克制自己不骂出来。 He was clearly trying his hardest not to __________. 我能感觉到他越来越烦躁。 I could tell he was growing more and more __________. 他反复尝试把钞票塞进机器，手在微微颤抖。 His hands __________ slightly as he tried again and again to feed the bill into the machine. 我讨厌使用自助收银机，我更喜欢和那些友好的收银员聊天。 I hated using them; I much __________ chatting with the friendly cashiers. 普通收银台的队伍排了五个人那么长。 The line at the regular registers was five __________. 第二部分：中译英句子默写（12句） 根据中文和给出的关键词，写出完整的英文句子。 中文： 我迅速从钱包里掏出一张崭新的20美元递给他。 关键词： grabbed, newer, purse 英文： _________________________________________________ 中文： 他迟疑了一下，眼里闪过一丝犹豫。 关键词： hesitated, flicker, hesitation 英文： _________________________________________________ 中文： 他接过钱，手还在微微发抖。 关键词： took, hands, slightly 英文： _________________________________________________ 中文： 这次，钱顺利地被吞进去了。 关键词： this time, accepted, machine 英文： _________________________________________________ 中文： 他长出一口气，转过头看着我。 关键词： let out, turned, looked at 英文： _________________________________________________ 中文： 嘴唇动了动，最后只挤出一句“谢谢你”。 关键词： lips moved, finally, managed 英文： _________________________________________________ 中文： 老人挥挥手离开了，留下我们站在那里。 关键词： waved, leaving, standing there 英文： _________________________________________________ 中文： 我低头看那张皱巴巴的纸币，边角都磨毛了。 关键词： looked down, wrinkled, corners, worn 英文： _________________________________________________ 中文： 儿子拽了拽我的衣角，小声问。 关键词： tugged, whispered 英文： _________________________________________________ 中文： 走出超市时，雨还在下。 关键词： walked out, still raining 英文： _________________________________________________ 中文： 我心里某个地方，好像被那张旧钞票轻轻捂暖了。 关键词： somewhere, gently, warmed 英文： _________________________________________________ 中文： 我小心地把那张旧钞票折好，放进口袋。 关键词： carefully, folded, pocket 英文： _________________________________________________ 第三部分：动作/环境/心理描写语料库默写（10句） 根据中文提示和给出的英文部分，完成句子。 【动作描写】 他沉重地叹了口气，用手捋了捋灰白的头发。 He __________ __________ __________, running a hand through his gray hair. 他的脸因沮丧而布满皱纹。 His face was __________ __________ frustration. 他的双手微微颤抖着，反复尝试把钞票塞进机器。 His hands __________ __________ as he tried again and again to feed the bill into the machine. 我把那张旧钞票折好，放进口袋。 I __________ the old bill carefully and __________ it into my pocket. 他迟疑了一下，眼里闪过一丝犹豫。 He __________ for a moment, a flicker of __________ in his eyes. 【环境描写】 灰色的天空低垂着，空气中弥漫着冬天的寒意。 The gray sky hung low, and the air was __________ __________ the chill of winter. 里面的暖空气扑面而来，让人从外面冰冷的雨中得到了解脱。 The warm air inside hit us, a welcome __________ from the cold rain outside. 雨还在下，但我心里某个地方，好像被轻轻捂暖了。 The rain was still falling, but somewhere inside me, I felt __________ __________. 【心理描写】 我能感觉到他越来越烦躁。 I could tell he was growing more and more __________. 我忽然意识到，这张旧钞背后，可能是一个老人的全部预算、一顿简单的晚餐、一份不愿说出口的艰难。 I suddenly realized that behind this old bill might be an old man’s entire __________, a simple __________, and a hardship he was __________ to speak of. 第四部分：高级句式仿写（6句） 句式1：感官先行 + 你的主要动作 + 即时结果 公式： 感官动词（Seeing/Hearing/Feeling等）+ 主句动作 + 结果 例句： Hearing the man sigh heavily, I turned around and saw his hands trembling — a sight that made my heart tighten. 仿写： 句式2：无灵主语句 + 现在分词 公式： 抽象名词（情感/事物）+ 动词（hit/struck/filled等）+ 人，现在分词短语补充 例句： A wave of sympathy hit me, making me reach into my purse without a second thought. 仿写： 句式3：形容词对仗 + 动作链 公式： *Adj. and adj., 主语 + 动作1 + 动作2 + 动作3* 例句： Wrinkled and well-worn, the old bill lay in his palm, rejected again and again by the cold machine. 仿写： 句式4：独立主格 + 主句 公式： 名词 + 现在分词/过去分词/形容词短语 , 主句 例句： His hands shaking slightly, the old man fed the bill into the machine once more. 仿写： 句式5：强调句 结构： It was/was not until... that... 例句： It was not until the old man waved goodbye that I realized the torn twenty in my hand meant more than a new one. 仿写： 句式6：递进句（not only... but also...） 结构： Not only + 倒装 , but also + 陈述 例句： Not only did the new bill get accepted by the machine, but it also seemed to accept a piece of the old man’s dignity. 仿写： 参考答案 第一部分：原文佳句默写（15句） pattering chill put off overwhelming drown out ease relief lined well-worn heavily curse upset shook / were shaking preferred deep 第二部分：中译英句子默写（12句） I quickly grabbed a newer twenty out of my purse and handed it to him. He hesitated for a moment, a flicker of hesitation in his eyes. He took the money, his hands still shaking slightly. This time, the bill was smoothly accepted by the machine. He let out a long breath and turned his head to look at me. His lips moved, and finally he managed to say, “Thank you.” The old man waved goodbye, leaving us standing there with that torn twenty in hand. I looked down at the wrinkled bill, its corners all worn. My son tugged at my sleeve and whispered a question. When we walked out of the store, it was still raining. Somewhere inside me, I felt gently warmed by that old bill. I carefully folded the old bill and put it into my pocket. 第三部分：动作/环境/心理描写语料库默写（10句） sighed heavily lined with were shaking / trembled slightly folded, put hesitated, hesitation filled with relief gently warmed upset budget, dinner, unwilling 第四部分：高级句式仿写（6句） 句式1（参考答案） Seeing the frustration written all over his face, I stepped forward and offered a newer bill — a gesture that took less than ten seconds but meant the world to him. 句式2（参考答案） A sudden rush of empathy washed over me, pushing me to reach into my wallet without thinking twice. 句式3（参考答案） Worn and wrinkled, the old bill sat in his palm, rejected by the machine, ignored by passersby, but finally noticed by a stranger. 句式4（参考答案） His lips trembling as if to say something, the old man finally nodded and took the new bill from my hand. 句式5（参考答案） It was only when I held that torn twenty in my hand that I understood — some bills are worth more than their face value. 句式6（参考答案） Not only did the machine accept the new bill, but it also accepted the unspoken truth that small kindnesses can bridge the widest gaps. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $