广东省东莞市2026届高三年级第二次高考模拟考试英语试题 读后续写讲义

该高中英语高考复习讲义聚焦读后续写专题，覆盖情节逻辑构建、情感描写深化、语言运用规范等核心考点，按“问题识别—策略提炼—能力迁移”逻辑架构，整合题型归类、文本分析、方法指导、真题演练环节，帮助学生建立从规则设计到情感升华的解题框架。 资料创新采用苏格拉底式提问与分层训练结合，如通过“规则是否具体”等问题培养思维品质，依托动作心理描写语料库提升语言能力。设置默写仿写包和多维分析表，实现基础积累到高阶应用递进，助力教师精准把控复习节奏，有效提升学生情节构思与语言表达能力。

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 广东省东莞市2026届高三年级第二次高考模拟考试英语试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a cold, rainy Tuesday evening in our small suburban home. The smell of mom’s braised pork filled the kitchen(无灵主语句), but the dinner table felt as chilly as the weather outside(环境描写刻画心理). My 14-year-old brother, Ethan, dragged his schoolbag to the chair, slumping down and immediately grabbing his smartphone(现在分词短语做伴随动作), his eyes glued to a cartoon(独立主格) before he even took a bite. As the eldest sister, I’d been desperate to connect with him, to know more about his middle school life and the thoughts he kept locked away. Every night at dinner, I tried every way to strike up a conversation. I asked about his math tests, his soccer practice, the little things that made him laugh or frustrated him. “Did anything fun happen at school today?” I asked gently, pushing a plate of vegetables toward him(现在分词短语做伴随动作). “Nothing much!” he mumbled, shrugging his shoulders without looking up(现在分词短语做伴随动作). I tried again, focusing on his favorite hobby(现在分词短语做伴随动作). “How’s your robot project going? You’ve been staying up late working on it, right?” He only whispered, “OK.” No matter how hard I tried, all my sincere efforts only got short, cold answers: “Good,” “Yeah,” “Fine.” Not a single detailed sentence, not a single glance my way. Our communication stayed shallow, and the dinner table was often filled with embarrassing silence that made me feel helpless. To make matters worse, Ethan was always glued to his screen, ignoring our calls(现在分词短语做伴随动作) even when mom urged him to eat more. I was determined to find a way to bring back the warmth of our family meals. One weekend, while browsing the bookstore downtown, I came across a useful book about family communication. It offered many practical, creative ideas to encourage deep, meaningful talks among family members. These ideas instantly gave me hope to rebuild our warm family dinners. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1:Inspired by the book, I made two simple but clear rules for our family dinner. Paragraph 2: Surprisingly, amazing changes gradually took place in our family. 广东省东莞市2026届高三年级第二次高考模拟考试英语试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a cold, rainy Tuesday evening in our small suburban home. The smell of mom’s braised pork filled the kitchen, but the dinner table felt as chilly as the weather outside. My 14-year-old brother, Ethan, dragged his schoolbag to the chair, slumping down and immediately grabbing his smartphone, his eyes glued to a cartoon before he even took a bite. As the eldest sister, I’d been desperate to connect with him, to know more about his middle school life and the thoughts he kept locked away. Every night at dinner, I tried every way to strike up a conversation. I asked about his math tests, his soccer practice, the little things that made him laugh or frustrated him. “Did anything fun happen at school today?” I asked gently, pushing a plate of vegetables toward him. “Nothing much!” he mumbled, shrugging his shoulders without looking up. I tried again, focusing on his favorite hobby. “How’s your robot project going? You’ve been staying up late working on it, right?” He only whispered, “OK.” No matter how hard I tried, all my sincere efforts only got short, cold answers: “Good,” “Yeah,” “Fine.” Not a single detailed sentence, not a single glance my way. Our communication stayed shallow, and the dinner table was often filled with embarrassing silence that made me feel helpless. To make matters worse, Ethan was always glued to his screen, ignoring our calls even when mom urged him to eat more. I was determined to find a way to bring back the warmth of our family meals. One weekend, while browsing the bookstore downtown, I came across a useful book about family communication. It offered many practical, creative ideas to encourage deep, meaningful talks among family members. These ideas instantly gave me hope to rebuild our warm family dinners. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1:Inspired by the book, I made two simple but clear rules for our family dinner. Paragraph 2: Surprisingly, amazing changes gradually took place in our family. Part 1 读后续写整体分析 1. 题型归类+构思策略 （1）题型归类 类型 判断依据 家庭关系修复/问题解决类（沟通障碍→改善） 核心冲突是“姐姐想沟通—弟弟冷漠沉默” 成长感悟类（亲情/理解） 主题指向“沟通、理解、家庭温度” 方法实践类（尝试→改变） 出现“书中方法→规则制定→变化发生” 本题本质模型： 问题出现 → 尝试方法 → 执行规则 → 关系改善 （2）续写核心思路 关键词：规则设计 + 渐进变化 + 情感升温 Paragraph 1（实施策略） · 来源：book → inspiration · 行为：制定规则（必须具体！） · 冲突：弟弟是否抗拒？执行是否顺利？ · 重点：“怎么做” Paragraph 2（变化结果） · 变化：氛围改善、沟通增加 · 高光：某个具体“突破性对话” · 升华：家庭温暖/理解/爱 · 重点：“变成什么样” （3）结构布局模板 段落 内容结构 P1 规则提出 → 家人反应 → 执行过程（有阻力/调整） P2 逐渐变化 → 关键转折（弟弟主动表达） → 情感升华 （4）框架提炼 1. 设规则（Rule） 2. 遇阻力（Resistance） 3. 见变化（Change） 4. 情升华（Emotion） （5）实施技巧 规则设计要“具体可视” 例如： · no phones at dinner · everyone shares one story · ask one question to another person 抽象规则（×） vs 具体规则（√） ✅ 必须有“小冲突”否则文章会很平 例如： · Ethan不愿意遵守 · 氛围一开始仍尴尬 ✅ 变化要“渐进”，不能一秒变好 用词： · gradually · little by little · over the next few days ✅ 必须有“关键突破瞬间” 比如： · Ethan第一次主动说学校的事 · Ethan笑了/抬头了 （6）承接原文注意事项 项目 注意点 人称 第一人称（I） 时态 过去时 人物 Ethan（弟弟）、I（姐姐）、mom 性格一致 Ethan：冷漠、沉默 → 不能突然话痨 情节逻辑 必须围绕“沟通问题”展开 道具呼应 smartphone / dinner table / book Part 2 精细文本分析表 （1）故事核心脉络 阶段 内容 开端 晚餐气氛冷清 冲突 姐姐努力沟通，弟弟冷漠 加剧 手机干扰+持续沉默 转机 发现一本沟通书 续写起点 准备采取行动 （2）关键线索梳理 维度 内容 人物 I（姐姐，主动）、Ethan（弟弟，封闭）、mom（辅助） 核心道具 smartphone / dinner table / communication book 情感基调 冷淡 → 期待改变 伏笔 book中的“practical ideas” 矛盾焦点 沟通缺失 （3）多维分析表 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 Ethan冷漠、沉迷手机 his eyes glued to a cartoon 情感层次 姐姐焦虑→失落→希望 I’d been desperate to connect 关键情节点 多次沟通失败 “Nothing much!” 语言特色 对话简短、对比明显 Good / Yeah / Fine 关键词分析 silence / glued / shallow communication stayed shallow 心理描写 helpless, desperate made me feel helpless 动作描写 slumping, grabbing phone dragged his schoolbag 环境描写 cold, rainy → 氛围冷 chilly as the weather 隐含主题 家庭沟通缺失 deep, meaningful talks 情感转折 发现书 → hope gave me hope 空间转换 home → bookstore bookstore downtown 时间过渡 every night / one weekend One weekend Part 3 苏格拉底式提问 针对 Paragraph 1 1. 书中可能提供了哪些“具体方法”？ 2. 规则如果太复杂，家庭成员会愿意执行吗？为什么？ 3. Ethan一开始会接受这些规则吗？他的反应可能是什么？ 4. 如果他不配合，姐姐会放弃还是调整方式？ 5. 有没有一个“象征性动作”可以体现规则开始执行？（比如放下手机） 针对 Paragraph 2 1. 规则执行后，最先改变的是什么？氛围还是语言？ 2. Ethan第一次主动说话会发生在什么情境？ 3. 什么细节可以体现“变化是真的”？ 4. 姐姐的内心会有什么变化？ 5. 结尾应该落在“行为改变”还是“情感升华”？为什么？ 高阶思考（拔高用） · 为什么“规则”比“劝说”更有效？ · 沟通问题的本质是“不愿说”还是“不会说”？ · 家庭氛围如何影响个体表达？ Part 2（1）描写类高分语料 一、动作描写 1. He hesitated for a second before slowly putting down his phone. 他犹豫了一下，才慢慢放下手机。 2. He kept his eyes fixed on the screen, ignoring everyone around him. 他一直盯着屏幕，忽视周围的人。 3. I gently pushed the plate closer to him. 我轻轻把盘子推到他面前。 4. He shrugged his shoulders without lifting his head. 他耸了耸肩，却没有抬头。 5. I took a deep breath and forced a smile. 我深吸一口气，勉强挤出一个笑容。 6. He finally looked up, meeting my eyes for the first time. 他终于抬起头，第一次和我对视。 7. I leaned forward, trying to catch his attention. 我向前倾身，试图吸引他的注意。 8. He nodded slightly, still unwilling to say much. 他轻轻点头，但仍不愿多说。 9. I placed the book on the table and pointed at a page. 我把书放在桌上，指着其中一页。 10. He let out a small laugh, breaking the silence. 他轻轻笑了一下，打破了沉默。 二、心理描写 1. I felt a wave of helplessness wash over me. 一阵无力感涌上心头。 2. I couldn’t help wondering what was going on in his mind. 我忍不住想知道他在想什么。 3. A sense of frustration grew inside me. 一股挫败感在我心中蔓延。 4. I was determined not to give up this time. 我下定决心这次绝不放弃。 5. Hope flickered in my heart. 希望在我心中闪现。 6. I felt a bit nervous about whether it would work. 我有点紧张，不知道是否有效。 7. To my surprise, he didn’t refuse immediately. 令我惊讶的是，他没有立刻拒绝。 8. I sensed a slight change in his attitude. 我察觉到他的态度有了细微变化。 9. My heart warmed at his response. 他的回应让我心里一暖。 10. I finally felt that my efforts were worth it. 我终于觉得自己的努力是值得的。 三、环境描写 1. The rain tapped softly against the window. 雨轻轻敲打着窗户。 2. The room was filled with an awkward silence. 房间里弥漫着尴尬的沉默。 3. The dim light made everything feel even colder. 昏暗的灯光让一切更显冷清。 4. The dinner table looked unusually quiet. 餐桌显得格外安静。 5. A warm light spread across the table. 温暖的灯光洒在餐桌上。 6. The sound of rain mixed with the clinking of dishes. 雨声与餐具碰撞声交织在一起。 7. The atmosphere gradually softened. 气氛逐渐缓和。 8. Laughter slowly replaced the silence. 笑声逐渐取代了沉默。 9. The house felt warmer than before. 家里比之前更温暖了。 10. A sense of comfort filled the air. 空气中弥漫着温馨的感觉。 四、高级替换词 1 表“说” 普通 高级替换 say remark / respond / murmur / add / admit 2 表“看” 普通 高级替换 look glance / stare / gaze / peek / glance at 3 表“想” 普通 高级替换 think reflect / wonder / realize / figure / recognize 4 表“开心” 普通 高级替换 happy delighted / pleased / thrilled / overjoyed / content 5 表“难过/压抑” 普通 高级替换 sad upset / frustrated / down / discouraged / heartbroken Part 2（2）搭配+词汇深度解析 重点短语+词法+语料积累表 短语/词汇 词义 近义词 反义词 搭配/用法 例句1 例句2 be glued to 紧盯 be absorbed in / be addicted to ignore / neglect be glued to + screen He was glued to his phone. She was glued to the TV all night. strike up a conversation 开始交谈 start/initiate a talk remain silent strike up with sb I tried to strike up a conversation. He struck up a chat with me. make an effort 努力 try hard / attempt give up make an effort to do I made an effort to talk to him. She made every effort to help. respond briefly 简短回应 reply shortly elaborate respond + adv He responded briefly. She responded coldly. fall into silence 陷入沉默 become quiet speak up fall into + 状态 We fell into silence. The room fell into silence. break the silence 打破沉默 interrupt silence keep silent break + silence He broke the silence. Her laugh broke the silence. make a difference 产生影响 matter / have an effect make no sense make a big difference It made a difference. Your help makes a difference. open up 敞开心扉 share / express shut down open up to sb He began to open up. She opened up to her mother. be determined to 决心做 decide to hesitate to be determined to do I was determined to try. He is determined to change. gradually 逐渐地 slowly / little by little suddenly 修饰整个句子 Things changed gradually. He improved gradually. 高频“句式结构” 1 情绪涌现句式 · A wave of + 情绪 + washed over me A wave of relief washed over me. 2 无灵主语 · It + occurred to me that... It suddenly occurred to me that I should try a new way. 3非谓语增强动作 · Hesitating for a moment, he… Hesitating for a moment, he put down his phone. 4 结果状语 · ..., breaking the silence He laughed, breaking the silence. 5 渐进表达 · little by little / gradually / over time Over time, he began to talk more. Part 3 Possible Versions Version 1 Paragraph 1 Inspired by the book, I decided to turn those ideas into something practical for our family dinner. Clearing my throat(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I announced gently, “From today on, we’ll try two small changes—no phones at the table, and everyone asks one question to another person.” Ethan frowned slightly, his fingers still hovering over his screen(独立主格刻画人物). For a moment, I thought he would ignore me as usual. But after a brief hesitation, he slowly put his phone aside, though his eyes still avoided mine. To make things easier, I asked him first, “What was the most interesting part of your day?” He shrugged at first, giving a short answer(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Yet I didn’t push further. Instead, I shared a funny story from my school, hoping to create a more relaxed atmosphere(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Paragraph 2 Surprisingly, amazing changes gradually took place in our family. Over the next few evenings, Ethan began to respond with slightly longer sentences, sometimes even adding details without being asked(现在分词短语做伴随动作). One night, as the rain tapped softly against the window(环境描写), he suddenly mentioned a problem he met while building his robot. Seizing the chance(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I listened carefully and asked more about it. For the first time, he looked directly at me, explaining excitedly(现在分词短语做伴随动作)with his hands moving in the air. Laughter soon replaced the familiar silence at the table. At that moment, I realized it wasn’t the rules themselves but the patience and sincerity behind them that made the difference(递进+强调句), quietly bringing warmth back to our home(现在分词短语做结果状语). Version 2 Paragraph 1: Inspired by the book, I made two simple but clear rules for our family dinner. No phones were allowed at the table, and everyone had to share at least one thing about their day. When I announced the rules, Ethan frowned, clearly annoyed(主语补语), his fingers still tapping on the screen(独立主格). For a moment, I hesitated, wondering(现在分词短语做伴随动作) if I was pushing too hard. However,with the family communication tips from the book, gathering my courage(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I gently took his phone as well as my phone and placed both aside, forcing a small smile(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The first few minutes were filled with awkward silence, just like before. Trying to break it(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I started sharing a funny story from my school, hoping to set an example(现在分词短语做伴随动作). To my surprise, Mom joined in, adding her own little story(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Ethan remained quiet at first, but eventually, he muttered a few words. Though brief, it was the first time he had spoken voluntarily at dinner, which made me feel a flicker of hope. Paragraph 2: Surprisingly, amazing changes gradually took place in our family. Over the next few days, Ethan began to follow the rules without being reminded, even putting his phone away before sitting down(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Little by little, he started to share more—first a short sentence, then a complete story about his robot project. One evening, he even looked up, his eyes bright(独立主格), and asked me about my day. At that moment, I felt a warmth spreading through my heart. The once cold and silent dinner table was now filled with laughter and lively conversations. It suddenly occurred to me that it wasn’t the rules themselves, but the care and patience behind them that made the difference. Watching Ethan smile and open up(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I realized that our family had finally found its way back to warmth and connection. 亮点搭配&替换 表达 升级表达 同义替换 take away place aside remove / set aside say share / mutter remark / respond slowly little by little gradually happy warmth spreading delighted / touched talk more open up express / communicate 情绪&动作亮点语料 类型 表达 同义/联想 例句 情绪 a flicker of hope a spark of hope A flicker of hope lit up her eyes. 情绪 warmth spreading comfort / relief Warmth spread through me. 动作 place aside put down / set aside He placed the phone aside. 动作 look up raise one’s head He looked up suddenly. Version 3 Paragraph 1: Inspired by the book, I made two simple but clear rules for our family dinner. Instead of forcing conversations, I decided to turn it into a small game: no phones at the table, and each person had to ask and answer one question. When I explained the idea, Ethan rolled his eyes, clearly uninterested(adj做补语). For a moment, doubt crept into my mind(无灵主语句), but I chose to carry on. I began by asking Mom a light question, which made her laugh softly. Then I turned to Ethan, my heart pounding slightly(独立主格). At first, he avoided my gaze, but under our expectant looks, he finally gave a short answer. Encouraged(过去分词做原因状语), I asked another simple question. Though still reluctant, he responded again. The conversation was far from smooth, yet it was no longer completely silent, leaving me cautiously hopeful(现在分词短语做结果状语). Paragraph 2: Surprisingly, amazing changes gradually took place in our family. The “question game” soon became a routine, and even Ethan began to take part more actively. Sometimes, he would even come up with questions himself, making us laugh with his unexpected humor.(现在分词短语做结果状语) One night, he shared his struggles with a math test, something he had never mentioned before. Listening to him(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I felt a deep sense of connection growing between us. The once dull dinners were now something we all looked forward to. It dawned on me that creating a relaxed and engaging atmosphere was the key to communication. As laughter echoed around the table(无灵主语句), I realized that the distance between me and Ethan had quietly disappeared. 亮点搭配&替换 表达 升级表达 同义替换 think it dawned on me realize / recognize start take part engage in / join silent no longer silent quiet / still boring dull lifeless connection bond link / relationship 情绪&动作语料 类型 表达 同义 例句 情绪 cautiously hopeful slightly hopeful I felt cautiously hopeful. 情绪 a sense of connection closeness A sense of connection grew. 动作 avoid one’s gaze look away He avoided my gaze. 动作 roll one’s eyes show annoyance He rolled his eyes. One possible version: Inspired by the book, I made two simple but clear rules for our family dinner. Looking directly into my brother’s eyes(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I explained the rules patiently, “First, put away your smartphone during meals. Second, we share one thing from our day, whether it’s a happy moment or a small trouble.” He lowered his head and twisted his fingers for a second, and then looked up at me with a reluctant but obedient smile. “Fine, I’ll try,” he mumbled. I smiled and patted his arm lightly, hoping to ease his nervousness(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Then I began to share my own day casually, taking the lead to start our conversation(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Surprisingly, amazing changes gradually took place in our family. The cold silence that once hung over the dinner table was replaced by soft chats and occasional laughter. Wearing a proud smile(现在分词短语做伴随动作), my brother opened up a little bit more, talking about(现在分词短语做伴随动作) how he played with classmates during breaks, and how he managed to complete the robot project. Without smartphones during meals, my brother and I started to exchange interesting stories. These small changes made me realize that family warmth lies in sincere communication, and the distance between us was gradually narrowed, bringing back the warm and harmonious atmosphere(现在分词短语做伴随动作) we once lost. 默写与仿写包 【第一部分】原文佳句默写（15句） 根据中文提示和英文部分，补全空缺的词汇或短语。 那是一个寒冷、下着雨的周二傍晚，在我们的小郊区住宅里。 It was a cold, ________ Tuesday evening ________ our small suburban home. 厨房里弥漫着妈妈做的红烧肉的香味。 The ________ of mom’s braised pork ________ the kitchen. 我的弟弟拖着书包走到椅子前，重重地坐了下去。 My brother ________ his schoolbag to the chair, ________ down. 他的眼睛紧紧盯着一个动画片，甚至还没吃一口饭。 His eyes ________ ________ a cartoon before he even took a bite. 作为大姐，我一直拼命想和他建立联系。 As the eldest sister, I’d been ________ to ________ with him. 每一顿晚餐，我都尝试各种方法开启对话。 Every night at dinner, I tried ________ ________ to ________ ________ a conversation. “今天学校有什么好玩的事吗？”我轻声问道，把一盘蔬菜推向他。 “Did anything fun happen at school today?” I asked ________, ________ a plate of vegetables ________ him. “没什么特别的！”他咕哝着，耸了耸肩，头也没抬。 “Nothing much!” he ________, ________ his shoulders ________ looking up. 无论我多么努力，所有真诚的尝试只换来简短冷漠的回答。 No matter how hard I tried, all my ________ efforts only got short, ________ answers. 我们的交流始终停留在表面。 Our communication stayed ________. 餐桌上常常充斥着令人尴尬的沉默，让我感到无助。 The dinner table was often filled with ________ silence that made me feel ________. 更糟的是，伊森总是黏在屏幕前，甚至妈妈催他多吃点时也不理睬。 To make matters ________, Ethan was always ________ ________ his screen, ignoring our calls. 我下定决心要找到方法，重新带回我们家庭用餐时的温暖。 I was ________ to find a way to ________ ________ the warmth of our family meals. 这些想法立刻给了我重建温暖家庭晚餐的希望。 These ideas ________ gave me ________ to rebuild our warm family dinners. 我对他的数学考试、足球训练、那些让他笑或沮丧的小事都问了个遍。 I asked about his math tests, his soccer practice, the little things that made him ________ or ________. 【第二部分】中文句子默写（12句） 根据中文意思和提示词组，写出完整英文句子。 我深吸一口气，在晚餐前宣布了两条规则。（announce, before, dinner） 第一条规则：晚餐时所有人把手机放在另一个房间里。（all, put away, another room） 第二条规则：每个人分享一件当天发生的有趣的事。（share, interesting, happened） Ethan听到后皱起了眉头，手伸向他的手机。（frown, reach for） 妈妈微笑着第一个开口：“今天我在菜市场遇到了一件搞笑的事。”（smile, go first, funny） 沉默了几秒后，Ethan放下了筷子。（after, a few seconds, put down, chopsticks） “机器人有个零件装反了，”他小声说，嘴角微微上扬。（part, wrong way, whisper, corner of mouth） 那一刻，我感觉心里的某块冰融化了。（moment, ice, melt） 一周后，Ethan进门就把手机放进抽屉里。（a week later, as soon as, drawer） “今天物理课发生了件超糗的事，”他主动开口说道。（embarrassing, take the initiative） 窗外雨声淅沥，餐桌上却比以往任何一天都温暖。（outside, rain, than ever before） 我终于明白，改变不是瞬间发生的，而是一点一滴积累的。（happen, drop by drop, accumulate） 【第三部分】动作·环境·心理描白默写（10句） 根据中文和英文提示，补全空缺部分。 动作描写：他拖着书包走到椅子前，________ down, and immediately ________ his smartphone. （重重坐下/抓起） 动作描写：他________ his shoulders ________ looking up, and ________, “Nothing much!” （耸肩/没有/咕哝） 动作描写：Ethan ________ for a few seconds, then ________ his chopsticks and ________ his mouth. （犹豫/放下/张开） 环境描写：窗外，the rain ________ against the window, but inside, the kitchen was filled with the ________ smell of braised pork. （轻轻拍打/温暖） 环境描写：The dinner table, once ________ with ________ silence, was now alive with laughter. （充满/尴尬的） 心理描写：I felt my heart ________ as I waited for his ________. A tiny voice inside me whispered, “Maybe this time...” （收紧/回应） 心理描写：That ________ feeling of helplessness slowly ________ into something warm and hopeful. （熟悉的/转变） 动作+心理：I ________ the book ________ to my chest, a ________ of determination rising inside me. （紧抱/贴近/波浪） 环境+心理：The ________ silence at the table ________ me like a heavy blanket, making it hard to ________. （沉重的/压住/呼吸） 复合描写：Ethan’s eyes, once ________ to his screen, were now ________ on mine, and for the first time in months, I saw a ________ there. （粘住/专注/闪光） 【第四部分】高级句式仿写（6句） 句式1：感官先行 + 你的主要动作 + 即时结果 范例：The smell of mom’s braised pork filled the kitchen, but the dinner table felt as chilly as the weather outside. 仿写：____________________________________________________ （提示：咖啡香气/书房/父子的沉默/冰冷） 句式2：无灵主语句 + 现在分词 范例：Every night at dinner, I tried every way to strike up a conversation, only getting short, cold answers. 仿写：____________________________________________________ （提示：每个周末/她尝试各种方法/拉近关系/只得到/敷衍） 句式3：adj. and adj., 动作链 范例：He dragged his schoolbag to the chair, slumping down and immediately grabbing his smartphone. 仿写：____________________________________________________ （提示：疲惫而沮丧/她走进房间/扔下包/躺在床上） 句式4：独立主格 + 句子 范例：His eyes glued to a cartoon before he even took a bite. 仿写：____________________________________________________ （提示：她的手紧握着演讲稿/她走上台/深吸一口气） 句式5：强调句 范例：It was a cold, rainy Tuesday evening that saw our family’s coldest dinner. 仿写：____________________________________________________ （提示：正是在那个小小的书店里/她找到了/希望的微光） 句式6：递进句 范例：No matter how hard I tried, all my sincere efforts only got short, cold answers: “Good,” “Yeah,” “Fine.” 仿写：____________________________________________________ （提示：无论她问了多少次/所有的关心/只换来/嗯/哦/不知道） 【参考答案】 第一部分：原文佳句默写 rainy / in smell / filled dragged / slumping glued to desperate / connect every way / strike up gently / pushing / toward mumbled / shrugging / without sincere / cold shallow embarrassing / helpless worse / glued to determined / bring back instantly / hope laugh / frustrated 第二部分：中文句子默写 I took a deep breath and announced two rules before dinner. Rule One: everyone puts away their phones in another room during dinner. Rule Two: everyone shares one interesting thing that happened during the day. Ethan frowned at the news and reached for his phone. Mom smiled and went first: “I met someone funny at the grocery store today.” After a few seconds of silence, Ethan put down his chopsticks. “A part of the robot was put on the wrong way,” he whispered, the corner of his mouth lifting slightly. At that moment, I felt a piece of ice melting in my heart. A week later, Ethan put his phone into the drawer as soon as he came in. “Something super embarrassing happened in physics class,” he took the initiative to say. Rain pattered outside, but the dinner table was warmer than ever before. I finally understood that change doesn’t happen in an instant, but drop by drop. 第三部分：动作·环境·心理描写 slumping / grabbing shrugged / without / mumbled hesitated / put down / opened patted / warm filled / embarrassing tighten / response familiar / turned held / close / wave heavy / pressed / breathe glued / fixed / spark 第四部分：高级句式仿写 句式1： The aroma of coffee filled the study, but the silence between father and son felt as cold as ice. 句式2： Every weekend, she tried every way to close the distance with him, only getting perfunctory replies. 句式3： Tired and frustrated, she walked into the room, dropping her bag and collapsing onto the bed. 句式4： Her hands tightly gripping the speech script, she stepped onto the stage and took a deep breath. 句式5： It was in that tiny bookstore that she found a glimmer of hope. 句式6： No matter how many times she asked, all her caring questions only got short replies: “Um,” “Oh,” “I don’t know.” 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $