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该高中英语高考复习讲义聚焦读后续写核心考点，涵盖情节逻辑构建、人物心理描写、高级语言表达等考查要求，按“冲突类型分析—续写框架提炼—伏笔回扣策略”逻辑组织知识点，通过考点梳理（如五定分析法）、方法指导（续写模式总结）、真题训练（提供多版本范文）等环节，帮助学生突破续写难点，体现复习的系统性与针对性。 资料创新采用苏格拉底式提问培养思维品质，高频语料库（动作、心理描写）提升语言能力，分层练习（默写、仿写）强化学习能力。例如通过“五定分析”引导学生精准设计续写场景与冲突，配合语料积累与句式仿写，可在有限时间内提升学生续写逻辑与表达精度，为教师把控复习节奏、落实核心素养提供有效支撑。

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 山东省德州市高三年级4月学习质量综合评估 英语 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On my twelfth birthday, I got the best present ever—a fishing tackle box. I fell in love with it at first sight: solid and heavy, with six clear plastic drawers holding hooks, sinkers, fishing lines, lures (鱼饵), and a brand-new fishing knife in a small leather bag. I put it under my bed, a safe place where Teddy, my younger brother and the troublemaker of the family, could never get to it. Dad promised to take me fishing, but he kept putting it off because of work. Weeks later, Dad finally kept his promise. He took me out on a fishing boat named Captain Bob(过去分词做后置定语). The sea was calm, and the bluefish were biting like crazy. I caught thirteen fish, including a big one as long as my arm(现在分词短语做伴随动作). We were exhausted, but my heart was full of joy. On the way home, Dad said he wanted to borrow my tackle box to take Teddy fishing the next day. Those words—borrow your tackle box—gave me a strange feeling in my belly. I stared forward. I opened my mouth to say something, but my throat had frozen up. I couldn’t speak. The feeling in my stomach kept getting stronger, and after a few minutes I realized that it was much like a stomachache. I loved the tackle box so much that I couldn’t bear the thought of Teddy messing it up. That night, I took all the fishing stuff out and hid it under my sweaters(冲突). Then I filled the box with old toys, pieces of old cloth, and holey socks—making it feel heavy as usual(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The next morning, I handed the box to Dad. He smiled, gave me a five-dollar bill and praised my generosity. My throat felt tight, and I tried to speak one last time but failed. Dad winked and drove away, the five-dollar bill fluttering like a wounded green butterfly in my hand(独立主格). Mom offered a nice cold juicy peach, turning to me with a gentle look(现在分词短语做伴随动作), but I shook my head and said I had no appetite at all and wouldn’t eat anything the whole day. She looked slightly worried, and asked if I was feeling unwell. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: When I opened my mouth, words started pouring out. Paragraph 2: The silence was suddenly broken by Teddy’s excited yell, “We got fish!” 山东省德州市高三年级4月学习质量综合评估 英语 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On my twelfth birthday, I got the best present ever—a fishing tackle box. I fell in love with it at first sight: solid and heavy, with six clear plastic drawers holding hooks, sinkers, fishing lines, lures (鱼饵), and a brand-new fishing knife in a small leather bag. I put it under my bed, a safe place where Teddy, my younger brother and the troublemaker of the family, could never get to it. Dad promised to take me fishing, but he kept putting it off because of work. Weeks later, Dad finally kept his promise. He took me out on a fishing boat named Captain Bob. The sea was calm, and the bluefish were biting like crazy. I caught thirteen fish, including a big one as long as my arm. We were exhausted, but my heart was full of joy. On the way home, Dad said he wanted to borrow my tackle box to take Teddy fishing the next day. Those words—borrow your tackle box—gave me a strange feeling in my belly. I stared forward. I opened my mouth to say something, but my throat had frozen up. I couldn’t speak. The feeling in my stomach kept getting stronger, and after a few minutes I realized that it was much like a stomachache. I loved the tackle box so much that I couldn’t bear the thought of Teddy messing it up. That night, I took all the fishing stuff out and hid it under my sweaters. Then I filled the box with old toys, pieces of old cloth, and holey socks—making it feel heavy as usual. The next morning, I handed the box to Dad. He smiled, gave me a five-dollar bill and praised my generosity. My throat felt tight, and I tried to speak one last time but failed. Dad winked and drove away, the five-dollar bill fluttering like a wounded green butterfly in my hand. Mom offered a nice cold juicy peach, turning to me with a gentle look, but I shook my head and said I had no appetite at all and wouldn’t eat anything the whole day. She looked slightly worried, and asked if I was feeling unwell. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: When I opened my mouth, words started pouring out. Paragraph 2: The silence was suddenly broken by Teddy’s excited yell, “We got fish!” Part 1 一、文章类型分类 + 续写整体构思分析 （一）文章类型分类 分类维度 类型 题材类型 亲情治愈/道德抉择/冲突解决类 情节类型 成长感悟类 情感主题 诚信、愧疚、亲情、分享、成长 冲突类型 内心冲突型（自私 vs 爱弟弟；隐瞒 vs 坦白） 价值导向 学会诚实、学会分享、责任感与家庭温情 （二）本文核心续写模式 这篇文章属于： “隐瞒错误 → 内心挣扎 → 主动坦白 → 获得理解 → 情感升华”型续写 也是高考中非常典型的：成长型 + 亲情治愈型续写 重点不是“钓鱼”，而是：主人公的心理成长 即：从“占有、自私、不愿分享”到“坦白、愧疚、理解亲情、学会成长” 二、续写思路如何构思 第一段开头：When I opened my mouth, words started pouring out. 说明：必须写——坦白真相-不能再拖延。 第二段开头：The silence was suddenly broken by Teddy’s excited yell, “We got fish!” 说明：Teddy和Dad回来了 且：结果是积极的 说明：即使没有真正的工具，事情依然没有变坏 反而：成为了“原谅 + 和解 + 成长”的契机 3、 续写布局 第一段：坦白（冲突爆发段） 五定分析 内容 设计 定场景 家里，妈妈面前 定冲突 我终于说出自己调包 tackle box 的真相 定动作 哭着坦白、拿出藏起来的渔具 定心理 愧疚、羞耻、害怕被责备 定结果 妈妈理解并温柔引导 第二段：和解（主题升华段） 五定分析 内容 设计 定场景 Dad和Teddy回家 定冲突 Teddy发现真相后的反应 定动作 Teddy兴奋展示鱼；Dad理解；我道歉 定心理 紧张 → 放松 → 温暖 定结局 家人原谅；学会分享和诚实 四、续写框架提炼 第一段 坦白 + 情绪释放 + 母亲引导 I burst into tears and confessed everything. →I told Mom how much I loved the tackle box and how afraid I was that Teddy would ruin it. →I showed her where I had hidden all the fishing things. →Mom listened quietly and gently told me honesty mattered more than any tackle box. 第二段 回家 + 意外温暖 + 成长升华 Teddy rushed in proudly with fish. →Dad smiled instead of getting angry. →I apologized with shame. →Teddy said he just wanted to go fishing with Dad and me. →I realized love grows when we learn to share. 五、承接原文必须注意的事项 必须回扣的伏笔 原文伏笔 续写必须回应 tackle box 被调包 必须揭示真相 five-dollar bill 可作为愧疚象征回扣 peach refused 表现 guilt 加深 throat frozen up 第一段必须 finally speak Teddy troublemaker 不可写得过分恶劣，要真实自然 Dad praised generosity 要形成强烈反差（其实并不 generous） 六、设计续写内容 five-dollar bill 回扣 例如：I stared at the five-dollar bill, feeling it was heavier than a stone. peach 回扣 例如：The peach on the table looked sweet, but guilt made everything taste bitter. 高级表达。 butterfly 意象回扣 原文：wounded green butterfly 续写可写：Now it felt like a little judge staring at me. tackle box 象征成长 可升华：It was no longer just a tackle box, but a lesson I would remember forever. 非常高级。 七、故事核心脉络 + 关键线索梳理 1）故事核心脉络 阶段 内容 开端 生日得到最爱的 tackle box 发展 Dad带我钓鱼，快乐满足 冲突 Dad要借给 Teddy 使用 升级 我偷偷调包 tackle box 爆发（续写） 内疚难忍，向妈妈坦白 解决（续写） Teddy归来，家人理解 升华（续写） 学会诚实与分享 2）关键线索梳理 类型 内容 人物 I / Dad / Mom / Teddy 核心道具 tackle box / fishing knife / five-dollar bill / peach 情感基调 喜悦 → 占有欲 → guilt → 坦白 → 温暖 续写伏笔 throat frozen / no appetite / generosity praised / Teddy回来 八、深度分析总表 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 “我”敏感、自私但有良知；Dad温和；Mom细腻；Teddy活泼 Teddy, my younger brother and the troublemaker 情感层次 喜爱→不舍→欺骗→愧疚→坦白→释然 I couldn’t bear the thought 关键情节点 Dad借盒子；偷偷调包；准备坦白 I took all the fishing stuff out 语言特色 细腻心理描写 + 象征意象 wounded green butterfly 关键词分析 borrow / generosity / appetite / stomachache borrow your tackle box 心理描写 强烈 guilt 与挣扎 my throat had frozen up 动作描写 调包、藏东西、拒绝吃桃子 hid it under my sweaters 环境描写 calm sea 烘托快乐；家中安静烘托压抑 The sea was calm 隐含主题 honesty matters more than possessions praised my generosity 情感转折 从隐瞒到坦白 words started pouring out 空间转换 船上 → 回家 → 家庭冲突解决 On the way home 时间过渡 birthday → weeks later → next morning Weeks later 九、苏格拉底式提问 第一层：发现冲突 1Why did the narrator hide the fishing tools? 2Did he really want to be generous? 3What does “my throat had frozen up” show? 4Why did he lose his appetite? 第二层：推动续写 5What truth must he tell Mom? 6How would Mom probably react—anger or understanding? Why? 7Should Mom immediately tell Dad, or let him face it himself? 8How can the five-dollar bill deepen his guilt? 第三层：第二段设计 9Why does Teddy shout excitedly instead of complaining? 10Did Teddy care more about the tackle box or going fishing with Dad? 11How will Dad react after knowing the truth? 12What should the narrator learn from this experience? 第四层：主题升华 13Is honesty more important than protecting favorite things? 14What does true generosity mean? 15How does family love help us grow up? Part 2读后续写高频语料积累 （一）动作描写 英文例句 中文翻译 I lowered my head and twisted my fingers nervously. 我低下头，紧张地绞着手指。 Tears welled up in my eyes before I could stop them. 还没来得及控制，泪水就涌上了眼眶。 I reached under my sweaters and slowly took out the hidden fishing tools. 我把手伸到毛衣下面，慢慢拿出了藏起来的渔具。 My hands trembled as I handed everything to Mom. 当我把东西递给妈妈时，双手都在发抖。 I clutched the five-dollar bill tightly, feeling it burn in my palm. 我紧紧攥着那五美元，感觉它在掌心发烫。 I burst into tears and threw myself into Mom’s arms. 我突然哭了出来，一头扑进妈妈怀里。 Teddy rushed into the house, waving the fish proudly. Teddy冲进屋里，骄傲地挥舞着鱼。 Dad put his hand gently on my shoulder and smiled. 爸爸轻轻把手放在我的肩膀上，笑了。 I took a deep breath and finally spoke the truth. 我深吸一口气，终于说出了真相。 I nodded silently, too ashamed to look anyone in the eye. 我默默点头，羞愧得不敢看任何人的眼睛。 （二）心理描写 英文例句 中文翻译 Guilt sat heavily in my chest like a stone. 愧疚像石头一样沉甸甸地压在我心头。 My stomach twisted with regret and fear. 后悔和害怕让我胃里一阵翻腾。 I wished I could turn back time and make a different choice. 我真希望时光倒流，让我重新做出选择。 Shame flooded over me the moment I saw Mom’s worried eyes. 当我看到妈妈担忧的眼神时，羞愧瞬间涌上心头。 I felt smaller and smaller under Dad’s praise. 在爸爸的夸奖下，我觉得自己越来越渺小。 My heart pounded wildly as if it wanted to escape my chest. 我的心狂跳不止，仿佛要从胸口跳出来。 A wave of relief washed over me after I confessed everything. 当我坦白一切后，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上心头。 I was torn between protecting my treasure and doing the right thing. 我在保护自己的宝贝和做正确的事之间挣扎。 His understanding smile warmed the cold corner of my heart. 他理解的微笑温暖了我内心冰冷的角落。 At that moment, I understood what true generosity meant. 那一刻，我明白了真正的慷慨意味着什么。 （三）环境描写 英文例句 中文翻译 The house was unusually quiet, making my guilt even louder. 家里异常安静，让我的愧疚更加清晰。 Sunlight fell softly on the table, where the untouched peach lay. 阳光轻轻洒在桌上，那颗没动过的桃子静静躺着。 The afternoon air felt heavy, pressing down on my chest. 午后的空气沉重得仿佛压在我的胸口。 Outside the window, birds were singing, but I heard nothing. 窗外鸟儿在歌唱，但我什么都听不见。 The five-dollar bill fluttered slightly in the summer breeze. 五美元纸币在夏日微风中轻轻飘动。 The fading sunlight stretched long shadows across the floor. 渐暗的阳光在地板上拉出长长的影子。 The sweet smell of peaches filled the kitchen, yet I had no appetite. 厨房里弥漫着桃子的香甜味，可我毫无食欲。 The front door remained closed, and every second felt like forever. 前门一直紧闭着，每一秒都像一个世纪那么漫长。 Evening light painted the room golden and warm. 傍晚的光把房间染成了金色，温暖柔和。 Teddy’s cheerful voice broke the heavy silence like sunshine breaking through clouds. Teddy欢快的声音像阳光穿破乌云般打破了沉默。 二、高级替换词 （一）“说”类高级替换 普通词 高级替换 say whisper murmur confess admit explain （二）“难过”类高级替换 普通词 高级替换 sad upset heartbroken miserable guilty ashamed （三）“开心”类高级替换 普通词 高级替换 happy delighted overjoyed thrilled relieved cheerful （四）“看”类高级替换 普通词 高级替换 look stare glance gaze peek notice （五）“走”类高级替换 普通词 高级替换 walk hurry rush step approach pace 三、地道搭配 + 固定搭配 + 词法解析 高频表达总表 短语 意思 近义词 反义词 burst into tears 突然哭出来 cry suddenly hold back tears be filled with guilt 充满愧疚 feel ashamed feel proud have no appetite 没胃口 lose appetite eat with pleasure take a deep breath 深呼吸 calm oneself panic be lost in thought 陷入沉思 be absorbed in be distracted a wave of relief washed over me 如释重负 feel relieved feel stressed gather up courage 鼓起勇气 summon courage lose courage confess the truth 坦白真相 admit honestly hide the truth be frozen with fear 吓得僵住 be terrified stay calm put one’s hand on shoulder 安慰动作 comfort gently push away 四、重点短语深度解析 1. burst into tears 内容 说明 词义 突然哭出来 近义词 break down, cry suddenly, sob 反义词 hold back tears, remain calm 例句 1. I burst into tears the moment I saw Mom’s gentle eyes. 我一看到妈妈温柔的眼神就突然哭了出来。 2. Unable to bear the guilt any longer, I burst into tears. 再也无法承受愧疚时，我突然哭了出来。 2. confess the truth 内容 说明 词义 坦白真相 近义词 admit, tell the truth, reveal 反义词 lie, hide, conceal 例句 1. I decided to confess the truth before Dad came home. 我决定在爸爸回家前坦白真相。 2. Honesty gave me the courage to confess the truth. 诚实给了我坦白真相的勇气。 3. a wave of relief washed over me 内容 说明 词义 一阵如释重负涌上心头 近义词 feel greatly relieved 反义词 be overwhelmed by stress 例句 1. After I apologized, a wave of relief washed over me. 道歉之后，一阵如释重负涌上心头。 2. Mom smiled, and a wave of relief washed over me instantly. 妈妈笑了，我顿时如释重负。 4. be torn between…and… 内容 说明 词义 在……和……之间挣扎 近义词 struggle between 反义词 make up one’s mind 例句 1. I was torn between selfishness and honesty. 我在自私和诚实之间挣扎。 2. She was torn between fear and responsibility. 她在害怕和责任之间挣扎。 5. guilt sat heavily in my chest 内容 说明 词义 愧疚压在心头 近义词 feel deeply guilty 反义词 feel at peace 例句 1. Guilt sat heavily in my chest the whole afternoon. 整个下午，愧疚都沉甸甸压在我心头。 2. Every time I saw the bill, guilt sat heavily in my chest. 每次看到那张钱，我都愧疚难安。 Part 3 Versions Version 1 Paragraph 1: When I opened my mouth, words started pouring out. I stared at the untouched peach on the table, and the five-dollar bill in my hand suddenly felt heavier than a stone. Through tears, I confessed everything—how much I loved my tackle box, how afraid I was that Teddy would ruin it, and how I had secretly taken all the fishing tools out and hidden them under my sweaters. Mom listened quietly without interrupting, her gentle eyes making me feel even more ashamed(独立主格). I pulled out the hidden hooks, lines, and lures with trembling hands and placed them on the table. “I’m not generous at all,” I sobbed. Mom sighed softly, stroked my hair, and said honesty mattered more than any tackle box. Just then, the sound of a car stopping outside made my heart jump(无灵主语句). Paragraph 2: The silence was suddenly broken by Teddy’s excited yell, “We got fish!” He rushed into the house, holding up two shiny bluefish(现在分词短语做伴随动作) as if they were treasures from the sea. Dad followed behind him, smiling tiredly(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Seeing the fishing tools on the table(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he paused for a second, and I immediately lowered my head, my face burning(独立主格). Before Dad could speak, I blurted out another apology. To my surprise, Teddy laughed and said he had fun anyway because what he really wanted was simply to go fishing with Dad—and with me next time. Dad put his warm hand on my shoulder and said sharing meant trust, not perfection. At that moment, I realized the tackle box was not my greatest treasure—my family was. Version 2 Paragraph 1: When I opened my mouth, words started pouring out. It was as if the words had been waiting behind my frozen throat all day. I burst into tears and told Mom the whole truth: I had emptied the tackle box, hidden the real fishing tools(现在分词短语做后置定语), and filled it with useless old things because I couldn’t bear Teddy touching my precious gift. I even showed her where everything was hidden. The peach on the table smelled sweet, but guilt had made everything bitter. Looking at the five-dollar bill fluttering in my hand(现在分词短语做伴随动作)like that wounded green butterfly, I felt worse and worse. Mom didn’t scold me. Instead, she gently asked, “Do you think Teddy wanted your tackle box, or just wanted to be with Dad like you were yesterday?” Before I could answer, we heard the front door open. Paragraph 2: The silence was suddenly broken by Teddy’s excited yell, “We got fish!” He ran in with wet shoes and bright eyes, proudly carrying a small fish in both hands(现在分词短语做伴随动作). “Look! I caught it!” he shouted. Dad came in behind him, laughing(现在分词短语做伴随动作), and said Teddy had been talking about showing me the fish all the way home. I stood there frozen(过去分词做主语补语), then quickly apologized, expecting disappointment(现在分词短语做伴随动作). But Teddy only looked confused and said, “I don’t care about the box. I just wanted us to fish together next time.” His simple words hit me harder than any blame. Dad smiled and handed me the fish. Holding it carefully(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I understood that honesty and sharing were far more valuable than keeping a perfect tackle box untouched forever(过去分词做补语). Version 3 Paragraph 1: When I opened my mouth, words started pouring out. My voice shook badly, but once I started, I could not stop. I admitted how selfish I had been and how I had lied by pretending to be generous. I told Mom that every time I looked at the five-dollar bill, it felt like a little judge staring at me. Then I ran to my room, reached under my sweaters, and brought out the hidden fishing knife, hooks, and lines one by one. Seeing them neatly placed on the table(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I finally burst into tears. Mom pulled me into her arms and said softly that making mistakes was part of growing up, but having the courage to correct them mattered most. At that very moment, we heard Teddy’s footsteps running toward the door. Paragraph 2: The silence was suddenly broken by Teddy’s excited yell, “We got fish!” He dashed in, waving his arms and nearly shouting the roof down(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Behind him, Dad carried a bucket with several bluefish inside. “We had a great day!” Teddy announced proudly. Then he noticed the fishing tools on the table and stopped. My heart sank. I quickly stepped forward and admitted everything again, ready for anger this time.(adj做主语补语) But Teddy only grinned and said, “That’s okay! Next time, let’s use your tackle box together!” Dad nodded and added that trust in a family was built by honesty, not by hiding mistakes. Looking at Teddy’s bright smile(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I felt the heavy stone in my chest disappear. For the first time, I truly felt generous. Version 4 Paragraph 1 When I opened my mouth, words started pouring out. I could no longer hold back the storm inside me. With a trembling voice, I confessed everything to Mom—how I had secretly taken out all the fishing tools, how I had filled the tackle box with useless old things, and how selfish I had been just to keep Teddy away from it. My hands were shaking as I pointed to the hidden items under my sweaters. I avoided her eyes, ashamed of the five-dollar bill still lying on the table like a silent accusation.(adj做主语补语) Mom didn’t raise her voice. Instead, she gently pulled me closer and said she understood my feelings but reminded me that love without honesty could hurt others more deeply. My throat tightened again as I waited for Dad and Teddy to return. Paragraph 2 The silence was suddenly broken by Teddy’s excited yell, “We got fish!” The door swung open, and he rushed in holding a small shiny fish(现在分词短语做伴随动作), followed by Dad (股过去分词短语做后置定语)carrying a bucket of the day’s catch(现在分词短语做伴随动作). I lowered my head instantly, bracing for anger(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Instead, Dad calmly sat beside me and noticed the fishing gear on the table. To my shock, he sighed and admitted he should have asked me first before borrowing something so important. His apology stunned me. Teddy, however, just laughed and proudly showed his fish, saying(现在分词短语做伴随动作)fishing was fun even without the perfect tackle box. Overwhelmed(过去分词做adj主语), I finally confessed again, and this time I felt lighter than ever, realizing(现在分词短语做伴随动作) trust mattered more than possession. 表达 含义 可替换表达 pour out words 倾诉 confess / open up a heavy weight in my chest 心中沉重 burden / guilt avoid eye contact 回避目光 look down / lower gaze break the silence 打破沉默 interrupt / cut through silence feel a sense of relief 如释重负 be relieved / feel light admit one’s mistake 承认错误 confess / own up touch someone deeply 深深触动 move / strike emotionally gather courage 鼓起勇气 summon courage shake with guilt 因愧疚发抖 tremble / shiver family bond 家庭纽带 relationship / connection 官方： When I opened my mouth, words started pouring out. I told Mom the whole truth in a shaky voice, admitting(现在分词短语做伴随动作)I’d hidden the fishing gear and stuffed the tackle box with old junk, too selfish to let Teddy use it(adj短语做补语). Ashamed(过去分词短语做主语补语), I stared at the floor, waiting for her blame(现在分词短语做伴随动作). But Mom just sighed and patted my shoulder gently, saying(现在分词短语做伴随动作) she understood my love for the box yet reminded me honesty and sharing mattered more. Guilt weighed on me(无灵主语句) as I sat silently, my heart racing(独立主格), ready to apologize to Dad and Teddy(adj短语做补语) when they came back. The silence was suddenly broken by Teddy’s excited yell, “We got fish!” The door slammed, Teddy rushing in with a small fish(独立主格), Dad following with a bucket of catch(独立主格). I hung my head in guilt, bracing for a scolding(现在分词短语做伴随动作). But Dad sat beside me, not a word of criticism. Instead, he even apologized for being reckless, borrowing the box(现在分词短语做伴随动作)without asking how I felt. His full understanding touched me deeply. I blurted out my sincere apology at once, and Dad smiled gently at me. That night, I filled the box with new lures—and something heavier(独立主格): the weight of lessons learned, and the lightness of being truly known(独立主格). 练习题包（默写与仿写） 第一部分：原文佳句默写（15句） 根据汉语提示和部分英文，补全空缺的词汇或短语。 我第一眼就爱上了它：结实而沉重，有六个透明的塑料抽屉，里面装着鱼钩、铅坠、鱼线、鱼饵。 I fell in love with it at first sight: solid and heavy, with six clear plastic drawers ________ hooks, sinkers, fishing lines, lures. 我把它放在床底下，一个安全的地方——我的弟弟泰迪，家里的小捣蛋鬼，永远够不到的地方。 I put it under my bed, a safe place ________ Teddy, my younger brother and the troublemaker of the family, could never get to it. 大海很平静，蓝鱼疯狂地咬钩。 The sea was calm, and the bluefish were ________. 我钓了十三条鱼，其中有一条和我的胳膊一样长。 I caught thirteen fish, ________ a big one as long as my arm. “借用你的工具箱”——这些话让我的肚子里产生了一种奇怪的感觉。 Those words—borrow your tackle box—________ a strange feeling in my belly. 我张开嘴想说什么，但我的喉咙好像冻住了。 I opened my mouth to say something, but my throat ________. 胃里的感觉越来越强烈，几分钟后，我意识到这很像胃疼。 The feeling in my stomach kept ________, and after a few minutes I realized that it was much like a stomachache. 我爱这个工具箱爱得无法忍受泰迪把它弄乱的想法。 I loved the tackle box so much that I couldn’t ________ the thought of Teddy messing it up. 那天晚上，我把所有渔具拿出来，藏在我的毛衣下面。 That night, I ________ all the fishing stuff out and ________ it under my sweaters. 然后我把箱子装满旧玩具、旧布条和有洞的袜子——让它像往常一样沉。 Then I ________ the box ________ old toys, pieces of old cloth, and holey socks—making it feel heavy as usual. 他笑了笑，给了我一张五美元的钞票，称赞我慷慨。 He smiled, gave me a five-dollar bill and ________ my generosity. 我的喉咙发紧，我最后一次试图说话，但失败了。 My throat ________, and I tried to speak one last time but failed. 五美元的钞票像一只受伤的绿色蝴蝶在我手中飘动。 The five-dollar bill ________ like a wounded green butterfly in my hand. 妈妈递给我一个凉爽多汁的好桃子，温柔地看着我，但我摇了摇头。 Mom ________ a nice cold juicy peach, turning to me with a gentle look, but I ________ my head. 我说我一点胃口也没有，一整天什么都不想吃。 I said I had no appetite ________ and wouldn’t eat anything the whole day. 第二部分：中译英默写（12句） 根据中文意思和所给关键词，写出完整英文句子。 我冲出门外，朝爸爸的车喊道：“爸爸，箱子里不是渔具！”（rush out, shout, tackle box） 爸爸停下车，沉默了很长时间。（pull over, silence, for a long while） “我知道，”他平静地说，“我在等你告诉我。”（know, wait, tell） 眼泪像断了线的珠子一样从我的脸颊滚落。（tears, roll down, cheeks） “对不起，爸爸，”我抽泣着说，“我不应该撒谎。”（sorry, sob, lie） 爸爸蹲下来，用胳膊搂住了我。（crouch down, wrap, arms） 承认错误比一开始就没做错需要更大的勇气。（admit mistake, courage, in the first place） 整个下午我都坐立不安，不停地向窗外看。（sit restlessly, keep doing, look out） 当我听到车道上汽车引擎的声音时，我的心怦怦直跳。（heart, pound, engine, driveway） 弟弟挥舞着一条大鱼向我跑来，脸上挂着大大的笑容。（wave, run toward, big smile） “我们用你的工具箱钓到的！”他兴奋地喊道。（use, tackle box, excitedly） 我掏出那张皱巴巴的五美元，终于咬了一口桃子。（pull out, wrinkled, finally, take a bite） 第三部分：动作/环境/心理描写语料库默写（10句） 根据中文提示和给出的英文开头/结尾，补全描写内容。 心理描写（愧疚感）：每次爸爸夸我“慷慨”，我都________________。（提示：想找个地缝钻进去） Every time Dad praised my “generosity”， I ________. 动作描写（坦白过程）：我深吸一口气，________________。（提示：攥紧拳头/冲出去/喊出声） I took a deep breath, ________. 环境描写（等待时）：阳光从窗户斜射进来，________________。（提示：光斑移动/时间流逝） Sunlight slanted through the window, ________. 心理描写（紧张感）：________________，好像有人在我的胃里打了一个结。（提示：用比喻写胃部不适） ________, as if someone had tied a knot in my stomach. 动作描写（父亲的反应）：爸爸什么也没说，只是________________。（提示：揉头发/拍拍肩膀/沉默地看） Dad didn't say anything. He just ________. 环境描写（黄昏时分）：天空变成了橙粉色，________________。（提示：影子拉长/夜幕将至） The sky turned orange and pink, ________. 心理描写（释怀后）：压在胸口的石头终于________________。（提示：落下来/搬走/消散） The stone pressing on my chest finally ________. 动作描写（弟弟归来）：弟弟像一阵风一样冲过来，________________。（提示：举着鱼/大喊/满脸兴奋） Teddy rushed over like a gust of wind, ________. 心理描写（被理解时）：那一刻，我知道________________。（提示：被原谅/被爱/没事了） At that moment, I knew ________. 综合描写（结局）：我咬了一口桃子，汁水在嘴里炸开，________________。（提示：甜/胃不疼了/笑出来） I took a bite of the peach, the juice bursting in my mouth, ________. 第四部分：高级句式仿写（6句） 句式1：感官先行 + 主要动作 + 即时结果 原句参考：My throat felt tight, and I tried to speak one last time but failed. （心跳加速）________________，我 ________________，结果 ________________。 句式2：无灵主语句 + 现在分词 原句参考：The feeling in my stomach kept getting stronger, making me realize it was much like a stomachache. （愧疚感）， 我 ________________。 句式3：形容词链 + 动作链 原句参考：Mom offered a nice cold juicy peach, turning to me with a gentle look. 爸爸递给我一张 、 的五美元钞票，________________ 说：“拿着。” 句式4：独立主格 + 主句 原句参考：They went fishing, me waiting at home the whole day. 爸爸开车离开了，________________，我 ________________。 句式5：强调句（It was...that...） 原句参考：It was the thought of Teddy messing it up that made me so anxious. 正是 ________________ 让我 ________________。 句式6：递进句（not...but... / 从...到...） 原句参考：I didn't feel hungry, but I couldn't eat—from stomachache to guilt, everything got mixed up. 我不是 ________________，而是 ________________——从 ________________ 到 ，。 参考答案 第一部分：原文佳句默写 holding where biting like crazy including gave me had frozen up getting stronger bear took; hid filled; with praised felt tight fluttered offered; shook at all 第二部分：中译英默写 I rushed out of the door and shouted to Dad's car, “Dad, there's no fishing stuff in the tackle box!” Dad pulled over and fell into silence for a long while. “I know,” he said calmly, “I was waiting for you to tell me.” Tears rolled down my cheeks like beads falling from a broken string. “I'm sorry, Dad,” I sobbed, “I shouldn't have lied.” Dad crouched down and wrapped his arms around me. Admitting a mistake takes more courage than not making one in the first place. I sat restlessly the whole afternoon, keeping looking out of the window. My heart pounded when I heard the sound of the car engine in the driveway. Teddy ran toward me waving a big fish, with a big smile on his face. “We caught it using your tackle box!” he shouted excitedly. I pulled out the wrinkled five-dollar bill and finally took a bite of the peach. 第三部分：语料库默写 wanted to crawl into a hole clenched my fists/ rushed out/ let the words out the patches of light moving slowly across the floor as time crawled by A strange feeling crept over my stomach reached out and rubbed my hair/ patted me on the shoulder/ looked at me in silence the shadows stretching longer as dusk approached fell away/ was lifted/ disappeared holding up a fish/ shouting with joy/ his face full of excitement I was forgiven/ I was still loved/ everything was okay the sweetness spreading/ and my stomach stopped hurting/ and I couldn't help smiling 第四部分：高级句式仿写 （以下为参考答案，学生可自由发挥，合理即可） My heart pounded / clenched my fists / but my voice still wouldn't come out （我的心怦怦直跳，攥紧了拳头，但声音还是发不出来） The guilt kept eating me from inside / making / realize I couldn't hide it any longer （愧疚感从内部一点点啃噬着我，让我意识到我再也藏不住了） wrinkled / crumpled / patting me on the shoulder （皱巴巴的/揉皱的/拍着我的肩膀） the five-dollar bill fluttering in my hand / standing at the door watching （五美元钞票在我手中飘动/站在门口望着） the look in Dad's eyes / realize he had known all along （爸爸眼中的神情/意识到他自始至终都知道） feeling angry / feeling ashamed / shame / relief / everything got untangled （不是生气/而是羞愧/从羞愧到释然/一切都解开了） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $