摘要:
**基本信息**
从词-句-篇系统构建写作能力,通过阶梯训练与典例精析实现语言能力与思维品质的协同提升。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|写作素材库|分类词汇/搭配/功能表达|词汇-搭配-句型三级积累|核心词汇→高频搭配→功能表达,构建基础语言储备|
|黄金句型库|基础+升级句型(5组对比)|基础句→升级句转化技巧(添加时间/感受/原因)|基础句型→拓展细节→提升表达丰富度|
|高分写作方法|1篇典例(含审题/结构/亮点解析)|审题-结构-亮点三步法(明确要素/逻辑分段/语言优化)|任务分析→内容组织→语言润色,培养写作思维|
|阶梯训练|句子训练(15题)+篇章训练(1题)|分层训练(基础翻译→句型仿写→句子升级→篇章应用)|从单句准确表达到篇章逻辑构建,形成“输入-内化-输出”闭环|
内容正文:
Unit 2 Hobbies
单元写作专项训练
一、单元核心信息
二、写作素材库
1. 主题词汇
爱好相关名词
hobby 业余爱好
painting 绘画;画作
reading 阅读
swimming 游泳
dancing 跳舞
singing 唱歌
jogging 慢跑
paper-cutting 剪纸
science 科学
chess 国际象棋
Chinese chess 中国象棋
ping-pong 乒乓球
volleyball 排球运动
football 足球
basketball 篮球
频度副词与时间表达
always 总是
usually 通常
often 经常
sometimes 有时
seldom 很少
never 从不
every day/week 每天/每周
once a week 每周一次
at the weekend 在周末
after school 放学后
in one’s free time 在某人空闲时间
相关动词与短语
enjoy 享受…的乐趣;喜爱
like 喜欢
love 热爱
practise 训练;练习
join 加入
go swimming 去游泳
play chess 下棋
play the piano 弹钢琴
take photos 拍照
surf the Internet 上网
相关名词
club 社团;俱乐部
member 成员
team 队;组
dream 梦想
scientist 科学家
designer 设计师
artist 艺术家
master 能手;大师
2. 高频搭配
be interested in 对……感兴趣
be good at 擅长……
come true 实现;成为现实
all kinds of 各种各样的
in one’s free time 在某人空闲时间
make sb feel happy 让某人感到快乐
want to be 想要成为……
hope to do 希望做……
plan to do 计划做……
practise doing 练习做……
enjoy doing 喜欢做……
love doing 热爱做……
3. 写作功能表达
表达最喜爱的爱好
My favourite hobby is ... 我最喜欢的爱好是……
I love/enjoy/like doing ... 我喜欢做……
I am interested in ... 我对……感兴趣。
表达时间与频率
I often ... after school. 我放学后经常……
I ... every day/week. 我每天/每周……
I ... at the weekend. 我周末……
I ... in my free time. 我空闲时间……
表达感受与收获
... makes me feel happy/great. ……让我感到快乐/很棒。
It is great fun. 这很有趣。
I learn a lot from ... 我从……中学到很多。
It helps me keep fit/healthy. 它帮助我保持健康。
表达梦想与未来
I want to become a ... 我想成为一名……
My dream is to ... 我的梦想是……
I hope my dream can come true. 我希望我的梦想能实现。
... can help me achieve my dream. ……能帮助我实现梦想。
三、黄金句型库
1. 开头句型
My favourite hobby is ...
我最喜欢的爱好是……
I am interested in ...
我对……感兴趣。
I love/like/enjoy ...
我热爱/喜欢……
Let me share my hobby with you.
让我和你分享我的爱好。
2. 主体句型
I ... every week/day.
我每周/每天……
I often ... after school.
我放学后经常……
... makes me feel happy.
……让我感到快乐。
I am good at ...
我擅长……
I want to become a ... in the future.
我将来想成为一名……
I learn a lot from ...
我从……中学到很多。
3. 结尾句型
I hope my dream can come true.
我希望我的梦想能实现。
I will keep practising and never give up.
我会继续练习,永不放弃。
Do you have any hobbies? Let’s share them together!
你有什么爱好吗?让我们一起分享吧!
I believe that hobbies bring joy to our life.
我相信爱好给我们的生活带来快乐。
4. 句型升级
基础句
升级句
I like reading. 我喜欢阅读。
I love reading and I read all kinds of books in my free time. 我热爱阅读,空闲时间读各种各样的书。
I play chess. 我下象棋。
I enjoy playing Chinese chess with my dad at the weekend. 我喜欢周末和爸爸下中国象棋。
I want to be a scientist. 我想成为一名科学家。
I want to become a scientist like Daniel because I am interested in science. 我想成为像丹尼尔那样的科学家,因为我对科学感兴趣。
Painting makes me happy. 绘画让我开心。
Painting makes me feel happy and relaxed, and it is great fun to share my paintings with my friends. 绘画让我感到快乐和放松,和朋友分享我的画作非常有趣。
I swim every week. 我每周游泳。
I go swimming every week and it helps me keep fit and healthy. 我每周去游泳,这帮助我保持身体健康。
四、高分写作方法
典例精析
假设你是某国际学校七年级学生Tony,你将在社团招新活动中为新生介绍你所在的美术俱乐部。请你根据以下海报的提示内容,用英语写一篇发言稿,简要介绍该俱乐部并为其招募新成员。
Art Club
When to meet: every Wednesday afternoon
Where to meet:
Art Room
What we do:
● learn painting skills (技能);
● hold an art show;
● visit art museums (美术馆)
要求:
1. 短文内容应包含题目所给的全部信息,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于50。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Hello, everyone! I’m Tony. Now let me introduce our art club to you.
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【审题构思】
先明确三点:写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。
内容上,海报给出三个必须涵盖的信息:活动时间、活动地点、社团活动内容(三项)。此外,发言稿还需包含招募新成员的邀请。时态上,介绍社团常规活动用一般现在时。结构上分两段:第一段介绍社团基本信息(时间、地点、活动),第二段发出加入邀请。
【例文欣赏】
Hello, everyone! I’m Tony. Now let me introduce our art club to you.
Our club is a wonderful place for painting lovers. We meet every Wednesday afternoon in the Art Room. At the club, we can learn different painting skills. We also hold an art show at school to show our works. On weekends, we go to visit art museums.
If you are interested in art, come and join us! You will love it here.
【亮点解析】
开篇一句话定调,点明社团性质。 “Our club is a wonderful place for painting lovers.”用“wonderful place”和“painting lovers”两个短语迅速概括了社团的定位和氛围,让听众立刻明白这是一个为热爱绘画的人准备的空间。
三条信息逐一出场,衔接自然。 “We meet every Wednesday afternoon in the Art Room.”一句话涵盖时间(Wednesday afternoon)和地点(Art Room),干净利落。三项活动用“At the club”“We also”“On weekends”分别引出,各有分工,覆盖课内与课外——既能学到技能,又能展示作品,还能参观学习。
用递进结构组织活动内容,逻辑清晰。 learn skills→hold an art show→visit museums,三个活动由学到展示再到参观学习,能力发展路径清晰。听众能感受到社团活动的丰富性和系统性。
结尾招募简洁有力。 “If you are interested in art, come and join us! You will love it here.”用条件句降低门槛——“只要是感兴趣的就可以来”,再用第二句承诺“你会喜欢这里的”,以强烈的积极语气收尾,符合招募发言稿的写作目的。
发言稿格式完整得体。 开头有对全场的问候“Hello, everyone!”和自我介绍“I'm Tony.”,有“let me introduce our art club to you”引出介绍,结尾有招募邀请。全文层次清晰,语气热情友好,符合学生社团招募的语言风格。
五、阶梯训练
(一)句子训练
Level 1 汉译英
1. 我最喜欢的爱好是绘画。
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2. 我每周都画画,这让我感到快乐。
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3. 我对科学感兴趣,我想成为一名科学家。
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4. 我放学后经常和朋友们打乒乓球。
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5. 我希望我的梦想能实现。
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Level 2 句型仿写(参照例句完成句子)
句型1:My favourite hobby is ...(表达最喜欢的爱好)
例句:My favourite hobby is painting. 我最喜欢的爱好是绘画。
(1)我最喜欢的爱好是阅读。
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(2)我最喜欢的爱好是游泳。
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句型2:I ... every day/week.(描述频率)
例句:I paint every week. 我每周都画画。
(1)我每天都练习弹钢琴。
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(2)我每周都去游泳。
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句型3:... makes me feel ...(描述感受)
例句:Painting makes me feel happy. 绘画让我感到快乐。
(1)游泳让我感到健康和强壮。
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(2)阅读让我感到放松和快乐。
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句型4:I am interested in ...(描述兴趣)
例句:I am interested in science. 我对科学感兴趣。
(1)她对音乐感兴趣。
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(2)他对体育运动感兴趣。
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句型5:I want to become a ...(表达梦想)
例句:I want to become a scientist. 我想成为一名科学家。
(1)我想成为一名教师。
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(2)我想成为一名设计师。
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Level 3 句子升级
要求:参照下方示例,将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。
示例:
基础句:I like reading. 我喜欢阅读。
升级句:I love reading and I read all kinds of books in my free time.
我热爱阅读,空闲时间读各种各样的书。
1. 基础句:I play chess. 我下象棋。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
2. 基础句:I want to be a scientist. 我想成为一名科学家。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
3. 基础句:Painting makes me happy. 绘画让我开心。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
4. 基础句:I swim every week. 我每周游泳。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
5. 基础句:I like music. 我喜欢音乐。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
6. 基础句:I have a dream. 我有一个梦想。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
(二)篇章训练
假如你是李华,你的学校可以为学生提供丰富多彩的社团活动,比如科学社团、美术社团、英语社团、音乐社团……请根据你个人的兴趣爱好,选择你喜欢的社团,写一篇英语申请信加入该社团,在信中说明你想加入的理由,你会做什么事?你想要学到什么?
要求:
1. 文章内容包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥。
2. 词数:60词以上;
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名,校名及地名。
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参考答案
Level 1 汉译英
1. My favourite hobby is painting.
2. I paint every week and it makes me feel happy.
3. I am interested in science and I want to become a scientist.
4. I often play ping-pong with my friends after school.
5. I hope my dream can come true.
Level 2 句型仿写
句型1
(1)My favourite hobby is reading.
(2)My favourite hobby is swimming.
句型2
(1)I practise playing the piano every day.
(2)I go swimming every week.
句型3
(1)Swimming makes me feel healthy and strong.
(2)Reading makes me feel relaxed and happy.
句型4
(1)She is interested in music.
(2)He is interested in sports.
句型5
(1)I want to become a teacher.
(2)I want to become a designer.
Level 3 句子升级
(以下为参考升级答案,其他合理升级也可接受)
1. 升级句:I enjoy playing Chinese chess with my dad at the weekend because it is great fun.
我喜欢周末和爸爸下中国象棋,因为这很有趣。
2. 升级句:I want to become a scientist like Daniel because I am interested in science and I want to change the world.
我想成为像丹尼尔那样的科学家,因为我对科学感兴趣,我想改变世界。
3. 升级句:Painting makes me feel happy and relaxed, and it is great fun to share my paintings with my friends.
绘画让我感到快乐和放松,和朋友分享我的画作非常有趣。
4. 升级句:I go swimming every week and it helps me keep fit and healthy.
我每周去游泳,这帮助我保持身体健康。
5. 升级句:I love music and I am interested in playing the piano. I practise it every day.
我热爱音乐,对弹钢琴感兴趣。我每天练习。
6. 升级句:I have a dream to become a great dancer, and I hope my dream can come true one day.
我有一个梦想,成为一名伟大的舞者,我希望有一天我的梦想能实现。
篇章训练(参考范文)
Dear Sir,
I’m Li Hua. I want to join the English Club. I love English because it is useful and fun. I can sing English songs and tell stories well. I am good at communicating with others. If I join the club, I hope to learn how to speak English better. I also want to make more friends. I will take part in all activities actively. I believe I can be a good member.
Yours,
Li Hua
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