摘要:
**基本信息**
以“词汇-句型-篇章”三级进阶为核心,通过分类素材积累、句型升级训练和分层写作实践,系统培养校园生活主题写作的语言组织与逻辑表达能力,提升语言能力与思维品质。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|写作素材库|主题词汇40+、高频搭配14、功能表达4类|按主题/功能分类积累,夯实语言基础|从核心词汇到固定搭配再到功能句型,构建基础表达体系|
|黄金句型库|基础句型12、升级示例5组|通过时间/原因/细节拓展实现句型升级|从简单句到复合信息句,培养思维的逻辑性与表达的丰富性|
|高分写作方法|典例1篇(含审题/构思/亮点解析)|审题三要素(内容/时态/结构)、要点展开法(原因/感受具体化)|从题目分析到篇章构建再到亮点打造,形成完整写作流程|
|阶梯训练|句子训练3级16题、篇章训练1篇|分层训练(汉译英→仿写→升级→篇章)|从单句精准表达到篇章连贯构建,实现语言能力逐步提升|
内容正文:
Unit 4 School days
单元写作专项训练
一、单元核心信息
二、写作素材库
1. 主题词汇
日常作息活动
get up 起床
have breakfast 吃早餐
go to school 去上学
do morning exercises 做早操
have lessons 上课
have lunch 吃午饭
do after-school activities 做课外活动
have dinner 吃晚饭
do homework 做家庭作业
go to bed 去睡觉
学校科目
Chinese 语文
Maths 数学
English 英语
Biology 生物学
History 历史
Geography 地理
Science 科学
P.E. 体育
Art 美术
Music 音乐
活动相关名词
field trip 野外考察;实地考察
team 队;组
term 学期
practice 练习
language 语言
nature 大自然
writer 作家
work 作品;著作
living things 生物
activity 活动
频度与时间表达
usually 通常地
often 经常
always 总是
sometimes 有时
seldom 很少
never 从不
in the morning/afternoon/evening 在上午/下午/晚上
on Monday/Tuesday/... 在周一/周二……
at 7 o’clock 在七点钟
2. 高频搭配
get up 起床
have breakfast/lunch/dinner 吃早/午/晚饭
go to school 去上学
do morning exercises 做早操
have lessons 上课
do after-school activities 做课外活动
do homework 做家庭作业
go to bed 去睡觉
at the weekend 在周末
on weekdays 在工作日
leave for 动身去;到……地方去
a good way to ... 做……的好方法
enjoy oneself 玩得痛快;得到乐趣
hear from sb 收到某人的来信(或电子邮件等)
3. 写作功能表达
表示日常作息
I get up at ... 我……起床。
School starts at ... 学校……开始上课。
We have lessons from ... to ... 我们从……到……上课。
I usually ... in the morning. 我早上通常……
表示课程与活动
My favourite subject is ... 我最喜欢的科目是……
We have ... on ... 我们在……有……课。
I am in the school ... team. 我在学校……队。
We have a field trip each term. 我们每学期有一次实地考察。
表示频率
I always/usually/often/sometimes ... 我总是/通常/经常/有时……
I ... every day/week. 我每天/每周……
I never ... 我从不……
表达感受与评价
I feel great! 我感觉很棒!
It is really interesting. 这真的很有趣。
... are great fun! ……很有趣!
I like ... best. 我最喜欢……
三、黄金句型库
1. 开头句型
This is my first term at Sunshine Middle School. 这是我在阳光中学的第一个学期。
I would like to tell you about my school days. 我想告诉你关于我的校园生活。
My school days are busy but interesting. 我的校园生活忙碌但有趣。
Let me share my school life with you. 让我和你分享我的校园生活。
2. 主体句型
School starts at 8 in the morning. 学校早上八点开始上课。
We do morning exercises first. 我们先做早操。
I like Chinese best because it is amazing. 我最喜欢语文,因为它太棒了。
We have Biology on Tuesdays and Thursdays. 我们在周二和周四有生物课。
I am in the school volleyball team. 我在学校排球队。
We have a field trip each term. 我们每学期有一次实地考察。
3. 结尾句型
What is your school life like? 你的校园生活是什么样的?
I enjoy my school days very much. 我非常享受我的校园生活。
Hope to hear from you soon. 希望尽快收到你的来信。
I can’t wait for the next field trip! 我等不及下一次实地考察了!
4. 句型升级
基础句
升级句
School starts at 8. 学校八点上课。
School starts at 8 in the morning. Usually, we do morning exercises first. 学校早上八点开始上课。通常我们首先做早操。
I like Chinese. 我喜欢语文。
I like Chinese best because we read the works of many famous writers. 我最喜欢语文,因为我们阅读许多著名作家的作品。
We have Biology. 我们有生物课。
We have Biology classes on Tuesdays and Thursdays. We study many living things and learn about nature. 我们在周二和周四有生物课。我们研究许多生物,了解大自然。
I like after-school activities. 我喜欢课外活动。
After-school activities are great fun! I am in the school volleyball team and we practise on Friday afternoons. 课外活动很有趣!我在学校排球队,我们周五下午训练。
We have a field trip. 我们有实地考察。
We have a field trip each term. Tomorrow morning we will leave for a farm to pick apples there. 我们每学期有一次实地考察。明天早上我们将出发去农场摘苹果。
四、高分写作方法
典例精析
假设你是李华,年级最近组织了一场演讲比赛,要求以“My Colorful School Life”为主题,分享你精彩的校园生活。请根据以下提示完成你的演讲稿:
My Colorful School Life
New friend
Favorite subject
What is it about?
Why do I like it best?
Favorite after-school activity
What is it?
What do I do?
How do I feel?
注意:
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
2. 要点齐全,适当发挥,语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。
3. 词数不少于60词,文章的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone!
I’m Li Hua, and I’m so excited to share my colorful school life with you.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening!
【审题构思】
先明确三点:写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。
内容上,题目给出三大板块:新朋友、最喜欢的科目(内容及原因)、最喜欢的课后活动(活动名称、具体做法、感受)。时态上,描述校园生活用一般现在时。结构上分三段:开头已给出,直接引出;主体段依次介绍新朋友、最喜欢的科目、最喜欢的课后活动,每项简要展开;结尾已给出,收束致谢。
【例文欣赏】
Good morning, everyone!
I’m Li Hua, and I’m so excited to share my colorful school life with you.
I have made a new friend at school. He is kind and we often help each other. My favorite subject is English. It has interesting stories and beautiful poems. I like it best because it opens a new world to me. My favorite after‑school activity is playing basketball. I often play it with my classmates after class. It makes me relaxed and full of energy. I really enjoy my wonderful school life.
Thank you for listening!
【亮点解析】
三个板块过渡自然,信息完整。 新朋友:“I have made a new friend at school. He is kind and we often help each other.”——既有“是谁”,又有“相处如何”。最喜欢的科目:“My favorite subject is English. It has interesting stories and beautiful poems. I like it best because it opens a new world to me.”——科目名称、内容特点、喜欢原因一气呵成。课后活动:“My favorite after-school activity is playing basketball. I often play it with my classmates after class. It makes me relaxed and full of energy.”——活动名称、具体做法、感受全涵盖。三板块条理分明,无遗漏。
原因具体不空泛。 “because it opens a new world to me”作为喜欢英语的理由,比简单说“because it's interesting”更有画面感。“opens a new world”暗示通过英语接触到了不同文化或知识,让原因有了深度。
感受描述具体。“makes me relaxed and full of energy” ——两个形容词精准概括了打篮球后的身心状态,既有身体感受(full of energy)又有心理感受(relaxed),符合提示中“How do I feel”的要求。
首尾呼应,结构完整。 开头用“excited to share my colorful school life”,结尾用“I really enjoy my wonderful school life”,用“colorful”和“wonderful”两个近义词首尾呼应,中间段落用具体事例支撑“精彩”二字。从“兴奋分享”到“真诚享受”,情感一以贯之。
五、阶梯训练
(一)句子训练
Level 1 汉译英
1. 学校早上八点开始上课,我们先做早操。
____________________________________________________________
2. 我最喜欢语文,因为我们阅读许多著名作家的作品。
____________________________________________________________
3. 我们在周二和周四有生物课,研究许多生物。
____________________________________________________________
4. 我在学校排球队,我们周五下午训练。
____________________________________________________________
5. 我们每学期有一次实地考察,明天早上我们将出发去农场。
____________________________________________________________
Level 2 句型仿写(参照例句完成句子)
句型1:School starts at ...(描述作息时间)
例句:School starts at 8 in the morning. 学校早上八点开始上课。
(1)我早上六点四十五起床。
____________________________________________________________
(2)我们下午四点开始课外活动。
____________________________________________________________
句型2:I like ... best because ...(描述最喜欢的科目及原因)
例句:I like Chinese best because we read the works of many famous writers.
我最喜欢语文,因为我们阅读许多著名作家的作品。
(1)我最喜欢生物,因为我们了解大自然。
____________________________________________________________
(2)我最喜欢体育,因为运动让我保持健康。
____________________________________________________________
句型3:We have ... on ...(描述课程安排)
例句:We have Biology classes on Tuesdays and Thursdays.
我们在周二和周四有生物课。
(1)我们在周一和周三有数学课。
____________________________________________________________
(2)我们在周五下午有排球训练。
____________________________________________________________
句型4:I am in the school ... team.(描述参加的队伍)
例句:I am in the school volleyball team. 我在学校排球队。
(1)我在学校足球队。
____________________________________________________________
(2)他在学校篮球队。
____________________________________________________________
句型5:We have a ... each ...(描述定期活动)
例句:We have a field trip each term. 我们每学期有一次实地考察。
(1)我们每年有一次学校运动会。
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(2)我们每周有一次俱乐部活动。
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Level 3 句子升级
要求:参照下方示例,将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。
示例:
基础句:School starts at 8. 学校八点上课。
升级句:School starts at 8 in the morning. Usually, we do morning exercises first.
学校早上八点开始上课。通常我们首先做早操。
1. 基础句:I like Chinese. 我喜欢语文。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
2. 基础句:We have Biology. 我们有生物课。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
3. 基础句:I like after-school activities. 我喜欢课外活动。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
4. 基础句:We have a field trip. 我们有实地考察。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
5. 基础句:I get up at 7. 我七点起床。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
6. 基础句:The teachers are nice. 老师们很好。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
(二)篇章训练
1.假如你是Li Hua,你的笔友Cindy对你的学校生活很感兴趣,请你围绕以下所示的三个问题,以My school life为题用英文写一封回信给你的笔友。
1. What buildings and subjects are there in your school (简述)?
2. What’s your favourite building and why?
3. What’s your favourite subject and why?
要求:
1.内容需包括以上所有问题,可适当发挥(标题和开头不需要抄到答题卡上);
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确;
3.70词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Cindy,
Thanks for your email. To answer your question, my school life is great. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
Level 1 汉译英
1. School starts at 8 in the morning. Usually, we do morning exercises first.
2. I like Chinese best because we read the works of many famous writers.
3. We have Biology classes on Tuesdays and Thursdays. We study many living things.
4. I am in the school volleyball team and we practise on Friday afternoons.
5. We have a field trip each term. Tomorrow morning we will leave for a farm.
Level 2 句型仿写
句型1
(1)I get up at 6:45 in the morning.
(2)We do after-school activities at 4 p.m.
句型2
(1)I like Biology best because we learn about nature.
(2)I like P.E. best because sport helps me keep fit.
句型3
(1)We have Maths lessons on Mondays and Wednesdays.
(2)We have volleyball practice on Friday afternoons.
句型4
(1)I am in the school football team.
(2)He is in the school basketball team.
句型5
(1)We have a school sports meeting each year.
(2)We have a club activity each week.
Level 3 句子升级
(以下为参考升级答案,其他合理升级也可接受)
1. 升级句:I like Chinese best because we read the works of many famous writers and learn about the amazing Chinese language.
我最喜欢语文,因为我们阅读许多著名作家的作品,学习美妙的汉语。
2. 升级句:We have Biology classes on Tuesdays and Thursdays. We study many living things and learn about nature, which is really interesting.
我们在周二和周四有生物课。我们研究许多生物,了解大自然,这真的很有趣。
3. 升级句:After-school activities are great fun! I am in the school volleyball team and we practise on Friday afternoons with our teammates.
课外活动很有趣!我在学校排球队,我们周五下午和队友们一起训练。
4. 升级句:We have a field trip each term. Tomorrow morning we will leave for a farm to pick apples there with our teachers.
我们每学期有一次实地考察。明天早上我们将和老师们一起出发去农场摘苹果。
5. 升级句:I get up at 7 o’clock in the morning and I always read a little before breakfast.
我早上七点起床,早餐前我总是读一会儿书。
6. 升级句:Our teachers are very kind and helpful. They always help us with our problems at school.
我们的老师很和蔼也很乐于助人。他们在学校总是帮助我们解决问题。
篇章训练(参考范文)
Dear Cindy,
Thanks for your email. To answer your question, my school life is great.
My new school is big and beautiful. There is a big playground, a library, a dining hall and some teaching buildings in it. My favorite place is the library because I can read many kinds of books there. I like playing basketball with my friends on the playground. We have many subjects. My favorite subject is English because it’s interesting. I have a good time at my new school.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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