摘要:
**基本信息**
聚焦自我介绍写作,构建“词汇-句型-篇章”三阶训练体系,通过分类素材积累、句型升级技巧及阶梯练习,系统提升语言表达准确性与逻辑组织能力,培养语言能力与思维品质。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|写作素材库|4类主题词汇、9组高频搭配、5类功能表达|分类积累核心词汇与固定搭配,夯实写作基础|从描述外貌、性格等基础词汇,到功能表达,构建词-句基础要素链|
|黄金句型库|4类基础句型、5组句型升级|基础句到升级句转化技巧,提升表达丰富度|从简单句到复合信息句,实现句型复杂度与信息含量递进|
|高分写作方法|1篇社团申请信典例|审题构思(要点覆盖、结构分段)、亮点解析(主题句统领、逻辑分层)|以典例示范“需求-原因”逻辑链,强化篇章结构意识|
|阶梯训练|3级句子训练(汉译英/仿写/升级)、1篇篇章训练|阶梯式能力提升:从单句翻译到句型仿写再到篇章创作|从句子准确性到篇章连贯性,实现写作能力逐级进阶|
内容正文:
Unit 1 This is me!
单元写作专项训练
一、单元核心信息
二、写作素材库
1. 主题词汇
描述外貌的形容词
tall 高的
short 矮的
slim 苗条的
strong 强壮的
pretty 漂亮的;标致的
cute 可爱的
lovely 可爱的
round face 圆脸
long hair 长头发
short hair 短头发
wear glasses 戴眼镜
描述性格的形容词
friendly 友好的
polite 有礼貌的
smart 聪明的
helpful 乐于助人的
kind 善良的
shy 腼腆的
quiet 安静的
happy 快乐的
full of energy 精力充沛的
ready to help others 乐于助人
兴趣爱好相关词汇
reading 阅读
music 音乐
science 科学
sport 运动
dancing 跳舞
swimming 游泳
playing the piano 弹钢琴
playing football 踢足球
Chinese chess 中国象棋
ping-pong 乒乓球
自我介绍常用名词
name 名字
age 年龄
class 班级
grade 年级
looks 外貌
character 性格
hobby 爱好
friend 朋友
2. 高频搭配
be good at ... 擅长……
be interested in ... 对……感兴趣
be full of energy 精力充沛
be ready to do sth 愿意做某事;准备好做某事
make friends with ... 与……交朋友
go by 叫作;被称为
enjoy doing sth 喜欢做某事
love doing sth 热爱做某事
at the weekend 在周末
3. 写作功能表达
表示自我介绍
My name is ... 我叫……
I am ... years old. 我……岁了。
I am in Class..., Grade... 我在……年级……班。
I go by ... 我叫……;你们可以叫我……
表示外貌描述
I am tall/short/slim. 我高/矮/苗条。
I have long/short hair. 我有长/短头发。
I wear glasses. 我戴眼镜。
表示性格与品质
I am friendly and polite. 我友好且有礼貌。
I am always ready to help others. 我总是乐于助人。
I am full of energy. 我精力充沛。
表示兴趣爱好
I like/enjoy/love ... 我喜欢……
My favourite hobby is ... 我最喜欢的爱好是……
I am interested in ... 我对……感兴趣。
I often ... after school. 我放学后经常……
表示交友意愿
I am happy to make friends with ... 我很高兴和……交朋友。
Do you want to be my friend? 你想成为我的朋友吗?
I would like to make new friends. 我想交新朋友。
三、黄金句型库
1. 开头句型
I am ... from Class 1, Grade 7.
我是来自七年级一班的……。
Let me introduce myself.
让我介绍一下我自己。
Hi, everyone! My name is ...
大家好!我叫……。
Good morning! I am ... Nice to meet you!
早上好!我是……。很高兴认识你们!
2. 主体句型
I am tall and slim. I have short hair.
我个子高,身材苗条。我留着短头发。
I am friendly and helpful.
我友好而且乐于助人。
I like reading and I read all kinds of books.
我喜欢阅读,我读各种各样的书。
I am interested in science and I want to be a scientist one day.
我对科学感兴趣,我想有一天成为一名科学家。
I often play Chinese chess with my dad at the weekend.
我周末经常和爸爸下中国象棋。
Sport helps me stay healthy and happy.
运动帮助我保持健康和快乐。
3. 结尾句型
I am happy to make friends with all of you.
我很高兴和你们所有人交朋友。
I hope we can be good friends.
我希望我们能成为好朋友。
Do you want to be my friend?
你想成为我的朋友吗?
I believe I will have a good time at this new school.
我相信我会在这所新学校过得很愉快。
4. 句型升级
基础句
升级句
I am Millie. 我是米莉。
Hello, I am Wang Xinyue, and I go by Millie. 大家好,我叫王欣悦,你们也可以叫我米莉。
I am tall. 我个子高。
I am tall and slim, and I have long hair. 我个子高,身材苗条,留着长头发。
I like reading. 我喜欢阅读。
I love reading and I read all kinds of books in my free time. 我热爱阅读,空闲时间读各种各样的书。
I am a good student. 我是一个好学生。
I am smart and always ready to help others. 我很聪明并且总是乐于助人。
I play chess. 我下象棋。
I enjoy playing Chinese chess with my dad at the weekend. 我喜欢周末和爸爸下中国象棋。
四、高分写作方法
典例精析
为了丰富学生的校园生活,阳光中学为学生们开设了一系列丰富多彩的社团。假如你是阳光中学七年级学生陈丽,请根据以下提示信息,写一封社团申请信。
要点:
1. How old are you? What are you like?
2. Which club would you like to join?
3. Why do you want to join this club?
要求:
1. 申请信内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 申请信中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名) 。
4. 词数:70左右。 (开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Dear teachers,
My name is Chen Li.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope I can join the club. Thank you very much!
Yours,
Chen Li
【审题构思】
先明确三点:写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。
内容上,题目给出三个必须涵盖的要点:年龄和性格、想加入哪个社团、加入的原因。时态上,介绍个人信息用一般现在时。结构上分三段:开头已给出,顺势自我介绍(年龄、性格);主体段说明想加入的社团及两个原因;结尾已给出,表达入社愿望。
【例文欣赏】
Dear teachers,
My name is Chen Li. I’m in Grade Seven. I’m 13 years old. I’m an outgoing and friendly girl. I like reading English books and listening to English songs in my free time. I would like to join the English Club for two reasons. First, I love English, but I don’t have much chance to practice speaking it. I hope to improve my English in the club. Second, I want to make more friends. We can learn from each other and have fun.
I hope I can join the club. Thank you very much!
Yours,
Chen Li
【亮点解析】
开篇自我介绍,信息集中。 “I'm in Grade Seven. I'm 13 years old. I'm an outgoing and friendly girl.”三句话依次交代了年级、年龄和性格特点,直接回应第一个要点。“I like reading English books and listening to English songs in my free time.”补充兴趣爱好,为下文申请英语社团做铺垫。
主题句统领全段,结构清晰。 “I would like to join the English Club for two reasons.”一句话直接回应“哪个社团”和“为什么”两个要点,并用“for two reasons”引出下文。读者一看便知接下来要读的是两个理由。
两个原因层次分明,从“解决问题”到“获得更多”。 第一个原因“I love English, but I don't have much chance to practice speaking it”——指出了自己热爱英语但缺少口语练习机会的痛点,加入社团是为了补足短板;第二个原因“I want to make more friends. We can learn from each other and have fun.”——从社交和共同学习的角度出发,希望收获更多。从“补短板”到“拓人脉”,由内而外,逻辑清晰。
语言得体,语气真诚。 全文人称使用准确(I),语气礼貌但不生硬。“I hope to improve my English”“I want to make more friends”“learn from each other and have fun”——表达的都是真实的学习需求和交友愿望,没有刻意拔高或说空话。结尾“I hope I can join the club. Thank you very much!”承接已给结尾,表达入社愿望并致谢,符合申请信的文体要求。
五、阶梯训练
(一)句子训练
Level 1 汉译英
1. 我叫王欣悦,你们也可以叫我米莉。
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2. 我个子高,身材苗条,留着长头发。
____________________________________________________________
3. 我友好而且有礼貌,总是乐于助人。
____________________________________________________________
4. 我对音乐感兴趣,我会弹钢琴。
____________________________________________________________
5. 我很高兴和你们所有人交朋友。
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Level 2 句型仿写(参照例句完成句子)
句型1:I am ...(介绍姓名与身份)
例句:I am Wang Xinyue from Class 1, Grade 7. 我是来自七年级一班的王欣悦。
(1)我是来自七年级一班的陈丹。
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(2)我是阳光中学的一名新生。
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句型2:I have ... / I wear ...(描述外貌)
例句:I have short hair and I wear glasses. 我留着短头发,戴眼镜。
(1)我个子高,留着短头发。
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(2)她个子矮,留着长头发,非常可爱。
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句型3:I am ...(描述性格品质)
例句:I am friendly and always ready to help others. 我很友好并且总是乐于助人。
(1)他很聪明并且总是精力充沛。
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(2)她很腼腆,但是很友善。
____________________________________________________________
句型4:I like / love / enjoy doing ...(描述兴趣爱好)
例句:I love reading and I read all kinds of books. 我热爱阅读,我读各种各样的书。
(1)我喜欢弹钢琴,我每天都练习。
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(2)她热爱跳舞,她每周都上舞蹈课。
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句型5:I am interested in ...(描述兴趣方向)
例句:I am interested in science and I want to be a scientist one day.
我对科学感兴趣,我想有一天成为一名科学家。
(1)我对音乐感兴趣,我想成为一名音乐老师。
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(2)他对运动感兴趣,他经常放学后踢足球。
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Level 3 句子升级
要求:参照下方示例,将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。
示例:
基础句:I am Millie. 我是米莉。
升级句:Hello, I am Wang Xinyue, and I go by Millie. 大家好,我叫王欣悦,你们也可以叫我米莉。
1. 基础句:I am tall. 我个子高。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
2. 基础句:I like reading. 我喜欢阅读。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
3. 基础句:I play chess. 我下象棋。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
4. 基础句:She is a good friend. 她是一个好朋友。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
5. 基础句:I want to make friends. 我想交朋友。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
6. 基础句:I am happy. 我很开心。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
(二)篇章训练
1.假设你叫李华,你在网上认识了一位英国笔友Tom,你想向他介绍自己。请你根据图片内容提示,用英文给Tom写一封邮件。
注意:1. 词数不少于60词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可在图片内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
Dear Tom,
I am glad to tell you something about myself.
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Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
Level 1 汉译英
1. I am Wang Xinyue, and I go by Millie.
2. I am tall and slim, and I have long hair.
3. I am friendly and polite, and I am always ready to help others.
4. I am interested in music, and I can play the piano.
5. I am happy to make friends with all of you.
Level 2 句型仿写
句型1
(1)I am Chen Dan from Class 1, Grade 7.
(2)I am a new student at Sunshine Middle School.
句型2
(1)I am tall and I have short hair.
(2)She is short and has long hair, and she is very cute.
句型3
(1)He is smart and always full of energy.
(2)She is shy, but she is very friendly.
句型4
(1)I like playing the piano and I practise every day.
(2)She loves dancing and she has dance classes every week.
句型5
(1)I am interested in music and I want to be a music teacher.
(2)He is interested in sport and he often plays football after school.
Level 3 句子升级
(以下为参考升级答案,其他合理升级也可接受)
1. 升级句:I am tall and slim, and I have long hair.
我个子高,身材苗条,留着长头发。
2. 升级句:I love reading and I read all kinds of books in my free time.
我热爱阅读,空闲时间读各种各样的书。
3. 升级句:I enjoy playing Chinese chess with my dad at the weekend.
我喜欢周末和爸爸下中国象棋。
4. 升级句:She is a kind and friendly girl, and she always helps others in need.
她是一个善良友好的女孩,总是帮助有需要的人。
5. 升级句:I am happy to make new friends and I hope we can be good friends.
我很高兴交新朋友,我希望我们能成为好朋友。
6. 升级句:I am happy to be at this new school because all my classmates are very friendly.
我很开心来到这所新学校,因为所有的同学都很友好。
篇章训练(参考范文)
Dear Tom,
I am glad to tell you something about myself. My name is Li Hua and I am 14 years old.
I am outgoing and helpful. I have many hobbies. I like reading books and playing basketball. Reading not only makes me smart, but also helps me learn more.
As for my dream, I want to be a doctor because I want to help sick people. What about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
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