摘要:
**基本信息**
以“明智用钱”为主题,构建“词汇-句型-篇章”三阶训练体系,融合功能表达与思维引导,实现语言能力与理财观念协同提升。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|写作素材库|主题词汇4类、搭配14组、功能表达4类|分类积累主题词汇,提炼高频搭配与功能句型|从基础词汇到情境表达,构建主题语言储备|
|黄金句型库|基础/升级句型15句|对比基础句与升级句,掌握句式拓展技巧|从简单句到复合句,实现表达精准化与丰富化|
|高分写作方法|1篇典例精析|审题三要素(内容/时态/结构)、亮点四策略(来源具体等)|以典例为载体,拆解写作逻辑链(引入-展开-总结)|
|阶梯训练|句子训练3级(汉译英等)、篇章训练1篇|分阶训练(句子构建-句型仿写-篇章创作)|从句子层面到篇章层面,实现能力逐级迁移|
内容正文:
Unit 7 Be wise with money
单元写作专项训练
一、单元核心信息
二、写作素材库
1. 主题词汇
金钱与交易相关名词
money 钱
pocket money 零花钱
budget 预算
bank 银行
account 账户
coin 硬币
key 钥匙
ring 环状物;圈形的东西
dollar 元(美国、加拿大等国货币单位)
pound 英镑
yuan 元
euro 欧元
yen 日元
rouble 卢布
price 价格
cost 花费
deal 交易
present 礼物
消费与理财相关动词
spend 花(钱)
pay 付款
save 储蓄;节省
cost 需付费;价钱为
manage 明智地使用;管理
cover 足以支付;够付
protect 保护;防护
buy 购买
相关名词
education 教育
flat 公寓
daily needs 日常需要
habit 习惯
beginning 开头;开端
matter 关乎……的事情;问题
survey 民意调查;概述
relative 亲戚
grandparent (外)祖父;(外)祖母
形容词与短语
expensive 昂贵的
lucky 带来好运的;幸运的
rainy 阴雨的
wise 明智的
daily 每日的
in need 在贫困中;在困难中
pay for 支付
a set of 一套;一副
in the hope of 希望
save for a rainy day 未雨绸缪
make a budget 做预算
2. 高频搭配
make a budget 做预算
save for a rainy day 未雨绸缪;以备不时之需
pay for 支付
manage money well 管理好钱财
spend ... on ... 在……上花费……
put ... in the bank 把……存入银行
cover one’s education 支付某人的教育费用
daily needs 日常需要
in need 在贫困中;在困难中
at the beginning of 在……开始时
a set of 一套;一副
protect ... from ... 保护……免受……
online red packet 网上红包
lucky money 压岁钱
make a budget for 为……做预算
3. 写作功能表达
描述理财方式
My parents manage money well. 我父母理财有方。
They make a budget every year. 他们每年做预算。
We need to cover ... first. 我们需要首先支付……
We spend about ... per cent on ... 我们花大约百分之……在……上。
描述金钱使用
I spend most of my money on ... 我把大部分钱花在……上。
I also use some money to ... 我也用一些钱来……
I save the rest in my bank account. 我把剩下的存入银行账户。
It is a good idea to save for a rainy day. 未雨绸缪是个好主意。
表达消费观念
It is important to save money. 省钱很重要。
I try to manage my money well. 我努力管好自己的钱。
It helps me have good spending habits. 它帮助我养成良好的消费习惯。
We should buy things we need. 我们应该买我们需要的东西。
询问与建议
Do you make a budget for your lucky money? 你为你的压岁钱做预算吗?
How do you spend your pocket money? 你如何花你的零花钱?
You should manage your money wisely. 你应该明智地管理你的钱财。
三、黄金句型库
1. 开头句型
Money plays an important role in our lives.
金钱在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。
Let me tell you how my family manages money.
让我告诉你我们家如何管理钱财。
I get some lucky money at the Spring Festival every year.
我每年春节都会得到一些压岁钱。
I try to manage my pocket money well.
我努力管好自己的零花钱。
2. 主体句型
My parents make a budget every year.
我的父母每年做预算。
We need to cover our education first.
我们需要首先支付教育费用。
We spend about 30 per cent on special things.
我们花大约百分之三十在特殊事物上。
I spend most of my lucky money on pens and books.
我把大部分压岁钱花在笔和书上。
I save the rest in my bank account.
我把剩下的存入银行账户。
It’s a good idea to save for a rainy day.
未雨绸缪是个好主意。
3. 结尾句型
I try to manage my money well.
我努力管好自己的钱。
It is good to save for a rainy day.
未雨绸缪是好事。
I hope I can develop good spending habits.
我希望我能养成良好的消费习惯。
Do you have good habits with money?
你有良好的理财习惯吗?
4. 句型升级
基础句
升级句
I have pocket money. 我有零花钱。
I have some pocket money and I want to manage it well. 我有一些零花钱,我想把它管理好。
I buy books. 我买书。
I spend most of my lucky money on pens, books and food. 我把大部分压岁钱花在笔、书和食物上。
I save money. 我省钱。
I save some money in my bank account for a rainy day. 我在银行账户里存一些钱以备不时之需。
My parents make a budget. 我父母做预算。
My parents make a budget every year to manage our money well. 我父母每年做预算来管好我们的钱。
Money is important. 钱很重要。
Money plays an important role in our lives, so we should be wise with it. 金钱在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色,所以我们应该理性对待它。
四、高分写作方法
典例精析
假设你们学校英文报正在举办以“明智用钱”为主题的征文活动,请根据以下问题,以“How to use pocket money wisely”为题,写一篇英语短文投稿。
1. How do you get your pocket money?
2. What do you usually do with it?
3. What advice do you have for your classmates?
要求:1. 短文需包含所有问题要点,并适当发挥;2. 词数100左右。
How to use pocket money wisely
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【审题构思】
先明确三点:写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。
内容上,题目给出三个必须回答的问题:零花钱的来源、如何使用零花钱、给同学的建议。时态上,描述自己的日常习惯用一般现在时,提出建议可用情态动词(should, can)或祈使句。结构上分三段:第一段回答零花钱来源和用途,第二段给出具体建议,第三段总结明智用钱的意义。
【例文欣赏】
How to use pocket money wisely
I get my pocket money from my parents every month by helping with housework like cleaning the room and taking out the trash. I usually save half of it in my bank account, and spend the other half on books and stationery. Sometimes I also buy small gifts for my friends on their birthdays.
I think we should make a plan before spending our pocket money. Don't buy useless things like expensive snacks or toys. Instead, we can save money for something important or donate a little to charity. Learning to use money wisely can help us develop good habits for the future.
【亮点解析】
来源交代具体,体现劳动意识。 “by helping with housework like cleaning the room and taking out the trash”不仅回答了“从哪里来”,还解释了“怎么挣来的”——通过做家务。两个具体家务示例让文章更有说服力,也暗示了“钱来之不易”的道理,为后文的“明智用钱”做了铺垫。
用途分配清晰,有规划意识。 “save half of it in my bank account, and spend the other half on books and stationery”——储蓄和消费各占一半,“bank account”体现了储蓄的正式性,“books and stationery”体现了消费的合理性。“Sometimes I also buy small gifts for my friends on their birthdays.”补充了社交支出,让用途更加全面。
建议具体可操作,正反结合。 “make a plan before spending”是总体原则;“Don't buy useless things like expensive snacks or toys”是反面建议,列举具体不该买的东西;“save money for something important or donate a little to charity”是正面建议,给出两个具体方向——储蓄和捐款。正反对比让建议更有说服力。
结尾点明意义,有高度。 “Learning to use money wisely can help us develop good habits for the future.”将“明智用钱”从眼前行为提升到“为未来培养好习惯”的高度,点明了这项能力的长远价值,而不仅仅是“省钱”本身。
五、阶梯训练
(一)句子训练
Level 1 汉译英
1. 我有一些零花钱,我想把它管理好。
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2. 我的父母每年做预算来管好我们的钱。
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3. 我每年春节都会得到一些压岁钱。
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4. 我计划把大部分钱花在学习用品上,把剩下的存起来。
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5. 未雨绸缪是个好主意,所以我每月存一些钱。
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Level 2 句型仿写(参照例句完成句子)
句型1:I have some ... and I want to ...(描述拥有与意愿)
例句:I have some pocket money and I want to manage it well.
我有一些零花钱,我想把它管理好。
(1)我有一些压岁钱,我想好好利用它。
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(2)我有一些时间和精力,我想合理使用它们。
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句型2:... make a budget ...(描述做预算)
例句:My parents make a budget every year. 我的父母每年做预算。
(1)我每个月为我的零花钱做预算。
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(2)我们为这次旅行做了预算。
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句型3:I spend ... on ...(描述花费)
例句:I spend most of my lucky money on pens and books.
我把大部分压岁钱花在笔和书上。
(1)我把大部分零花钱花在小吃和文具上。
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(2)她把钱花在衣服和音乐上。
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句型4:I save ... in ...(描述储蓄)
例句:I save the rest in my bank account. 我把剩下的存入银行账户。
(1)我每个月把一些钱存入银行。
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(2)她把一半的钱存入储蓄账户。
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句型5:It is a good idea to ...(描述好主意)
例句:It is a good idea to save for a rainy day. 未雨绸缪是个好主意。
(1)为你的压岁钱做预算是个好主意。
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(2)每个月存一些钱是个好主意。
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Level 3 句子升级
要求:参照下方示例,将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。
示例:
基础句:I have pocket money. 我有零花钱。
升级句:I have some pocket money and I want to manage it well.
我有一些零花钱,我想把它管理好。
1. 基础句:I buy books. 我买书。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
2. 基础句:I save money. 我省钱。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
3. 基础句:My parents make a budget. 我父母做预算。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
4. 基础句:Money is important. 钱很重要。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
5. 基础句:I help others. 我帮助别人。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
6. 基础句:I have good habits. 我有好的习惯。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
(二)篇章训练
假设你们学校英文报正在举办以“合理用钱”为主题的征文活动,请根据以下问题,以“Be wise with my pocket money”为题,写一篇英语短文投稿。
1. How do you get your pocket money?
2. How do you usually spend or save it?
3. Why do you think it’s important to be wise with money?
要求:
1. 短文需包含所有问题要点,并适当发挥;
2. 词数:100左右。
Be wise with my pocket money
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参考答案
Level 1 汉译英
1. I have some pocket money and I want to manage it well.
2. My parents make a budget every year to manage our money well.
3. I get some lucky money at the Spring Festival every year.
4. I plan to spend most of my money on school supplies and save the rest.
5. It is a good idea to save for a rainy day, so I save some money every month.
Level 2 句型仿写
句型1
(1)I have some lucky money and I want to make good use of it.
(2)I have some time and energy and I want to use them wisely.
句型2
(1)I make a budget for my pocket money every month.
(2)We made a budget for this trip.
句型3
(1)I spend most of my pocket money on snacks and stationery.
(2)She spends money on clothes and music.
句型4
(1)I save some money in the bank every month.
(2)She saves half of her money in her savings account.
句型5
(1)It is a good idea to make a budget for your lucky money.
(2)It is a good idea to save some money every month.
Level 3 句子升级
(以下为参考升级答案,其他合理升级也可接受)
1. 升级句:I spend most of my lucky money on pens, books and food because I need them for my study and daily life.
我把大部分压岁钱花在笔、书和食物上,因为我学习和日常生活需要它们。
2. 升级句:I save some money in my bank account because it is important to save for a rainy day, just as my mum tells me.
我在银行账户里存一些钱,因为未雨绸缪很重要,就像我妈妈告诉我的那样。
3. 升级句:My parents make a budget every year to cover our daily needs, education and other important things.
我的父母每年做预算来支付我们的日常需求、教育和其他重要事项。
4. 升级句:Money plays an important role in our lives, so we should be wise with it and save for a rainy day.
金钱在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色,所以我们应该理性对待它,未雨绸缪。
5. 升级句:I use some of my lucky money to help children in need every year, and it makes me feel happy.
我每年用一部分压岁钱帮助贫困儿童,这让我感到快乐。
6. 升级句:At the beginning of each year, I make a budget for my lucky money. It helps me have good spending habits.
每年年初,我为我的压岁钱做预算。这帮助我养成良好的消费习惯。
篇章训练(参考范文)
Be wise with my pocket money
I get my pocket money from my parents every month by finishing my homework on time and helping with housework. I don’t spend it all at once. Instead, I save half of it in my piggy bank. I use the other half to buy stationery and sometimes my favorite snacks.
I think it’s important to be wise with money because it teaches me to be responsible. Saving money also helps me prepare for unexpected needs, like buying a new book or donating to people in trouble. Good money habits will benefit me for a lifetime, and I’ll keep practicing them.
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