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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
I recently visited the Boston Museum of Fine Arts — my first visit to an art museum in several years. When I left the museum, I felt my admiration for fine art — from painting to sculpting to sketching — grow ten times.
However, with the increasing use of AI, the field of art has lost some of its authenticity. I find artists on the Internet who use generative AI to create drawings but claim the art as their own.
While AI art can sometimes look passable and can occasionally even trick skilled artists, it’s all a hollow copy of human creativity. The fact is that feeding instructions into a computer and watching a robot spit out images isn’t the same as being an artist.
Knowing that a real human placed every touch with a specific story in mind is what makes works like Leonardo DaVinci’s iconic “Mona Lisa” so memorable. Mona Lisa was a real woman with a real story. And AI can never replace art that tells a story. Art should be a labor of love. Its story and process are as much a part of the artwork as the art piece itself.
My visit to the Boston Museum of Fine Arts helped me realize that art museums are now more important than ever. Valuing the rich history of human‑created artwork is essential in a world where it is becoming increasingly filled with soulless, machine‑created works. So whenever you have the chance, go visit your local art museum. You’ll appreciate the heights that human creativity can reach.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
Days later, I shared my museum experience with my art‑loving classmate Tom.
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Paragraph 2:
Encouraged by me, Tom took the chance and visited the city art museum on the weekend.
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一、文本分析
1.角色
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2.视角
第________人称
3.时空线
I paid a visit to the Boston Museum of Fine Arts and loved human fine art--- _________________ --- AI art became popular but lacks authenticity and real creativity--- _________________ --- Human art contains real stories and sincere feelings that AI can never copy--- _________________ --- I realized the importance of human art and art museums
4. 细节问答
What did the author gain from visiting the art museum?:___________________________________
What is the author’s opinion on AI art?:_________________________________
What makes classic human art works unforgettable?:________________________________________________
What is the core difference between human art and AI art?:__________________________________________
Why are art museums increasingly important nowadays?:_____________________________________________
What suggestion did the author put forward?:_________________________________________________
What does the story tell us?:________________________________________________
5.情节线
作者参观波士顿美术馆,深深折服于人文艺术的魅力→_________________ →当下AI艺术盛行,空洞无内核,缺少真实创作温度→对比人类艺术饱含故事与真情,无可替代→_________________ →作者领悟美术馆的价值,倡导大家走进美术馆、珍视人文创作→_________________ →(续写)作者与热爱艺术的同学Tom分享感悟与见解→(续写)Tom深受启发前往美术馆参观,收获成长与艺术新认知
6.情感线
I:admiring and amazed→___________→sober and insightful→___________→willing to share and promote(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8. 句式
宾语从句;定语从句;状语从句;非谓语;让步状语从句
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9. 本文主题
艺术感悟类:_______________________________________
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1 衔接句1——What did the author share and how did Tom respond at first?
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Paragraph 2 衔接句2——What changes did Tom have after visiting the museum and what conclusion did they draw?
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三.段落续写框架
第一段:几天后,我向热爱艺术的同学Tom分享了我的美术馆见闻。
→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________;
第二段:在我的鼓励下,Tom周末前往市美术馆参观。
→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。
四.段落续写
Days later, I shared my museum experience with my art‑loving classmate Tom.
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Encouraged by me, Tom took the chance and visited the city art museum on the weekend.
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参考答案
一、文本分析
1.角色
作者:热爱人文艺术、见解深刻、善于思考、乐于分享观点的学生;Tom:热爱艺术、乐于接受新认知、主动感悟艺术真谛的同学。
2.视角
第一人称
3.时空线
I paid a visit to the Boston Museum of Fine Arts and loved human fine art--- I was deeply impressed by diverse authentic human art works--- AI art became popular but lacks authenticity and real creativity--- AI art is only hollow copy without stories and true feelings--- Human art contains real stories and sincere feelings that AI can never copy--- I realized the importance of human art and art museums--- I advocated appreciating real human art in museums
4. 细节问答
What did the author gain from visiting the art museum? :She greatly improved her admiration for authentic human fine art.
What is the author’s opinion on AI art?:AI art is hollow and soulless, merely copying images without real creativity and stories.
What makes classic human art works unforgettable?:Every stroke is created by humans with specific stories and sincere emotions.
What is the core difference between human art and AI art?:Human art is a labor of love with unique stories and creative processes, while AI art has no soul or true feelings.
Why are art museums increasingly important nowadays?:They preserve precious human-created art and help people resist soulless machine-made works.
What suggestion did the author put forward?:She suggested people visit local art museums to appreciate human creativity.
What does the story tell us?:True art lies in human emotions, stories and creative efforts, which can never be replaced by AI technology.
5.情节线
作者参观波士顿美术馆,深深折服于人文艺术的魅力→亲身感受绘画、雕塑等真人创作艺术的独特温度→当下AI艺术盛行,空洞无内核,缺少真实创作温度→AI作品仅为机械复刻,无法比肩饱含心血的人类创作→对比人类艺术饱含故事与真情,无可替代→作者领悟美术馆的价值,倡导大家走进美术馆、珍视人文创作→决心分享艺术感悟,传递正确艺术认知→(续写)作者与热爱艺术的同学Tom分享感悟与见解,纠正AI艺术误区→(续写)Tom深受启发前往美术馆参观,真切感悟人文艺术魅力,树立正确艺术观
6.情感线
I:admiring and amazed--- clear-headed and rational--- sober and insightful--- willing to share and enlighten others
Tom:fond of general art--- confused about AI art--- shocked and moved--- insightful and respectful
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:作者参观美术馆后深刻认识到,AI艺术空洞无魂,唯有饱含人类真情与故事的创作才是真正的艺术,随后主动向同学分享感悟,一同感悟人文艺术的独特价值。
英文:After visiting the art museum, the author realized that soulless AI art could not replace authentic human art with sincere stories and creativity. She shared the insight with her classmate and helped him understand the true meaning of art.
8. 句式
让步状语从句:While AI art can sometimes look passable, it is only a hollow copy.
表语从句:The fact is that AI creation lacks real human thinking and emotions.
宾语从句:I felt my admiration for fine art grow after I visited the museum.
定语从句:Art works that carry human stories are the most precious.
非谓语动词:Valuing human-created artwork is essential in the AI era.
9. 本文主题
艺术感悟类:艺术的核心是人文温度与真情故事,科技无法替代人类的创造力与情感沉淀。
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1 衔接句1:Tom used to be crazy about convenient AI art and held different opinions, so I patiently shared my thoughts and museum experiences with him.
Paragraph 2 衔接句2:Deeply struck by the authentic art works, Tom finally understood why human art was irreplaceable.
三.段落续写框架
第一段:几天后,我向热爱艺术的同学Tom分享了我的美术馆见闻。
→①Tom此前偏爱便捷的AI艺术,对人文艺术认知浅薄→②我耐心讲述真人创作的温度、故事与艺术真谛→③Tom认真倾听,心生好奇,决定亲身感受;
第二段:在我的鼓励下,Tom周末前往市美术馆参观。
→①他近距离欣赏各类人工艺术作品,深受震撼→②彻底明白AI艺术的空洞与人文艺术的珍贵→③我们达成共识:真情与创意才是艺术的灵魂。
四.段落续写范文(150词左右)
Days later, I shared my museum experience with my art‑loving classmate Tom. Tom used to be fascinated by AI art for its convenience and delicate appearance. Hearing my sincere thoughts, he was thoughtful. I told him that true art was not perfect images but the creator’s emotions, experiences and unique stories hidden behind every stroke. I explained that AI could only copy existing works instead of creating touching art with souls. Tom gradually changed his previous opinion and became eager to feel authentic human art in person.
Encouraged by me, Tom took the chance and visited the city art museum on the weekend. Wandering among various hand-made art works, Tom was deeply amazed by the creators’ unique imagination and sincere feelings. He realized that those vivid works contained endless stories and hard work, which no AI product could match. After the visit, he told me that he would no longer blindly pursue AI art. Instead, he would cherish and learn traditional human art, understanding that true art is always a precious labor of love and irreplaceable human creativity.
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