Unit 4 课时4 Section 3 Writing（分层作业）英语新教材沪教版九年级上册

**基本信息** 初中英语Unit 4 Writing同步练，分层设计科学，从词汇句型夯实到语篇应用进阶，适配新授课知识巩固与能力提升，培养语言能力和思维品质。 **分层设计** |层次|知识覆盖|设计特色| |----|----------|----------| |A组巩固过关|核心词汇、基础句型及短语|短语填空等题型强化基础记忆，聚焦单元核心语言点| |B组能力进阶|功能句型（开头/中间/结尾）及段落组织|句型分类与衔接词训练，提升表达逻辑与连贯性| |C组思维拔高|话题分析、写作框架及语篇实战|中考题型（建议信、征文）演练，培养问题解决与语篇构建能力|

Unit 4 A better me Section 3 Writing分层练习 A组 巩固过关 C组 思维拔高 B组 能力进阶 拓展 链接中考 【短语积累】 1 / 9 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 【答案】1.in charge of 2.get sb. into trouble. 3.focus on 4.be angry with 5.feel really embarrassed 6.drive sb. mad 7.have a habit of 8.get on well with 9.hit it off with 10.be worried about 11.fall out with friends 12.be in the same situation 13.learn to relax yourself 14.arrange time well 15.avoid staying up late 16. turn to ...for help 17.never keep bad feelings to yourself 18.balance study and rest 【句式积累】 一、开头 引出对方的问题。表达同理心与理解 I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting on with your sister. It is not easy to be a new student in a school. Many students feel stressed in school and have trouble dealing with their growing problems. I understand how you feel. / I know it's not easy to... When I was a teenager, I was in the same situation as you. It is common for teenagers to meet such problems, so don’t be too upset. 二、中间: 提供具体且可行的建议 To solve these problems, I have some useful suggestions for you. First of all, you should try your best to relax yourself. Besides, it’s a good idea to communicate with your parents or teachers. What’s more, you can take up hobbies to reduce your pressure. Last but not least, you’d better make a plan to manage your time well. 三、结尾: 表达祝愿 I hope my advice can help you solve your problems. I believe you will become better if you follow these suggestions. Looking forward to your good news. /reply 【实战演练一】 Dear Alice, I am writing to tell you some ways on how to release pressure. I read your Moments. And I just want to remind you pressure is a serious problem in our life, nobody is an exception. I know you are under too much pressure. Maybe you don’t get on well with your classmates. Maybe your parents expect too much which makes you feel stressed out. Maybe you worry about the mid-term exam because of the lack of confidence. Here are some suggestions for you to release pressure. I think you can communicate with your classmates and parents. Besides, I suggest taking part in more school activities. It's also helpful. Of course, you need to relax yourself on weekends by hanging out with friends, seeing a movie or having a meal outside and so on. All in all, less pressure, better life! Best wishes to you! Yours, Mandy 【实战演练二】 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, Most of the students will meet this kind of problem, so you are not alone. Here are some suggestions. First, it’s harmful to Ben’s health if he stays up late to play online games. To help him develop a healthy hobby and lessen his interest in online games, you can start with doing some sports with him. In this way, your friend can be more focused in the class. Besides, you had better help Ben with his homework instead of just letting him copy yours. You can suggest him listening carefully to the teachers during classes so that he can finish homework on his own. If you have already done these but your friend is still angry with you, you can ask adults for help, such as teachers and parents. In a word, it is necessary for you to try some effective ways that won’t hurt both of you. Yours, Aunt Linda 【实战演练三】 【答案】 例文       Recently, news about the conflicts between parents and children frequently appear on the media. Why are the relationship between parents and children becoming so serious? It’s my pleasure to share my opinions with you.           For one thing, they are lack of communication, so it’s of great importance for parents to create more chances to talk with their children so that they can understand each other better. For another, because parents are always strict with their children and expect too much from them, it will cause misunderstanding between them.Therefore, it’s necessary for parents to build up friendly and close relationship with their kids before expressing their expectations. Besides, parents’ bad habits will influence their children badly. Thus, setting good examples for children is helpful to gradually develop their good habits. Last but not least, many parents are so busy at work that they don’t have time to spend with their children. So it’s vital for parents to spare more time for their children to build up close relationship.       In short, to solve the problems, love and communication are of great significance. 【实战演练四】 Don’t worry! It is common for teenagers to have trouble getting on well with their parents. The reason for these problems may be that you are both busy and not communicating with each other. It may also be because parents set many rules. Finally, it may be a generation gap caused by age issues. I suggest you first talk to your parents at their convenience. Secondly, if the rules set by your parents are unreasonable, you should also share your thoughts. Finally, everything has two sides, and it is correct for everyone to have different opinions. As long as it is right, we should accept it seriously. I hope my suggestions are helpful to you. $Unit 4 A better me Section 3 Writing分层练习 A组 巩固过关 C组 思维拔高 B组 能力进阶 拓展 链接中考 词汇 Respond v. （ 口头或书面） 回答 * sympathy n.同情 advice column答问专栏 句型 1.I’m sorry to hear that your sister is driving you mad. 听说你妹妹把你逼得快要疯了，我很同情。 2. When I was a teenager, I was in the same situation as you. 我十几岁的时候，也和你有过一样的处境。 3. My advice is that you try to help your sister grow up我的建议是你试着帮助你妹妹懂事成长。 4. This takes time, so you have to be patient. 这需要时间，所以你得有耐心。 【短语积累】 1 / 9 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.____________________负责；掌管 2. ____________________使某人陷入麻烦 3. ____________________专注于 4. ____________________对…生气 5. ____________________感到十分尴尬 6. ____________________令某人恼火 7. ____________________养做某事的习惯 8. ____________________和……和睦相处 9. ____________________与某人相处投缘 10. ____________________对…感到焦虑 1. ____________________负责；掌管 2. ____________________使某人陷入麻烦 3. ____________________专注于 4. ____________________对…生气 5. ____________________感到十分尴尬 6. ____________________令某人恼火 7. ____________________养做某事的习惯 8. ____________________和……和睦相处 9. ____________________与某人相处投缘 10. ____________________对…感到焦虑 【句式积累】 一、开头 引出对方的问题。表达同理心与理解 1.听说你和妹妹相处不好 ，我很遗憾。 2.在一所学校做新生不容易。 3.很多学生感到压力大，难以处理成长中的烦恼。 4.我懂你的感受。我知道…… 这件事并不容易。 5.我年少时，也和你有过一样的处境。 6.青少年遇到这类问题很正常，不用太难过。 二、中间: 提供具体且可行的建议 1.为了解决这些问题，我给你一些有用的建议。【总起建议句】 2.首先，你应该尽力放松自己。 3.此外，和父母老师交流是个好办法。 4.而且，你可以培养爱好来减轻压力。 5.最后，你最好制定计划合理安排时间。 三、结尾: 表达祝愿 1.希望我的建议能帮你解决问题。 2.如果你采纳这些建议，一定会变得更好。 3.期待你的好消息(回复）。 话题分析 问题及建议 本单元主要话题是青少年常见问题与解决方法 ，相关写作题目可延伸为“给朋友的一封建议信”“如何应对学习压力”“解决与父母的矛盾”等。命题内容以应用写作为主 ，要求先表达对对方问题的理解和同情 ，然后给出 2-3 条具体 、可行的建议 ，最后表达祝愿。写作时应该运用本单元学到的关于问题与建议的材料。注意语气礼貌 、真诚 ，建议要具有可操作性。 ◆ 一、按照邮件格式，写好收件人、主题和称呼，开头表达对对方问题的理解和同情。 ◆ 二、正文分点给出 2-3 条具体、可行的建议，每条建议说明理由。 ◆ 三、结尾表达祝愿，希望建议能有所帮助，期待对方的回复。 写作框架 写作部分 核心内容 推荐时态 连接词/过渡语 开头 问候与理解 邮件格式（收件人、主题 、称呼，表达对对方问题的理解和同情 一般现在时 I'm sorry to hear that. It is not easy to deal with. I understand how you feel... 中间 给出建议 分点给出 2-3 条具体建议 ，说明每条建议的理由 一般现在时 First, I think you should. Second, why don't you. Finally, you could also… This will help you... 结尾 祝愿与期待 表达祝愿 ，希望建议能有所帮助 ，期待回复 一般现在时 I hope these suggestions will be helpful, Best wishes, I'm looking forward to your reply... 提建议万能句型 1.You should（are supposed to）… 你应该…… 2.It’s a good idea to… …… 是个好办法 3.You’d better… 你最好…… 4.Why not…? 为什么不……？ 5.It’s helpful to… …… 会很有帮助 6.You’d better…..你最好 【实战演练一】 假如你是Mandy，你的好友Alice在微信朋友圈发文说最近很烦恼，请你给她写一封email，鼓励她振作起来。提示： 1、分析Alice不开心的原因（是否和同学相处不好、父母是否要求过高） 2、给她一些建议减少压力（多和父母沟通、多参加学校文体活动、业余时间多放松自己） 3、给她美好的祝福 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【实战演练二】 《校园树洞》栏目Aunt Linda收到一封求助信，以下是她在信上做的标注。请根据以下要点提示，帮助Aunt Linda写一封回信。 Dear Aunt Linda, I am worried about my best friend Ben. He plays online games until midnight. He feels tired in class and learns little. He always asks me to lend him the homework to copy it. If I don’t, he gets angry with me. What should I do? Yours, Mike 回信内容： 1. 对Mike的烦恼表示理解； 2. 结合信上的问题提出至少3条建议。 注意：要求词数80—120词左右，己给出的部分不算入总词数。 Dear Mike, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Aunt Linda 【实战演练三】 近期，关于家庭父母与孩子间冲突的新闻频现媒体。针对这一现象，某英文报社就“如何处理父母与孩子之间的矛盾”发起了一个专题征文活动。假设你是李华，请根据下表中的内容提示，结合你自己的观点，用英语写一篇小短文，发表在学校“英语角”上。 原因 解决办法 1. 父母与孩子之间缺少交流与沟通; 2. 父母对孩子期待过高，过分严格; 3. 父母的一些坏习惯严重影响了孩子; 4. …… 1. 加强交流与沟通，消除误解; 2. 建立友好、亲密的亲子关系; 3. 树立榜样，培养良好习惯; 4. …… 写作要求： 1. 包含所有提示内容，并可做适当发挥。 2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，意思连贯，书写规范。 3. 字数：80字左右，短文的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：misunderstanding n. 误解    develop v. 培养    badly influence 严重影响 be lack of 缺少    build up建立    set good examples    树立榜样    expect too much期待过高 Recently, news about the conflicts between parents and children frequently appear on the media. Why are the relationship between parents and children becoming so serious? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【实战演练四】 步入初三，学生与家长们都倍感压力，在学习与生活方面都容易发生争吵。假设你是李华，你的好朋友Jack就有这方面的烦恼，他给你写信说他跟父母关系不好，并向你寻求帮助。请你根据以下要点给Jack回信，给他一些关于如何与父母沟通的建议。 一、分析可能出现问题的诱因 1.彼此都很忙碌，没有沟通 2.父母制定很多规矩 3.请自行发挥一点 二、提出与各诱因相对应的解决措施 1.在父母方便的时候和他们谈谈 2.请自行发挥至少一点 要求：100 词左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数内，可适当增加细节。 Dear Jack, Don’t worry! It is common for teenagers to have trouble getting on well with their parents. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $Unit 4 A better me Section 3 Writing分层练习 A组 巩固过关 C组 思维拔高 B组 能力进阶 拓展 链接中考 词汇 Respond v. （ 口头或书面） 回答 * sympathy n.同情 advice column答问专栏 句型 1.I’m sorry to hear that your sister is driving you mad. 听说你妹妹把你逼得快要疯了，我很同情。 2. When I was a teenager, I was in the same situation as you. 我十几岁的时候，也和你有过一样的处境。 3. My advice is that you try to help your sister grow up我的建议是你试着帮助你妹妹懂事成长。 4. This takes time, so you have to be patient. 这需要时间，所以你得有耐心。 【短语积累】 1 / 9 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.____________________负责；掌管 2. ____________________使某人陷入麻烦 3. ____________________专注于 4. ____________________对…生气 5. ____________________感到十分尴尬 6. ____________________令某人恼火 7. ____________________养做某事的习惯 8. ____________________和……和睦相处 9. ____________________与某人相处投缘 10. ____________________对…感到焦虑 1. ____________________负责；掌管 2. ____________________使某人陷入麻烦 3. ____________________专注于 4. ____________________对…生气 5. ____________________感到十分尴尬 6. ____________________令某人恼火 7. ____________________养做某事的习惯 8. ____________________和……和睦相处 9. ____________________与某人相处投缘 10. ____________________对…感到焦虑 【答案】1.in charge of 2.get sb. into trouble. 3.focus on 4.be angry with 5.feel really embarrassed 6.drive sb. mad 7.have a habit of 8.get on well with 9.hit it off with 10.be worried about 11.fall out with friends 12.be in the same situation 13.learn to relax yourself 14.arrange time well 15.avoid staying up late 16. turn to ...for help 17.never keep bad feelings to yourself 18.balance study and rest 【句式积累】 一、开头 引出对方的问题。表达同理心与理解 1.听说你和妹妹相处不好 ，我很遗憾。 I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting on with your sister. 2.在一所学校做新生不容易。 It is not easy to be a new student in a school. 3.很多学生感到压力大，难以处理成长中的烦恼。 Many students feel stressed in school and have trouble dealing with their growing problems. 4.我懂你的感受。我知道…… 这件事并不容易。 I understand how you feel. / I know it's not easy to... 5.我年少时，也和你有过一样的处境。 When I was a teenager, I was in the same situation as you. 6.青少年遇到这类问题很正常，不用太难过。 It is common for teenagers to meet such problems, so don’t be too upset. 二、中间: 提供具体且可行的建议 1.为了解决这些问题，我给你一些有用的建议。【总起建议句】 To solve these problems, I have some useful suggestions for you. 2.首先，你应该尽力放松自己。 First of all, you should try your best to relax yourself. 3.此外，和父母老师交流是个好办法。 Besides, it’s a good idea to communicate with your parents or teachers. 4.而且，你可以培养爱好来减轻压力。 What’s more, you can take up hobbies to reduce your pressure. 5.最后，你最好制定计划合理安排时间。 Last but not least, you’d better make a plan to manage your time well. 三、结尾: 表达祝愿 1.希望我的建议能帮你解决问题。 I hope my advice can help you solve your problems. 2.如果你采纳这些建议，一定会变得更好。 I believe you will become better if you follow these suggestions. 3.期待你的好消息(回复）。 Looking forward to your good news. /reply 话题分析 问题及建议 本单元主要话题是青少年常见问题与解决方法 ，相关写作题目可延伸为“给朋友的一封建议信”“如何应对学习压力”“解决与父母的矛盾”等。命题内容以应用写作为主 ，要求先表达对对方问题的理解和同情 ，然后给出 2-3 条具体 、可行的建议 ，最后表达祝愿。写作时应该运用本单元学到的关于问题与建议的材料。注意语气礼貌 、真诚 ，建议要具有可操作性。 ◆ 一、按照邮件格式，写好收件人、主题和称呼，开头表达对对方问题的理解和同情。 ◆ 二、正文分点给出 2-3 条具体、可行的建议，每条建议说明理由。 ◆ 三、结尾表达祝愿，希望建议能有所帮助，期待对方的回复。 写作框架 写作部分 核心内容 推荐时态 连接词/过渡语 开头 问候与理解 邮件格式（收件人、主题 、称呼，表达对对方问题的理解和同情 一般现在时 I'm sorry to hear that. It is not easy to deal with. I understand how you feel... 中间 给出建议 分点给出 2-3 条具体建议 ，说明每条建议的理由 一般现在时 First, I think you should. Second, why don't you. Finally, you could also… This will help you... 结尾 祝愿与期待 表达祝愿 ，希望建议能有所帮助 ，期待回复 一般现在时 I hope these suggestions will be helpful, Best wishes, I'm looking forward to your reply... 提建议万能句型 1.You should（are supposed to）… 你应该…… 2.It’s a good idea to… …… 是个好办法 3.You’d better… 你最好…… 4.Why not…? 为什么不……？ 5.It’s helpful to… …… 会很有帮助 6.You’d better…..你最好 【实战演练一】 假如你是Mandy，你的好友Alice在微信朋友圈发文说最近很烦恼，请你给她写一封email，鼓励她振作起来。提示： 1、分析Alice不开心的原因（是否和同学相处不好、父母是否要求过高） 2、给她一些建议减少压力（多和父母沟通、多参加学校文体活动、业余时间多放松自己） 3、给她美好的祝福 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dear Alice, I am writing to tell you some ways on how to release pressure. I read your Moments. And I just want to remind you pressure is a serious problem in our life, nobody is an exception. I know you are under too much pressure. Maybe you don’t get on well with your classmates. Maybe your parents expect too much which makes you feel stressed out. Maybe you worry about the mid-term exam because of the lack of confidence. Here are some suggestions for you to release pressure. I think you can communicate with your classmates and parents. Besides, I suggest taking part in more school activities. It's also helpful. Of course, you need to relax yourself on weekends by hanging out with friends, seeing a movie or having a meal outside and so on. All in all, less pressure, better life! Best wishes to you! Yours, Mandy 【实战演练二】 《校园树洞》栏目Aunt Linda收到一封求助信，以下是她在信上做的标注。请根据以下要点提示，帮助Aunt Linda写一封回信。 Dear Aunt Linda, I am worried about my best friend Ben. He plays online games until midnight. He feels tired in class and learns little. He always asks me to lend him the homework to copy it. If I don’t, he gets angry with me. What should I do? Yours, Mike 回信内容： 1. 对Mike的烦恼表示理解； 2. 结合信上的问题提出至少3条建议。 注意：要求词数80—120词左右，己给出的部分不算入总词数。 Dear Mike, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Aunt Linda 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, Most of the students will meet this kind of problem, so you are not alone. Here are some suggestions. First, it’s harmful to Ben’s health if he stays up late to play online games. To help him develop a healthy hobby and lessen his interest in online games, you can start with doing some sports with him. In this way, your friend can be more focused in the class. Besides, you had better help Ben with his homework instead of just letting him copy yours. You can suggest him listening carefully to the teachers during classes so that he can finish homework on his own. If you have already done these but your friend is still angry with you, you can ask adults for help, such as teachers and parents. In a word, it is necessary for you to try some effective ways that won’t hurt both of you. Yours, Aunt Linda 【实战演练三】 近期，关于家庭父母与孩子间冲突的新闻频现媒体。针对这一现象，某英文报社就“如何处理父母与孩子之间的矛盾”发起了一个专题征文活动。假设你是李华，请根据下表中的内容提示，结合你自己的观点，用英语写一篇小短文，发表在学校“英语角”上。 原因 解决办法 1. 父母与孩子之间缺少交流与沟通; 2. 父母对孩子期待过高，过分严格; 3. 父母的一些坏习惯严重影响了孩子; 4. …… 1. 加强交流与沟通，消除误解; 2. 建立友好、亲密的亲子关系; 3. 树立榜样，培养良好习惯; 4. …… 写作要求： 1. 包含所有提示内容，并可做适当发挥。 2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，意思连贯，书写规范。 3. 字数：80字左右，短文的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：misunderstanding n. 误解    develop v. 培养    badly influence 严重影响 be lack of 缺少    build up建立    set good examples    树立榜样    expect too much期待过高 Recently, news about the conflicts between parents and children frequently appear on the media. Why are the relationship between parents and children becoming so serious? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文       Recently, news about the conflicts between parents and children frequently appear on the media. Why are the relationship between parents and children becoming so serious? It’s my pleasure to share my opinions with you.           For one thing, they are lack of communication, so it’s of great importance for parents to create more chances to talk with their children so that they can understand each other better. For another, because parents are always strict with their children and expect too much from them, it will cause misunderstanding between them.Therefore, it’s necessary for parents to build up friendly and close relationship with their kids before expressing their expectations. Besides, parents’ bad habits will influence their children badly. Thus, setting good examples for children is helpful to gradually develop their good habits. Last but not least, many parents are so busy at work that they don’t have time to spend with their children. So it’s vital for parents to spare more time for their children to build up close relationship.       In short, to solve the problems, love and communication are of great significance. 【实战演练四】 步入初三，学生与家长们都倍感压力，在学习与生活方面都容易发生争吵。假设你是李华，你的好朋友Jack就有这方面的烦恼，他给你写信说他跟父母关系不好，并向你寻求帮助。请你根据以下要点给Jack回信，给他一些关于如何与父母沟通的建议。 一、分析可能出现问题的诱因 1.彼此都很忙碌，没有沟通 2.父母制定很多规矩 3.请自行发挥一点 二、提出与各诱因相对应的解决措施 1.在父母方便的时候和他们谈谈 2.请自行发挥至少一点 要求：100 词左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数内，可适当增加细节。 Dear Jack, Don’t worry! It is common for teenagers to have trouble getting on well with their parents. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Dear Jack, Don’t worry! It is common for teenagers to have trouble getting on well with their parents. The reason for these problems may be that you are both busy and not communicating with each other. It may also be because parents set many rules. Finally, it may be a generation gap caused by age issues. I suggest you first talk to your parents at their convenience. Secondly, if the rules set by your parents are unreasonable, you should also share your thoughts. Finally, everything has two sides, and it is correct for everyone to have different opinions. As long as it is right, we should accept it seriously. I hope my suggestions are helpful to you. $