上海市洋泾中学2025-2026学年高一下学期英语期末考试试卷作文讲义

上海市洋泾中学2025-2026学年高一下学期英语期末考试试卷 作文讲义 一、写作题目 V. Guided Writing 10% 52. Directions: Write an English letter around 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是 Ethan，你的朋友 Belle 在校园里偶遇了一只幼小瘦弱的流浪猫，想要收养它，但她的父母对此提议有着诸多担忧，并不赞同她的想法。Belle 写信向你寻求建议，请你给她回一封信。 请从以下两个立场中任选一个完成写作： 1. 支持父母 —— 劝说 Belle 理解父母的顾虑，顺从父母放弃收养； 2. 支持 Belle—— 帮助她想出合情合理的理由，说服父母同意收养。 请在信中围绕所选立场，给出具体建议并说明理由。 二、写作思路 开头段：收到来信，知晓她想要收养流浪小猫却遭到父母反对，表达理解她心疼小猫的心情，表明愿意给她可行的说服办法。 主体段：分点给出说服父母的具体方案与理由。 1. 主动承诺承担养猫全部工作：喂食、打扫猫窝、日常打理，绝不麻烦父母； 2. 利用课余零花钱承担疫苗、猫粮等全部开销，不会增加家庭经济负担； 3. 饲养小猫可以培养自身责任心，舒缓学习压力；同时保证不会耽误学业。 结尾段：鼓励她好好和父母耐心沟通，预祝她顺利说服家人，好好照顾小猫。 三、写作高级表达 开头段 高级短语 · turn to me for practical advice 向我寻求实用建议 · come across a weak stray kitten 偶遇一只瘦弱的流浪小猫 · be eager to adopt the poor little creature 迫切想要收养这只可怜的小家伙 · hold reservations about the idea 对这个想法心存顾虑 · fully sympathize with your kindness 十分理解你的善心 高级句子 1.Having received your letter, I learn that you intend to adopt a stray kitten but meet opposition from your parents.收到你的来信，我得知你打算收养一只流浪小猫，却遭到了父母的反对。 2.I totally understand your soft heart and your wish to take good care of the poor weak kitten. 我十分理解你的善心，也明白你想要照顾这只瘦弱小猫的心愿。 3.Here are several practical approaches for you to persuade your parents step by step. 这里有几个切实可行的办法，你可以一步步说服你的父母。 主体段 高级短语 · take full responsibility for daily care 全权负责日常照料 · cover all relevant expenses 承担所有相关开销 · set aside pocket money regularly 定期积攒零花钱 · relieve academic pressure effectively 有效缓解学业压力 · cultivate a strong sense of responsibility 培养强烈的责任心 · interfere with normal schoolwork 耽误正常学业 · eliminate parents’ inner worries 打消父母内心的顾虑 · carry out housework related to the cat 做好和猫咪相关的家务 高级句子 1.You can promise firmly that you will finish all feeding and cleaning work in your spare time without troubling your parents.你可以郑重承诺，利用课余时间完成喂食打扫工作，绝不麻烦父母。 2.It is wise to tell them you will save your pocket money to pay for cat food and vaccines independently.你可以告诉父母你会攒零花钱独自承担猫粮、疫苗费用，这会很有说服力。 3.Raising a cat properly helps shape your sense of responsibility and eases your stress from heavy study tasks.好好养猫能够培养你的责任心，还能缓解繁重学业带来的压力。 4.You can reassure them that you will arrange your schedule well and never let the cat distract your study.你可以安抚父母，自己会规划好时间，绝不会因为猫咪分心耽误学习。 5.These practical promises are the key to removing their worries about time and money. 这些实实在在的承诺，是打消他们在时间和金钱方面顾虑的关键。 6.A sincere and calm communication is far better than arguing with them impulsively. 真诚冷静地沟通远比冲动争执更加有效。 结尾段 高级短语 · have a heart-to-heart talk 进行一次走心的交谈 · win your parents’ approval 赢得父母的许可 · devote tender care to the kitten 用心温柔照料小猫 · stick to your original promise 坚守自己当初的承诺 · wish you all the best 祝你一切顺利 高级句子 1.If you communicate patiently and sincerely, your parents will gradually accept your warm-hearted plan.如果你耐心真诚沟通，你的父母会慢慢接纳你这份暖心的计划。 2.Once you gain their permission, remember to keep every promise you have made to them strictly.一旦获得许可，一定要严格遵守你许下的所有承诺。 3.I sincerely hope you can successfully take in the lovely kitten and live happily with it. 衷心希望你能顺利收下这只可爱小猫，和它相伴愉快生活。 四、范文赏析 Dear Belle, I have received your letter. I know you came across a weak stray kitten on campus and long to adopt it, while your parents hold worries and disapprove of your plan. I totally understand your kindness and I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions to persuade them. First, make a firm promise that you will take full charge of feeding and cleaning in your spare time without disturbing your parents. Besides, tell them you will cover all costs like cat food and vaccines with your saved pocket money. What’s more, raising the kitten can cultivate your responsibility and ease your study pressure, and you guarantee not to let it affect your schoolwork. Talk to them calmly and sincerely instead of quarrelling. Hope you can win their approval. If you succeed, remember to keep your promises carefully. Yours sincerely, Ethan 中文翻译 亲爱的 Belle： 我收到了你的来信。得知你在校园偶遇一只瘦弱的流浪小猫，很想收养它，但是你的父母心存顾虑并不赞成。我十分理解你的善心，写这封信给你一些说服他们的实用建议。 首先，郑重向父母保证，课余时间全权负责猫咪的喂食、打扫工作，不会打扰父母。除此之外，告诉他们你会用积攒的零花钱承担猫粮、疫苗等全部开销。而且饲养小猫可以培养你的责任心、舒缓学习压力，你保证不会让猫咪影响学业。和父母冷静真诚沟通，不要争吵。 希望你能获得他们的同意。如果成功了，记得认真履行自己的承诺。 Ethan 范文赏析要点： 整体结构赏析 经典书信三段式结构：开头承接来信背景；主体给出三条完整可落地的说服方案，紧扣写作要求；结尾送上祝福叮嘱。总词数 138 词，完美卡在 120-150 词区间，书信格式规范，逻辑清晰完整。 经典例句逐句赏析 例句1：I know you came across a weak stray kitten on campus and long to adopt it, while your parents hold worries and disapprove of your plan. 赏析：while 引导并列转折句式，自然衔接双方不同态度，用词 come across、disapprove 替换基础词汇，行文流畅自然。 例句2：First, make a firm promise that you will take full charge of feeding and cleaning in your spare time without disturbing your parents. 赏析：that 引导同位语从句解释 promise 具体内容，高级短语 take full charge of 提升文采，论证具体扎实。 例句3：What’s more, raising the kitten can cultivate your responsibility and ease your study pressure, and you guarantee not to let it affect your schoolwork. 赏析：动名词作主语，cultivate responsibility、ease pressure 地道高分搭配，贴合说服父母的核心诉求。 整体得分亮点 衔接词 First、Besides、What’s more 层次分明；灵活运用同位语从句、并列复合句，句式丰富不单调；紧扣选定立场，理由具体贴合生活，语气友好真诚，完全贴合高中英语书信写作高分标准。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $