上海市浦东新区2025-2026学年高一下学期期末英语试题作文讲义

上海市浦东新区2025-2026学年高一下学期期末英语试题 作文讲义 一、写作题目 VI. Guided Writing (15 分) Directions: Write an English composition in about 100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假使你是明启中学的学生李华，你的外国笔友 David 得知上海推行学生每日两小时体育活动后十分好奇，特发邮件向你咨询。请你回信，内容须包含： 1. 介绍学校的特色体育活动； 2. 你对每日体育活动的看法。 二、写作思路 开头段：承接 David 的来信，回应他对上海每日两小时校园体育政策的好奇，引出下文介绍。 主体段：第一部分介绍本校特色体育项目：集体课间太极、趣味球类联赛、户外慢跑社团等，全天合计保证两小时运动时长；第二部分阐述个人观点：锻炼身体增强体质、释放课业压力、锻炼团队协作，劳逸结合提升学习效率。 结尾段：简单收尾，欢迎 David 分享他学校的体育安排，期待回信。 三、写作高级表达 开头段 高级短语 · be curious about 对…… 感到好奇 · receive your email 收到你的来信 · carry out the sports policy 推行体育政策 · give you a detailed introduction 为你详细介绍 · satisfy your curiosity 解答你的疑惑 高级句子 1.I have received your email, in which you show great curiosity about Shanghai’s two-hour daily sports policy for students.我收到了你的来信，你对上海学生每日两小时体育政策十分好奇。 2.I’m writing to introduce our school’s sports arrangements and share my personal opinions. 我写信介绍我校体育安排并分享我的个人看法。 3.It’s my pleasure to clear up your confusion about this activity. 我很乐意解开你对此项活动的疑惑。 主体段 高级短语 · characteristic sports events 特色体育活动 · group Tai Chi practice 集体太极拳练习 · friendly ball games 趣味球类友谊赛 · outdoor jogging clubs 户外慢跑社团 · build up physical fitness 增强身体素质 · relieve academic pressure 缓解学业压力 · strengthen teamwork spirit 培养团队协作精神 · balance study and exercise 平衡学习与运动 高级句子 1.Our school offers various characteristic sports to guarantee two hours of exercise every day. 我校开设多样特色运动，保证每日两小时运动量。 2.We practice Tai Chi together during break time and hold regular basketball and badminton matches.课间我们一起练习太极，还会定期举办篮球羽毛球比赛。 3.Joining jogging clubs is also a popular choice among most students in our spare time. 课余加入慢跑社团也是大部分同学热衷的选择。 4.Regular exercise effectively builds up our bodies and prevents us from feeling tired easily. 规律运动强健体魄，避免我们轻易疲惫。 5.Physical exercise helps us release heavy pressure from endless schoolwork efficiently. 体育运动可以高效释放繁重课业带来的压力。 6.Proper exercise refreshes our mind so that we can concentrate better on later study. 适度运动放松大脑，让我们后续学习专注力更高。 结尾段 高级短语 · exchange sports experiences 交流运动经历 · look forward to your reply 期待你的回信 · share relevant arrangements 分享相关安排 · gain a healthier lifestyle 拥有更健康的生活方式 · benefit a great deal 受益匪浅 高级句子 1.I truly benefit a lot from keeping daily exercise in my school life. 校园生活里坚持每日运动让我收获良多。 2.Could you share the sports activities in your school in your next letter? 你可以在下一封信里分享你们学校的体育活动吗？ 3.I am eagerly looking forward to your early reply. 我十分期待你的早日回信。 四、范文赏析 Dear David, I’m glad to receive your email, in which you feel curious about Shanghai’s two-hour daily sports policy for students. Now I’m writing to introduce our school’s sports activities and my views. Our school has many distinctive sports items. We do group Tai Chi during morning breaks, take part in regular basketball and badminton matches, and some students join outdoor jogging clubs, which ensures we have two hours’ exercise daily. From my perspective, daily sports bring numerous benefits. It strengthens our body, relieves heavy study pressure and cultivates teamwork. Refreshed by exercise, we can focus better on study. Would you tell me sports arrangements in your school? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 亲爱的 David： 很高兴收到你的来信，你对上海学生每日两小时体育锻炼政策十分好奇。现在我写信向你介绍我校体育活动以及我的看法。 我校有诸多特色体育项目：晨间课间全体练习太极拳，定期举办篮球、羽毛球友谊赛，还有不少同学加入户外慢跑社团，以此保障我们每天两小时的运动量。 在我看来，每日体育运动益处良多。既能强身健体、缓解巨大的学业压力，还能培养团队合作意识。运动过后身心放松，我们上课学习的专注力也会更高。 你可以和我说说你们学校的体育安排吗？期待你的回信。 李华 范文赏析要点： 整体结构赏析 三段结构清晰规整：开篇承接来信背景，回应对方疑问；第一段介绍学校特色体育，第二段发表个人看法，精准踩中两大答题要点；结尾自然邀约互动，符合笔友邮件语境。词数 126 词，贴合要求区间。 例句逐句赏析 例句1：I’m glad to receive your email, in which you feel curious about Shanghai’s two-hour daily sports policy for students. 赏析：介词 + which 引导非限制性定语从句，句式摆脱简单句，自然衔接来信背景，开篇流畅正式。 例句2：We do group Tai Chi during morning breaks, take part in regular basketball and badminton matches, and some students join outdoor jogging clubs, which ensures we have two hours’ exercise daily. 赏析：排比罗列三项特色运动，定语从句收尾，完整清晰介绍校园体育安排，内容饱满贴合题意。 例句3：Refreshed by exercise, we can focus better on study. 赏析：过去分词作状语，简洁高级，点明运动对学习的正向作用，论证观点简洁有力。 整体得分亮点 衔接自然流畅，句式丰富多变，定语从句、非谓语灵活运用；内容完全覆盖题干两项硬性要求，贴合笔友交流语气，用词地道，无冗余生硬模板化语句，属于考场高分水准。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $