上海大学附属嘉定高中2025-2026学年第二学期高一期末英语试题作文讲义

上海大学附属嘉定高中2025-2026学年第二学期高一期末英语试题 作文讲义 一、写作题目 VI. Guided Writing (25’) 60. Directions: Write an English composition in about150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 寒假中，你所在的班级将进行一次市内徒步活动，主题为 “寻找上海的年味”，班长正在征集方案，请你写一封电子邮件描述你的设想。你的邮件必需包括： 1. 活动具体时间和行走线路； 2. 你的理由。 二、写作思路 开头段 写信缘由：得知班长面向全班征集 “寻找上海年味” 徒步活动方案，特此发送邮件提交自己的活动策划方案。 主体段 1.明确敲定活动时间与具体步行路线：寒假腊月二十三小年上午，从豫园出发，徒步途经上海老街，最后抵达城隍庙商圈； 2.分层阐述选择该安排的理由：豫园与城隍庙年味氛围浓厚，挂满新春花灯、售卖本地年货小吃；沿途可以观赏传统新春装饰，品尝上海特色年味美食，沉浸式感受本土新年气息；短途徒步强度适中，全班集体出行安全轻松。 结尾段 恳请班长参考本次方案，期待班级此次徒步活动顺利开展。 三、写作高级表达 开头段 高级短语 · collect activity plans from classmates 面向同学征集活动方案 · launch a city walking activity 开展市内徒步活动 · hunt for the Spring Festival vibe 寻觅新春年味 · submit my detailed proposal 提交详细设想方案 · write to share my arrangement 写信分享我的安排 高级句子 1.Having learned that our monitor is collecting plans for the walking activity, I am writing to offer my suggestion.得知班长正在征集徒步活动方案，我写信提出我的建议。 2.The theme of the activity is to explore the unique Spring Festival atmosphere in Shanghai. 本次活动主题是探寻上海独有的新春年味。 3.I have worked out a practical route and schedule for this outdoor activity. 我为这次户外活动制定了一套切实可行的路线与时间安排。 主体段 高级短语 · set off on the Little New Year 小年当天出发 · wander along Shanghai Old Street 漫步上海老街 · be decorated with festive lanterns 装点新春花灯 · taste local traditional snacks 品尝本土传统小吃 · immerse ourselves in festive atmosphere 沉浸式沉浸年味氛围 · moderate walking intensity 徒步强度适中 · purchase traditional New Year goods 置办特色年货 · admire classic Spring Festival decorations 观赏经典新春装饰 高级句子 1.We will set out at 9 a.m. on the Little New Year, walking from Yu Garden to City God Temple via Shanghai Old Street.我们将于小年上午九点出发，由豫园途经上海老街步行至城隍庙。 2.These spots are filled with festive decorations, which perfectly show Shanghai’s distinctive New Year charm.这些地点遍布新春装饰，充分展现上海独特的新年韵味。 3.Walking along the street allows us to watch locals preparing for the approaching Spring Festival closely.沿街漫步能近距离观察当地人筹备新年的景象。 4.We can enjoy typical Shanghai New Year food and experience authentic local festive culture. 我们可以品尝上海年味小吃，体验地道本土新春文化。 5.The whole journey is not too long, ensuring our safety and comfort during the walk. 全程路程不长，保障大家徒步途中安全舒适。 6.Such an outdoor trip strengthens class bond while appreciating festive scenery. 这场户外活动在欣赏年味风景的同时增进班级凝聚力。 结尾段 高级短语 · take my proposal into consideration 斟酌参考我的方案 · carry out the activity smoothly 顺利开展本次活动 · gain unforgettable festive experience 收获难忘的年味体验 · strengthen the friendship among classmates 增进同学之间情谊 · look forward to the wonderful activity 期待这场精彩活动 高级句子 1.I would appreciate it if you could take my practical plan into careful consideration. 如若你能仔细考虑我这份切实的方案，我将十分感激。 2.I firmly believe this arrangement will bring us a wonderful experience of Shanghai’s New Year vibe.我坚信该安排会让大家拥有感受上海年味的美好体验。 3.Wish our class walking activity a great success in the winter vacation. 祝愿咱们班级寒假徒步活动圆满顺利。 四、范文赏析 Dear monitor, Hearing that you are collecting plans for our class walking activity themed “Hunt for Shanghai’s New Year Vibe” in winter vacation, I’m writing to share my detailed plan. We can set off at 9 a.m. on the Little New Year. Our route starts from Yu Garden, goes through Shanghai Old Street and ends at City God Temple. Firstly, these places are fully decorated with red lanterns and New Year ornaments in late winter, where we can watch local residents buying New Year goods and taste classic Shanghai festive snacks. Besides, the whole route is not tiring, suitable for group walking. We can fully immerse ourselves in authentic Shanghai festive culture instead of staying indoors. I sincerely hope you can consider my plan. Looking forward to our meaningful outdoor trip. Yours, Li Hua 中文翻译 亲爱的班长： 听闻你正在征集班级寒假徒步活动 “寻找上海的年味” 的活动方案，我写信分享我的详细设想。 我们可以在小年上午九点出发，路线从豫园启程，途经上海老街，最终抵达城隍庙。首先，寒冬时节这两处挂满红灯笼与新春装饰，我们可以看到当地居民置办年货，品尝经典上海年味小吃。除此之外，整条路线徒步强度不大，适合全班集体出行。我们可以走出室内，沉浸式感受地道的上海新春文化。 真心希望你可以考虑我的方案，期待这场有意义的户外之行。 李华 范文赏析要点： 整体结构赏析 标准电子邮件三段式布局：开篇说明写信目的；主体清晰交代活动时间、步行线路两大硬性要点，紧接着逐条阐明选址理由；结尾礼貌恳请采纳并送上期许。词数 142 词，贴合要求的 150 词左右，书信格式规范。 经典例句逐句赏析 例句1：Hearing that you are collecting plans for our class walking activity themed “Hunt for Shanghai’s New Year Vibe” in winter vacation, I’m writing to share my detailed plan. 赏析：现在分词作状语前置，句式摆脱简单主谓句，开门见山点明背景与写作目的，紧扣题目主题。 例句2：Firstly, these places are fully decorated with red lanterns and New Year ornaments in late winter, where we can watch local residents buying New Year goods and taste classic Shanghai festive snacks. 赏析：where 引导非限制性定语从句，自然衔接场地优势，论据具体具象，贴合 “寻找年味” 的主题。 例句3：We can fully immerse ourselves in authentic Shanghai festive culture instead of staying indoors. 赏析：高分固定搭配 immerse oneself in，对比结构凸显本次徒步活动的意义，语言地道高级。 整体得分亮点 逻辑衔接词 Firstly、Besides 层次分明；定语从句、非谓语动词丰富句式；完整覆盖题干两大必写要点，内容贴合上海地域新春特色，行文流畅自然，语气礼貌得体，符合高中英语应用文高分标准。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $