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Ⅰ.增分语料积累
无灵主语(一)
无灵主语是将没有生命的东西作主语,比如时间,地点,自然现象等。常搭配有灵动词使用,即把没有生命的东西,赋予有生命的动作。从而增加主语的多样性,使语言更生动。
公式1
主语(表地点/时间的名词)+有灵动词+其他
常见主语
gym/school/last Monday/2024/
dawn/dusk/the scene/the contest/the argument
常见有灵动词
fall降临;see/witness目睹
Night fell over the forest and we felt extremely frightened.
夜幕降临在森林里,我们感到非常害怕。
Last week saw the launch of tug-of-war competition among all classes.
上周所有的班级进行了拔河比赛。
公式2
主语(身体部位/声音/笑容)+有灵动词+其他
常见主语
tears/heart/voice/fingers/eye/face/laughter
常见有灵动词
interrupt打断;light up露出喜色;well up涌出;spread across浮现;fill/be full of充满;brighten使开心;stream流淌;linger继续存留;flash闪现
(2023·新课标Ⅰ)When I learned that I won first place in the writing competition,tears of excitement welled up in my eyes.当我得知我在写作比赛中获得第一名时,激动的泪水涌上了我的眼睛。
So nervous was I that my throat tightened and my knees felt quite weak.
我紧张得喉咙发紧,膝盖也发软。
When she saw the strawberries,her eyes twinkled/sparkled with joy and sweetness.
当她看到草莓时,她的眼睛闪烁着喜悦和甜蜜。
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇
人物描写
journalist n.新闻记者,新闻工作者 curiosity n.好奇心,求知欲;奇物,珍品 citizen n.公民;市民,居民 committed adj.尽心尽力的
动作描写
scream vi.& vt.尖叫;高声喊;发出大而尖的声音 bark vi.(狗)吠叫 vt.厉声发令 witness vt.& vi.是发生……的时间(或地点),见证;目击;作证;是……的迹象 broadcast vi.& vt.播送,广播;散布,传播 tailor vt.专门制作,定做 amuse vt.(提供)消遣;逗笑 chart vt.记录;制订计划
环境描写
housing estate住宅区,住宅群 ambulance n.救护车 memorable adj.难忘的,值得纪念的
修辞手法(倒装)
not only...but also...的倒装结构,so+助动词/情态动词/be动词+主语
句型
1.Fire engines and ambulances,called at 9:30 p.m.,reached the scene within 15 minutes.(动作描写)
2.As media channels have grown in number and type,so have advertisements.(部分倒装)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇,完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
在一个雨夜,医生汤姆下班回家。当他走近一处住宅区时,他听到一只狗在吠叫。然后,他似乎听到有人在尖叫。出于好奇,他环顾四周,看到一个人躺在地上。他走向前去看发生了什么。意识到这个人心脏病发作了,汤姆迅速对他进行了急救。不久,救护车来了,并把那个人带到了医院。对他来说,这是一个令人难忘的夜晚。第二天,汤姆很惊讶这件事在电视上播出了。他被告知他救下的那个人是一名很敬业的记者。
On a rainy night,Tom,a doctor,went back home after work.When he approached a housing estate,he 1.heard a dog barking.And then,he seemed to 2.hear someone screaming.Out of curiosity,he looked around,witnessing a man lying on the ground.He came up to see what had happened.Realizing the man suffered from heart attack,Tom gave him first aid quickly.After a while,3.the ambulance arrived,and took the man to the hospital.For him,4.it was a memorable night.The next day,Tom was surprised that 5.the incident was broadcast on TV.He was told that the man he had saved was a committed journalist.
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