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Unit 3 Great people
Lesson 4 · Wrap-up time
Write about a great person
Great people are around us!
译林版六年级上册
1/30
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Unit 3 · L4
2/30
LISTEN
I can listen and write about great people like Confucius and Grandma Wang.
WRITE
I can write a short passage about a great person using the writing frame.
FRAME
I can use the writing frame: Who → What → Why → What learn.
REFLECT
I can self-assess my learning and understand everyone can be great.
LET'S REVIEW · GREAT PEOPLE
Unit 3 · L4
3/30
STORY 1 (L1) · Bobby's mum
Bobby's mum helps others.
She is a community hero.
→ Great people help others.
STORY 2 (L2) · Yuan Longping
Yuan Longping developed hybrid rice.
His rice feeds the world.
→ Great people work hard.
STORY 3 (L3) · Cai Lun
Cai Lun made paper.
His invention changed the world.
→ Great people create new things.
GRAMMAR (L3) · Past Tense Review
was/were · was born · liked · studied · began · developed · passed away · made · lived
How was...? Who was...? How did...? + 动词原形
Today, we'll listen to two more great people and write about our own heroes!
BIG QUESTION
Unit 3 · L4
4/30
Confucius lived long ago. His words are still important today.
Grandma Wang always helps others.
BIG QUESTION
What can you learn from great people?
Think about this as we write about our own great person.
LOOK AND PREDICT
Unit 3 · L4
5/30
Look at the pictures. Who are these great people?
1. What can you see in the pictures?
2. Who are these people?
3. Why are they great?
4. Who is a great person to you?
Let's listen and write about great people!
LISTEN AND WRITE 1 · CONFUCIUS
Unit 3 · L4
6/30
ANSWER: ① Confucius — lived long ago, words still important today
QUESTION
Who was he?
KEY INFO
He lived long ago, but his words are still important today.
WHY GREAT?
Confucius was a great teacher. He had many students. His ideas still guide us today.
Past tense: was, lived | Present tense: are, is → His words ARE still important today.
He was Confucius.
LISTEN AND WRITE 2 · GRANDMA WANG
Unit 3 · L4
7/30
ANSWER: ② Grandma Wang (Liu Tao's grandma) / helps
QUESTION
Who is she?
KEY INFO
She always helps others.
WHY GREAT?
Grandma Wang is a community hero. She helps her neighbors every day. Everyone can be great!
Present tense: is, helps → Grandma Wang IS alive. She always HELPS others.
She is Liu Tao's grandma.
THINK AND COMPLETE
Unit 3 · L4
8/30
Choose a great person. Complete the table.
1
Who is/was the person?
e.g., Yuan Longping — a Chinese scientist
2
What does/did he/she do?
e.g., He developed hybrid rice.
3
Why is/was he/she great?
e.g., His rice feeds people all over the world.
4
What can you learn from him/her?
e.g., I can learn to work hard and never give up.
Use this table to help you write about a great person!
WRITING FRAME
Unit 3 · L4
9/30
WRITING FRAME
___ is/was a great person.
He/She ___ (what he/she did).
He/She is/was great because ___ (why great).
I can learn ___ from him/her.
Who?
Use past tense for people in the past.
Use present tense for people alive now.
What & Why?
What does/did he/she do?
Why is/was he/she great?
What learn?
I can learn ___ from him/her.
Use base verb after 'learn to'.
WRITING EXAMPLE 1 · YUAN LONGPING
Unit 3 · L4
10/30
WHO
Yuan Longping was a great person.
WHAT & WHY
He developed hybrid rice. He was great because his rice feeds people all over the world.
WHAT LEARN
I can learn to work hard and never give up from him.
WRITING EXAMPLE 2 · MY MUM
Unit 3 · L4
11/30
My mum is a great person.
WHAT SHE DOES
She helps others every day. She is kind to everyone she meets.
WHY GREAT
She is great because she is kind.
WHAT LEARN
I can learn to help others from her.
→ Use present tense for people alive now!
Present tense: is, helps, is → My mum IS alive. She HELPS others.
PAST TENSE REVIEW
Unit 3 · L4
12/30
TIP 1
be → was/were:
was born, was a scientist, were students
TIP 2
Regular past tense:
liked, studied, developed, lived, helped
TIP 3
Irregular past tense:
made → make, did → do, fed → feed, said → say
TIP 4
passed away =
去逝 (Yuan Longping passed away in 2021.)
SPECIAL QUESTIONS REVIEW
Unit 3 · L4
13/30
Q1
How was...?
How was Yuan Longping? He was a great scientist.
Q2
Who was...?
Who was Cai Lun? He was a great inventor.
Q3
How did...?
How did he make paper? (did + 动词原形)
Q4
What did...?
What did Yuan Longping develop? He developed hybrid rice.
Remember: How did...? / What did...? → use base verb (动词原形)!
WRITING REVIEW
Unit 3 · L4
14/30
Click to reveal each card. Students review key writing elements.
1
Who
2
What
3
Why
4
What learn
5
Past tense
6
Present tense
7
Special questions
8
Writing frame
Total: 8 cards · Click anywhere to reveal next card
THINK AND WRITE
Unit 3 · L4
15/30
Write about a great person.
Use the writing frame:
__ is/was a great person.
I can learn a lot from him/her.
TIP
Use Part B (Think and complete) to help you! Choose a person, then write.
LANGUAGE SUPPORT
___ is/was a great person.
He/She ___ (what).
He/She is/was great because ___ (why).
I can learn ___ from him/her.
WRITING PROCESS (1/2)
Unit 3 · L4
16/30
STEP 1
Choose a person
Who is/was a great person to you?
STEP 2
Brainstorm
What does/did he/she do? Why is/was he/she great?
STEP 3
Write
Use the frame: ___ is/was a great person...
STEP 4
Check
Are the verbs correct? Does it have who, what, why, what learn?
WRITING PROCESS (2/2) · PEER REVIEW
Unit 3 · L4
17/30
CHECK YOUR PARTNER'S WRITING
✅ Are the past tense verbs correct?
✅ Does it have: who / what / why / what learn?
⭐ Give one star and one suggestion.
EXAMPLE
I like how you used "developed" and "feeds". Maybe you can add more about what you learn from him.
PAIR WORK → EXCHANGE & CHECK
KEY PATTERN
Unit 3 · L4
18/30
WRITING PATTERN
写作公式:
___ is/was a great person.
I can learn a lot from him/her.
Use past tense (was) for people in the past. Use present tense (is) for people alive now.
EXAMPLE
Yuan Longping was a great person.
I can learn a lot from him.
PRACTICE · YOUR TURN
Unit 3 · L4
19/30
Now write your own passage about a great person!
现在写一段关于你心中的伟人的短文!
WRITING FRAME
___ is/was a great person.
He/She ___ (what).
He/She is/was great because ___ (why).
I can learn ___ from him/her.
Use past tense for people in the past. Use present tense for people alive now!
STORY TIME · SHOWCASE
Unit 3 · L4
20/30
Great people are around us. Everyone can be great!
伟大的人就在我们身边。每个人都可以成为伟人!
SHARE YOUR GREAT PERSON!
1
I can talk about great people and their work.
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2
I can tell the story of a person's life in the past tense.
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3
I can write about a great person.
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ASSESSMENT TIME
What did you do well? What do you need to improve?
THINK AND SHARE
Unit 3 · L4
21/30
What can you learn from great people?
GREAT PEOPLE
Great people have big dreams. They work hard and never give up.
CONCLUSION
Great people help others.
Everyone can be great!
What will you do to be great?
UNIT REFLECTION · FIVE GREAT PEOPLE
Unit 3 · L4
22/30
BOBBY'S MUM
helps others → community hero → great in daily life
YUAN LONGPING
developed hybrid rice → feeds the world → great scientist
CAI LUN
made paper → changed the world → great inventor
CONFUCIUS
lived long ago → words still important → great teacher
GRANDMA WANG
always helps others → community hero → great neighbor
What makes them great? What do they have in common?
WRITING SHOWCASE · 伟人墙
Unit 3 · L4
23/30
Showcase excellent writing on the Great People Wall!
内容完整
30%
Includes: who → what → why → what learn
语法准确
25%
Past/present tense correct; verb forms are correct
结构连贯
25%
Uses the writing frame to organize content
词汇丰富
20%
Uses core vocabulary from this unit
Self ⭐ Peer ⭐ Teacher ⭐
THINK AND SHARE · YOUR DREAM
Unit 3 · L4
24/30
What will you do to be great?
你将怎样做才能成为伟大的人?
I will help others.
I will work hard.
I will have big dreams.
I will never give up.
PAIR WORK → SHARE
SUMMARY (1/2)
Unit 3 · L4
26/30
WHAT DID WE LEARN TODAY?
VOCABULARY
great hero scientist inventor develop feed dream everyone
GRAMMAR
Past tense — was, lived, did, made, developed
WRITING FRAME
Who → What → Why → What learn
SUMMARY (2/2)
Unit 3 · L4
27/30
BIG QUESTION ANSWER
What can you learn from great people?
→ Great people have big dreams.
→ They work hard and never give up.
→ They help others.
→ Everyone can be great!
HOMEWORK (1/2)
Unit 3 · L4
28/30
01
MUST DO
1. 根据同伴和老师的反馈
修改完善伟人写作
2. 朗读自己的写作 3 遍
并录音
3. 完成 Assessment time
自评表
02
OPTIONAL
1. 将自己的写作配上插图,
制作成『伟人小报』
2. 用英语向家人讲述本单元
的一位伟人故事
HOMEWORK (2/2)
Unit 3 · L4
29/30
03
CHALLENGE
TASK 1 · Interview
Interview a family member: "Who is a great person in your heart? Why?"
Write their answer in English (3-5 sentences).
TASK 2 · Great Person Story
Tell a great person's story to your family.
Use the writing frame: ___ is/was a great person. He/She ___.
He/She is/was great because ___. I can learn ___ from him/her.
Everyone can be great! Challenge yourself!
Great people!
Everyone can be great!
See you next time!
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