Unit 7 The big screen 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年英语译林版九年级上册

**基本信息** 以“电影主题写作”为核心，构建“素材积累-句型运用-篇章输出”三阶训练体系，系统培养语言组织与逻辑表达能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作素材库|4类主题词汇、12组高频搭配、4项功能表达|分类整合电影相关词汇与表达，夯实语言基础|从具体词汇到功能句型，构建“词-搭配-句”的语言要素链| |黄金句型库|4类基础句型、5组句型升级|提供开篇/主体/结尾模板，通过对比实现句型优化|从基础句到复杂句，体现语言表达的进阶逻辑| |高分写作方法|1篇典例精析|提炼“审题-构思-表达”三步法，强调结构清晰与信息完整|以典例示范“内容要点-逻辑层次-语言亮点”的写作逻辑| |阶梯训练|3级句子训练（15题）、1篇篇章训练|通过汉译英、仿写、升级实现句子能力突破，篇章训练强化综合运用|从句子到篇章，形成“基础巩固-能力提升-综合应用”的训练梯度|

Unit 7 The big screen 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 电影类型 action film 动作片 comedy 喜剧 cartoon 卡通片 documentary 纪录片 romance 爱情片 science fiction film 科幻片 drama 剧情片 thriller 惊悚片 电影制作相关 director 导演 actor 男演员 actress 女演员 scriptwriter 编剧 producer 制片人 film-maker 制片人；电影制作人 cameraman 摄影师 editor 剪辑员 script 剧本 role 角色 lead role 主角 supporting role 配角 电影评价与感受 touching 感人的 inspiring 鼓舞人心的 exciting 令人兴奋的 boring 无聊的 moving 感人的 meaningful 有意义的 wonderful 精彩的 fantastic 极好的 amazing 令人惊奇的 动词与动词短语 star (in) 主演 shoot 拍摄 film 拍摄 direct 导演 perform 表演 act as 扮演 bring ... to life 使……更有趣/生动 steal the show 吸引更多注意 pass away 去世 make a great contribution to 对……做出巨大贡献 2. 高频搭配 risk one’s life 冒着生命危险 make a great contribution to 对……做出巨大贡献 catch one’s attention 引起某人的注意 play the lead role 扮演主角 work as 从事……工作 be chosen to do 被选中做…… spend one’s last few years 度过最后的几年 provide aid to 向……提供援助 be remembered as 被铭记为…… at the age of 在……岁时 devote ... to 把……奉献给 so that 以便；为了 3. 写作功能表达 描述电影基本信息 My favourite film is ... 我最喜欢的电影是…… It is a(n) ... film directed by ... 这是一部由……导演的……电影。 The film tells the story of ... 这部电影讲述了……的故事。 It is based on a true story. 它改编自一个真实的故事。 描述人物与角色 ... was chosen to play the lead role in ... ……被选中在……中扮演主角。 ... worked as ... before becoming an actress. ……在成为演员之前从事……工作。 ... is one of Hollywood’s all-time greatest actresses. ……是好莱坞有史以来最伟大的女演员之一。 表达感受与评价 I love this film because ... 我喜欢这部电影，因为…… The best part of this film is ... 这部电影最精彩的部分是…… This film teaches me that ... 这部电影教会我…… I find it inspiring/meaningful. 我觉得它鼓舞人心/有意义。 描述目的与结果 ... worked very hard so that she could perform her roles well. ……工作非常努力，以便能演好她的角色。 She spent her last few years working with UNICEF so that she could help poor children. 她花了最后几年时间与联合国儿童基金会合作，以便能帮助贫困儿童。 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 My favourite film is ... directed by ... 我最喜欢的电影是……，由……导演。 I would like to introduce a film that has deeply moved me. 我想介绍一部深深打动我的电影。 ... is one of Hollywood’s all-time greatest actresses. ……是好莱坞有史以来最伟大的女演员之一。 The film ... tells the story of ... and has become a classic. 电影……讲述了……的故事，已成为一部经典之作。 2. 主体句型 ... was born in ... on ... ……于……出生在…… She worked as a model before becoming an actress. 她在成为演员之前从事模特工作。 ... was chosen to play the lead role in the film ... ……被选中在电影……中扮演主角。 The film is full of warm and happy moments. 这部电影充满了温暖和快乐的时刻。 The characters are really funny and the songs are great. 角色非常有趣，歌曲也很棒。 ... spent her last few years working closely with UNICEF. ……在最后几年里与联合国儿童基金会密切合作。 3. 结尾句型 Today, ... is remembered as one of the greatest ... of all time. 今天，……被铭记为有史以来最伟大的……之一。 From this film, I learn that ... 从这部电影中，我学到…… I hope more people can watch this wonderful film. 我希望更多的人能观看这部精彩的电影。 This film is not only entertaining but also educational. 这部电影不仅有趣，而且有教育意义。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 She was a great actress. 她是一位伟大的女演员。 Audrey Hepburn is one of Hollywood’s all-time greatest actresses, remembered for her beauty, talent and kindness. 奥黛丽·赫本是好莱坞有史以来最伟大的女演员之一，因她的美丽、才华和善良而被铭记。 She helped others. 她帮助了别人。 She spent her last few years working closely with UNICEF so that she could help poor children in different parts of the world. 她在最后几年里与联合国儿童基金会密切合作，以便能帮助世界各地贫困的儿童。 I like this film. 我喜欢这部电影。 I love this film not only because it’s funny and touching, but also because it teaches me the importance of family support. 我喜欢这部电影，不仅因为它有趣感人，还因为它教会我家庭支持的重要性。 She won an Oscar. 她获得了奥斯卡奖。 In 1954, Hepburn won an Oscar for her performance in Roman Holiday, though it was only her second major role. 1954年，赫本凭借在《罗马假日》中的表演获得了奥斯卡奖，尽管这只是她的第二个主要角色。 The film has a good story. 这部电影有一个好故事。 The film tells the story of a father who trains his daughters to become world-class wrestlers, which is both inspiring and touching. 这部电影讲述了一位父亲训练女儿成为世界级摔跤运动员的故事，既鼓舞人心又感人至深。 四、高分写作方法 典例精析 请以My Favorite Film为题，根据以下提示介绍你最喜欢的电影。 1. 介绍你最喜欢的电影的名称、类型； 2. 讲述电影的主要内容； 3. 谈谈你喜欢它的原因。 词数：100词左右 提示词：genre, plot, character, touching, learn 注意: 1. 表达中必须包含所给要点并进行适当发挥； 2. 词数100词左右； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等信息。 My Favorite Film ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 先明确三点：写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。 内容上，题目给出三个必须涵盖的要点：电影名称与类型、主要内容、喜欢的原因。时态上，介绍电影内容用一般现在时。结构上分三段：第一段引出电影名称和类型，第二段概述主要情节，第三段说明喜欢的原因并总结感悟。 【例文欣赏】 My Favorite Film     My favorite film is The Shawshank Redemption. Its genre is classic drama.     The story follows Andy, a banker who is wrongly sentenced to life in prison. As a brave character, he makes friends with Red and never loses hope. After 19 years of hard time, he escapes through a tunnel he dug secretly for a new life.     I like it for its moving and touching plot. Besides, the performances of the actors are really wonderful. From the movie, I learn that we should never give up whatever difficulty we meet. It encourages me to keep positive when I face troubles. 【亮点解析】 开篇点明片名和类型，信息集中。 “My favorite film is The Shawshank Redemption. Its genre is classic drama.”两句话直接回应了提示中“名称、类型”两个要点，简洁明确，没有多余的铺垫。 情节概述简洁清晰，叙事完整。 “wrongly sentenced to life in prison”交代了核心冲突——被冤枉入狱；“makes friends with Red and never loses hope”交代了人物关系和主线精神——友谊与希望；“After 19 years of hard time, he escapes through a tunnel he dug secretly for a new life.”交代了结局——19年坚持后的越狱。从“入狱”到“希望”到“逃脱”，三句话讲完了一个完整故事，信息密度高。 定语从句运用得当。 “a banker who is wrongly sentenced to life in prison”中的who引导定语从句修饰“banker”，补充了人物背景；“a tunnel he dug secretly”中省略关系代词that的定语从句修饰“tunnel”，两个定语从句的使用让句子更紧凑，体现了较好的语法运用能力。 喜欢的原因分三层展开。 第一层是情节层面——“moving and touching plot”，运用提示词中的“touching”；第二层是表演层面——“performances of the actors are really wonderful”；第三层是个人感悟层面——“learn that we should never give up whatever difficulty we meet”和“encourages me to keep positive”，运用了提示词中的“learn”。从“电影本身”到“演员表现”再到“对我的影响”，由外到内，层次分明。结尾用“whatever difficulty we meet”中的“whatever”强调“无论什么困难”，语气坚定有力量。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 我最喜欢的电影是《摔跤吧！爸爸》，它由尼特什·提瓦瑞导演，改编自一个真实的故事。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 奥黛丽·赫本是好莱坞有史以来最伟大的女演员之一，因她的美丽、才华和善良而被铭记。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 她在最后几年里与联合国儿童基金会密切合作，以便能帮助世界各地贫困的儿童。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 我喜欢这部电影，不仅因为它有趣感人，还因为它教会我家庭支持的重要性。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 从这部电影中，我学到努力工作、决不放弃的重要性。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型1：... is one of the all-time greatest ...（描述杰出人物） 例句：Audrey Hepburn is one of Hollywood’s all-time greatest actresses. 奥黛丽·赫本是好莱坞有史以来最伟大的女演员之一。 （1）成龙是有史以来最伟大的动作演员之一。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）《肖申克的救赎》是有史以来最伟大的电影之一。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型2：... worked as ... before becoming ...（描述职业经历） 例句：She worked as a model before becoming an actress. 她在成为演员之前从事模特工作。 （1）他在成为导演之前担任过编剧。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）她在成为演员之前学习过芭蕾舞。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型3：... spent ... doing ... so that ...（描述付出的努力与目的） 例句：She spent her last few years working closely with UNICEF so that she could help poor children. 她在最后几年里与联合国儿童基金会密切合作，以便能帮助贫困儿童。 （1）他花了多年时间训练，以便能在奥运会上参赛。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）她花了几个月时间练习，以便能演好这个角色。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型4：I love this film not only because ..., but also because ...（描述喜爱原因） 例句：I love this film not only because it’s funny and touching, but also because it teaches me the importance of family support. 我喜欢这部电影，不仅因为它有趣感人，还因为它教会我家庭支持的重要性。 （1）我喜欢这部电影，不仅因为它的故事精彩，还因为演员的表演出色。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我喜欢这位导演，不仅因为他的电影鼓舞人心，还因为他总是关注社会问题。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型5：This film teaches me that ...（描述影片的启示） 例句：This film teaches me that hard work is the key to success. 这部电影教会我努力工作才是成功的关键。 （1）这部电影教会我永远不要放弃自己的梦想。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）这部电影教会我真正的幸福来自爱与陪伴。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：She was a great actress. 她是一位伟大的女演员。 升级句：Audrey Hepburn is one of Hollywood’s all-time greatest actresses, remembered for her beauty, talent and kindness. 奥黛丽·赫本是好莱坞有史以来最伟大的女演员之一，因她的美丽、才华和善良而被铭记。 1. 基础句：She helped others. 她帮助了别人。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：I like this film. 我喜欢这部电影。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：She won an Oscar. 她获得了奥斯卡奖。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：He was a great actor. 他是一位伟大的演员。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：The film is meaningful. 这部电影有意义。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：The story is touching. 这个故事感人。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 假设你们学校英文报正在举办以“光影魅力”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下问题，以“My favorite movie”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。 1. What is your favorite movie? 2. What is it about? 3. Why do you like it so much? 要求：1.短文需包含所有问题要点，并适当发挥；2.词数 100 左右。 My favorite movie _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. My favourite film is Dangal, directed by Nitesh Tiwari. It is based on a true story. 2. Audrey Hepburn is one of Hollywood’s all-time greatest actresses, remembered for her beauty, talent and kindness. 3. She spent her last few years working closely with UNICEF so that she could help poor children in different parts of the world. 4. I love this film not only because it’s funny and touching, but also because it teaches me the importance of family support. 5. From this film, I learn that it is important to work hard and never give up. Level 2 句型仿写 句型1 （1）Jackie Chan is one of the all-time greatest action actors. （2）The Shawshank Redemption is one of the all-time greatest films. 句型2 （1）He worked as a scriptwriter before becoming a director. （2）She studied ballet before becoming an actress. 句型3 （1）He spent many years training so that he could compete in the Olympics. （2）She spent several months practising so that she could perform the role well. 句型4 （1）I love this film not only because its story is wonderful, but also because the actors’ performances are excellent. （2）I love this director not only because his films are inspiring, but also because he always cares about social issues. 句型5 （1）This film teaches me that I should never give up my dreams. （2）This film teaches me that true happiness comes from love and company. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：She spent her last few years working closely with UNICEF so that she could help poor children in different parts of the world. 她在最后几年里与联合国儿童基金会密切合作，以便能帮助世界各地贫困的儿童。 2. 升级句：I love this film not only because it’s full of warm and happy moments, but also because it teaches me important lessons about life. 我喜欢这部电影，不仅因为它充满了温暖和快乐的时刻，还因为它教会我重要的人生道理。 3. 升级句：In 1954, Hepburn won an Oscar for her performance in Roman Holiday, though it was only her second major role. 1954年，赫本凭借在《罗马假日》中的表演获得了奥斯卡奖，尽管这只是她的第二个主要角色。 4. 升级句：He is a great actor who has starred in many amazing films and has made a great contribution to the film industry. 他是一位伟大的演员，主演了许多精彩的电影，为电影行业做出了巨大贡献。 5. 升级句：This film is not only entertaining but also meaningful, because it shows the importance of friendship and never giving up. 这部电影不仅有趣而且有意义，因为它展示了友谊和永不放弃的重要性。 6. 升级句：The story is so touching that it made me cry and think deeply about the true meaning of life. 这个故事如此感人，让我哭了，并让我深入思考生命的真正意义。 篇章训练（参考范文） My favorite movie My favorite movie is The Shawshank Redemption. It tells a story about a banker named Andy who is put in prison for a crime he didn’t commit. In prison, he makes friends with Red and uses his wisdom to help himself and other prisoners. I love this movie because it teaches me never to give up hope. Even in the darkest place, Andy keeps his faith and finally gets freedom. The friendship between Andy and Red also touches me deeply. Every time I watch it, I feel encouraged to face difficulties bravely. It’s not just a movie but a lesson about life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $