摘要:
**基本信息**
以“词汇-句型-篇章”三级进阶为核心,融合文化意识与语言能力培养的系统性写作专项训练。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|写作素材库|4类主题词汇、12个高频搭配、4类功能表达|分类整合书法绘画相关词汇,构建主题词块网络|从基础词汇到功能表达,形成“词-搭配-句”的语言构建逻辑|
|黄金句型库|4类基础句型、5组句型升级|提供开头-主体-结尾完整句型框架,通过对比实现表达升级|遵循“基础句-升级句”的螺旋上升路径,强化句式多样性|
|高分写作方法|1篇典例精析(含审题/例文/亮点)|提炼“时间对比开篇-过程细节描写-感受层次递进-未来计划升华”四步写作法|以“经历类写作”为载体,渗透“现象-分析-结论”的思维品质|
|阶梯训练|3级句子训练(15题)、1篇篇章训练|通过汉译英、句型仿写、句子升级实现能力分层突破|从单句准确表达到篇章逻辑构建,契合语言能力形成规律|
内容正文:
Unit 6 The art of the brush
单元写作专项训练
一、单元核心信息
二、写作素材库
1. 主题词汇
书法与绘画相关名词
calligraphy 书法
painting 绘画
brushwork 笔法;画法
character 文字;汉字
stroke 笔画
ink 墨
inkstone 砚台
inkstick 墨锭
paper 纸
xuanzhi 宣纸
landscape 山水画
gongbi 工笔画
xieyi 写意画
masterpiece 杰作
艺术家与相关身份
calligrapher 书法家
painter 画家
artist 艺术家
expert 专家
master 大师;能手
艺术风格与品质
artistic 艺术的
traditional 传统的
modern 现代的
creative 有创造力的
elegant 优雅的
unique 独特的
characteristic 特征
style 风格
technique 技巧;技法
动词与动词短语
practise 练习
concentrate on 集中注意力于
take pleasure in 从……中获得乐趣
date back to 追溯到
give it a try 试一试
pay attention to 注意
take pride in 以……为豪
be famous for 因……而著名
come to life 有了生命;活了过来
2. 高频搭配
the four treasures of the study 文房四宝
date back thousands of years 追溯到几千年前
concentrate on one’s task 专注于某人的任务
take pleasure in doing sth 从做某事中获得乐趣
at home and abroad 国内外
in one’s early teens 在某人十几岁早期
set off on journeys 出发旅行
make a living as 以……谋生
focus on 专注于
pay attention to detail 注意细节
be pleased with 对……感到满意
under pressure 承受着压力
pick up the brush 拿起毛笔
3. 写作功能表达
描述工具与材料
The four treasures of the study are brush, ink, paper and inkstone. 文房四宝是笔、墨、纸、砚。
... provides a good surface for calligraphers to write on. ……为书法家提供了良好的书写表面。
Calligraphers use ... to create beautiful works. 书法家用……创作美丽的作品。
描述学习过程与感受
I still remember the first time that I tried using a brush. 我仍然记得我第一次尝试使用毛笔的情景。
Practising calligraphy requires a lot of attention. 练习书法需要高度集中注意力。
I have learnt how to concentrate on my task. 我学会了如何专注于我的任务。
描述艺术价值
Calligraphy is an artistic form of Chinese characters. 书法是汉字的一种艺术形式。
It is admired by many people at home and abroad. 它受到国内外许多人的赞赏。
Traditional Chinese paintings pay more attention to the spirit of the subject. 中国传统绘画更注重描绘对象的神韵。
表达喜爱与推荐
My favourite painter is ... 我最喜欢的画家是……
I love this painting because ... 我喜欢这幅画,因为……
If you like beautiful paintings of ..., you will certainly love ...
如果你喜欢……的美丽画作,你一定会喜欢……
三、黄金句型库
1. 开头句型
My favourite painter is ..., a Chinese painter born in ...
我最喜欢的画家是……,一位出生于……的中国画家。
I would like to introduce ... who has created many wonderful works of art.
我想介绍……,他/她创作了许多精彩的艺术作品。
The art of calligraphy has a history of over 3,000 years.
书法艺术有三千多年的历史。
Let me share with you my love for traditional Chinese painting.
让我和你分享我对中国传统绘画的热爱。
2. 主体句型
I still remember the first time that I tried using a brush.
我仍然记得我第一次尝试使用毛笔的情景。
Practising calligraphy requires a lot of attention and patience.
练习书法需要高度集中注意力和耐心。
Over time, I learnt how to concentrate on my task.
随着时间的推移,我学会了如何专注于我的任务。
When I am writing, I can often feel my breath slow down and my mind get quiet.
当我写字时,我经常能感觉到我的呼吸变平缓了,我的思绪变得平静。
Traditional Chinese paintings may not require a background, and the empty space leaves room for imagination.
中国传统绘画可能不需要背景,留白给想象留下了空间。
3. 结尾句型
Calligraphy is now one of my hobbies that help me relax.
书法现在是我帮助自己放松的爱好之一。
Whenever I feel down or under pressure, I pick up my brush and start writing.
每当我感到沮丧或压力大时,我就会拿起毛笔开始写字。
I hope more people can appreciate the beauty of traditional Chinese art.
我希望更多的人能欣赏中国传统艺术的美。
There is nothing more peaceful than practising calligraphy after a busy day.
没有什么比在忙碌一天后练习书法更让人平静的了。
4. 句型升级
基础句
升级句
Calligraphy is an art form. 书法是一种艺术形式。
Calligraphy is an artistic form of Chinese characters that is admired by many people at home and abroad. 书法是汉字的一种艺术形式,受到国内外许多人的赞赏。
I love calligraphy. 我热爱书法。
My love of calligraphy began when my father took me to a museum and I saw many wonderful pieces of writing. 我对书法的热爱始于父亲带我去博物馆,我看到了许多精彩的作品。
It was hard at first. 一开始很难。
I could hardly sit still for more than a few minutes, but over time I learnt how to concentrate on my task. 我几分钟就坐不住了,但随着时间的推移,我学会了如何专注于我的任务。
Calligraphy helps me relax. 书法帮助我放松。
Whenever I feel down or under pressure, I pick up my brush and start writing. Practising calligraphy always makes me feel better. 每当我感到沮丧或压力大时,我就会拿起毛笔开始写字。练习书法总是让我感觉更好。
He was a painter. 他是一位画家。
Xu Beihong was an artist who was most famous in the first half of the 20th century and created many beautiful paintings of horses. 徐悲鸿是20世纪上半叶最著名的艺术家,创作了许多美丽的马画。
四、高分写作方法
典例精析
请以My Experience with Chinese Calligraphy为题,根据以下提示介绍你与中国书法的经历。
1. 过去:对书法不了解,觉得无聊;
2. 现在:学习书法的经历,比如参加课程、练习的过程;
3. 感受:书法带来的变化,比如更有耐心,了解文化;
4. 展望:未来继续学习,推广书法。
词数:100 词左右
提示词:calligraphy, practice, patient, traditional culture
注意:
1. 表达中必须包含所给要点并进行适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等信息。
My Experience with Chinese Calligraphy
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【审题构思】
先明确三点:写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。
内容上,题目给出四个必须涵盖的时间阶段:过去的态度、现在的学习经历、当前的感受与变化、未来的计划。时态上,描述过去用一般过去时(used to),描述现在用一般现在时,描述未来计划用一般将来时。结构上分四段:第一段写过去对书法的态度,第二段写学习书法的过程,第三段写书法带来的变化,第四段写未来的计划。
【例文欣赏】
My Experience with Chinese Calligraphy
I used to know nothing about Chinese calligraphy and thought it was boring.
Last term, I joined a calligraphy club at school. At first, I found it hard to hold the brush correctly and write neat characters. But with my teacher’s help and daily practice, I made progress gradually. Now, calligraphy has become my favorite hobby. It makes me more patient and helps me understand Chinese traditional culture better. When I write calligraphy, I feel calm and relaxed.
I will keep practicing calligraphy in the future. I also want to introduce it to my foreign friends, so they can enjoy the beauty of this great art form.
【亮点解析】
用“used to”开篇,快速建立时间对比。 “I used to know nothing about Chinese calligraphy and thought it was boring.”用“used to”表达“过去曾经”的状态,为全文的“变化”主题奠定了基础。“know nothing”和“boring”两个词准确概括了最初的态度,与后文的“favorite hobby”形成鲜明对比。
学习过程有细节有转折。 “At first, I found it hard to hold the brush correctly and write neat characters.”写出了初学时的具体困难——握笔和写字。“But with my teacher's help and daily practice, I made progress gradually.”用“But”转折,用“with...help”和“daily practice”两个短语说明进步的原因,用“gradually”体现这是一个渐进的过程,真实可信。
感受从具体到文化,层次丰富。 “more patient”是性格层面的变化;“understand Chinese traditional culture better”是文化认知层面的收获;“feel calm and relaxed” 是心理感受层面的体验。三个角度涵盖了“更有耐心”“了解文化”“身心放松”,由内而外,由浅入深,响应了提示中的“更有耐心,了解文化”,同时又补充了“calm and relaxed”。
未来计划由己及人。 “I will keep practicing calligraphy in the future.”先表达个人的持续学习;“I also want to introduce it to my foreign friends, so they can enjoy the beauty of this great art form.”再表达推广的愿望。“introduce”呼应了本单元“介绍传统艺术”的核心表达,“so they can enjoy the beauty”用目的状语从句说明推广的意义。从“自己练”到“教别人”,体现了对传统文化的责任感。
时态转换准确。 描述过去用“used to know”“thought”;描述过去的学习经历用“joined”“found”;描述现状用“has become”“makes”“helps”“feel”;描述未来计划用“will keep”“want to introduce”。四种时态各有分工,转换自然。
五、阶梯训练
(一)句子训练
Level 1 汉译英
1. 徐悲鸿是我最喜欢的画家,他出生于1895年,是20世纪上半叶最著名的艺术家之一。
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2. 书法是汉字的一种艺术形式,受到国内外许多人的赞赏。
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3. 我对书法的热爱始于父亲带我去博物馆,我看到了许多精彩的作品。
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4. 随着时间的推移,我学会了如何专注于我的任务,并从创作出更好的作品中获得乐趣。
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5. 每当我感到沮丧或压力大时,我就会拿起毛笔开始写字,这总是让我感觉更好。
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Level 2 句型仿写(参照例句完成句子)
句型1:My love of ... began when ...(描述兴趣开始)
例句:My love of calligraphy began when my father took me to a museum.
我对书法的热爱始于父亲带我去博物馆。
(1)我对绘画的热爱始于我八岁时第一次拿起画笔。
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(2)我对传统音乐的热爱始于我在学校音乐会上第一次听古筝演奏。
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句型2:... requires a lot of ...(描述所需品质)
例句:Practising calligraphy requires a lot of attention and patience.
练习书法需要高度集中注意力和耐心。
(1)学习绘画需要大量的练习和创造力。
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(2)成为一名优秀的书法家需要多年的努力和奉献。
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句型3:... is an artistic form of ... that is admired by ...(描述艺术形式)
例句:Calligraphy is an artistic form of Chinese characters that is admired by many people at home and abroad.
书法是汉字的一种艺术形式,受到国内外许多人的赞赏。
(1)中国画是一种艺术形式,受到全世界许多人的赞赏。
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(2)书法是一种传统的艺术形式,受到年轻人和老年人的喜爱。
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句型4:I still remember the first time that ...(描述难忘经历)
例句:I still remember the first time that I tried using a brush.
我仍然记得我第一次尝试使用毛笔的情景。
(1)我仍然记得我第一次参观美术馆看到中国画的情景。
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(2)我仍然记得我第一次练习书法时感到多么兴奋。
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句型5:Whenever I feel ..., I ...(描述习惯与应对)
例句:Whenever I feel down or under pressure, I pick up my brush and start writing.
每当我感到沮丧或压力大时,我就会拿起毛笔开始写字。
(1)每当我感到压力大时,我就会听古典音乐来放松。
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(2)每当我感到难过时,我就会画画来让自己感觉更好。
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Level 3 句子升级
要求:参照下方示例,将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。
示例:
基础句:Calligraphy is an art form. 书法是一种艺术形式。
升级句:Calligraphy is an artistic form of Chinese characters that is admired by many people at home and abroad.
书法是汉字的一种艺术形式,受到国内外许多人的赞赏。
1. 基础句:I love calligraphy. 我热爱书法。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
2. 基础句:It was hard at first. 一开始很难。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
3. 基础句:Calligraphy helps me relax. 书法帮助我放松。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
4. 基础句:He was a painter. 他是一位画家。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
5. 基础句:Chinese paintings are beautiful. 中国画很美。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
6. 基础句:I like Xu Beihong’s paintings. 我喜欢徐悲鸿的画。
升级句: ____________________________________________________________
(二)篇章训练
假设你们学校英文报正在举办以“我最爱的水墨画”为主题的征文活动,请根据以下问题,以“My Favorite Ink Painting”为题,写一篇英语短文投稿。
1. What is your favorite ink painting?
2. What does it show?
3. Why do you like it?
要求:1. 短文需包含所有问题要点,并适当发挥;
2. 词数100左右。
My Favorite Ink Painting
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参考答案
Level 1 汉译英
1. My favourite painter is Xu Beihong. He was born in 1895 and is one of the most famous artists in the first half of the 20th century.
2. Calligraphy is an artistic form of Chinese characters that is admired by many people at home and abroad.
3. My love of calligraphy began when my father took me to a museum and I saw many wonderful pieces of writing.
4. Over time, I learnt how to concentrate on my task and took pleasure in producing better work.
5. Whenever I feel down or under pressure, I pick up my brush and start writing. It always makes me feel better.
Level 2 句型仿写
句型1
(1)My love of painting began when I first picked up a paintbrush at the age of eight.
(2)My love of traditional music began when I first heard the guzheng at a school concert.
句型2
(1)Learning painting requires a lot of practice and creativity.
(2)Becoming a good calligrapher requires years of effort and devotion.
句型3
(1)Chinese painting is an art form that is admired by many people around the world.
(2)Calligraphy is a traditional art form that is loved by both the young and the old.
句型4
(1)I still remember the first time that I visited an art museum and saw Chinese paintings.
(2)I still remember the first time that I practised calligraphy and how excited I felt.
句型5
(1)Whenever I feel stressed, I listen to classical music to relax.
(2)Whenever I feel sad, I paint to make myself feel better.
Level 3 句子升级
(以下为参考升级答案,其他合理升级也可接受)
1. 升级句:My love of calligraphy began when my father took me to a museum and I saw many wonderful pieces of writing that caught my interest.
我对书法的热爱始于父亲带我去博物馆,我看到了许多精彩的作品,它们引起了我的兴趣。
2. 升级句:I could hardly sit still for more than a few minutes at first, but over time I learnt how to concentrate on my task and take pleasure in producing better work.
一开始我几分钟就坐不住了,但随着时间的推移,我学会了如何专注于我的任务,并从创作出更好的作品中获得乐趣。
3. 升级句:Whenever I feel down or under pressure, I pick up my brush and start writing. Practising calligraphy always makes me feel better and helps me find peace.
每当我感到沮丧或压力大时,我就会拿起毛笔开始写字。练习书法总是让我感觉更好,帮助我找到平静。
4. 升级句:Xu Beihong was an artist who was most famous in the first half of the 20th century. He created many beautiful paintings of animals, especially horses and birds.
徐悲鸿是20世纪上半叶最著名的艺术家。他创作了许多美丽的动物画,尤其是马和鸟。
5. 升级句:Traditional Chinese paintings may not require a background, and the empty space in the painting leaves room for imagination, which makes them truly special.
中国传统绘画可能不需要背景,画中的留白给想象留下了空间,这让它们真正特别。
6. 升级句:My favourite painting of Xu Beihong is Ten Horses in Spring Mountains. I love the horses in this painting because they look so free and full of energy.
我最喜欢的徐悲鸿的画是《春山十骏图》。我喜欢这幅画中的马,因为它们看起来如此自由、充满活力。
篇章训练(参考范文)
My Favorite Ink Painting
My favorite ink painting is Rushing Horse by Xu Beihong.
It shows a strong horse running wildly on an open field, with its mane flying in the wind. The black ink lines make the horse look full of energy and strength.
I love this painting because it not only shows Xu Beihong’s great painting skills but also expresses his love for his country. Every time I look at it, I feel encouraged to face challenges bravely. It’s a perfect example of how ink painting can convey deep feelings. I’m proud that we have such amazing traditional artworks.
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