Unit 1 Happy Holiday单元书面表达（专项训练）2026-2027学年人教版八年级英语上册

**基本信息** 聚焦假期旅行书面表达，构建“主题要求-句型积累-范文示范-错误警示-实战训练”五步方法体系，以一般过去时为核心，三段式结构为框架，系统提升语言表达与逻辑组织能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作主题|1主题+4要素|明确话题、题目、时态（一般过去时）、结构（三段式）|以“描述经历”为核心，确立写作框架与语言基调| |万能句型|8个必背句|提供场景化表达模板（地点、活动、感受等）|从基础表述到功能句型，构建表达逻辑链| |范文示范|2篇（基础+高分）|基础版重稳分，高分版用高级句式（so...that..., not only...but also...）|由易到难，展示语言能力进阶路径| |必记扣分点|4类易错点|强调时态转换、固定搭配、结构完整性|针对学生典型错误，强化语言准确性| |专练题目|8道情境题|覆盖征文、邮件、投稿等真实场景，强化方法迁移|从单一话题到多元情境，提升思维灵活性与学习能力|

2026-2027学年八年级英语上学期考点大通关（人教版新教材） Unit 1 Happy Holiday单元书面表达专练 一、写作主题 话题：描述一次假期旅行/难忘的假期生活 必考题目：My Happy Holiday / My Unforgettable Trip 时态：一般过去时（全文核心！最容易扣分） 结构：三段式（开头+经过+感受） 词数：80词左右 二、写作万能句型（单元必背） 1. I had a wonderful and happy holiday. 我度过了一个愉快的假期。 2. I went to … with my parents. 我和父母去了…… 3. The weather was sunny and cool. 天气晴朗凉爽。 4. We visited many beautiful places and took many photos. 我们参观美景、拍了很多照片。 5. We tasted lots of delicious local food. 我们品尝了许多美味的当地美食。 6. The people there were very friendly. 那里的人很友好。 7. This trip made me relaxed and happy. 这次旅行让我放松又开心。 8. It was an unforgettable experience. 这是一次难忘的经历。 三、基础满分范文（适合背诵、考试稳分） My Happy Holiday Last summer holiday, I had a great time. I went to Qingdao with my family. The weather was fine. It was cool and sunny. We went to the beach every day. We walked on the sand and swam in the sea. We also visited some beautiful parks and took quite a few photos. In the evening, we tasted fresh seafood. It tasted really delicious. This holiday was wonderful. I felt very relaxed. It was an unforgettable trip for me. I hope I can go there again. 四、高分升级版范文（句式高级、卷面满分） My Unforgettable Holiday I enjoyed a wonderful holiday last summer. I traveled to a beautiful city with my parents. During the trip, we visited many famous places of interest. The views were so beautiful that I fell in love with them at once. We also tried different kinds of local food. What’s more, the local people were friendly and helpful. We took lots of photos to record the happy moments. This holiday not only made me feel relaxed, but also opened my eyes. It was truly an unforgettable experience. I will always remember this happy holiday. 五、必记扣分点（学生最常错） 1. 全文必须用过去式！ go→went / take→took / have→had / taste→tasted 2. quite a few + 可数名词复数 3. not only…but also… 高分句型 4. 结尾一定要写感受（放松、难忘、收获） 六、书面表达专练 1．假如你是李华，你校微信公众号正在开展主题为“An unforgettable holiday trip”的英语征文活动，请你根据下面的提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你和家人的一次难忘的假期旅行经历。 写作提示： 1. 你在什么时候去哪里度假？和谁一起？ 2. 你们都做了什么？感受如何？ 3. 为什么你觉得这次假期旅行难忘？ 写作要求： 1. 短文内容必须包含所提供的要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名； 3. 词数：80词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 An unforgettable holiday trip I am Li Hua from Class 2. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你是李华，你刚刚度过了一个有意义的国庆假期。你们学校英文报正在征稿，请你根据以下提示，以A Meaningful Holiday为题，写一篇英文短文投稿。 1. Where did you go? 2. What did you do? 3. How did you feel? 4. What did you learn? … 要求： 1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，可适当发挥； 2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、班级等）； 4. 词数：不少于80。 A Meaningful Holiday _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．在初一的学习生活中，你肯定参加过一些户外活动，像“a school trip”或“going camping”等。你班将开展以“An Amazing Outdoor Activity”为题的征文活动，并在班级内展示。请根据以下要求用英语写一篇短文。 要求： 1．80词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2．可适当添加细节，使行文连贯； 3．文中不能出现真实姓名和所在学校的名称。 An Amazing Outdoor Activity Time went by quickly. In the past year, I took part in many amazing outdoor activities.______________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike发来邮件，想了解你刚刚结束的暑假生活。请根据以下提示，用英语给他写一封回信。 提示 地点(Place)：祖父母家(grandparents’ home)/海滩 (beach)/北京(Beijing) (三选一) 活动(Activities)：拜访祖父母(visit grandparents)/游泳和玩沙(swim and play in the sand)/参观故宫(visit the Palace Museum) (与地点对应) 感受(Feeling)：开心的(happy)/兴奋的(excited)/放松的(relaxed) 要求 1. 必须包含提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥。 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 3. 词数80词左右。书信格式已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you about my summer vacation. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about your holiday? Please write back soon. Yours, Li Hua 5．假如你是Lucy, 今年暑假你和父母一起游览了杭州，根据下面提供的信息，以“My Summer Holiday”为题，介绍你的杭州之旅以及你的感受。根据提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，可适当发挥。提示内容： 1. 第一天，参观西湖，拍了许多照片； 2. 第二天，在湖里游泳，非常凉爽； 3. 第三天，进行野炊，食物很好吃； 4. 第四天，在街上散步，为朋友买了一些礼物； 5. 很累，但很开心。期待着下次再去。 参考词汇：在第一天 on the first day；西湖 the West Lake；第四 fourth My Summer Holiday _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．在这个充满探索与发现的年纪，每一次旅行都是成长的契机。旅行不仅让人身心得到放松，还能与亲友共享欢聚的美好，更是游览祖国大好河山的机会。请根据下面的提示，描述令你难忘的一次旅行经历,80词左右。 提示问题： 1. Where did you go? 2. What did you do? 3. What do you think of the trip? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假设你是李华，刚刚度过了一个难忘的国庆假期。请根据以下表格提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，介绍你的假期。 时间 活动 感受 第一天 在家分担家务：爸爸修理自行车，妈妈洗衣服，我整理书架；打包行李，准备去杭州。 意识到应该和家人分担家务。 第二天 乘高铁2小时到达杭州；游览西湖，参观浙江博物馆；晚上品尝西湖醋鱼。 学到了很多历史知识，美食很美味。 第三天 乘大巴去千岛湖，坐船游湖，拍了很多照片。 景色令人惊叹，玩得很开心。 最后一天 和杭州的叔叔一家聚餐，逛河坊街买特产。 家是充满爱的地方，团聚很幸福。 总结 这是一个多么棒的假期呀！希望下个假期能做更多特别的事。 —— 参考词汇：high-speed train 高铁，West Lake 西湖，Zhejiang Museum 浙江博物馆，West Lake Sweet-sour Fish 西湖醋鱼，Hefang Street 河坊街 An Unforgettable Holiday During the National Day holiday, I had a wonderful experience. _______________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．学校公众号举办 “我的假期旅行” 英语征文活动，请你介绍一次和家人的暑假旅行经历。 要求：80 词左右；不得出现真实校名、人名；开头已给出，不计入词数。 My Summer Vacation My family and I took a wonderful trip this summer. We went to _______________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1．例文：                                                   An unforgettable holiday trip I am Li Hua from Class 2. Last summer, I went to Beijing with my parents for a holiday trip, which turned out to be truly unforgettable. We climbed the Great Wall early in the morning and admired its amazing grand view. We also visited the Palace Museum to learn about ancient Chinese history. We tasted delicious local snacks and took many lovely photos together. Away from busy schoolwork, I enjoyed warm family time and gained lots of new knowledge. This joyful and meaningful trip leaves sweet memories in my heart forever. I hope to visit Beijing again and explore more places. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，全文以一般过去时为主 明确要点：①出行基础信息：出行时间、目的地、同行人员； ②行程具体活动和自身真实感受； ③阐释本次旅行令人难忘的具体原因 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my) 注意事项：不得出现真实姓名、学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，介绍自己 主体段：交代出行基础信息，游玩项目，以及身心感受 结尾段：点明旅行难忘缘由，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：出行基础信息 出行时间：last summer vacation/last weekend/last year等 同行人员：my parents/my friends/my relatives等 游玩地点：Beijing/Nanjing/the U.S.等 要点二：活动行程和个人感受 游玩活动：the Great Wall/the Forbidden City/museum/theme park等 景物评价：magnificent/amazing/beautiful等 内心感受：unforgettable/excited/tired/amazed等 要点三：旅行难忘的原因 难忘原因：gained lots of new knowledge/learn about Chinese history/spend happy time with family/stay away from busy schoolwork/experienced new local culture等 2．例文： A Meaningful Holiday (侧重传统文化学习) My National Holiday this year was meaningful. Instead of going to crowded tourist spots, I visited a pottery workshop in a nearby village with my parents. During the two-day trip, we learned about local pottery history. The best part was making our own pieces. It was much harder than it looked! My first try ended up as a lump of clay, but the master taught me to control the wheel. Finally, I made a small bowl. We also painted our works after they dried. I felt a great sense of achievement and peace. I learned that traditional skills require patience and dedication. This holiday taught me to appreciate handmade crafts and the importance of preserving our cultural heritage. 参考范文 A Meaningful Holiday(侧重志愿服务) I had a very meaningful National Holiday by doing something special—I became a volunteer at the city library. My main job was to help sort returned books and put them back on the right shelves. Sometimes, I also helped little kids find their favorite picture books. It was tiring to walk around the large library all day, but seeing the happy smiles on the children's faces made all the effort worthwhile. I felt tired but incredibly happy and fulfilled. This experience taught me the value of hard work behind the scenes and the joy of contributing to the community. I realized that even a small act of service can make a difference. 【详解】［第一步：审题立意］ 确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时为主 明确要点：去哪里；做了什么；感受如何；学到了什么 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：  无真实姓名、班级；语句通顺连贯；字数不少于80词 ［第二步：构思布局］ 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，点明国庆假期做了有意义的事，交代地点（市图书馆做志愿者） 主体段：详细描述志愿者具体工作内容，补充过程中的小辛苦与暖心瞬间 结尾段：抒发内心感受，升华本次志愿活动带来的人生感悟 ［第三步：要点展开］ 要点一：Where did you go? 去向 范文原句：I had a very meaningful National Holiday by doing something special – I became a volunteer at the city library. 拓展地点：community center 社区中心、old people’s home 养老院、city museum 市博物馆、animal shelter 动物救助站 拓展句型： I spent my National Holiday volunteering in... I took part in volunteer work in... 要点二：What did you do? 具体行动 范文原句：My main job was to help sort returned books and put them back on the right shelves. Sometimes, I also helped little kids find their favorite picture books. 拓展活动： clean the public areas 打扫公共区域、read newspapers for the elderly 为老人读报纸、guide visitors 引导参观者、hand out environmental leaflets 发放环保宣传单 拓展句型： My task included... Besides the main work, I also... 要点三：How did you feel? 内心感受 范文原句：I felt tired but incredibly happy and fulfilled. 拓展情绪形容词： rewarded 有成就感的、warm-hearted 暖心的、satisfied 满足的、proud 自豪的 拓展句型： Although it was tiring, I gained lots of happiness. What a wonderful and unforgettable experience! 要点四：What did you learn? 收获与感悟 范文原句：This experience taught me the value of hard work behind the scenes and the joy of contributing to the community. I realized that even a small act of service can make a difference. 拓展感悟：Helping others brings happiness to ourselves./No small effort is useless. 拓展句型： I have learned that... It makes me understand that... 3．例文： An Amazing Outdoor Activity Time went by quickly. In the past year, I took part in many amazing outdoor activities. Last summer, my classmates and I joined in an unforgettable school trip to the nearby hills. We spent the day climbing the hill, taking in fresh air and seeing different animals. We even had a small picnic by a river, where we shared stories and laughter. When we reached the top of the hill, we were so excited to see a view of the entire valley. This activity was amazing because it gave us a chance to take a break from noisy daily life and connect with nature. It was also a great opportunity to communicate with our classmates and create good memories. I felt so happy and couldn’t wait to attend the next outdoor activity! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：叙事记叙文，以一般过去时为主 明确要点：活动时间地点、活动内容、活动精彩的原因、个人感受 确定人称：第一人称(I/we/my) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，词数不少于80词   [第二步：构思布局] 四段式结构： 开头段：总起，引出本次难忘的户外活动 主体段1：详细记叙户外活动的具体所作所为 主体段2：说明活动精彩的原因 结尾段：抒发内心感受   [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：When and where the activity was 时间地点选择：last summer/the nearby hills/on weekends/in the countryside等 句式参考：Last summer, my classmates and I went to the nearby hills for a school trip.等   要点二：What did you do in the activity 活动内容：climb the hill/take in fresh air/watch animals/have a picnic/share stories/chat happily等 句式参考：We spent the whole day climbing hills and having a picnic beside the river.等   要点三：Why was it amazing 精彩原因：take a break from busy study/get close to nature/strengthen friendship/create sweet memories等 句式参考：It is amazing because we can get away from busy schoolwork and enjoy the beauty of nature.等   要点四：How did you feel 内心感受：happy/relaxed/wonderful/look forward to next activity等 句式参考：I felt really happy and expected more outdoor activities later.等 4．例文： Dear Mike, Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you about my summer vacation. I went to Beijing with my parents during the holiday. It is a famous city in China. We visited the Palace Museum there. It was very big and beautiful. I learned much about Chinese history. I also took many photos with my camera. The food was delicious too. I felt really excited and happy during the trip. It was a wonderful experience for me. I hope to go there again next year. What about your holiday? Please write back soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（书信），向朋友介绍自己的暑假旅行 时态：一般过去时（假期已经过完），开头结尾可用一般现在时 明确要点：出行同伴与目的地；游览景点以及收获；拍照、品尝当地美食；旅途感受与来年愿望 确定人称：第一人称I 注意事项：必须包含提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥；文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；词数80左右。书信格式已给出，不计入总词数 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：回信致谢，引出话题，准备介绍我的暑假 主体段：叙述出行同伴、目的地、游玩景点、收获、拍照、美食、心情以及心愿 结尾段：询问对方假期生活，盼望对方尽快回信 [第三步：要点展开] 要点 1：出行同伴与目的地 I went to Beijing with my parents during the holiday./My parents and I travelled to Beijing in my summer‑holiday. 要点 2：游览景点以及收获 We visited the Palace Museum there. It was very big and beautiful. I learned much about Chinese history. /We toured the Palace Museum. It was large and amazing. I learnt lots of knowledge of Chinese history. 要点 3：拍照、品尝当地美食 I also took many photos with my camera. The food was delicious too./I took plenty of photographs. We enjoyed nice local food. 要点 4：旅途感受与来年愿望 I felt really excited and happy during the trip. It was a wonderful experience for me. I hope to go there again next year. /The trip made me cheerful. I had an unforgettable trip. I plan to visit Beijing again the next year. 5．例文： My Summer Holiday I visited Hangzhou with my parents this summer vacation. We had a great time there. Hangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities in our country. We visited the West Lake and took many photos there on the first day. I swam in the lake the next day and it was very cool. We had a picnic on the third day. How delicious the food was! I took a walk on the street and bought some gifts for my friends on the fourth day. I left Hangzhou, feeling tired but happy. I am looking forward to going there again. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般过去时为主 明确要点：按时间顺序（第一天至第四天）记录每日活动，并表达整体感受与期待 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称；可适当发挥补充细节 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明暑假与父母共游杭州，总述旅途十分愉快 主体段：按时间顺序依次介绍四天的具体行程与活动内容 结尾段：总结旅行感受，升华情感，表达故地重游的期待 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：每日行程活动 地点选择：the West Lake/Leifeng Tower等 活动内容：visited the West Lake and took many photos, swam in the lake/had a picnic/took a walk on the street and bought some gifts for friends/went boating on the West Lake/visited Leifeng Tower等 效果评价：it was very cool/How delicious the food was/felt cool and comfortable等 要点二：旅行收获与感受 感受：feeling tired but happy/unforgettable/pleasant and meaningful/learned about local culture等 表达期待：looking forward to going there again/wish to explore more places of interest等 6．例文： Last summer, I went to Beijing with my parents. It was an unforgettable trip. We visited the Great Wall and the Forbidden City. The scenery was amazing. We took many photos and ate delicious Beijing Duck. Although we felt tired, we were very happy. I learned a lot about Chinese history and culture. This trip not only relaxed my mind but also broadened my horizons. I hope to travel there again in the future. Traveling is meaningful because it helps us grow and know about the world better. I will never forget this wonderful experience. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时为主 明确要点：旅行地点、旅行活动、对旅行的看法 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my/we/our) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，词数不少于80词 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，交代旅行时间、地点，点明这是一次难忘的旅行 主体段：介绍旅行中做的事情，所见所闻，活动细节 结尾段：表达看法，总结感受，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：旅行地点 地点选择：Beijing/Guilin/Chengdu等 要点二：旅行活动 活动选择：visited the Great Wall and the Forbidden City/visit places of interest/take many photos/eat local food/learn about history and culture/climb mountains/buy souvenirs/enjoy natural sights等 情绪描写：feel tired/be very happy/have great fun/amazing/wonderful等   要点三：对旅行的看法 看法：help us grow/know about the world better/open up our eyes/gain much knowledge等 7．例文： An Unforgettable Holiday During the National Day holiday, I had a wonderful experience. On the first day, I helped with housework at home. Dad repaired the bicycle, Mum washed clothes, and I tidied the bookshelf and packed luggage and prepared for Hangzhou. I realized we should share chores with our family. On the second day, we took 2 hours’ high-speed train to Hangzhou. We visited the West Lake and the Zhejiang Museum. I learned a lot about history, and the Sweet-sour fish we ate at night was delicious. On the third day, we took a bus to Qiandao Lake. We boated on the lake and took many photos. The scenery was amazing! On the last day, we had dinner with my uncle’s family in Hangzhou and walked around He Fang Street to buy local specialties. I felt home is a place full of love, and family reunions are the happiest moments. What a fantastic holiday! I hope to do more special things in the next holiday. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，介绍个人国庆假期经历，以一般过去时为主。 明确要点：按时间顺序叙述四天的活动及感受，并写一句总结。 确定人称：第一人称（I/we）。 注意事项：不少于80词；不要遗漏表格中每一天的内容；正确使用参考词汇；不得透露真实姓名和学校名称。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明国庆假期难忘。 主体段：按时间顺序分别介绍第一天至最后一天的活动与感受。 结尾段：总结感受，表达对未来假期的期待。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：第一天分担家务 关键词：help with housework, repair the bicycle, wash clothes, tidy the bookshelf, share chores with our family, take responsibility for housework等 要点二：第二天杭州游 关键词：high-speed train, West Lake, Zhejiang Museum, Sweet-sour fish, learn a lot about history, taste delicious local food等 要点三：第三天千岛湖之行 关键词：take a bus to Qiandao Lake, boat on the lake, take many photos, amazing scenery, be amazed by beautiful views, have great fun等 要点四：最后一天与叔叔家团聚 关键词：have dinner with my uncle's family, walk around He Fang Street, buy local specialties, a place full of love, feel happy to stay together with family full of love等 要点五：总结全文 关键词：What a fantastic holiday, do more special things, enjoy this wonderful holiday, hope for more special experiences等 8．例文： My Summer Vacation My family and I took a wonderful trip this summer. We went to Yunnan by plane. It took us about three hours to get there. The weather was sunny and warm, perfect for sightseeing. We visited many beautiful places, such as the Old Town of Lijiang and Erhai Lake. We took lots of photos to record the happy moments. Also, we ate delicious local food like rice noodles. My parents were very happy, and I felt completely relaxed. It was truly an unforgettable experience for all of us. I hope to travel there again next year. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：叙事性记叙文，以一般过去时为主 明确要点：和家人的暑假旅行经历，涵盖出行方式、行程见闻、活动内容与旅行感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/we/my family） 注意事项：不得透露真实校名与人名，词数控制在80词左右，开头已给出不计入总词数 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：已给出总起句，点明和家人开启了精彩的夏日旅行 主体段：依次介绍出行方式、目的地的天气、游览的景点、品尝的当地美食 结尾段：总结旅行感受，表达难忘体验与重游的期待 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：出行与抵达 出行目的地：Yunnan/Beijing/Xi'an/Sanya等 出行方式：by plane/by train/by car等 行程时长：It took us about three hours to get there/We spent 5 hours on the way等 要点二：旅途见闻 天气状况：sunny and warm/cool and comfortable/fine with soft wind等 游览地点：the Old Town of Lijiang and Erhai Lake/the Great Wall/the West Lake等 活动内容：took lots of photos/climbed mountains/walked around the ancient streets等 特色体验：ate delicious local food like rice noodles/tasted fresh seafood/learned about local culture等 要点三：旅行感受 家人状态：My parents were very happy/My parents said it was a great rest等 个人感受：I felt completely relaxed/I learned a lot about different customs等 整体评价：an unforgettable experience/a sweet memory for all of us等 后续期待：I hope to travel there again next year/I look forward to another family trip soon等 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2026-2027学年八年级英语上学期考点大通关（人教版新教材） Unit 1 Happy Holiday单元书面表达专练 一、写作主题 话题：描述一次假期旅行/难忘的假期生活 必考题目：My Happy Holiday / My Unforgettable Trip 时态：一般过去时（全文核心！最容易扣分） 结构：三段式（开头+经过+感受） 词数：80词左右 二、写作万能句型（单元必背） 1. I had a wonderful and happy holiday. 我度过了一个愉快的假期。 2. I went to … with my parents. 我和父母去了…… 3. The weather was sunny and cool. 天气晴朗凉爽。 4. We visited many beautiful places and took many photos. 我们参观美景、拍了很多照片。 5. We tasted lots of delicious local food. 我们品尝了许多美味的当地美食。 6. The people there were very friendly. 那里的人很友好。 7. This trip made me relaxed and happy. 这次旅行让我放松又开心。 8. It was an unforgettable experience. 这是一次难忘的经历。 三、基础满分范文（适合背诵、考试稳分） My Happy Holiday Last summer holiday, I had a great time. I went to Qingdao with my family. The weather was fine. It was cool and sunny. We went to the beach every day. We walked on the sand and swam in the sea. We also visited some beautiful parks and took quite a few photos. In the evening, we tasted fresh seafood. It tasted really delicious. This holiday was wonderful. I felt very relaxed. It was an unforgettable trip for me. I hope I can go there again. 四、高分升级版范文（句式高级、卷面满分） My Unforgettable Holiday I enjoyed a wonderful holiday last summer. I traveled to a beautiful city with my parents. During the trip, we visited many famous places of interest. The views were so beautiful that I fell in love with them at once. We also tried different kinds of local food. What’s more, the local people were friendly and helpful. We took lots of photos to record the happy moments. This holiday not only made me feel relaxed, but also opened my eyes. It was truly an unforgettable experience. I will always remember this happy holiday. 五、必记扣分点（学生最常错） 1. 全文必须用过去式！ go→went / take→took / have→had / taste→tasted 2. quite a few + 可数名词复数 3. not only…but also… 高分句型 4. 结尾一定要写感受（放松、难忘、收获） 六、书面表达专练 1．假如你是李华，你校微信公众号正在开展主题为“An unforgettable holiday trip”的英语征文活动，请你根据下面的提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你和家人的一次难忘的假期旅行经历。 写作提示： 1. 你在什么时候去哪里度假？和谁一起？ 2. 你们都做了什么？感受如何？ 3. 为什么你觉得这次假期旅行难忘？ 写作要求： 1. 短文内容必须包含所提供的要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名； 3. 词数：80词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 An unforgettable holiday trip I am Li Hua from Class 2. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你是李华，你刚刚度过了一个有意义的国庆假期。你们学校英文报正在征稿，请你根据以下提示，以A Meaningful Holiday为题，写一篇英文短文投稿。 1. Where did you go? 2. What did you do? 3. How did you feel? 4. What did you learn? … 要求： 1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，可适当发挥； 2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、班级等）； 4. 词数：不少于80。 A Meaningful Holiday _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．在初一的学习生活中，你肯定参加过一些户外活动，像“a school trip”或“going camping”等。你班将开展以“An Amazing Outdoor Activity”为题的征文活动，并在班级内展示。请根据以下要求用英语写一篇短文。 要求： 1．80词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2．可适当添加细节，使行文连贯； 3．文中不能出现真实姓名和所在学校的名称。 An Amazing Outdoor Activity Time went by quickly. In the past year, I took part in many amazing outdoor activities.______________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike发来邮件，想了解你刚刚结束的暑假生活。请根据以下提示，用英语给他写一封回信。 提示 地点(Place)：祖父母家(grandparents’ home)/海滩 (beach)/北京(Beijing) (三选一) 活动(Activities)：拜访祖父母(visit grandparents)/游泳和玩沙(swim and play in the sand)/参观故宫(visit the Palace Museum) (与地点对应) 感受(Feeling)：开心的(happy)/兴奋的(excited)/放松的(relaxed) 要求 1. 必须包含提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥。 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 3. 词数80词左右。书信格式已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you about my summer vacation. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about your holiday? Please write back soon. Yours, Li Hua 5．假如你是Lucy, 今年暑假你和父母一起游览了杭州，根据下面提供的信息，以“My Summer Holiday”为题，介绍你的杭州之旅以及你的感受。根据提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，可适当发挥。提示内容： 1. 第一天，参观西湖，拍了许多照片； 2. 第二天，在湖里游泳，非常凉爽； 3. 第三天，进行野炊，食物很好吃； 4. 第四天，在街上散步，为朋友买了一些礼物； 5. 很累，但很开心。期待着下次再去。 参考词汇：在第一天 on the first day；西湖 the West Lake；第四 fourth My Summer Holiday _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．在这个充满探索与发现的年纪，每一次旅行都是成长的契机。旅行不仅让人身心得到放松，还能与亲友共享欢聚的美好，更是游览祖国大好河山的机会。请根据下面的提示，描述令你难忘的一次旅行经历,80词左右。 提示问题： 1. Where did you go? 2. What did you do? 3. What do you think of the trip? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假设你是李华，刚刚度过了一个难忘的国庆假期。请根据以下表格提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，介绍你的假期。 时间 活动 感受 第一天 在家分担家务：爸爸修理自行车，妈妈洗衣服，我整理书架；打包行李，准备去杭州。 意识到应该和家人分担家务。 第二天 乘高铁2小时到达杭州；游览西湖，参观浙江博物馆；晚上品尝西湖醋鱼。 学到了很多历史知识，美食很美味。 第三天 乘大巴去千岛湖，坐船游湖，拍了很多照片。 景色令人惊叹，玩得很开心。 最后一天 和杭州的叔叔一家聚餐，逛河坊街买特产。 家是充满爱的地方，团聚很幸福。 总结 这是一个多么棒的假期呀！希望下个假期能做更多特别的事。 —— 参考词汇：high-speed train 高铁，West Lake 西湖，Zhejiang Museum 浙江博物馆，West Lake Sweet-sour Fish 西湖醋鱼，Hefang Street 河坊街 An Unforgettable Holiday During the National Day holiday, I had a wonderful experience. _______________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．学校公众号举办 “我的假期旅行” 英语征文活动，请你介绍一次和家人的暑假旅行经历。 要求：80 词左右；不得出现真实校名、人名；开头已给出，不计入词数。 My Summer Vacation My family and I took a wonderful trip this summer. We went to _______________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $