Unit 3 Using Language（以读促写课讲义）英语人教版选择性必修第一册

本讲义聚焦主题公园与自然景区介绍写作，以“词汇激活—句式积累—分步写作—完整任务—自评巩固”为脉络，搭建学习支架。Lead in激活主题形容词、分类及体验词块，Language Building积累位置定位、游玩项目等核心句式，Mini-writing通过基础介绍、-ing描写、宣传结尾练习夯实基础，Writing Task提供思维导图框架与自评清单引导完整写作。 该资料特色在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养，系统整合主题词块（如“magical”“breathtaking beauty”）、功能句式（if条件句、祈使句、-ing结构），借助思维导图框架培养逻辑组织能力。课中通过图片导入、分步练习辅助教师高效授课，课后引导整理语料、迁移写作框架，助力学生自主查漏补缺，提升写作应用能力。

Unit 3 Using language （写作课讲义） 目录 1. Lead in 2. Language Building 3. Mini-writing 4. Writing Task 5. Self-assessment 6. Homework 1. Lead in 一、主题词汇激活（主题公园 & 自然景区品质 / 特色） 描述公园特色形容词 incredible 绝妙的；magical 充满魔力的；fantasy 梦幻的；unique 独一无二的；superb 顶级的；splendid 华丽壮观的；vast 广阔的；fascinating 极具吸引力的；remote 偏远静谧的 公园分类词块 cartoon theme park 卡通主题公园；culture-themed park 文化主题公园；ocean-themed park 海洋主题公园；natural geopark 地质自然公园 游客体验词块 come true 实现；appeal to 吸引；put on performances 上演演出；try special snacks 品尝特色小吃；ride roller coasters 乘坐过山车；watch parades & fireworks 观看巡游与烟花；admire natural landscape 欣赏自然风光 二、三大主题公园导入提问 展示迪士尼、多莱坞、珠海长隆海洋王国图片 提问 1：What makes each theme park different and attractive? 提问 2：Besides fun rides and delicious food, what else can visitors gain from theme parks? 三、过渡句 Theme parks bring joy and knowledge to every visitor. Fun is never their only charm. 玩乐只是主题公园的一部分，文化与风景才是长久魅力。 2. Language Building 一、文本核心公园句式积累 1. 介绍公园位置 & 定位（开篇万能句） 1. Dollywood, in the beautiful Smoky Mountains in the southeastern USA, is unique because it shows and celebrates America's traditional southeastern culture. 2. Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, China, is one of the leading ocean-themed parks in the world. 3. The theme park you are probably most familiar with is Disneyland, which can be found in several parts of the world. 2. 园内游玩项目描写 • Travel through space, visit a pirate ship, or meet cartoon characters. • Ride on steam engines and wooden roller coasters. • Join water fights, watch dolphin shows and splendid fireworks displays. 3. 景观、表演、美食描写 • Famous music groups put on performances indoors and outdoors all year round. • Walk under the world’s largest Whale Shark Aquarium and watch thousands of fish. • Plenty of restaurants with tasty food for every appetite. 4. 结尾吸引游客（祈使句 + if 条件句） If you want to have fun and more than fun, come to Disneyland! If it is ocean entertainment that you are looking for, come to Chimelong Ocean Kingdom! 二、自然类景区拓展（贝加尔湖、丹霞、张家界等）核心词块 vast territory 广阔地域；remote location 偏远之地；unique wildlife 独特野生动植物；breathtaking beauty 令人惊叹的美景；colourful rocky landscape 彩色丹霞地貌；magnificent peaks 奇峰；rushing water 奔腾溪流；glacier 冰川；karst landscape 喀斯特地貌 三、表格填空答案（P32） 填空原文： Disneyland (various locations) Dollywood in the Smoky Mountains (southeastern USA) Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, China Travel through space; visit a pirate ship；meet cartoon/fairytale characters；ride thrilling facilities Thunderhead Water fight against pirates；exciting roller coaster; water rides A parade of cartoon characters Famous country music groups put on performances there Whale Shark Aquarium；dolphin & sea lion shows； polar bears Plenty of restaurants with tasty food for every appetite 四、语言特征总结（P33 ▲2） 1. 栏目表头 A Name and location 名称与位置 B Rides & Activities 游乐项目 C Special Sights, Shows & Animals 特色景观、表演与动物 D Food Service 餐饮服务 2. 三类语言要素作用 A. 形容词：magical, incredible, superb, splendid 等，丰富画面，增强感染力，突出公园独特魅力 B. if-clauses 条件状语从句：用于精准定位游客需求，针对性推荐公园，逻辑清晰 C. 祈使句（Come to…）：语气亲切，直接号召读者前往，起到宣传收尾作用 五、贝加尔湖短文填空答案（P34 ▲1） 六、-ing 形式问答示范（P34 ▲2） 1. What impressed you most when visiting Zhangye Danxia Geopark? 2. What tops the list of tourists' favourite activities in Zhangjiajie? 3. What do tourists like to do at Guilin's Li River? 4. What activities would appeal to adventurous tourists in Lijiang, Yunnan Province? 3. Mini-writing 练习 1：公园基础介绍（地点 + 特色 + 游玩项目） 步骤 内容 示例 ① 选定公园 确定公园 + 所在地 Chimelong Ocean Kingdom, Zhuhai ② 提炼核心特色 1 个核心亮点 the world’s largest Whale Shark Aquarium ③ 罗列游玩项目 2-3 项活动 watch dolphin shows, ride water roller coasters, enjoy night fireworks ④ 组句模板 (Park) in (place), a (theme) park famous for (core feature), offers visitors chances to (activities) Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, a world-famous ocean-themed park famous for the giant Whale Shark Aquarium, offers visitors chances to watch dolphin shows, ride water roller coasters and enjoy splendid night fireworks. 练习 2：-ing 形式描写游玩体验（重点语法） 步骤 内容 示例 ① 以动名词开头描写感受 (Doing sth.) is the most amazing part of the park. Walking under the huge aquarium is the most amazing part of the park. ② 补充配套体验 Besides, you can spend hours doing sth. Besides, you can spend hours watching cartoon parades and tasting local snacks. ③ 收尾总结收获 Visiting here brings you both fun and knowledge. Visiting this park brings you both joy and marine knowledge. 练习 3：宣传结尾（if 条件句 + 祈使句） 模板 1：If you are fond of …, come to …! If you love marine animals and water rides, come to Chimelong Ocean Kingdom! 模板 2：Come to … to have fun learning about … Come to Dollywood to have fun learning all about America's southeastern traditional culture! 4. Writing Task 一、写作要求 Choose one theme park or natural geopark you like, write an introductory passage for it. 写作步骤： 1. Choose the park 2. Draw a mind map (Attractions / Food / Shows / Rides / Other features) 3. Finish your draft 4. Peer review with checklist 5. Share your writing in class 二、写作思维导图框架（通用模板） (Name of park) in (place) 1. Basic intro: location, theme, overall feature 2. Rides & fun activities: roller coasters, water games, steam train etc. 3. Special sights & shows: parades, animal performances, landscape, fireworks 4. Food service: special local snacks, various restaurants 5. Unique value: culture knowledge / natural science beyond fun 6. Ending appeal (if-clause & imperative sentence) 三、写作自评核对清单（Peer review checklist） √ Is the introduction clear? √ Does the writer include all the important points about the park? √ Does the writer provide any additional information about the park? √ Does the writer use –ing forms properly? √ Does the writer use correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling? 四、范文（珠海长隆海洋王国） 5. Self-assessment 一、写作五档 25 分制评分标准 第五档（很好）(21～25 分) 1. 紧扣公园介绍主题，地点、游乐、景观、美食、文化亮点完整，逻辑清晰，内容丰富贴合原文文本； 2. 熟练使用主题形容词、if 条件句、祈使句、动名词 - ing 结构，词汇语法准确，极少错误，不影响理解； 3. 过渡词自然衔接段落，首尾呼应，结尾宣传句式贴合课文模板，行文流畅。 二、自评表 评价维度 评价标准 达标 待改进 未达标 内容 完整覆盖公园地点、游乐、表演景观、餐饮、特色价值五大要点 结构 总分清晰，开篇引入 + 中间分述游玩项目 + 结尾号召宣传 语言 大量使用本课主题形容词，正确运用 - ing 动名词、if 从句、祈使句 衔接 使用 apart from, besides, when 等连接词，段落过渡自然 主题升华 体现 “fun and more than fun”，写出公园文化 / 科普价值 课文迁移 借鉴课文原版句式、描写模板，贴合单元语言风格 三、单元反思 REFLECTING 1. What did you learn about parks that you did not know before? 2. What else would you like to learn about parks? 3. Of the parks in this unit, which would you like to visit most? why? 4. What problems did you or your friends have in studying this unit? How did you solve them? What advice did you give each other? 5. Overall, I thought this unit was ○ interesting √ useful ○so-so ○ difficult. 6. Homework 1. 整理本单元主题公园、自然景区全套写作语料（形容词、核心词块、万能句式、if 从句、祈使句、-ing 句型），背诵积累； 2. 梳理三篇课文（Disneyland / Dollywood / Chimelong）写作框架，思考如何将框架迁移到国内公园、自然地质景区写作，丰富细节描写； 3. 完成写作任务：自选一座公园（国内主题公园 / 自然景区均可），按照课堂思维导图结构完成公园介绍短文，灵活运用本节课积累的全部句型与词汇； 4. 小组互改作文，对照自评清单修改完善，下节课课堂朗读展示。 14 / 17 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 3 Using language （写作课讲义） 目录 1. Lead in 2. Language Building 3. Mini-writing 4. Writing Task 5. Self-assessment 6. Homework 1. Lead in 一、主题词汇激活（主题公园 & 自然景区品质 / 特色） 描述公园特色形容词 incredible 绝妙的；magical 充满魔力的；fantasy 梦幻的；unique 独一无二的；superb 顶级的；splendid 华丽壮观的；vast 广阔的；fascinating 极具吸引力的；remote 偏远静谧的 公园分类词块 cartoon theme park 卡通主题公园；culture-themed park 文化主题公园；ocean-themed park 海洋主题公园；natural geopark 地质自然公园 游客体验词块 come true 实现；appeal to 吸引；put on performances 上演演出；try special snacks 品尝特色小吃；ride roller coasters 乘坐过山车；watch parades & fireworks 观看巡游与烟花；admire natural landscape 欣赏自然风光 二、三大主题公园导入提问 展示迪士尼、多莱坞、珠海长隆海洋王国图片 提问 1：What makes each theme park different and attractive? 参考答案： Every theme park has its own core feature. Disneyland creates a magical cartoon world full of childhood dreams. Dollywood highlights traditional American southeastern culture with country music and ancient craft works. Chimelong Ocean Kingdom focuses on marine creatures and all kinds of water-themed rides. Each park offers fun as well as special cultural or natural knowledge. 提问 2：Besides fun rides and delicious food, what else can visitors gain from theme parks? 参考答案： Visitors can learn a lot beyond entertainment. They can know about cartoon stories, local history, traditional crafts, marine biology or unique natural landforms. Walking around the park and watching shows helps people experience different cultures and broaden their horizons. 三、过渡句 Theme parks bring joy and knowledge to every visitor. Fun is never their only charm. 玩乐只是主题公园的一部分，文化与风景才是长久魅力。 2. Language Building 一、文本核心公园句式积累 1. 介绍公园位置 & 定位（开篇万能句） 1. Dollywood, in the beautiful Smoky Mountains in the southeastern USA, is unique because it shows and celebrates America's traditional southeastern culture. 2. Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, China, is one of the leading ocean-themed parks in the world. 3. The theme park you are probably most familiar with is Disneyland, which can be found in several parts of the world. 2. 园内游玩项目描写 • Travel through space, visit a pirate ship, or meet cartoon characters. • Ride on steam engines and wooden roller coasters. • Join water fights, watch dolphin shows and splendid fireworks displays. 3. 景观、表演、美食描写 • Famous music groups put on performances indoors and outdoors all year round. • Walk under the world’s largest Whale Shark Aquarium and watch thousands of fish. • Plenty of restaurants with tasty food for every appetite. 4. 结尾吸引游客（祈使句 + if 条件句） If you want to have fun and more than fun, come to Disneyland! If it is ocean entertainment that you are looking for, come to Chimelong Ocean Kingdom! 二、自然类景区拓展（贝加尔湖、丹霞、张家界等）核心词块 vast territory 广阔地域；remote location 偏远之地；unique wildlife 独特野生动植物；breathtaking beauty 令人惊叹的美景；colourful rocky landscape 彩色丹霞地貌；magnificent peaks 奇峰；rushing water 奔腾溪流；glacier 冰川；karst landscape 喀斯特地貌 三、表格填空答案（P32） A Name and location B Rides & activities C Shows & special sights/animals D Food service 填空原文： Disneyland (various locations) Dollywood in the Smoky Mountains (southeastern USA) Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, China Travel through space; visit a pirate ship；meet cartoon/fairytale characters；ride thrilling facilities Thunderhead Water fight against pirates；exciting roller coaster; water rides A parade of cartoon characters Famous country music groups put on performances there Whale Shark Aquarium；dolphin & sea lion shows； polar bears Plenty of restaurants with tasty food for every appetite 四、语言特征总结（P33 ▲2） 1. 栏目表头 A Name and location 名称与位置 B Rides & Activities 游乐项目 C Special Sights, Shows & Animals 特色景观、表演与动物 D Food Service 餐饮服务 2. 三类语言要素作用 A. 形容词：magical, incredible, superb, splendid 等，丰富画面，增强感染力，突出公园独特魅力 B. if-clauses 条件状语从句：用于精准定位游客需求，针对性推荐公园，逻辑清晰 C. 祈使句（Come to…）：语气亲切，直接号召读者前往，起到宣传收尾作用 五、贝加尔湖短文填空答案（P34 ▲1） My name is Svetlana and I have worked as a guide at Lake Baikal (贝加尔湖) for more than 10 years. Lying in a pretty remote location in Siberia, the deep and vast lake with more than 300 rivers flowing into it is one of the world's greatest natural wonders. Every season, I accompany and guide tourists. Baikal is a territory with unique wildlife, breathtaking beauty, and fascinating local culture. Ancient, inspiring, mysterious, and beautiful, Lake Baikal appeals to visitors like no other place on the earth. I feel blessed to have been born here, and I am looking forward to many more years of welcoming visitors to an unforgettable experience at Baikal. 六、-ing 形式问答示范（P34 ▲2） 1. What impressed you most when visiting Zhangye Danxia Geopark? Seeing the colourful mountains and rocky landscape impressed me most. 2. What tops the list of tourists' favourite activities in Zhangjiajie? Admiring the magnificent peaks and landscape, taking a raft ride and experiencing the local customs of the Tujia people and the Miao people top the list. 3. What do tourists like to do at Guilin's Li River? Taking a boat tour and admiring the karst landscape are tourists’ favourite activities. 4. What activities would appeal to adventurous tourists in Lijiang, Yunnan Province? Viewing glaciers at Yulong Snow Mountain and listening to the sound of rushing water at Tiger Leaping Gorge attract adventurous tourists. 3. Mini-writing 练习 1：公园基础介绍（地点 + 特色 + 游玩项目） 步骤 内容 示例 ① 选定公园 确定公园 + 所在地 Chimelong Ocean Kingdom, Zhuhai ② 提炼核心特色 1 个核心亮点 the world’s largest Whale Shark Aquarium ③ 罗列游玩项目 2-3 项活动 watch dolphin shows, ride water roller coasters, enjoy night fireworks ④ 组句模板 (Park) in (place), a (theme) park famous for (core feature), offers visitors chances to (activities) Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, a world-famous ocean-themed park famous for the giant Whale Shark Aquarium, offers visitors chances to watch dolphin shows, ride water roller coasters and enjoy splendid night fireworks. 练习 2：-ing 形式描写游玩体验（重点语法） 步骤 内容 示例 ① 以动名词开头描写感受 (Doing sth.) is the most amazing part of the park. Walking under the huge aquarium is the most amazing part of the park. ② 补充配套体验 Besides, you can spend hours doing sth. Besides, you can spend hours watching cartoon parades and tasting local snacks. ③ 收尾总结收获 Visiting here brings you both fun and knowledge. Visiting this park brings you both joy and marine knowledge. 练习 3：宣传结尾（if 条件句 + 祈使句） 模板 1：If you are fond of …, come to …! If you love marine animals and water rides, come to Chimelong Ocean Kingdom! 模板 2：Come to … to have fun learning about … Come to Dollywood to have fun learning all about America's southeastern traditional culture! 4. Writing Task 一、写作要求 Choose one theme park or natural geopark you like, write an introductory passage for it. 写作步骤： 1. Choose the park 2. Draw a mind map (Attractions / Food / Shows / Rides / Other features) 3. Finish your draft 4. Peer review with checklist 5. Share your writing in class 二、写作思维导图框架（通用模板） (Name of park) in (place) 1. Basic intro: location, theme, overall feature 2. Rides & fun activities: roller coasters, water games, steam train etc. 3. Special sights & shows: parades, animal performances, landscape, fireworks 4. Food service: special local snacks, various restaurants 5. Unique value: culture knowledge / natural science beyond fun 6. Ending appeal (if-clause & imperative sentence) 三、写作自评核对清单（Peer review checklist） √ Is the introduction clear? √ Does the writer include all the important points about the park? √ Does the writer provide any additional information about the park? √ Does the writer use –ing forms properly? √ Does the writer use correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling? 四、范文（珠海长隆海洋王国） Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, China, is one of the world’s top ocean-themed parks, well-known for its fantastic marine facilities and wonderful performances. Walking under the Whale Shark Aquarium, visitors can admire thousands of colourful fish and a huge whale shark, which leaves everyone speechless. Apart from amazing sea creatures, the park provides all kinds of thrilling rides. You can join exciting pirate water fights or take upside-down roller coasters to feel strong excitement. Watching dolphin and sea lion shows is both fun and educational, while the splendid Journey of Lights Parade and night fireworks always draw huge crowds. When you feel hungry, many restaurants serve tasty food of different styles. You can even enjoy meals beside glass walls with fish swimming around you. If you are eager to explore the ocean world and look for all-day entertainment, come to Chimelong Ocean Kingdom. It offers not only great fun but also rich marine knowledge for visitors of all ages. 5. Self-assessment 一、写作五档 25 分制评分标准 第五档（很好）(21～25 分) 1. 紧扣公园介绍主题，地点、游乐、景观、美食、文化亮点完整，逻辑清晰，内容丰富贴合原文文本； 2. 熟练使用主题形容词、if 条件句、祈使句、动名词 - ing 结构，词汇语法准确，极少错误，不影响理解； 3. 过渡词自然衔接段落，首尾呼应，结尾宣传句式贴合课文模板，行文流畅。 二、自评表 评价维度 评价标准 达标 待改进 未达标 内容 完整覆盖公园地点、游乐、表演景观、餐饮、特色价值五大要点 结构 总分清晰，开篇引入 + 中间分述游玩项目 + 结尾号召宣传 语言 大量使用本课主题形容词，正确运用 - ing 动名词、if 从句、祈使句 衔接 使用 apart from, besides, when 等连接词，段落过渡自然 主题升华 体现 “fun and more than fun”，写出公园文化 / 科普价值 课文迁移 借鉴课文原版句式、描写模板，贴合单元语言风格 三、单元反思 REFLECTING 1. What did you learn about parks that you did not know before? I learned theme parks have different themes such as cartoon, culture and ocean. They are not only for fun but also carry culture and science knowledge. 2. What else would you like to learn about parks? I want to know more local Chinese theme parks and their special traditional performances. 3. Of the parks in this unit, which would you like to visit most? why? I want to visit Chimelong Ocean Kingdom most because I love sea animals and water rides, and I can learn much marine knowledge there. 4. What problems did you or your friends have in studying this unit? How did you solve them? What advice did you give each other? We had trouble using -ing forms correctly. We summed up sentence templates and practiced mini-writing every day. We advised each other to mark all -ing sentences in the text for reference. 5. Overall, I thought this unit was ○ interesting √ useful ○so-so ○ difficult. 6. Homework 1. 整理本单元主题公园、自然景区全套写作语料（形容词、核心词块、万能句式、if 从句、祈使句、-ing 句型），背诵积累； 2. 梳理三篇课文（Disneyland / Dollywood / Chimelong）写作框架，思考如何将框架迁移到国内公园、自然地质景区写作，丰富细节描写； 3. 完成写作任务：自选一座公园（国内主题公园 / 自然景区均可），按照课堂思维导图结构完成公园介绍短文，灵活运用本节课积累的全部句型与词汇； 4. 小组互改作文，对照自评清单修改完善，下节课课堂朗读展示。 14 / 17 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $