Unit 3 Assessing Your Progress（写作课课件）英语人教版选择性必修第一册

该高中英语课件围绕“主题公园介绍”写作，通过定义主题公园、提问已知公园导入，引导学生扫描文本分析结构，再以小组任务列标题（如名称位置、游乐设施）和语言特征（形容词、-ing形式等）为支架，帮助构建写作框架。 其亮点是任务驱动与读写结合，小组分类活动培养思维品质，语言特征分析提升语言能力，自评量表和升格示例发展学习能力。融入多国公园文化渗透文化意识，教师可借系统流程高效教学，学生能掌握写作方法并提升反思能力。

Unit 3 Fascinating Park 高中英语人教版选择性必修第一册 Assessing Your Progress 写作课 Contents 1. Lead in 2. Pre-Writing 3. While-Writing 4. Post-writing（Self-assessment）5. Homework 01. Lead in What is a theme park? A theme park is a large amusement park centered on a specific theme, such as cartoons, movies or history. It provides themed rides, shows and interactive activities for people to relax and have fun. Lead in Which theme parks do you know? Lead in 02. Pre-Writing Scan the text and think about the structure of the text. Chimelong Ocean Kingdom Theme parks Disneyland Dollywood Pre-Writing Title & Subheading Para. 1: Introduce the topic Para. 2: Disneyland Para. 3: Dollywood Para. 4: Chimelong Ocean Kingdom 分 总 Pre-Writing 03. While-Writing Read for content Task 1. Read and fill (Group Work) A______________ B__________________ C______________ D ____________ Disneyland (various locations) Travel through space; visit a A parade of Dollywood in Thunderhead put on performances there Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in: Water fight against pirates; exciting roller coaster; water rides Whale Shark Aquarium; polar bears Plenty of restaurants with The Smoky Mountains in the southeastern USA Zhuhai, China pirate ship; enormous swinging ships, scary free-fall drops An old wooden roller coaster, Disney characters Famous country music groups dolphin and sea lion shows, tasty food for every appetite What headers would you give for column A to D? Name & Location Rides Attractions Food Fun Read for content Task 2. Read and find out what is “more than fun”. Theme parks Fun more than fun Disneyland (various locations)  travel through space; visit a pirate ship; ride from enormous swinging ships to scary free-fall drops; see a parade of Disney characters Dollywood in the Smoky Mountains in the Southeastern USA ride an old wooden roller coaster; enjoy performances by famous country music groups Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, China join water fights against pirates; ride exciting roller coaster and water rides;walk under Whale Shark Aquarium and watch ...shows; see ...firework display;eat tasty food. Make your childhood dream come true! Learn all about America’s historical southeastern culture! Both educational and fun. / Learn more about marine life. Educational The theme park you are probably most familiar with is Disneyland, which can be found in several parts of the world. Disneyland will bring you into a magical world and make your childhood dreams come true. Travelling through space, visiting a pirate ship, or meeting an adorable fairy tale or cartoon character are all possible at Disneyland. As you wander around the fantasy amusement park, you may see Snow White or Mickey Mouse in a parade or even on the street. Of course, Disneyland also has many exciting rides to amuse you, from enormous swinging ships to scary free-fall drops. If you want to have fun and more than fun, come to Disneyland! Read for organization Introduction Body name location main feature activities attractions, rides, shows … recommendation & welcome Ending Dollywood, in the beautiful Smoky Mountains in southeastern USA, is unique because it shows and celebrates America’s traditional southeastern culture. Famous country music groups put out performances there all year round, indoors and outdoors. People come from all over America to see skilled workers make wood, glass, and iron objects in the old-fashioned way. Visiting the candy shop and trying some of the same kind of candy that American southerners made 150 years ago is a rare experience. Riding on the only steam still working in the southeastern United States is a special treat. And for those who like rides, Dollywood has a superb old wooden roller coaster. Thunderhead. It is world-famous for having the longest track in the smallest space. Come to Dollywood to have fun learning all about America’s historic southeastern culture! Read for organization Introduction Body Ending name location main feature activities attractions, food, rides, shows … recommendation & welcome Read for language features Read the text again, find the following items in the text, and think about how they are used and what they add to the text. A. adjectives B. if- clauses C. imperatives D. use of the -ing forms Which theme park would you like to visit? There are various kinds of theme parks, with different parks for almost everything: food, culture, science, cartoons, movies, history, and so on. Some parks are famous for having the biggest or longest roller coasters, others for showing famous sights and sounds. Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible theme park that will appeal to you! Read for language features Para 1 让步状语从句 定语从句 ing 作宾语 adjectives there be 句型 Read for language features Para 2 The theme park you are probably most familiar with is Disneyland, which can be found in several parts of the world. Disneyland will bring you into a magical world and make your childhood dreams come true. Travelling through space, visiting a pirate ship, or meeting an adorable fairy tale or cartoon character are all possible at Disneyland. As you wander around the fantasy amusement park, you may see Snow White or Mickey Mouse in a parade or even on the street. Of course, Disneyland also has many exciting rides to amuse you, from enormous swinging ships to scary free-fall drops. If you want to have fun and more than fun, come to Disneyland! ing 作主语 if- clause imperative adjectives Para 3 adjectives Dollywood, in the beautiful Smoky Mountains in the southeastern USA, is unique because it shows and celebrates America’s traditional southeastern culture. Famous country music groups put on performances there all year round, indoors and outdoors. People come from all over America to see skilled workers make wood, glass, and iron objects in the old-fashioned way. Visiting the candy shop and trying some of the same kind of candy that American southerners made 150 years ago is a rare experience. Riding on the only steam engine still working in the southeastern United States is a special treat. And for those who like rides, Dollywood has a superb old wooden roller coaster, Thunderhead. It is world-famous for having the longest track in the smallest space. Come to Dollywood to have fun learning all about America’s historical southeastern culture! imperative ing 作主语 ing 作定语 Para 4 adjectives Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, China, is one of the leading ocean-themed parks in the world. Here you can walk under the Whale Shark Aquarium —the world’s largest—and see up to 20, 000 fish, in addition to a whale shark 68 metres in length. Watching the dolphin and sea lion shows is both educational and fun. Of course, you can also see all kinds of interesting animals, including polar bears. The park has more rides than you can imagine: join a water fight against pirates, get turned upside down by an exciting roller coaster, or get wet in one of the water rides! Then at night, see the splendid Journey of Lights Parade and fireworks display. Hungry? The park has plenty of restaurants with tasty food for every appetite —you can even eat while watching the fish swim by. If it is ocean entertainment that you are looking for, come to Chimelong Ocean Kingdom! ing 作主语 if- clause imperative Read for language features A. adjectives add colour and life to the passage, and make the descriptions more interesting and inviting. logically organized language; quick, efficient communications; diverse expressions; emphatic tones enhance coherence; enhance emotional expression; diversify expressions D. use of the -ing forms B. if- clauses C. imperatives Practice How to write an introduction to a park? Practice theme organization content language features tense & person simple present tense adjectives if- clauses imperatives use of the -ing forms the third person Practice Work out the organization and content Main feature(s) Location Name adjectives Activities attractions, food, rides, shows … Recommendation & Welcome use of the -ing forms if- clauses imperatives Introduction Body Ending Useful expressions for the introduction. Introduction name, location, main features introduce a theme park ·Which theme park would you like to visit? There are various kinds of theme parks, with different parks for almost everything: ... ·Some parks are famous for having ..., others for showing .... ·Whichever and whatever you like, there is a/an ... theme park that will appeal to you! ·The theme park you are probably most familiar with is ..., which can be found in ... ·...in... is ... because it shows and celebrates... ·...in... is ... one of the ...-themed parks in ... Recommendation & Welcome ·If you want to have fun and more than fun, come to... ·Come to ... to have fun learning all about ...! ·If it is ... entertainment that you are looking for, come to... ·If you come to...for a visit，you will be sure to ... attractions, food, shows, rides ·Travelling through..., visiting... or meeting ... are all possible at ... ·As you wander around..., you may see/hear/smell... ·Riding on the ... is a special treat. ·For those who like.., ... has ... adjectives: various, different, famous, biggest, longest, incredible, familiar, magical, adorable, possible, exciting, enormous, scary, beautiful, unique, traditional, famous, skilled, old-fashioned, rare, only, special, superb, old, wooden, world-famous, longest, smallest, historical, leading, largest, educational, fun, interesting, exciting, splendid, tasty. 04. Post Writing（Self-assessment） Post Writing·Self-assessment 一、写作1评价量表 审题项目 具体内容 自检问题 体裁格式 短文 □ 是短文不是演讲稿？□ 没有称呼和致谢结尾？ 题目与首句 给定题目和首句 □ 题目写对了吗？□ 首句原样抄写了吗？ 内容要点① 公园基本简介 □ 选定具体公园了吗？□ 有位置、主题基本信息吗？ 内容要点② 公园特色与游玩价值 □ 特色介绍具体吗？□ 有景观、项目、表演细节支撑吗？ 逻辑结构 简介→特色价值 □ 有过渡词吗？□ 段落逻辑连贯吗？ 语言表达 准确、流畅 □ 时态正确吗？□ 正确使用-ing/if从句/祈使句等高级句式吗？ 字数 80词左右 □ 字数在70-90词之间吗？ 常见雷区 学生易犯错误 □ 避免堆砌零散词块无逻辑 □ 避免只写游乐无特色升华 Post Writing·Self-assessment 二、写作2评价量表 审题项目 具体内容 自检问题 体裁格式 短文 □ 是短文不是演讲稿？ 题目 给定自拟主题 □ 题目贴合公园主题吗？ 内容要点① 公园基础介绍 □ 公园定位明确吗？□ 位置、主题信息完整吗？ 内容要点② 核心景点与游玩体验 □ 特色项目具体吗？□ 有景观、表演、美食细节支撑吗？ 内容要点③ 游玩价值与总结 □ 体现fun and more than fun吗？□ 有价值升华吗？ 逻辑结构 简介→特色体验→价值总结，三层递进 □ 有过渡词吗？□ 三层内容有逻辑推进吗？ 语言表达 准确、流畅 □ 时态正确吗？□ 单元核心句式运用熟练吗？□ 描写词汇丰富吗？ 字数 100词左右 □ 字数在90-110词之间吗？ 常见雷区 学生易犯错误 □ 避免只罗列项目无描写 □ 避免体验与价值升华脱节 Post Writing·Self-assessment 升格示例 一类文 The Fascinating Theme Park I Like There are countless amazing theme parks around the world. The one that appeals to me most is Disneyland, a world-famous cartoon theme park located in many countries. It creates a magical world for visitors. We can travel through space, visit pirate ships and meet lovely cartoon characters. There are also thrilling rides and wonderful parades. This park brings us not only great fun but also sweet childhood memories. It is indeed an incredible place worth visiting. Post Writing·Self-assessment 升格示例 二类文 The Park I Admire Most The park I admire most is Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, one of the top ocean-themed parks worldwide. What makes it unique is its splendid marine scenery. Walking under the world’s largest whale shark aquarium, visitors can view thousands of fish. Besides, exciting water rides, wonderful dolphin shows and gorgeous night fireworks provide visitors with unforgettable experiences. Tasty food of different styles is also available in various restaurants. This park offers us fun as well as rich marine knowledge. If you love ocean scenery, do come and explore it yourself.a 05. Homework Lead-in Homework 同类巩固 学校英文报社正在举办主题为 Wonderful Parks Around Us 的征文活动，请你结合本单元所学，写一篇英文短文介绍一处你最喜欢的主题公园或自然景区。内容包括： 1. 景区基本简介； 2. 主要特色与游玩项目； 3. 游玩意义与感受。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Homework Wonderful Parks Around Us Of all kinds of fascinating parks, Dollywood in the Smoky Mountains of America is the one I want to introduce most. As a unique culture-themed park, it is famous for showing American southeastern traditional culture. Visitors can enjoy country music performances all year round and watch workers make traditional handicrafts. They can also ride old steam engines and the world-famous wooden roller coaster. Trying traditional local candy is also a special experience. The park brings us more than fun. It helps us learn about local history and culture. It is really a wonderful place worthy of a visit. 参考范文 Thank you for your listening $