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各美其美 美美与共 Beautify your composition 美 03 01 02 04 发现美 创造美 展示美 欣赏美 2 1 发现美 3 Step 1：Find the beautiful sentences I took my sister home and continued my search alone. Carrying the signs made by my mother, I kept posting them. In the meantime, whenever there were people passing by, I would ask if they had met such a dog. I even knocked from door to door, asking if they had seen it. No luck. Nobody claimed to have spotted our dog. Tears of regret welled up in my eyes. As the darkness fell, I decided to come back home to check if anybody had called. action emotion environment When I returned, my mother was waiting for me, smiling broadly. Behind my mother was our lovely dog looking up at me eagerly. Upon seeing me, it raced towards me. I couldn’t hold my tears. “It just came back by itself,” my mother said gently. Hugging the dog with relief, I apologized to my mother sincerely. “I am sure you have learned your lesson today,” my mother replied in a comforting voice. I played with my sister and the dog again. Despite the freezing weather outside, my heart warmed up. It was on the day that I learned the value of responsibility. emotion theme language action 2 创造美 6 Step 2：Create the beautiful sentences Part 1 —— action 拿起书 打开书 看书 She _______(pick) the book up, ________(open) it and ________(read) it carefully. picked opened read 冲上来 抓住 按倒 The policeman _________(dash) up, _________(catch) hold of the thief and _________(press) him to the ground. dashed caught pressed Practice 1. 用肉引狼 (设计两个动作) He ___________the meat and ________it straight to the wolf. 2. 遇狗自救(设计三个动作) He________________, _______a stick and ______ the dog badly. pulled out threw looked around found beat 给礼物 摸头 笑着 My dear dad _______(give) me a pretty gift and _________(touch) my head gently, _________(smile) at me. gave touched smiling 是超人 做饭 照顾孩子 Every mother ______(be) a superstar, _________ (cook) dinner and ________(take) care of the child. is cooking taking Practice 1.“Merry Christmas,” she whispered in my ear, ________________(disappear) into the night. 2.The woman took my hand, __________ (press) something into my palm and saying , “Goodbye.”  disappearing pressing ____________(encourage) by the teacher’s words, she raised her hands, saying, “I volunteer.” 被鼓励 举手 说 Encouraged _________ (scold) by her mother, she covered her ears, crying in sorrow. 被责骂 捂耳朵 哭 Scolded Practice 1. _________________________（惊吓） by the voice, James was surprised to find a stranger in front of him.  2. _________________________（ 困） in traffic jams, he had no choice but to wait. Shocked/ Scared/ Frightened Trapped/ Caught/ Stuck 得知发生了什么事后，救生员勇敢地迎着大风大浪冲去。 ________________ what was happening, the lifeguard rushed fearlessly against the strong wind to save the man. Having learned ________________ in the war for years, the soldier ___________to his hometown, only to find his home had become ruins. 征战多年后，战士回到故乡，结果却发现自己的家变成了废墟。 Having fought returned Practice do, do and do do, doing done, do having done, do 1 2 3 4 action 18 Part 2 —— emotion She is more than _________ on weekends. He went_________ because he had to wait for a long time. happy delighted glad mad crazy angry Practice 1. He was __________________________________ after realizing he’d missed his high school graduation. depressed/ sad/ disappointed/ regretful 2. When I saw the _________________ look on your face , I knew that you didn’t understand my question. puzzled/ confused He was frozen with ________. When he saw his mother, the atmosphere was filled with ___________, fear shock panic happiness delight gladness Practice 1. Angry, he went home. = He went home with ________. 2. He helped the little boy with his homework patiently. =He helped the little boy with his homework with ________. anger patience 我终于到 家了，又饿又累。 I finally arrived home, hungry and tired. 幸运的是，他被一个好心人收养了。 Fortunately, he was adopted by a warmhearted person. 心碎但不畏惧，他决定要改变这一切。 Heartbroken but fearless, he decided to change everything. Practice 他高兴地笑了，露出一排洁白的牙齿。 He smiled happily, showing a row of white teeth. be/feel/become+adj prep+n adj作状语 adv作状语 1 2 3 4 emotion 25 Part 3 —— language She ______(问), “ Would you do me a favour?” “Of course.” I __________________________ (答) . asked responded/ replied/ answered 说 utter/say 小声说 whisper/ murmur 大声吼yell/ shout 怒气冲冲说roar/ howl 哭着说sob/ weep/ cry 笑着说smile/ laugh/ giggle 解释说explain/ illustrate 争论说argue/ debate 劝慰说persuade/ comfort Practice 1.“我不是故意。”她小声地说。 “I didn’t mean to . ” she ____________________. murmured/whispered 2.“走开。”他大声吼道。 “Get out of my way.” he ______________________. shouted/yelled Part 4 —— environment A round _______ hangs in the sky, some _______ sparkling. (Absolute construction 独立主格） moon stars In front of me are many___________ and the ______ shines brightly.（Inverted sentence 倒装） flowers sun Practice The ______ poured down wildly, which made riding a bike challenging. （Attributive clause定从） The _______ was blanketed by thick ________.（Personification拟人） ground snow rain sun/moon/ star wind/rain/cloud/snow tree/flower/bird/fish stream/river/mountain/hill building/street/bridge home/classroom 1 2 3 4 5 6 environment 32 Part 5 —— theme It dawned on/ occurred to me that a simple act could make the world much better. （Subject clause主从） 我慢慢意识到/恍然大悟，一个简单的举动可以使世界变得更美好。 help As long as we don’t give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal finally. （Adverbial clause状从) 只要我们不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们终将实现目标。 growth Practice What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that we should keep calm and brave when we are in danger. 多么难忘的一次经历啊！事实证明，在危险中，我们应该保持冷静和勇敢。(Exclamation感叹句） 就在那一天，我真正意识到了诚实的重要性。（Emphatic sentence 强调句） It was on that day that I truly realized the importance of honesty. adventure quality help growth adventure quality 1 2 3 4 theme 36 Step 3 ： show the beautiful sentences 终于，我的车被他们修好了。我递给他们100美元，表示感谢。但是，被他们拒绝了。女孩走到我的跟前，拿出一个纸袋子，塞在我的手里，低声说，“这是给你的。”我好奇地打开纸袋，发现里面有几个苹果，还有一个便条，上面写着，“把爱传递下去。” 这使我非常感动，就在那时我下定决心帮助更多的人。 山丘沐浴在阳光下，我开着车回了家。 3 展示美 38 4 欣赏美 39 Finally, my car was repaired by them. I passed 100 dollars to them but was declined. The girl approached me,handed out a bag and put it in my hand, whispering, “ Here you are.” Opening the bag, I found with curiosity that besides some apples, a note lay in it, saying, “ Pass on the love.” It made me so moved that I made up my mind to help more people from then on. The hill was bathed in the sunshine, when I drove my car home with happiness. Life is not lack of beauty but the lack of eyes to find it. $ 各美其美 美美与共 ——Beautify your composition 一、发现美 Find the beautiful sentences. I took my sister home and continued my search alone. Carrying the signs made by my mother, I kept posting them. In the meantime, whenever there were people passing by, I would ask if they had met such a dog. I even knocked from door to door, asking if they had seen it. No luck. Nobody claimed to have spotted our dog. Tears of regret welled up in my eyes. As the darkness fell, I decided to come back home to check if anybody had called. When I returned, my mother was waiting for me, smiling broadly. Behind my mother was our lovely dog looking up at me eagerly. Upon seeing me, it raced towards me. I couldn’t hold my tears. “It just came back by itself,” my mother said gently. Hugging the dog with relief, I apologized to my mother sincerely. “I am sure you have learned your lesson today,” my mother replied in a comforting voice. I played with my sister and the dog again. Despite the freezing weather outside, my heart warmed up. It was on the day that I learned the value of responsibility. 二、创造美 Step 2：Create the beautiful sentences Part 1 —— action (1) She _______ (pick) the book up, ________ (open) it and ________ (read) it carefully. (2) The policeman _________ (dash) up, _________ (catch) hold of the thief and _________ (press) him to the ground. Practice (1) 用肉引狼 (设计两个动作) He ___________the meat and ________it straight to the wolf. (2) 遇狗自救(设计三个动作) He________________, _______a stick and ______ the dog badly. (1) My dear dad _______ (give) me a pretty gift and _________ (touch) my head gently, _________ (smile) at me. (2) Every mother ______ (be) a superstar, _________ (cook) dinner and ________ (take) care of the child. Practice (1) “Merry Christmas,” she whispered in my ear, ________________(disappear) into the night. (2) The woman took my hand, __________ (press) something into my palm and saying , “Goodbye.”  (1) ___________(encourage) by the teacher’s words, she raised her hands, saying, “I volunteer.” (2) _________ (scold) by her mother, she covered her ears, crying in sorrow. Practice (1) _________________________（惊吓） by the voice, James was surprised to find a stranger in front of him.  (2) _________________________（ 困） in traffic jams, he had no choice but to wait. 得知发生了什么事后，救生员勇敢地迎着大风大浪冲去。 ________________ what was happening, the lifeguard rushed fearlessly against the strong wind to save the man. Practice ________________ in the war for years, the soldier ___________to his hometown, only to find his home had become ruins. Part 2 —— emotion (1) She is more than _________ on weekends. (2) He went_________ because he had to wait. for a long time. Practice (1) He was _______________ after realizing he’d missed his high school graduation. (2) When I saw the ____________ look on your face , I knew that you didn’t understand my question. (1) He was frozen with ________. (2) When he saw his mother, the atmosphere was filled with ___________, Practice (1) Angry, he went home. = He went home with ________. (2) He helped the little boy with his homework patiently. =He helped the little boy with his homework with ________. 我终于到 家了，又饿又累。 _____________________________________________________________________幸运的是，他被一个好心人收养了。 _____________________________________________________________________Practice 心碎但不畏惧，他决定要改变这一切。 _____________________________________________________________________ 他高兴地笑了，露出一排洁白的牙齿。 _____________________________________________________________________ Part 3 —— language (1) She ______________(问), “ Would you do me a favour?” (2) “Of course.” I __________________________(答) . · 说 utter/say · 小声说 whisper/ murmur · 大声吼yell/ shout · 怒气冲roar/ howl · 哭着说sob/ weep/ cry · 笑着说smile/ laugh/ giggle · 解释说explain/ illustrate · 争论说argue/ debate · 劝慰说persuade/ comfort · 提醒说remind Practice (1) “我不是故意。”她小声地说。 “I didn’t mean to . ” she ____________________. (2) “走开。”他大声吼道。 “Get out of my way.” he ______________________. Part 4 —— environment (1) A round _______ hangs in the sky, some _______ sparkling. (Absolute construction 独立主格） (2) In front of me are many ___________ and the ______ shines brightly.（Inverted sentence 倒装） Practice The _______ was blanketed by thick ________.（Personification拟人） The ______ poured down wildly, which made riding a bike challenging.（Attributive clause定从） Part 5 —— theme 1. It dawned on/ occurred to me that a simple act could make the world much better. （Subject clause主从） _____________________________________________________________________ 2. As long as we don’t give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal finally. （Adverbial clause状从) _____________________________________________________________________ Practice 多么难忘的一次经历啊！事实证明，在危险中，我们应该保持冷静和勇敢。(Exclamation感叹句） _____________________________________________________________________ 就在那一天，我真正意识到了诚实的重要性。（Emphatic sentence 强调句） _____________________________________________________________________ 三、展示美 Step 3 ： show the beautiful sentences 终于，我的车被他们修好了。我递给他们100美元，表示感谢。但是，被他们拒绝了。女孩走到我的跟前，拿出一个纸袋子，塞在我的手里，低声说，“这是给你的。”我好奇地打开纸袋，发现里面有几个苹果，还有一个便条，上面写着，“把爱传递下去。” 这使我非常感动，就在那时我下定决心帮助更多的人。 山丘沐浴在阳光下，我开着车回了家。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 四、欣赏美 Finally, my car was repaired by them. I passed 100 dollars to them but was declined. The girl approached me,handed out a bag and put it in my hand, whispering, “ Here you are.” Opening the bag, I found with curiosity that besides some apples, a note lay in it, saying, “ Pass on the love.” It made me so moved that I made up my mind to help more people from then on. The hill was bathed in the sunshine, when I drove my car home with happiness. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Blackboard design: ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $