上海中学东校2025-2026学年度第二学期素质评估高一英语试题作文讲义

上海中学东校2025学年度第二学期学期素质评估高一英语试题 作文讲义 一、写作题目 VI. Guided Writing Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生李明。你校英文报正举行主题为 “To change or not to change?” 的征文比赛，你决定参赛。请你撰写一篇参赛稿，内容包括： 1.你的观点； 2.你的理由。 二、写作思路 第一段（开头段） 引出征文主题 To change or not to change，亮明核心立场：主动拥抱合理改变，固守陋习与停滞不前只会被时代落下，适度求变是成长必经之路。 第二段（主体段） 分层阐述两大理由： ① 个人层面：主动改变自身短板（学习习惯、性格弱点），突破固有舒适圈，收获自我提升； ② 外界层面：时代环境持续发展，拒绝变通会固步自封，顺应良性改变才能抓住机遇、适配生活与学习。 第三段（结尾段） 总结升华，辩证说明并非全盘否定坚守本心，坚守初心的前提下积极优化自我，呼吁大家勇敢接纳良性改变。 三、写作高级表达 开头段 高级短语 · pose a thought-provoking question 提出引人深思的问题 · stand firmly for positive transformation 坚定支持积极的改变 · stick rigidly to the old ways 固执守旧 · sink into stagnation gradually 渐渐陷入停滞状态 · embrace favorable changes willingly 欣然接纳有益的改变 高级句子 1.The contest theme “To change or not to change?” triggers heated discussion among students on campus.征文主题 “改变还是固守？” 在校内引发了同学们热烈的讨论。 2.From my perspective, it is wise to embrace positive changes rather than stick rigidly to the existing state all the time.在我看来，接纳积极改变远比一味固守现状更为明智。 3.Refusing any change will only make us trapped in unceasing stagnation in the long run. 长远来看，拒绝一切改变只会让我们深陷无休止的停滞之中。 主体段 高级短语 · step out of the comfort zone 走出舒适区 · remedy personal shortcomings 改正自身短板 · get rid of bad living and study habits 摒弃不良作息与学习习惯 · be trapped in self-satisfied conservatism 困在安于现状的保守心态里 · keep pace with the evolving times 跟上不断发展的时代步伐 · seize precious opportunities in life 抓住人生中宝贵的机遇 · make steady progress day by day 日复一日稳步提升 · break through inner limitations 突破自身内心局限 高级句子 1.Only when we step out of the comfort zone can we spot our hidden weaknesses and improve ourselves continuously.唯有走出舒适区，我们才能发现潜藏的不足，持续实现自我提升。 2.If we cling to bad learning habits stubbornly, we will never achieve satisfying academic progress.倘若固执抱着糟糕的学习习惯不放，我们永远无法取得理想的学业进步。 3.The whole society is developing rapidly, so refusing to adjust ourselves means falling behind the times silently.社会飞速发展，拒绝调整自我就意味着悄无声息地被时代淘汰。 4.Appropriate changes equip us with stronger adaptability to deal with various challenges in daily life.适度的改变赋予我们更强的适应力，从容应对生活里各式各样的挑战。 5.Many promising chances slip away simply because people are unwilling to make slight adjustments.不少绝佳机遇白白溜走，仅仅是因为人们不愿做出微小的自我调整。 6.Transforming tiny flaws bit by bit contributes greatly to our long-term growth and maturity. 一点点改正细小缺点，对我们长远的成长与成熟大有裨益。 结尾段 高级短语 · hold fast to inner original aspiration 坚守内心初心 · strike a perfect balance 把握完美平衡 · welcome positive transformation bravely 勇敢迎接正向蜕变 · achieve all-round self-improvement 实现全方位自我提升 · march toward a brighter future 奔赴更加光明的未来 高级句子 1.We are supposed to hold fast to our original aspiration while accepting beneficial changes actively.我们应当坚守本心，同时主动接纳有益的改变。 2.Striking a balance between persistence and change lays a solid foundation for our lifelong growth.在坚守与改变之间找到平衡，为我们终身成长筑牢根基。 3.Dare to change moderately, and you will unlock a brand-new version of yourself sooner or later.敢于适度求变，你终会遇见全新的自己。 四、范文赏析 To change or not to change? The theme “To change or not to change?” arouses wide thinking among students. As far as I am concerned, we ought to embrace positive transformation instead of sticking rigidly to the old lifestyle and ideas. For one thing, stepping out of our comfort zone and changing bad habits helps us break through inner limitations. If we keep outdated study routines unchanged, we can hardly make steady academic progress. For another, the world is evolving constantly. Those trapped in conservatism will fail to keep pace with the times and miss valuable opportunities. Proper changes strengthen our adaptability to face challenges in study and life. Nevertheless, we should hold fast to our original aspiration while making adjustments. Striking a balance between persistence and change promotes all-round self-improvement. Dare to embrace positive changes, and we will march toward a more promising future. Li Ming 中文翻译： 改变还是固守？ “改变还是固守？” 这一主题引发了同学们广泛的思考。在我看来，我们应当接纳积极的蜕变，而非固执守着老旧的生活方式与固有想法。 一方面，走出舒适区、改正坏习惯能帮助我们突破自身局限。如果一成不变沿用低效的学习模式，我们很难实现学业稳步提升。另一方面，世界始终在不断发展，固守保守心态的人跟不上时代节奏，还会错失宝贵机遇。合理的改变能够增强我们的适应能力，从容应对学习与生活中的各类挑战。 当然，做出调整的同时我们也要坚守本心。在坚守初心与自我改变之间把握平衡，才能实现全方位的自我成长。勇敢接纳正向改变，我们终将奔赴更光明的前路。 李明 范文赏析要点： 整体结构赏析 标准三段式考场高分结构：首段引入征文话题 + 亮出中心观点；主体两段分层论证个人成长、时代发展两大理由，逻辑清晰；结尾辩证收尾，区分 “盲目改变” 和 “良性求变”，升华立意，字数 136 词，契合 120-150 词要求，完全满足征文写作要求。 重点例句拆解赏析 例句1：As far as I am concerned, we ought to embrace positive transformation instead of sticking rigidly to the old lifestyle and ideas. 赏析：开篇表态句式地道高级，embrace positive transformation、stick rigidly to替换基础的 accept、keep，用词正式贴合征文书面语境；instead of形成正反对比，观点一目了然。 例句2：If we keep outdated study routines unchanged, we can hardly make steady academic progress. 赏析：条件状语从句构建反面论证，逻辑严谨；outdated study routines、steady academic progress为高考高频高分搭配，避开简单基础词汇，论证简洁有力。 例句3：Those trapped in conservatism will fail to keep pace with the times and miss valuable opportunities. 赏析：过去分词短语trapped in conservatism后置作定语，优化句式结构，摆脱平铺直叙的简单句；固定搭配keep pace with the times地道经典，贴合议论文写作。 例句4：Dare to embrace positive changes, and we will march toward a more promising future. 赏析：祈使句 + and + 陈述句经典高分句型，结尾铿锵有力；march toward a more promising future文艺升华，契合征文积极向上的基调，收尾干净利落。 整体得分优势 句式长短错落，状语从句、非谓语结构、并列句型灵活穿插；词汇分级高级，无低级语法错误；论证有理有据，兼顾辩证思维，不会片面绝对，符合高中英语征文的评分标准，语言正式流畅，立意积极深刻。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $