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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
In her late 50s, Pat Gentile was diagnosed with breast cancer. During the painful cancer treatment, she lost all her hair, which struck her hard. To cover the awkward baldness, she had to wear a wig every day.
“But that wig — and I only had one wig — was uncomfortable, and it was annoying,” Gentile said. Tired of the stuffy and unnatural feeling of the wig, she finally made a bold decision. After her hair grew into a neat crew cut, she decided to give up the wig completely.
The first time she drove to work without the wig, Gentile felt extremely exposed and uneasy. As the head of a local college and a frequent public spokesperson, she was used to being gentle and elegant in front of others. She couldn’t help worrying about people’s strange stares and whispered comments. Most of all, she hated getting the “pity eyes” that people always gave to sick patients. All she wanted was to live normally and keep moving forward bravely.
On that special morning, she stopped at a convenience store to pick up some coffee and lunch. As she wandered along the passages to choose her food, a stranger woman suddenly approached her. With a sincere and warm smile, the woman praised her sincerely, “Not everybody could wear a hairstyle like that. You look fantastic.”
Gentile was totally amazed by the unexpected compliment. She barely managed to utter a “thank you” before the kind stranger walked away. Returning to her car, she sat quietly for a long time, letting the warm words sink in her heart. This random kindness became a huge turning point for her. It made her feel truly seen and normal again, filling her with great courage to face her daily life and fight against the disease.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为 150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Inspired by the stranger’s kindness, Gentile became more confident about her appearance and life.
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Paragraph 2: Years later, Gentile kept the warm memory in mind and passed on the kindness.
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一、文本分析
1.角色
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2.视角
第________人称
3.时空线
Gentile was diagnosed with breast cancer and lost her hair--- _______________ --- she felt uncomfortable with the wig and decided to abandon it--- _______________ --- she felt anxious and uneasy about others’ stares without a wig--- _______________ --- a stranger praised her sincerely and gave her great courage
4. 细节问答
What happened to Gentile in her late 50s? :___________________________________
Why did Gentile wear a wig at first?:_________________________________
What decision did Gentile make after her hair grew a little?:________________________________________________
Why was she uneasy about going out without a wig?:__________________________________________
What did a stranger do for Gentile in the convenience store?:_____________________________________________
What influence did the stranger’s kindness have on Gentile?_________________________________________________
What quality does Gentile have?________________________________________________________
What does the story tell us?:________________________________________________
5.情节线
五十多岁的Gentile患癌治疗后脱发,长期佩戴假发→_________________ →因假发闷热不适,她大胆决定不再佩戴、直面短发→_________________ →身为高校负责人,她极度在意他人眼光,害怕异样注视与同情→_________________ →便利店陌生人的真诚赞美治愈了她,成为她人生的转折点→(续写)她彻底接纳自己,变得自信从容→(续写)她铭记善意、传递温暖,治愈更多病友
6.情感线
Gentile:upset and inferior→___________→anxious and uneasy→___________→touched and empowered→___________(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:__________________________________________________________________
英文:__________________________________________________________________
8. 句式积累
状语从句;非谓语动词;定语从句;宾语从句;固定句型
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9. 本文主题
温情成长类:_______________________________________
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: Inspired by the stranger’s kindness, Gentile became more confident about her appearance and life.
衔接句1——What changes took place in Gentile’s life and attitude?_________________________________
Paragraph 2: Years later, Gentile kept the warm memory in mind and passed on the kindness.
衔接句2——How did Gentile pass on the kindness and help others? What was the final effect?_________________________________
三.段落续写框架
第一段:受陌生人善意的鼓舞,Gentile对自己的外表和生活更加自信。
→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________;
第二段:多年后,Gentile铭记这份温暖的记忆,并将善意传递下去。
→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。
四.段落续写(考场作答区)
Paragraph 1: Inspired by the stranger’s kindness, Gentile became more confident about her appearance and life.
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Paragraph 2: Years later, Gentile kept the warm memory in mind and passed on the kindness.
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参考答案
一、文本分析
1.角色
Pat Gentile(年近六十、患癌脱发、敏感自卑,最终被善意治愈、自信坚强、乐于传递温暖的高校负责人);A stranger woman(真诚善良、善于发现美好、用一句赞美点亮他人人生的陌生人)
2.视角
第三人称
3.时空线
Gentile was diagnosed with breast cancer and lost her hair--- She had to wear a wig to cover baldness and maintain image --- she felt uncomfortable with the wig and decided to abandon it--- She chose to keep her neat crew cut bravely --- she felt anxious and uneasy about others’ stares without a wig---She feared strange looks and pitiful comments from others --- a stranger praised her sincerely and gave her great courage
4. 细节问答
What happened to Gentile in her late 50s? :She was diagnosed with breast cancer and lost all her hair during treatment.
Why did Gentile wear a wig at first?:She wanted to cover her baldness and maintain her elegant public image.
What decision did Gentile make after her hair grew a little?:She decided to give up her wig completely and accept her short crew cut.
Why was she uneasy about going out without a wig?:She worried about others’ strange stares, whispers and pitiful looks as a cancer patient.
What did a stranger do for Gentile in the convenience store?:The stranger approached her and praised her short hairstyle sincerely, saying she looked amazing.
What influence did the stranger’s kindness have on Gentile?:The warm words became her life turning point, giving her great courage to face life and fight disease bravely.
What quality does Gentile have?:She is brave, positive, grateful and willing to pass on warmth and kindness to others.
What does the story tell us?:A small random kindness can light up others’ dark days. Being confident in ourselves and passing on warmth makes life more meaningful.
5.情节线
五十多岁的Gentile患癌治疗后脱发,长期佩戴假发→假发闷热不适,让她备受困扰、身心压抑→因假发闷热不适,她大胆决定不再佩戴、直面短发→身为公众人物,极度在意他人眼光,内心充满不安与自卑→身为高校负责人,她极度在意他人眼光,害怕异样注视与同情→一次外出时,陌生女士的真诚赞美驱散了她的自卑与焦虑→便利店陌生人的真诚赞美治愈了她,成为她人生的转折点→(续写)她彻底接纳自己,变得自信从容、积极生活→(续写)她铭记善意、传递温暖,治愈更多病友,延续美好
6.情感线
Gentile:upset and inferior→annoyed and restrained→anxious and uneasy→shocked and touched→touched and empowered→confident and warm-hearted(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:年近六十的Gentile因癌症脱发陷入自卑,鼓起勇气摘掉假发后备受心理煎熬,一位陌生人的真诚赞美给予她巨大勇气,让她走出阴霾,重拾自信并将这份善意不断传递。
英文:Suffering from hair loss due to cancer, Gentile lived in inferiority and anxiety. A stranger’s sincere compliment gave her great courage and confidence. She finally walked out of the shadow of illness and chose to pass on the warmth to more people.
8. 句式积累
定语从句:During the painful cancer treatment, she lost all her hair, which struck her hard.
非谓语动词:Tired of the stuffy and unnatural feeling of the wig, she finally made a bold decision.
状语从句:All she wanted was to live normally and keep moving forward bravely.
宾语从句:She couldn’t help worrying about people’s strange stares and whispered comments.
固定句型:This random kindness became a huge turning point for her.
9. 本文主题
温情成长类:微小善意足以照亮低谷人生,接纳自我、传递温暖,便是最强大的生命力量。
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: Inspired by the stranger’s kindness, Gentile became more confident about her appearance and life.
衔接句1:She abandoned self-doubt completely, faced the public confidently with her short hair and lived a positive life.
Paragraph 2: Years later, Gentile kept the warm memory in mind and passed on the kindness.
衔接句2:After recovering, she devoted herself to helping other cancer patients, bringing them courage and warmth with her own experience.
三.段落续写框架
第一段:受陌生人善意的鼓舞,Gentile对自己的外表和生活更加自信。
→①她彻底摆脱自卑,不再畏惧他人的眼光→②坦然以短发示人,积极乐观面对工作与生活→③她更加热爱生活,勇敢对抗病痛、拥抱人生
第二段:多年后,Gentile铭记这份温暖的记忆,并将善意传递下去。
→①康复后的她始终铭记这份珍贵的温暖→②她主动鼓励、帮助身患癌症的病友,分享自身经历→③她用微小善意温暖他人,让爱与勇气不断延续
四.段落续写(满分范文,150词左右)
Paragraph 1: Inspired by the stranger’s kindness, Gentile became more confident about her appearance and life. She no longer felt ashamed or self-conscious about her short hair. Instead of hiding herself, she held her head high in public and focused on her work and positive life attitude. Gradually, she ignored others’ casual stares and unnecessary comments. Her elegance and optimism won people’s genuine respect rather than pitiful sympathy. With confidence filling her heart, she became more brave in fighting against her disease and lived every day to the fullest.
Paragraph 2: Years later, Gentile kept the warm memory in mind and passed on the kindness. Having recovered from cancer, she volunteered to help cancer patients in need. She patiently comforted those who suffered from appearance anxiety and low spirits after treatment. She always offered sincere praise and encouragement just like the kind stranger did for her. By sharing her own experience, she helped countless patients walk out of despair. For her, passing on kindness was the best way to repay the warm light that had once saved her.
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