摘要:
**基本信息**
聚焦建议信写作,构建“输入-输出-迁移”方法体系,系统整合格式规范、提建议表达及情境应用逻辑,提升语言表达与问题解决能力。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|阅读输入|1范文研读|建议信结构(日期/问候/正文/结尾/签名)、提建议表达(I recommend that...等)、书信格式|从格式规范到语言特点,奠定写作基础|
|真题迁移|1高考真题|问题说明+建议提出的实用框架|链接教材方法与高考命题,实现能力迁移|
|强基/提升/模拟|3原创题|情境化建议理由阐述、礼貌得体语气把控|从青少年烦恼到学习/活动场景,难度递进,强化思维品质与跨情境应用能力|
内容正文:
人教版必修第一册Unit 1 Teenage Life
单元写作任务专项练习
参考范文
★真题写作迁移
(2023年新高考卷)
One possible version:
范文词数 95
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. While I appreciate your plan to practice spoken English, I’m concerned about random pairing. Students’ personalities vary greatly, while some are outgoing and confident, others may feel awkward or even anxious when paired with a stranger. Besides, if two students are at obviously different levels, neither can improve efficiently.
To solve the problem, I suggest that you allow us to choose partners voluntarily. Alternatively, you could group students of similar competence together, so that everyone can participate actively and make balanced progress.
I hope you will consider my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
★单元写作强基(原创)
One possible version:
范文词数 91
Dear Eric,
I’m sorry to hear that you feel your parents don’t listen to you. Actually, many teenagers have the same experience, so don’t worry too much.
I have some advice for you. First, why not try to start a conversation at a proper time? If they seem busy, you can also write them a short note. I think parents care about their children, but sometimes they don’t know how to show it. I recommend that you be patient and give them time to understand you.
I hope things will get better soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
★写作主题提升(原创)
One possible version:
范文词数 94
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to learn that you are having trouble with your studies and feel lost. But please don’t worry too much. It is quite normal for students to meet problems at school. The key is to stay positive and never give up.
Why not make a clear plan and finish one small goal each day? You can also talk to your teachers or friends about your difficulties. I am sure they will be happy to help you.
Remember, every step forward brings you closer to success. Keep going, and you will do better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
★高考模拟演练(原创)
One possible version:
范文词数 98
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to share my concern about the English Corner. Recently, I have noticed that many students show little interest in joining it. Some feel nervous to speak in public, while others find the topics not so attractive.
In my opinion, we could choose more interesting topics, such as movies or popular songs. Besides, inviting some exchange students to join us might be a good idea. That could attract more teenagers to attend. I believe these changes will make the English Corner more lively and helpful. I would be happy to help organise the activities if needed.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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人教版必修第一册Unit 1 Teenage Life
单元写作任务专项练习
本单元的写作任务是写一封建议信,为青少年遇到的烦恼提供建议和帮助。要求文章包含以下部分:
日期(Date):书写写信日期。
问候(Greeting):礼貌的开头问候语。
正文(Body):简述青少年烦恼,给出解决建议,并补充对应理由。
结尾(Close):礼貌收尾、表达祝愿。
签名(Signature):落款签名。
在正式写作前,教材有充分的输入和铺垫:
阅读输入: 教材提供了青少年辅导员 Susan Luo回复一位“Worried Friend”的来信范文。教材引导学生研读范文,学习建议信的结构和语言特点,同时,学习了提建议的常用表达,如:I recommend that... / I think you should... / Why not...? / I am sure... 以及书信格式。
写作输出: 教材设置了“Talking Teens”专栏,提供三位青少年的真实烦恼供学生选择,引导学生在小组讨论后完成建议信写作。
本单元的写作任务旨在培养学生用英语分析问题、提出建议、给出理由的议论文写作能力,掌握书信的基本格式,并在书信交流中保持礼貌、得体、有说服力的语气。
★真题写作迁移
(2023年新高考卷)假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
★单元写作强基(原创)
假定你是校英文报“Talking Teens”专栏编辑李华,你收到一位名叫Eric的交换生来信,他说父母不愿倾听他的烦恼。请给他回信,内容包括:
(1)表示理解。
(2)提出建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Eric,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
★写作主题提升(原创)
假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter来信说,他最近在学习上遇到了困难,感到迷茫。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
(1)表示安慰并提出建议。
(2)说明你的鼓励与期待。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
Yours,
Li Hua
★高考模拟演练(原创)
假定你是学校英语角成员李华,你发现同学们参与英语角的热情不高。请你给负责英语角的外教老师Mr. Smith写一封信,内容包括:
(1)说明问题。
(2)提出看法。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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