Unit 8 The Power of Love 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年沪教版九年级英语上册

**基本信息** 围绕“爱的力量”主题，构建“词汇-句型-篇章”三阶训练体系，提炼“审题-表达-升级”写作方法，逻辑递进，适配中考情感类写作需求，提升语言表达与思维品质。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作素材库|4类主题词汇+2类高频搭配+4类功能表达|主题词汇分类与功能表达模板|从核心概念（爱的类型/礼物）到场景化表达，构建词汇网络| |黄金句型库|3类基础句型+7组句型升级示例|基础句型与细节拓展升级技巧|从简单句到复合句，实现表达精准化与丰富化| |高分写作方法|1篇典例精析（含审题/范文/亮点）|“审题-结构-细节-感悟”四步写作法|以典例为载体，拆解“人物-事件-情感-升华”写作逻辑| |阶梯训练|3级句子训练（汉译英/仿写/升级）+1篇篇章训练|“单句夯实-篇章应用”阶梯提升法|从句子构建到篇章组织，形成“输入-内化-输出”完整链条|

Unit 8 The Power of Love 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 爱的类型 family love 亲情 parental love 父母之爱 selfless love 无私的爱 friendship 友谊 kindness 善意 compassion 同情 gratitude 感恩 devotion 奉献 sacrifice 牺牲 care 关心 礼物相关 gift 礼物 present 礼物 handmade gift 手工礼物 special gift 特别的礼物 birthday gift 生日礼物 Christmas gift 圣诞礼物 surprise 惊喜 keepsake 纪念品 memento 纪念物 感受与情绪 touching 感人的 moving 令人感动的 heartwarming 暖心的 grateful 感激的 cherished 珍爱的 unforgettable 难忘的 precious 珍贵的 priceless 无价的 selfless 无私的 loving 充满爱的 动作与表达 give 给予 receive 收到 share 分享 express 表达 show 展示 care 关心 love 爱 appreciate 感激 remember 记住 cherish 珍惜 pass down 传承 2. 高频搭配 pass down 传承；流传 fix one’s eyes on 凝视 search through 搜寻 have no choice 别无选择 be proud of 以……为自豪 turn out 结果是 take away 带走 a set of 一套 photo album 相册 handmade gift 手工礼物 full of 充满 be fixed on 固定在……上 reach for 伸手去拿 look for 寻找 pass by 经过 3. 写作功能表达 描述礼物 My most special gift is ... 我最特别的礼物是…… It was given to me by ... 它是由……送给我的。 It is a ... that ... 它是一个……的…… 描述收到礼物的场景 I still remember the day when I received it. 我仍然记得收到它的那一天。 When I opened the box, I was surprised to find ... 当我打开盒子时，我惊讶地发现…… It touched my heart deeply. 它深深地触动了我的心。 表达感受与意义 This gift is special to me because ... 这个礼物对我来说很特别，因为…… It reminds me of ... 它让我想起…… I will always cherish this gift. 我会永远珍惜这份礼物。 描述爱的力量 Love can make the world warmer. 爱能让世界更温暖。 True love is selfless and asks for nothing in return. 真正的爱是无私的，不求回报。 Love is the most powerful force in the world. 爱是世界上最有力量的力量。 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 Everyone has a special gift that they will never forget. 每个人都有一个永远不会忘记的特别礼物。 My most special gift is ... 我最特别的礼物是…… I would like to share a story about love and kindness. 我想分享一个关于爱和善意的故事。 Love is the most powerful force in the world. 爱是世界上最有力量的力量。 2. 主体句型 I received this gift on my ... birthday. 我在……岁生日时收到了这份礼物。 It is a handmade card that my grandmother made for me. 这是一张我奶奶亲手为我做的卡片。 When I opened the box, I was deeply moved. 当我打开盒子时，我被深深地感动了。 This gift reminds me of the love of my family. 这份礼物让我想起了家人的爱。 The story teaches us that love is selfless. 这个故事教会我们，爱是无私的。 3. 结尾句型 I will always cherish this gift and the love behind it. 我会永远珍惜这份礼物和它背后的爱。 Love is not about how much you give, but how much you care. 爱不在于你给了多少，而在于你有多在乎。 This story has taught me the true meaning of love. 这个故事教会了我爱的真正含义。 I hope everyone can feel the power of love in their lives. 我希望每个人都能在生活中感受到爱的力量。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 I have a special gift. 我有一份特别的礼物。 Everyone has a special gift that they will never forget, and my most special gift is a handmade card from my grandmother. 每个人都有一个永远不会忘记的特别礼物，而我最特别的礼物是我奶奶亲手做的一张卡片。 It is a card. 它是一张卡片。 It is a beautiful handmade card that my grandmother made with great care and love. 它是一张美丽的 handmade 卡片，是我奶奶用心和爱制作的。 My grandmother made it. 我奶奶做的。 My grandmother made it with her own hands, putting all her love into every detail. 我奶奶亲手做的，把她所有的爱都倾注在每一个细节中。 I was moved. 我很感动。 When I opened the box and saw the card, I was deeply moved and tears filled my eyes. 当我打开盒子看到卡片时，我深受感动，热泪盈眶。 It reminds me of my grandmother. 它让我想起我奶奶。 This gift reminds me of my grandmother’s warm smile and all the happy moments we shared together. 这份礼物让我想起奶奶温暖的笑容和我们一起度过的所有快乐时光。 I will keep it forever. 我会永远保留它。 I will keep this gift forever because it carries the love and care of my grandmother. 我会永远保留这份礼物，因为它承载着奶奶的爱和关怀。 Love is important. 爱很重要。 Love is the most powerful force in the world, and it can make our lives warmer and more meaningful. 爱是世界上最强大的力量，它能让我们的生活更温暖、更有意义。 四、高分写作方法 典例精析 Write a story about a time when love helped someone overcome a difficulty. Your story should include: - who the people were and what difficulty they faced - how love was shown or expressed - what happened in the end and what you learned 要求： - 词数不少于80词 - 故事完整，内容充实，语言流畅 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 先明确三点：写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。 内容上，题目给出三个必须涵盖的要素：人物与困难、爱的表达方式、结局与感悟。时态上，叙述过去发生的故事用一般过去时，表达感悟用一般现在时。结构上分三段：第一段交代人物和困难，第二段详述爱如何传递和表达，第三段交代结局并分享从中获得的感悟。 选择素材时注意：困难要真实具体，爱的表达要自然有细节，感悟要紧扣故事主题，避免空泛说教。 【范文欣赏】 Love Overcomes Difficulty Last year, my best friend Lily broke her leg in a car accident. She had to stay in the hospital for two months. She felt sad and lonely because she couldn't go to school or meet her friends. Every day after school, I visited her and brought her school notes. I also taught her what she missed in class. When she felt upset, I listened to her and told her funny stories to cheer her up. My other friends also came to visit her. We made cards and wrote encouraging words on them. Lily told me that our love made her feel less lonely. Two months later, Lily returned to school. She caught up with all her lessons and even got better grades than before. From this experience, I learned that love is not just about big gestures. Small acts of care and company can bring warmth and strength to someone in need. 【亮点解析】 开篇快速进入故事，信息交代完整。 第一段三句话依次交代了人物（my best friend Lily）、困难（broke her leg, had to stay in hospital for two months）和情绪（sad and lonely because she couldn't go to school or meet her friends）。背景清楚，读者迅速进入情境。 爱的表达分层递进，具体可感。 探望、带课堂笔记、补课、倾听、讲笑话、做卡片、写鼓励语——七个具体行动从“学习帮助”到“情感陪伴”再到“集体关怀”，层层深入。“visited""brought""taught""listened""told""made""wrote”每个动词都是一个爱的具体动作，不抽象、不说教。“Lily told me that our love made her feel less lonely.”用Lily自己的话证明爱的力量，比作者直接说“她感受到爱了”更有说服力。 结局圆满且真实。 “She caught up with all her lessons and even got better grades than before.”不仅交代了Lily康复回归校园，更用“better grades than before”写出了积极向上的结果——困难不仅没把她打倒，反而让她更努力了。这种处理让故事有力度，不流于俗套。 感悟紧扣故事，不空泛。 “love is not just about big gestures. Small acts of care and company can bring warmth and strength.”从探望、带笔记、讲笑话这些日常小事中提炼出“爱不一定是大动作，小关怀也能给人温暖和力量”的道理，感悟来自故事本身，真实不空洞。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 每个人都有一个永远不会忘记的特别礼物。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 这是一张我奶奶亲手为我做的卡片。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 当我打开盒子时，我被深深地感动了。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 这份礼物让我想起了家人的爱。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 我会永远珍惜这份礼物和它背后的爱。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型 1：My most special gift is ...（描述最特别的礼物） 例句： My most special gift is a handmade card from my grandmother. （1）我最特别的礼物是我朋友送的一本书。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我最特别的礼物是我父亲为我做的一个木制玩具。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 2：I received this gift on ...（描述收到礼物的时间） 例句： I received this gift on my tenth birthday. （1）我在去年圣诞节收到了这份礼物。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我在小学毕业那天收到了这份礼物。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 3：It was given to me by ...（描述赠送者） 例句： It was given to me by my grandmother. （1）它是我的最好的朋友送给我的。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）它是我的老师送给我的。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 4：When I ...， I felt ...（描述感受） 例句： When I opened the box, I felt deeply moved. （1）当我看到这份礼物时，我感到非常惊喜。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）当我收到这封信时，我感到非常感激。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 5：This gift reminds me of ...（描述意义） 例句： This gift reminds me of the love of my family. （1）这份礼物让我想起我和朋友在一起的快乐时光。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）这份礼物让我想起我奶奶对我的关心。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 6：I will always cherish ...（表达珍惜） 例句： I will always cherish this gift and the love behind it. （1）我会永远珍惜我们之间的友谊。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我会永远珍惜这份美好的回忆。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：I have a special gift. 升级句：Everyone has a special gift that they will never forget, and my most special gift is a handmade card from my grandmother. 1. 基础句：It is a card. 升级句：___________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：My grandmother made it. 升级句：___________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：I was moved. 升级句：___________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：It reminds me of my grandmother. 升级句：___________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：I will keep it forever. 升级句：___________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：Love is important. 升级句：___________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 1.你所在的学校英语校刊正在举办“The Power of Love”主题征文活动。请你写一篇短文，介绍你最珍贵的一份礼物。 要点提示 1.这份礼物是什么，谁送给你的； 2.你是什么时候、如何收到这份礼物的； 3.收到礼物时的场景和感受； 4.这份礼物为什么对你如此特别。 5.词数：不少于80词 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. Everyone has a special gift that they will never forget. 2. It is a handmade card that my grandmother made for me. 3. When I opened the box, I was deeply moved. 4. This gift reminds me of the love of my family. 5. I will always cherish this gift and the love behind it. Level 2 句型仿写 句型 1 （1）My most special gift is a book from my friend. （2）My most special gift is a wooden toy that my father made for me. 句型 2 （1）I received this gift last Christmas. （2）I received this gift on the day I graduated from primary school. 句型 3 （1）It was given to me by my best friend. （2）It was given to me by my teacher. 句型 4 （1）When I saw this gift, I felt very surprised. （2）When I received this letter, I felt very grateful. 句型 5 （1）This gift reminds me of the happy time I spent with my friend. （2）This gift reminds me of my grandmother’s care for me. 句型 6 （1）I will always cherish the friendship between us. （2）I will always cherish this beautiful memory. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：It is a beautiful handmade card that my grandmother made with great care and love. 2. 升级句：My grandmother made it with her own hands, putting all her love into every detail. 3. 升级句：When I opened the box and saw the card, I was deeply moved and tears filled my eyes. 4. 升级句：This gift reminds me of my grandmother’s warm smile and all the happy moments we shared together. 5. 升级句：I will keep this gift forever because it carries the love and care of my grandmother. 6. 升级句：Love is the most powerful force in the world, and it can make our lives warmer and more meaningful. 篇章训练（参考范文） 1. 参考范文： Everyone has a special gift that they will never forget. My most special gift is a handmade scarf from my grandmother. I received this gift on my thirteenth birthday. My grandmother knew that I loved the colour blue, so she spent two months knitting a beautiful blue scarf for me. When I opened the box and saw the scarf, I was deeply moved. I could feel all the love and care that she had put into every stitch. This gift reminds me of my grandmother‘s kindness and warmth. Whenever I wear it, I feel like she is with me, giving me a warm hug. I will always cherish this gift and the love behind it. It is not just a scarf — it is a symbol of my grandmother’s love. 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $