Unit 5 My Time, My Joy 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年沪教版九年级英语上册

**基本信息** 围绕“我的时间与快乐”主题，构建“词汇-句型-篇章”三级写作训练体系，提炼共情表达、具体举例等实用技巧，系统提升语言输出能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|----|----|----| |写作素材库|4类主题词汇、2类搭配、5类功能表达|提供主题相关词汇及功能句型，夯实语言基础|从核心词汇积累到功能表达应用，构建语言输入逻辑| |黄金句型库|16个基础句型、5组升级对比|基础句型与升级表达结合，提升语句丰富度|从简单句到复杂句，体现语言表达进阶逻辑| |高分写作方法|1篇典例精析|提炼审题（内容/时态/结构）、亮点（共情/具体/委婉建议）技巧|以书信写作为载体，展示“理解-分享-建议”的篇章构建逻辑| |阶梯训练|3级句子训练、1篇篇章写作|句子升级及篇章结构方法，强化输出能力|从句子到篇章，形成“输入-内化-输出”的完整写作逻辑|

Unit 5 My Time, My Joy 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 休闲活动类型 film 电影 TV show 电视节目 quiz show 智力竞赛节目 reality show 真人秀节目 talent show 才艺表演 talk show 脱口秀 travel show 旅游节目 documentary 纪录片 animation 动画片 action film 动作片 adventure film 冒险片 science fiction 科幻片 musical 音乐剧 board game 棋类游戏 video game 电子游戏 reading 阅读 sports 运动 music 音乐 影视相关人物 director 导演 host 主持人 contestant 参赛者 actor 演员 actress 女演员 cameraman 摄影师 make-up artist 化妆师 lighting operator 灯光师 sound operator 音响师 评价类词汇 exciting 令人兴奋的 boring 无聊的 interesting 有趣的 touching 感人的 amazing 令人惊奇的 wonderful 精彩的 unforgettable 难忘的 enjoyable 令人愉快的 challenging 有挑战性的 relaxing 放松的 偏好与选择 prefer 更喜欢 enjoy 享受 like 喜欢 love 爱 be fond of 喜爱 would rather 宁愿 be interested in 对……感兴趣 2. 高频搭配 in one’s leisure time 在某人的空闲时间 quiz show 智力竞赛节目 reality show 真人秀节目 talent show 才艺表演 talk show 脱口秀 travel show 旅游节目 film review 影评 pass out 昏迷；失去知觉 time zone 时区 hang out 闲逛；常去某处 board game 棋类游戏 go on a trip 去旅行 spend time doing 花时间做…… gain from 从……获得 prefer A to B 喜欢A胜过B 3. 写作功能表达 介绍影评的基本信息 The film ... was directed by ... in ... 电影……由……在……年导演。 It is a ... film about ... 它是一部关于……的……电影。 The film tells the story of ... 这部电影讲述了……的故事。 描述影评的内容 The plot is about ... 情节是关于…… The main character is ... 主角是…… I was deeply moved by ... 我被……深深打动了。 表达优缺点 What I like most about it is ... 我最喜欢它的一点是…… However, I think ... 然而，我认为…… Although ..., I still enjoyed it. 虽然……，我仍然很享受它。 描述休闲活动 I enjoy ... in my free time. 我喜欢在我的空闲时间做…… ... is a great way to relax. ……是一个放松的好方法。 It helps me ... 它帮助我…… 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 My favourite film is ... 我最喜欢的电影是…… I would like to share my thoughts on ... 我想分享我对……的看法。 In my free time, I enjoy ... 在我的空闲时间，我喜欢…… There are many leisure activities that I enjoy, but ... is my favourite. 有很多我喜欢的休闲活动，但……是我最喜欢的。 2. 主体句型 The film is set in ... and tells the story of ... 这部电影以……为背景，讲述了……的故事。 The main character is a ... who ... 主角是一个……的人，他/她…… What I like most about the film is ... 我最喜欢这部电影的是…… Although the film has some weaknesses, I still enjoyed it. 虽然这部电影有一些不足之处，我仍然很喜欢它。 3. 结尾句型 I highly recommend this film to ... 我强烈推荐这部电影给…… I’m sure you will enjoy it if you like ... 如果你喜欢……，我相信你会喜欢它的。 ... is not only fun but also helps me relax and learn new things. ……不仅有趣，还能帮助我放松和学习新东西。 I believe leisure activities are important for a balanced life. 我相信休闲活动对于平衡的生活很重要。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 I like watching films. 我喜欢看电影。 Watching films is one of my favourite leisure activities because it helps me relax. 看电影是我最喜欢的休闲活动之一，因为它帮助我放松。 The film is exciting. 这部电影令人兴奋。 Although the film is a bit long, it is still exciting and keeps me on the edge of my seat. 虽然这部电影有点长，但它仍然令人兴奋，让我紧张不已。 I recommend it to everyone. 我向所有人推荐它。 I highly recommend this film to anyone who enjoys action and adventure films. 我强烈推荐这部电影给任何喜欢动作和冒险电影的人。 I like the main character. 我喜欢主角。 The main character is a brave young man who never gives up, and he truly impressed me. 主角是一个永不放弃的勇敢年轻人，他真的让我印象深刻。 The film teaches a lesson. 这部电影教了一个道理。 The film teaches us that we should never give up, no matter how difficult things are. 这部电影教会我们，无论有多困难，都不应该放弃。 四、高分写作方法 典例精析 假设你是李华，你的笔友Tom最近写信说他觉得课余生活很无聊，每天除了完成作业就是玩手机。他想让生活变得更充实、更有趣。请你给他写一封回信，分享你是如何度过课余时间的，并给他一些建议，帮助他找到属于自己的快乐时光（My Time, My Joy）。 要求： 1. 信件格式正确，不少于80词； 2. 至少分享两个你自己的兴趣爱好或活动； 3. 至少给出两条建议； 4. 语言得体，表达真诚。 Dear Tom, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【审题构思】 先明确三点：写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。 内容上，题目隐含三个写作任务：理解并回应Tom的困扰、分享自己的两个课余活动、给出至少两条建议。时态上，描述自己日常的课余活动用一般现在时。结构上分三段：开头理解和回应Tom的烦恼；主体段分享自己的兴趣爱好，并据此给出建议；结尾表达鼓励和期待。 【范文欣赏】 Dear Tom, I understand your feeling. After finishing homework, playing with phones all day can really make life boring. Let me share how I spend my free time and hope it can help you. I have two hobbies that bring me joy. One is reading. Every evening, I spend half an hour reading storybooks or science magazines. They open a new world to me. The other is playing basketball with my classmates on weekends. It keeps me healthy and helps me make more friends. Why not try to find a hobby you truly enjoy? You can start with something simple like reading or drawing. Also, you can join a club at school to meet new people and learn new skills. I'm sure you will find your own joy. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【亮点解析】 共情先行，回应真诚。 “I understand your feeling”直接表达对Tom处境的理解，紧接着“playing with phones all day can really make life boring”准确概括了Tom信中描述的问题。没有急于给建议，而是先让Tom感到被理解，这是书信体“语言得体”的体现。 举例具体，易于模仿。 “Every evening, I spend half an hour reading storybooks or science magazines”——有具体时间（every evening, half an hour）、有具体内容（storybooks or science magazines），Tom可以直接照着做。“playing basketball with my classmates on weekends”——有具体同伴（classmates）、有具体时间（weekends），画面感强。两个爱好一个偏静（阅读）、一个偏动（篮球），覆盖不同类型的兴趣选择。 建议从自身经验出发，不强加于人。 “Why not try to find a hobby you truly enjoy？”用反问句引出建议，语气委婉不生硬。紧接着“You can start with something simple like reading or drawing”——从简单的开始，降低了Tom尝试的门槛；“Also, you can join a club”——提供第二条路径，从社交角度帮助Tom走出无聊。两条建议从“个人独立进行”到“与他人一起”，覆盖面广。 结尾简洁温暖。 “I'm sure you will find your own joy.”呼应了题目中的“My Time, My Joy”，将话题焦点从“我的快乐”引向“你的快乐”，体现了对Tom的真诚祝福，信件首尾完整。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 看电影是我最喜欢的休闲活动之一，因为它帮助我放松。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 这部电影讲述了一个勇敢的年轻人永不放弃的故事。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 虽然这部电影有点长，但它仍然令人兴奋。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 我强烈推荐这部电影给任何喜欢动作电影的人。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 这部电影教会我们，无论有多困难，都不应该放弃。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型 1：... is one of my favourite ...（描述最喜欢的活动） 例句： Watching films is one of my favourite leisure activities. （1）打篮球是我最喜欢的运动之一。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）阅读是我最喜欢的休闲活动之一。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 2：The film tells the story of ...（描述电影内容） 例句： The film tells the story of a brave young man. （1）这部电影讲述了一个女孩追求梦想的故事。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）这本书讲述了一个家庭传承爱的故事。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 3：Although ..., it is still ...（让步状语从句） 例句： Although the film is a bit long, it is still exciting. （1）虽然这本书有点难读，但它仍然很有趣。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）虽然这部电影是黑白的，但它仍然很精彩。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 4：I highly recommend ... to ...（表达推荐） 例句： I highly recommend this film to anyone who likes action films. （1）我强烈推荐这本书给任何喜欢冒险故事的人。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我强烈推荐这个活动给任何想要放松的人。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 5：I prefer ... to ...（表达偏好） 例句： I prefer watching films at home to going to the cinema. （1）与打篮球相比，我更喜欢踢足球。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）与看电视剧相比，我更喜欢看电影。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 6：... teaches us that ...（表达主题与道理） 例句： The film teaches us that we should never give up. （1）这个故事教会我们要善良。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）这本书教会我们家庭的重要性。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：I like watching films. 升级句：Watching films is one of my favourite leisure activities because it helps me relax. 1. 基础句：The film is exciting. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：I recommend it to everyone. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：I like the main character. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：The film teaches a lesson. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：I like watching quiz shows. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：The film made me happy. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 1.你所在的学校英语校刊正在举办“My Favourite Film”主题征文活动。请你写一篇影评，介绍你最喜欢的一部电影。 要点提示： 1.电影的基本信息（片名、导演、类型、上映时间）； 2.电影的主要剧情和主角； 3.电影的亮点和你喜欢的原因； 4.你向谁推荐这部电影。 5.不少于80词 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. Watching films is one of my favourite leisure activities because it helps me relax. 2. The film tells the story of a brave young man who never gives up. 3. Although the film is a bit long, it is still exciting. 4. I highly recommend this film to anyone who likes action films. 5. The film teaches us that we should never give up, no matter how difficult things are. Level 2 句型仿写 句型 1 （1）Playing basketball is one of my favourite sports. （2）Reading is one of my favourite leisure activities. 句型 2 （1）The film tells the story of a girl who follows her dream. （2）This book tells the story of a family that passes on love. 句型 3 （1）Although the book is a bit difficult to read, it is still very interesting. （2）Although the film is in black and white, it is still wonderful. 句型 4 （1）I highly recommend this book to anyone who likes adventure stories. （2）I highly recommend this activity to anyone who wants to relax. 句型 5 （1）I prefer playing football to playing basketball. （2）I prefer watching films to watching TV series. 句型 6 （1）The story teaches us that we should be kind. （2）The book teaches us the importance of family. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：Although the film is a bit long, it is still exciting and keeps me on the edge of my seat. 2. 升级句：I highly recommend this film to anyone who enjoys action and adventure films with touching stories. 3. 升级句：The main character is a brave young man who never gives up, and he truly impressed me with his determination. 4. 升级句：The film teaches us that we should never give up, no matter how difficult things seem. 5. 升级句：I enjoy watching quiz shows because they are both entertaining and educational, and they help me learn new things. 6. 升级句：The film not only made me laugh, but also touched my heart with its warm and moving story. 篇章训练（参考范文） 1.例文 My Favourite Film My favourite film is The Pursuit of Happyness. It is an inspiring drama directed by Gabriele Muccino and stars Will Smith. The film tells the story of a father who struggles to build a better life for his son. The main character is a salesman who faces many difficulties. He loses his job, his wife leaves him, and he becomes homeless. However, he never gives up. He works hard and finally achieves his dream. What I like most about the film is the strong spirit of the main character. He shows us that nothing is impossible if we keep trying. Although the film is sad at times, it is also very inspiring. I highly recommend this film to anyone who needs encouragement. It teaches us that we should never give up, no matter how hard life is. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $