Unit 7 Reading Mark Twain单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年英语沪教版九年级上册

Unit 7 Reading Mark Twain 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 文学体裁与元素 novel 小说 short story 短篇小说 adventure story 冒险故事 humorous story 幽默故事 classic 经典作品 character 人物角色 plot 故事情节 setting 故事背景 theme 主题 humour 幽默 surprise ending 出人意料的结局 first-person point of view 第一人称视角 人物描述 main character 主角 supporting character 配角 hero 英雄 villain 反派 brave 勇敢的 clever 聪明的 naughty 淘气的 honest 诚实的 lazy 懒惰的 adventurous 爱冒险的 curious 好奇的 humorous 幽默的 wise 智慧的 阅读与评价 review 评论 comment 评价 recommend 推荐 impress 使印象深刻 appreciate 欣赏 analyse 分析 describe 描述 summary 总结 opinion 观点 故事结构 beginning 开头 middle 中间 ending 结尾 climax 高潮 conflict 冲突 resolution 解决 2. 高频搭配 first-person point of view 第一人称视角 surprise ending 出人意料的结局 main character 主角 make fun of 取笑 come along 出现 carry on with 继续 set off 出发 pass down 传承 be particular about 对……挑剔 with a spring in one’s step 迈着轻快的步伐 have no choice 别无选择 fix one’s eyes on 凝视 search through 搜寻 look for 寻找 grow up 长大 3. 写作功能表达 介绍作品 ... is one of the most famous works by ... ……是……最著名的作品之一。 The story is set in ... and tells the story of ... 故事以……为背景，讲述了……的故事。 It was written by ... in ... 它由……在……年写成。 描述人物 The main character is a boy who ... 主角是一个……的男孩。 He is clever but naughty. 他聪明但淘气。 Among all the characters, ... impressed me the most. 在所有角色中，……给我留下的印象最深。 评价作品 What I like most about this story is ... 关于这个故事，我最喜欢的是…… I think this story is ... 我认为这个故事是…… I would recommend this story to ... 我会向……推荐这个故事。 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 I have just finished reading a wonderful story called ... 我刚读完一个很精彩的故事，叫…… ... is one of the most famous works by Mark Twain. ……是马克·吐温最著名的作品之一。 I would like to share my thoughts on ... 我想分享我对……的看法。 Today I want to talk about a story that has impressed me a lot. 今天我想谈谈一个让我印象很深的故事。 2. 主体句型 The story is set in a small town on the Mississippi River. 故事以密西西比河畔的一个小镇为背景。 The main character is Tom Sawyer, a clever and naughty boy. 主角是汤姆·索亚，一个聪明又淘气的男孩。 What I like most about the story is the humour and the lively characters. 关于这个故事，我最喜欢的是其中的幽默和生动的人物。 Although Tom is naughty, he is also kind and brave. 虽然汤姆淘气，但他也很善良和勇敢。 3. 结尾句型 I highly recommend this story to anyone who loves adventure and humour. 我强烈推荐这个故事给任何喜欢冒险和幽默的人。 This story teaches us that ... 这个故事教会我们…… I think Tom Sawyer is one of the most unforgettable characters in literature. 我认为汤姆·索亚是文学中最令人难忘的角色之一。 I hope you can read this story and enjoy it as much as I did. 我希望你能读这个故事，并像我一样享受它。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 Tom Sawyer is a great book. 《汤姆·索亚历险记》是一本很棒的书。 Tom Sawyer is one of the most famous works by Mark Twain and it is loved by readers of all ages. 《汤姆·索亚历险记》是马克·吐温最著名的作品之一，深受各年龄段读者的喜爱。 The main character is Tom Sawyer. 主角是汤姆·索亚。 The main character is Tom Sawyer, a clever and naughty boy who loves adventure and always gets into trouble. 主角是汤姆·索亚，一个聪明又淘气的男孩，他热爱冒险，总是惹麻烦。 Tom is naughty. 汤姆很淘气。 Although Tom is naughty and likes to play tricks, he is also kind-hearted and brave when it really matters. 虽然汤姆很淘气，喜欢搞恶作剧，但在关键时刻他也很善良和勇敢。 The story is funny. 这个故事很有趣。 The story is full of humour, and it made me laugh from beginning to end. 这个故事充满了幽默，让我从头笑到尾。 I like the story. 我喜欢这个故事。 I really like the story because it is both entertaining and meaningful, and it taught me a lot about friendship and honesty. 我真的很喜欢这个故事，因为它既有娱乐性又有意义，教会了我很多关于友谊和诚实的东西。 Tom is clever. 汤姆很聪明。 Tom is very clever, and he often uses his intelligence to get out of difficult situations, which makes him a very interesting character. 汤姆非常聪明，他经常用他的智慧摆脱困境，这使他成为一个非常有趣的角色。 I recommend the story. 我推荐这个故事。 I highly recommend this story to anyone who enjoys adventure, humour, and unforgettable characters. 我强烈推荐这个故事给任何喜欢冒险、幽默和难忘角色的人。 四、高分写作方法 典例精析 Write an email to your pen pal about a book by Mark Twain that you have read or would like to read. Your email should include: - which book you are talking about - what the book is about (main characters and plot) - why you like it or want to read it 要求： - 词数不少于80词 - 邮件格式正确 - 内容充实，语言流畅 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 先明确三点：写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。 内容上，题目给出三个必须涵盖的要素：书名、故事梗概（主要人物和情节）、喜欢或想读的原因。时态上，介绍书籍内容用一般现在时，讲述阅读经历可用现在完成时或一般过去时。结构上分三段：开头问候并引出书籍，主体段介绍故事内容和主要人物，结尾说明喜欢的原因并期待对方的回复。 【范文欣赏】 Dear Tom, How's everything going? I've just finished reading a book by Mark Twain, and I can't wait to share it with you. It's called The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn. The story is about a young boy named Huck Finn and his friend Jim, a runaway slave. They travel down the Mississippi River on a raft and have many exciting adventures along the way. Huck is brave and clever, while Jim is kind and loyal. Together, they face dangers and make difficult decisions about what is right. I love this book because it's not only full of fun and action but also makes me think about life. Mark Twain's humor and his way of describing people really touched me. I hope you can read it too and share your thoughts with me. Write back soon! Yours, Li Hua 【亮点解析】 开篇兴奋自然，拉近距离。 “I've just finished reading”用现在完成时引出刚读完的书，体现了阅读的及时性；“can't wait to share it with you”表达了迫不及待分享的心情，符合给笔友写信的真实语气。邮件格式中的问候语“How's everything going?”也体现了书信体的亲切感。 故事梗概简洁清晰。 “a young boy named Huck Finn and his friend Jim, a runaway slave”——主要人物交代到位；“travel down the Mississippi River on a raft”——冒险的主线；“have many exciting adventures”——概括情节性质；“face dangers and make difficult decisions about what is right”——点出故事深层的道德冲突。三句话就把人物和情节讲清楚了，没有冗长复述。 人物形象用形容词精准概括。 “Huck is brave and clever, while Jim is kind and loyal.”用“while”做对比连接，既突出了两个主角的不同性格特点，又让句子有变化、有节奏感。四个形容词（brave, clever, kind, loyal）都是对人物核心特质的概括。 喜欢的原因从两个层面展开。 “not only full of fun and action but also makes me think about life”——第一个层面是表面的阅读体验（有趣、有冒险）；第二个层面是深层的思考价值（让思考人生）。一浅一深，既有娱乐性又有思想性。“Mark Twain's humor and his way of describing people really touched me”进一步补充了作者写作风格的吸引力——幽默和人物刻画，原因充分不空洞。 结尾以邀请收束，体现书信往来的互动性。 “I hope you can read it too and share your thoughts with me.”邀请对方阅读并交流感受，将一封单向的分享邮件变成了双向的互动，体现了笔友之间分享与交流的意义。结尾“Write back soon！”符合书信体的习惯表达。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 我刚读完马克·吐温写的《汤姆·索亚历险记》。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 主角是汤姆·索亚，一个聪明又淘气的男孩。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 故事以密西西比河畔的一个小镇为背景。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 关于这个故事，我最喜欢的是其中的幽默和生动的人物。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 我强烈推荐这个故事给任何喜欢冒险和幽默的人。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型 1：... is one of the most famous works by ...（介绍作品） 例句： Tom Sawyer is one of the most famous works by Mark Twain. （1）《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》是马克·吐温最著名的作品之一。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）《麦琪的礼物》是欧·亨利最著名的短篇小说之一。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 2：The story is set in ...（描述故事背景） 例句： The story is set in a small town on the Mississippi River. （1）故事以19世纪的伦敦为背景。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）故事以美国南部的一个小镇为背景。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 3：The main character is a ... who ...（描述主角） 例句： The main character is a clever and naughty boy who loves adventure. （1）主角是一个勇敢的年轻人，他永不放弃。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）主角是一个善良的女孩，她总是帮助他人。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 4：What I like most about ... is ...（表达最喜欢之处） 例句： What I like most about the story is its humour. （1）关于这本书，我最喜欢的是它生动的人物。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）关于这部电影，我最喜欢的是它的故事情节。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 5：Although ... is ..., he/she is also ...（描述人物复杂性） 例句： Although Tom is naughty, he is also kind and brave. （1）虽然哈克很调皮，但他也很忠诚。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）虽然汤姆很贪玩，但他也很聪明。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 6：I recommend ... to anyone who ...（表达推荐） 例句： I recommend this story to anyone who loves adventure. （1）我向任何喜欢幽默故事的人推荐这本书。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我向任何想了解美国文化的人推荐这本书。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：Tom Sawyer is a great book. 升级句：Tom Sawyer is one of the most famous works by Mark Twain and it is loved by readers of all ages. 1. 基础句：The main character is Tom Sawyer. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：Tom is naughty. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：The story is funny. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：I like the story. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：Tom is clever. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：I recommend the story. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 1．Write a book review of a short story by Mark Twain that you have read. Your review should include: -the title of the story and a brief summary of the plot -what you liked most about the story -whether you would recommend it to others and why 要求： -词数不少于80 -邮件格式正确 -内容充实，语言流畅 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. I have just finished reading The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain. 2. The main character is Tom Sawyer, a clever and naughty boy. 3. The story is set in a small town on the Mississippi River. 4. What I like most about the story is the humour and the lively characters. 5. I highly recommend this story to anyone who loves adventure and humour. Level 2 句型仿写 句型 1 （1）Adventures of Huckleberry Finn is one of the most famous works by Mark Twain. （2）“The Gift of the Magi” is one of the most famous short stories by O. Henry. 句型 2 （1）The story is set in London in the 19th century. （2）The story is set in a small town in the south of America. 句型 3 （1）The main character is a brave young man who never gives up. （2）The main character is a kind girl who always helps others. 句型 4 （1）What I like most about the book is its lively characters. （2）What I like most about the film is its plot. 句型 5 （1）Although Huck is naughty, he is also loyal. （2）Although Tom is playful, he is also clever. 句型 6 （1）I recommend this book to anyone who loves humorous stories. （2）I recommend this book to anyone who wants to learn about American culture. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：The main character is Tom Sawyer, a clever and naughty boy who loves adventure and always gets into trouble. 2. 升级句：Although Tom is naughty and likes to play tricks, he is also kind-hearted and brave when it really matters. 3. 升级句：The story is full of humour, and it made me laugh from beginning to end. 4. 升级句：I really like the story because it is both entertaining and meaningful, and it taught me a lot about friendship and honesty. 5. 升级句：Tom is very clever, and he often uses his intelligence to get out of difficult situations, which makes him a very interesting character. 6. 升级句：I highly recommend this story to anyone who enjoys adventure, humour, and unforgettable characters. 篇章训练（参考范文） 1．参考范文： Dear Editor, I’m writing to review Mark Twain’s short story The Celebrated Jumping Frog of Calaveras County. It’s about Jim Smiley, a crazy gambler who owns a super jumping frog. He bets a stranger 40 dollars on his frog. When Smiley steps out, the stranger fills the frog with heavy lead shot. Finally, the frog fails to jump and Smiley loses the bet. I love its funny humour best. It vividly shows Smiley’s blind pride and the stranger’s trick. I strongly recommend it. It’s short, interesting and brings us a meaningful lesson. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $