2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习------少年善意送温暖 导学案

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阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A 13-year-old boy, Jonathan Werner, is breaking a new path when it comes to the Scout slogan “Do a Good Turn Daily”. The boy in Troop 506 has got an unusual high rank for someone that age. Like many troops, 506 sells popcorn each fall to raise money. In 2019, Jonathan watched as kids who’d made $1,800 or more in sales received a Lego set as a reward. “I really wanted that Lego set,” he says. The next year, he earned his Legos. But Troop 506 doesn’t just give out Lego sets. Under its generous reward program, scouts receive a percentage of their sales in gift cards and cash points. Inspired, Jonathan spent the next few years developing some astonishing tricks for selling. Popcorn too expensive? A simple donation would do. No cash? Credit cards were acceptable. He set up in front of local stores, working 12 hours a day. During the pandemic, he even struck a deal with a car dealer: In all his sales efforts, he’d wear a mask with the company’s logo if the owner would buy popcorn for all his employees. Jonathan started pulling down jaw-dropping numbers. In 2021, he earned $46,193.75 in sales. He might have spent much on himself, but he had other ideas. Popcorn season closes in late November, and the holidays were on his mind — particularly the stories his father, Steve Kolk, had told him about his own days in foster care. “They didn’t really have Christmas,” Jonathan says. With $5,000, he could bring Christmas to a lot of kids. He shifted from big seller to big spender, hand-selecting $5,000 worth of gifts for dozens of kids according to their personal details. Each present must be hand-wrapped. And no kid should get just one gift. If you weren’t unwrapping at least two packages, you weren’t getting the real Christmas-morning experience that his father never had. The next year he strengthened his efforts, achieving a higher aim in sales and spending more on gifts. As Christmas drew near, Jonathan was busy preparing gifts again, eager to deliver warmth to more foster kids. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）情节合理，语言流畅，逻辑连贯，情感真挚。 Paragraph 1: When Jonathan showed up with piles of gifts, the foster home was filled with excitement. ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Jonathan’s good deeds soon spread widely in his community. ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Jonathan desired a Lego set through popcorn sales--- _________________ --- He created various sales methods and achieved amazing sales results--- _________________ --- Influenced by his father’s foster care experience, he decided to help foster kids--- _________________ --- He kept expanding his efforts to bring more warmth to kids 4. 细节问答 What was Jonathan’s original goal of selling popcorn? ：___________________________________ What creative sales methods did Jonathan come up with?：_________________________________ Why did Jonathan choose to help foster kids?：________________________________________________ What strict requirements did Jonathan have for gifts?：__________________________________________ What change took place in Jonathan’s sales purpose?：_____________________________________________ What quality does Jonathan possess?：_________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________________ 5．情节线 少年乔纳森为获得乐高积木开始售卖爆米花→_________________ →他创新销售方式、吃苦耐劳，创下惊人销售额→_________________ →听闻父亲寄养童年缺少圣诞惊喜，心生善意→_________________ →自掏腰包、精心挑选包装礼物，为寄养儿童送上圣诞温暖→持续努力扩大善意范围→（续写）礼物送达，孩子们收获快乐与感动→（续写）善举广为传播，带动更多人传递温暖 6．情感线 Jonathan：desiring and motivated→___________→sympathetic and warm-hearted→___________→devoted and selfless→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 摘抄文中状语从句、非谓语、宾语从句、定语从句、并列句各一句： ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情励志类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: When Jonathan showed up with piles of gifts, the foster home was filled with excitement. 衔接句1——How did the kids feel and what did Jonathan do? ________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Jonathan’s good deeds soon spread widely in his community. 衔接句2——What influence did his deeds bring and what was the ending? ________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：当乔纳森带着成堆的礼物出现时，寄养之家充满了欢声笑语。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：乔纳森的善举很快在社区广为流传。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 4． 段落续写 Paragraph 1: When Jonathan showed up with piles of gifts, the foster home was filled with excitement. ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Jonathan’s good deeds soon spread widely in his community. ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Jonathan Werner（聪慧勤奋、心怀善意、无私慷慨、坚守善意的少年童子军）；Jonathan’s father（有寄养经历、让孩子懂得共情与温暖的父亲）；foster kids（缺少陪伴、收获善意的寄养儿童） 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Jonathan desired a Lego set through popcorn sales--- He mastered creative sales skills and worked diligently --- He created various sales methods and achieved amazing sales results--- He abandoned self-consumption and planned to help others --- Influenced by his father’s foster care experience, he decided to help foster kids--- He carefully prepared generous Christmas gifts for every foster child --- He kept expanding his efforts to bring more warmth to kids 4. 细节问答 What was Jonathan’s original goal of selling popcorn? ：He wanted to earn a Lego set as a sales reward. What creative sales methods did Jonathan come up with?：He accepted donations and credit cards, worked long hours outside stores, and cooperated with a car dealer for sales. Why did Jonathan choose to help foster kids?：He knew foster kids had no happy Christmas from his father’s foster care experience. What strict requirements did Jonathan have for gifts?：Gifts were personally selected based on kids’ needs, hand-wrapped, and each kid got at least two presents. What change took place in Jonathan’s sales purpose?：His goal changed from earning rewards for himself to making money to warm disadvantaged kids. What quality does Jonathan possess?：He is hard-working, creative, kind-hearted, selfless and empathetic. What does the story tell us?：Small personal efforts can deliver great warmth, and kindness can be passed on and illuminate the whole community. 5．情节线 少年乔纳森为获得乐高积木开始售卖爆米花→受到销售奖励机制启发，钻研创新销售方法→他创新销售方式、吃苦耐劳，创下惊人销售额→听闻父亲寄养童年缺少圣诞欢乐，内心深受触动→听闻父亲寄养童年缺少圣诞惊喜，心生善意→放弃自我享乐，倾尽收入为寄养儿童准备圣诞礼物→自掏腰包、精心挑选包装礼物，为寄养儿童送上圣诞温暖→持续努力扩大善意范围→（续写）礼物送达，孩子们收获快乐与感动→（续写）善举广为传播，带动更多人传递温暖 6．情感线 Jonathan：desiring and motivated→diligent and creative→sympathetic and warm-hearted→devoted and generous→devoted and selfless→fulfilled and inspiring（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：少年乔纳森凭借勤奋与智慧创下惊人的爆米花销售业绩，没有将收入用于享乐，而是共情寄养儿童的不幸，每年精心准备圣诞礼物为他们送去温暖，用小小善举传递大爱。 英文：The hard-working and creative boy Jonathan achieved outstanding popcorn sales results. Instead of enjoying the profits himself, he devoted his earnings to preparing generous Christmas gifts for foster kids, spreading warmth and kindness. 8. 句式 状语从句：If the owner would buy popcorn for all his employees, he would wear a mask with the company’s logo. 非谓语动词：He shifted from big seller to big spender, hand-selecting gifts for dozens of kids. 宾语从句：He knew that foster kids failed to have a happy Christmas through his father’s experience. 定语从句：He wanted kids to have the real Christmas-morning experience that his father never had. 并列句：Popcorn too expensive? A simple donation would do. No cash? Credit cards were acceptable. 9. 本文主题 温情励志类：少年心怀善意，以奋斗之力传递温暖，平凡的坚守与无私的付出，能够点亮他人的童年、带动世间善意传递。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1 衔接句1——How did the kids feel and what did Jonathan do? The kids were thrilled to receive various gifts, wearing bright smiles, and Jonathan chatted and played with them warmly. Paragraph 2 衔接句2——What influence did his deeds bring and what was the ending? His selfless kindness won wide praise, inspired more community members to join him, and made Christmas warmer for more kids. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：当乔纳森带着成堆的礼物出现时，寄养之家充满了欢声笑语。 →①孩子们惊喜万分，迫不及待拆开精美包装的礼物→②一张张灿烂的笑脸温暖了乔纳森的心→③他陪伴孩子们玩耍，用心给予他们温暖与陪伴 第二段：乔纳森的善举很快在社区广为流传。 →①他的无私事迹被众人知晓，收获广泛赞誉→②越来越多的居民主动加入爱心行动、捐赠物资→③善意不断传递，乔纳森也始终坚守初心，持续传递温暖 四.段落续写（满分范文150词左右） Paragraph 1: When Jonathan showed up with piles of gifts, the foster home was filled with excitement. The kids’ eyes lit up with joy the moment they saw numerous delicately wrapped presents. Cheerful laughter spread through the room as they carefully unwrapped their gifts. Each child got more than two packages, exactly as Jonathan had promised. He patiently accompanied the kids, chatting with them and listening to their innocent voices. Seeing their bright smiles and heartfelt gratitude, Jonathan felt all his efforts were worthwhile. Paragraph 2: Jonathan’s good deeds soon spread widely in his community. Neighbors and local media praised his selfless acts and caring heart. Moved by his kindness, more residents began to donate gifts and daily supplies for foster kids. Gradually, a warm atmosphere of mutual help formed in the community. Jonathan continued his annual warm campaign faithfully. He perfectly interpreted the Scout slogan “Do a Good Turn Daily”, proving that even a teenager can make a big difference with persistent kindness. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $