2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---小羊除草的奇妙创业 导学案

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In the neighborhoods around Washington, D.C., residents tended to use lawnmowers (割草机) to look after their lawn in their yards. But the deafening noise lawnmowers produced greatly disturbed residents’ life and did harm to their hearing. What’s worse, weeds grew fast in warm seasons. It took great efforts and energy to clear overgrown weeds, especially the poison ivy, a climbing plant that was almost impossible to get rid of thoroughly. Nobody foresaw a turning point would come. Cory was born in a farming family. He had a good habit of observing life and exploring new chances. After graduation from college, he returned to his hometown in Fairfax County to start a business on his own. He purchased a small farm and brought in scores of Babydoll Southdown sheep, a type of sheep with white fur, cute looks and mild temper. Fond of interacting with people, these good-natured animals were always friendly. The sheep also had a strong reproductive ability. Before long, the number of his sheep grew rapidly to over 1,000. He had to employ more workers for sheep farming. One day, Cory was surprised to find his sheep had a special feature: They could neatly and quickly clean up the overgrown weeds including poison ivy. He knew residents nearby typically used electric or gas mowers to cut overgrown grass regularly and keep their lawn even. But they made loud noises and consumed much energy. When Cory spotted this amazing advantage of the sheep, a creative idea suddenly flashed across his mind: He could send his sheep to tidy up yards for local residents and companies. Without delay, Cory founded a company called Lamb Mowers, launching a brand-new lawn-care service that was reasonably priced. Temporary fences would be set up around the specific lawn to be cut, allowing the sheep to eat grass freely with an assistant always on site to guarantee safety and quality. Cory uploaded the information about his service online. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 续写段落 Paragraph 1: Word about the novel service spread across the whole neighborhood. Paragraph 2: To Cory’s surprise, the lovely sheep brought more than that. 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Local residents suffered from noisy lawnmowers and stubborn weeds--- _________________ --- Cory raised large numbers of mild Babydoll Southdown sheep--- _________________ --- He found sheep could remove weeds thoroughly including poison ivy--- _________________ --- He founded a company and launched sheep lawn-care service online 4. 细节问答 What problems did traditional lawnmowers bring to residents? ：___________________________________ What kind of person is Cory?：_________________________________ What are the advantages of Babydoll Southdown sheep?：________________________________________________ What special ability did Cory find in his sheep?：__________________________________________ What creative idea did Cory come up with?：_____________________________________________ How did Cory carry out his lawn-care service?：_________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 华盛顿周边居民饱受割草机噪音和顽固杂草困扰→_________________→大学生Cory返乡创业，养殖温顺的迷你南方绵羊→发现羊群可以高效清除杂草和毒常春藤→_________________→创立公司推出绵羊除草便民服务，线上推广业务→（续写）新颖服务迅速走红，广受居民好评→（续写）羊群带来额外惊喜，实现多重价值、收获更大成功 6．情感线 Residents：troubled and annoyed→___________→satisfied and delighted Cory：observant and creative→___________→grateful and accomplished（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 励志创新类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Word about the novel service spread across the whole neighborhood. 衔接句1——How did residents react to the new service? What benefits did it bring? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: To Cory’s surprise, the lovely sheep brought more than that. 衔接句2——What extra benefits did the sheep bring? What final achievement did Cory get? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：这项新颖的服务迅速传遍了整个社区。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：令Cory意外的是，这些可爱的小羊带来的远不止这些。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 Word about the novel service spread across the whole neighborhood. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ To Cory’s surprise, the lovely sheep brought more than that. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Cory：善于观察、勤于思考、敢于创新、勇于创业的大学生创业者；local residents：饱受除草困扰、乐于接受新鲜便民服务的社区居民；Babydoll Southdown sheep：性情温顺、外形可爱、具备高效除草能力的特色绵羊。 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Local residents suffered from noisy lawnmowers and stubborn weeds--- Traditional weeding methods were noisy, tiring and ineffective--- Cory raised large numbers of mild Babydoll Southdown sheep--- He observed and discovered the sheep’s unique weeding ability--- He found the market demand for quiet and efficient lawn care--- He founded a company and launched sheep lawn-care service online 4. 细节问答 What problems did traditional lawnmowers bring to residents? ：They produced loud noise disturbing daily life and harming hearing, and weeding was tiring and ineffective. What kind of person is Cory?：He is observant, creative, thoughtful and entrepreneurial, good at discovering opportunities in life. What are the advantages of Babydoll Southdown sheep?：They are mild, cute, friendly to people and have strong reproductive capacity. What special ability did Cory find in his sheep?：They can quickly and neatly remove overgrown weeds and thoroughly clear poison ivy that is hard to get rid of. What creative idea did Cory come up with?：He decided to provide lawn-care service by sending sheep to weed for local residents and companies. How did Cory carry out his lawn-care service?：He set temporary fences, arranged on-site assistants and promoted his reasonably priced service online. What does the story tell us?：Life is full of opportunities. With careful observation and creative thinking, we can turn ordinary resources into valuable causes and bring benefits to others. 5．情节线 华盛顿周边居民饱受割草机噪音和顽固杂草困扰→传统除草方式费力、扰民且无法彻底除杂→大学生Cory返乡创业，养殖温顺的迷你南方绵羊→发现羊群可以高效清除杂草和毒常春藤，填补市场空白→敏锐捕捉商机，创立特色除草公司→线上推广便民低价的羊群除草服务→（续写）新颖服务迅速走红，居民纷纷预约，好评不断→（续写）羊群带来生态、经济、社交多重价值，Cory收获事业成功 6．情感线 Residents：troubled and annoyed→curious and expectant→satisfied and delighted Cory：observant and creative→active and confident→grateful and accomplished（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：创业者Cory细心观察生活，发现自家绵羊具备高效除草的特殊能力，借此创新推出羊群除草服务，解决了社区居民的除草难题，凭借创意与实干收获了事业成功。 英文：Observing the inconvenience of traditional weeding and the special ability of his sheep, Cory launched an innovative sheep lawn-care service. The creative idea solved residents’ troubles perfectly and brought him great career achievements. 8. 句式 定语从句：poison ivy, a climbing plant that was almost impossible to get rid of thoroughly. 宾语从句：Cory was surprised to find his sheep had a special feature. 状语从句：When Cory spotted this amazing advantage of the sheep, a creative idea suddenly flashed across his mind. 非谓语动词：allowing the sheep to eat grass freely with an assistant always on site. 并列句：The sheep had cute looks, mild temper and strong reproductive ability. 9. 本文主题 励志创新类：生活处处蕴藏机遇，细心观察、勇于创新、敢于实践，就能将平凡事物转化为独特价值，用创意服务生活、成就自我。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Word about the novel service spread across the whole neighborhood. 衔接句1：Attracted by its quiet, efficient and eco-friendly advantages, numerous residents booked the service immediately and spoke highly of it. Paragraph 2: To Cory’s surprise, the lovely sheep brought more than that. 衔接句2：Besides bringing huge economic benefits, the cute sheep also brought social and ecological value to the whole community. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：这项新颖的服务迅速传遍了整个社区。 →①居民纷纷被无噪音、高效率的特色服务吸引→②订单源源不断，替代了传统扰民的割草机→③服务收获一致好评，口碑爆棚； 第二段：令Cory意外的是，这些可爱的小羊带来的远不止这些。 →①羊群美化社区环境，实现绿色生态除草→②温顺的小羊治愈人心，拉近邻里距离→③Cory的创新事业大获成功，实现人生价值。 四.段落续写（标准答案） Word about the novel service spread across the whole neighborhood. Residents were deeply impressed by its obvious advantages. Unlike noisy lawnmowers, the sheep worked quietly without disturbing neighbors. Moreover, they could completely remove troublesome poison ivy, which traditional machines failed to do. More and more residents and local companies placed orders for Cory’s service. Everyone praised the eco-friendly, labor-saving and cheap lawn-care service, making his business increasingly popular day by day. To Cory’s surprise, the lovely sheep brought more than that. The cute and mild sheep became popular among residents, especially children, who were eager to watch and feed them, enriching neighborhood life. In addition, sheep manure served as natural fertilizer, improving the soil quality of local lawns. His creative business not only solved residents’ long-standing troubles, but also brought him considerable profits and wide recognition. It was his careful observation and bold innovation that turned ordinary sheep into a surprising success. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $