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2026-2027学年高二英语应用文写作指导导学案(11)
(一)
假定你是李华,上周你参加了学校组织的帮助社区老人学习如何使用智能手机的志愿者活动。请你给美国朋友Tom写一封邮件分享这次活动,内容包括:
1. 活动内容;
2. 活动意义。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well!
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
分享志愿者活动 (Email to Tom)
├── 1. 题目要求
│ ├── 体裁:电子邮件 (分享经历)
│ ├── 词数:80词左右
│ └── 内容:活动内容 + 活动意义
├── 2. 谋篇布局
│ ├── 开头:问候 + 引出话题 (Last week, I took part in...)
│ ├── 主体段1:活动内容 (教老人用智能手机:视频通话、移动支付等)
│ └── 主体段2:活动意义 (帮助老人融入社会 + 培养自身责任感)
└── 3. 核心要点
├── 活动内容
├── 活动意义:
└── 结尾:期待回信
【核心要点】
完成句子
1.我写信是想和你分享上周我参加的一次非常有意义的志愿者活动。
I am writing to _____________________________________________________ last week.
2.这次活动由学校组织,旨在帮助社区的老年人学习使用智能手机。
_____________________, the event __________________________________ learn to use smartphones. (过去分词作状语和定语)
3.在活动中,我们耐心地教了他们一些实用的技能,比如视频通话、发送语音消息以及使用移动支付。
During the activity, _________________________________________, such as making video calls, sending voice messages, and using mobile payment.
4.当看到他们成功与孙辈在网上视频连线时露出兴奋的笑容,真的让人心里暖暖的。
_____________________________________________________________________ was truly heartwarming.
5.这次经历让我觉得收获满满。
____________________________________________.
6.这次经历不仅帮助老人们跨越了“数字鸿沟”,让他们不再感到那么孤单,同时也教会了我关爱老人的重要性。
______________________________________________________________, but it also taught me the importance of caring for the elderly. (倒装结构)
7.我意识到,多一点耐心,就能给别人的生活带来很大的改变。
I realized that a little patience can ________________________________________________.
8.期待收到你的回信!
________________________________________________!
【完美成篇】
使用恰当衔接词,组句成篇。
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well!
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
假定你是李华,上周五你校举办了校园迷你马拉松活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动内容;
2.活动感想。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Wonderful Campus Mini Marathon
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作指导】
【核心要点】
完成句子
1.上周五,一场迷你马拉松在我们校园内热情开跑。
Last Friday, ______________________________________________________________.
2.在体育老师的指导下,所有参赛者进行了热身运动。
All participants ____________________________________________________________.
3.随着发令枪响,所有选手从起跑线奋勇向前。
At the starting signal, _________________________________________________.
4.沿途的补给站及时为选手们补充能量,同时志愿者和工作人员也在全程提供全方位的支持,确保每一位跑者的安全。
Supply stations along the route ___________________________________, while volunteers and staff members provided full support throughout the race, ___________________________.(第二个空:-ing形式作状语)
5.通过此次活动,参赛者们以坚定的决心不断突破自我,展现了永不褪色的体育精神。
Through the activity, participants pushed their limits with determination, ____________________
________________________. (-ing形式作状语)
6.这不仅丰富了校园文化,更促进了我们坚韧不拔的品质与团队精神的培养,使其成为一场充满活力且鼓舞人心的校园盛事。
_____________________________________________ but also promotes perseverance and teamwork among us, making it a vibrant and inspiring campus event.(倒装结构+-ing形式作状语)
【完美成篇】
使用恰当衔接词,组句成篇。
A Wonderful Campus Mini Marathon
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答案(一)
【核心要点】
完成句子
1. share a meaningful volunteer activity I participated in
2.Organized by our school; aimed to help elderly people in our community
3.we patiently taught them practical skills
4.Seeing their excited smiles when they successfully connected with their grandchildren online
5.This experience was incredibly rewarding.
6.Not only did it help the seniors bridge the digital gap and feel less isolated
7.a little patience can make a big difference in someone's life.
8.Looking forward to hearing from you!
【完美成篇】
使用恰当衔接词,组句成篇。
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well!
I am writing to share a meaningful volunteer activity I participated in last week. Organized by our school, the event aimed to help elderly people in our community learn to use smartphones.
During the activity, we patiently taught them practical skills, such as making video calls, sending voice messages, and using mobile payment. Seeing their excited smiles when they successfully connected with their grandchildren online was truly heartwarming.
All in all, this experience was incredibly rewarding. Not only did it help the seniors bridge the digital gap and feel less isolated, but it also taught me the importance of caring for the elderly. I realized that a little patience can make a big difference in someone's life.
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
【核心要点】
完成句子
1.a mini marathon kicked off with enthusiasm on our campus.
2. engaged in warm-up exercises under the guidance of PE teachers.
3. all the participants surged forward from the starting line.
4.offered timely boosts of energy; ensuring the safety of every runner.
5.showcasing the enduring sportsmanship.
6.Not only does it enrich the campus culture ; making it a vibrant and inspiring campus event.
【完美成篇】
使用恰当衔接词,组句成篇。
A Wonderful Campus Mini Marathon
Last Friday, a mini marathon kicked off with enthusiasm on our campus.
To start with, all participants engaged in warm-up exercises under the guidance of PE teachers. Then, at the starting signal, all the participants surged forward from the starting line. Supply stations along the route offered timely boosts of energy, while volunteers and staff members provided full support throughout the race, ensuring the safety of every runner.
Ultimately, through the activity, participants pushed their limits with determination, showcasing the enduring sportsmanship. Not only does it enrich the campus culture but it also promotes perseverance and teamwork among us, making it a vibrant and inspiring campus event.
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