2026-2027学年高二上学期英语应用文写作指导导学案(7)

2026-2027学年高二英语应用文写作指导导学案(7) (一) 假定你是李华，外教Mr. Brown在班级增设了“共享笔记角”（Shared Notes Corner），你发现部分笔记被借走后未及时归还。请你给Mr. Brown写一封邮件，内容包括： （1）说明具体问题； （2）提出改进建议。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr. Brown, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【写作指导】 ├── 1. 题目要求 │ ├── 核心任务：给外教Mr. Brown写邮件 │ ├── 内容要点 │ │ ├── 说明问题：部分笔记借出后未及时归还 │ │ └── 改进建议：提出1-2个合理解决办法 │ └── 格式与词数：书信格式，80词左右 └── 2. 谋篇布局 (三段式结构) ├── 第一段：开门见山，说明问题 │ └── 写信目的 + 具体现象 (笔记未按时归还，影响他人使用) ├── 第二段：提出建议，解决问题 │ ├── 建议1：规定借阅期限 (如：set a borrowing limit) │ └── 建议2：建立登记制度 (如：use a sign-up sheet) └── 第三段：表达期盼，礼貌结尾 └── 希望建议被采纳 + 感谢老师的付出 【核心要点】 完成句子 我写这封邮件是想和您反映一下我们“共享笔记角”的一个小问题。 _______________________________regarding our “Shared Notes Corner.” 虽然大家对这个新举措非常赞赏，但我注意到有些珍贵的笔记借出后没有按时归还。 ________________________________, I have noticed some valuable notes are not returned on time. 这导致其他同学很难获取必要的复习资料，影响了大家为接下来的课程做准备。 This _________________________________________________for upcoming classes. 为了解决这个问题，我想提出几个实用的建议。 _________________________________________________________. 我们可以设定一个明确的借阅期限（比如两天），以确保大家都能公平地使用笔记。 ____________________________________, such as two days, would ensure fair access. 放一个借阅登记本是个好主意，这样大家就能清楚知道是谁借走了哪份笔记。 A sign-up sheet would help __________________________________________. 安排一名学生志愿者来专门管理笔记角，或许能进一步提高运转效率。 Assigning a student volunteer to manage the corner ______________________________. 希望这些建议能帮助我们改善学习体验。感谢您一直以来的辛勤付出！ I hope __________________________________________________________. Thank you for your continuous efforts! 【完美成篇】 使用恰当衔接词，组句成篇。 Dear Mr. Brown, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua (二) 假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Chris来信询问学校英语戏剧社将举办的主题为“From Page to Stage”的英语剧小组展演活动准备情况，请你用英语回复邮件，内容包括： 1．具体选择； 2．说明理由。 注意： 1．写作词数应为120个左右： 2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【写作指导】 ├── 1. 题目要求 │ ├── 核心任务：给英国笔友Chris回信 │ ├── 内容要点 │ │ ├── 具体选择：明确要表演的剧目（如《小王子》） │ │ └── 说明理由：阐述选择该剧目的2个原因 │ └── 格式与词数：书信格式，120词左右 └── 2. 谋篇布局 (三段式结构) ├── 第一段：寒暄引入，直奔主题 │ └── 表达收到来信的喜悦 + 引出“From Page to Stage”戏剧展的准备情况 ├── 第二段：具体选择与说明理由 (核心段落) │ ├── 具体选择：改编经典小说《小王子》的短剧 │ ├── 理由1：主题深刻（友谊与成长），情节简单动人，易引共鸣 │ └── 理由2：台词平实优美，适合学生表演，能提高口语 └── 第三段：补充现状，礼貌结尾 └── 描述当前排练进度（练台词、做道具）+ 表达期待与祝愿 【核心要点】 完成句子 1.收到你的来信，得知你询问我准备以“从书页到舞台”为主题的校园英语戏剧展的情况，我非常高兴。 ___________________________________________________for the school English drama exhibition themed “From Page to Stage”. 2.我写信是想和你分享一些具体的信息。 ________________________________________________________. 3.我们小组决定上演一部改编自经典小说《小王子》的短剧。 My group has decided to ____________________________________the classic novel The Little Prince. 4.选择这部作品主要有两个原因。 ___________________________________________________ 5.故事情节简单动人，蕴含着关于友谊和成长的深刻主题，观众很容易理解并产生共鸣。 The story is simple and touching, _____________________________________, ____________ ___________________________________________. 6.它的台词平实而优美，非常适合我们学生表演，也能借此提高我们的英语口语能力。 Its lines are plain and elegant, _____________________________________________________ our oral English skills. 7.目前，我们正忙着练习台词和设计简单的舞台道具。 Currently, ________________________________________________________. 8.我真的非常期待我们的演出。 __________________________________________________. 【完美成篇】 使用恰当衔接词，组句成篇。 Dear Chris, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 答案(一) 【核心要点】 完成句子 1.I am writing to share a small issue 2.While highly appreciated 3.makes it difficult for others to access essential materials 4.To solve this, I propose a few practical suggestions. 5.Setting a clear borrowing limit 6. help track who has borrowed which notes. 7. might further improve efficiency. 8.these suggestions will help improve our learning experience. 【完美成篇】 使用恰当衔接词，组句成篇。 Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing to share a small issue regarding our “Shared Notes Corner.” While highly appreciated, I have noticed some valuable notes are not returned on time, making it difficult for others to access essential materials for upcoming classes. To solve this, I propose a few practical suggestions. Firstly, setting a clear borrowing limit, such as two days, would ensure fair access. Secondly, a sign-up sheet would help track who has borrowed which notes. Additionally, assigning a student volunteer to manage the corner might further improve efficiency. I hope these suggestions will help improve our learning experience. Thank you for your continuous efforts! Yours, Li Hua (二) 【核心要点】 完成句子 1.I’m glad to receive your letter asking about my preparation 2.I’m writing to share detailed information with you. 3.put on a short play adapted from 4.There are two main reasons for our choice. 5.with meaningful themes about friendship and growth, which is easy for the audience to understand and appreciate. 6.suitable for us students to perform and improve our oral English skills. 7.we are busy practicing lines and designing simple stage props. 8.I’m really looking forward to our performance. 【完美成篇】 使用恰当衔接词，组句成篇。 Dear Chris, I’m glad to receive your letter asking about my preparation for the school English drama exhibition themed “From Page to Stage”. I’m writing to share detailed information with you. My group has decided to put on a short play adapted from the classic novel The Little Prince. There are two main reasons for our choice. Firstly, the story is simple and touching, with meaningful themes about friendship and growth, which is easy for the audience to understand and appreciate. Secondly, its lines are plain and elegant, suitable for us students to perform and improve our oral English skills. Currently, we are busy practicing lines and designing simple stage props. I’m really looking forward to our performance. Yours, Li Hua ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $