摘要:
**基本信息**
以“传统艺术”为主题,构建“素材-句型-方法-训练”四维写作体系,融合语言能力培养与文化意识渗透,实现从基础表达到篇章创作的阶梯式提升。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|写作素材库|4类主题词汇、14个高频搭配、4项功能表达|分类整合艺术相关词汇,建立“词汇-搭配-功能句”关联|从具体艺术形式词汇到抽象评价表达,形成语义网络|
|黄金句型库|12个基础句型、5组句型升级示例|提供“基础句-升级句”转化策略,强化情感表达与信息丰富度|按“开头-主体-结尾”篇章结构组织句型,符合写作逻辑|
|高分写作方法|2类写作任务、5步写作流程|“审题定位-搭建结构-丰富内容-提升语言-检查修改”闭环方法|针对不同写作任务(说明文/策划文案)匹配专属结构,体现任务驱动思维|
|阶梯训练|3级句子训练、2篇篇章训练|“汉译英-句型仿写-句子升级”分层训练法,衔接篇章实战|从单句准确表达到篇章连贯创作,符合语言学习循序渐进规律|
内容正文:
Unit 2 The World of Art
单元写作专项训练
一、单元核心信息
二、写作素材库
1. 主题词汇
艺术形式
art 艺术
painting 绘画
calligraphy 书法
paper-cut 剪纸
Beijing opera 京剧
folk art 民间艺术
oil painting 油画
Chinese painting 国画
drama 戏剧
ballet 芭蕾舞
photography 摄影
music 音乐
literature 文学
艺术相关物品与工具
brush 毛笔
ink 墨水
scissors 剪刀
paper 纸
mask 面具
costume 戏服
instrument 乐器
clay 黏土
wood 木头
silk 丝绸
艺术评价
beautiful 美丽的
wonderful 精彩的
amazing 令人惊奇的
creative 有创造力的
colorful 多彩的
pleasant 令人愉快的
moving 感人的
classic 经典的
traditional 传统的
valuable 有价值的
艺术相关动作与表达
express 表达
create 创造
show 展示
perform 表演
cut out 裁剪
stand for 代表
fall in love with 爱上
introduce 介绍
enjoy 欣赏
pass on 传承
2. 高频搭配
belong to 属于
fall in love with 爱上
stand for 代表
cut out 裁剪
upside down 颠倒
a symbol of ……的象征
be popular among 在……中受欢迎
play a part 扮演角色
in one’s own way 以自己的方式
introduce ... to ... 把……介绍给……
have a history of 有……的历史
all kinds of 各种各样的
a pair of 一双
pass on 传承
3. 写作功能表达
介绍艺术形式
My favorite art is ... 我最喜欢的艺术是……
... is a traditional Chinese art. ……是一种中国传统艺术。
It has a history of over ... years. 它有超过……年的历史。
... is one of the most famous ... in China. ……是中国最著名的……之一。
描述艺术特色
Artists use ... to create ... 艺术家用……来创作……
The actors wear ... 演员们穿着……
Each color stands for ... 每种颜色代表……
There are ... main roles in ... ……中有……种主要角色。
The music is played with ... 音乐是用……演奏的。
表达喜爱原因
I like ... for many reasons. 我喜欢……有很多原因。
First, ... Second, ... Third, ... 第一……第二……第三……
... is/are really amazing. ……真的很令人惊叹。
It makes me feel ... 它让我感到……
表达传承愿望
I hope more people can enjoy ... 我希望更多的人能欣赏……
We should pass on ... 我们应该传承……
It is important to protect ... 保护……很重要。
三、黄金句型库
1. 开头句型
My favorite traditional Chinese art is ...
我最喜欢的中国传统艺术是……
I would like to introduce ... to you.
我想向你介绍……
... is a very popular Chinese folk art.
……是一种非常受欢迎的中国民间艺术。
When I was ..., my ... introduced ... to me, and I fell in love with it immediately.
当我……岁时,我的……向我介绍了……,我立刻爱上了它。
2. 主体句型
... has a history of over ... years.
……有超过……年的历史。
It is made of / from ...
它由……制成。
People use ... to cut out different shapes.
人们用……剪出不同的形状。
The actors wear colorful masks. Each color stands for a different type of character.
演员们戴着五颜六色的面具。每种颜色代表一种不同的角色。
There are four main roles in Beijing opera — Sheng, Dan, Jing and Chou.
京剧有四种主要角色——生、旦、净、丑。
The music is played with traditional Chinese instruments like ...
音乐是用……等中国传统乐器演奏的。
3. 结尾句型
I hope more people around the world can enjoy this great art.
我希望全世界更多的人能欣赏这门伟大的艺术。
We should pass on this traditional art to the next generation.
我们应该把这种传统艺术传承给下一代。
It is our duty to protect and carry forward our traditional culture.
保护和弘扬我们的传统文化是我们的责任。
What a wonderful art it is!
多么精彩的艺术啊!
4. 句型升级
基础句
升级句
I like Beijing opera. 我喜欢京剧。
My favorite traditional Chinese art is Beijing opera. I fell in love with it when I was six. 我最喜欢的中国传统艺术是京剧。我六岁时就爱上了它。
Paper-cut is a folk art. 剪纸是一种民间艺术。
Paper-cut is a very popular Chinese folk art. It has a history of over 1,500 years. 剪纸是一种非常受欢迎的中国民间艺术。它有超过1500年的历史。
The actors wear masks. 演员们戴面具。
The actors wear colorful masks. Each color stands for a different type of character. 演员们戴着五颜六色的面具。每种颜色代表一种不同的角色。
I like the music. 我喜欢这音乐。
The singing style is very popular among its fans, and the music is so pleasant to the ear. 这种唱腔在戏迷中很受欢迎,音乐也非常悦耳。
I hope people can enjoy it. 我希望人们能欣赏它。
I hope more people around the world can enjoy this great art and understand Chinese culture. 我希望全世界更多的人能欣赏这门伟大的艺术,了解中国文化。
四、高分写作方法
典例精析
如今,越来越多的外国友人开始喜爱中国传统艺术。假如你是黄英,你想向外国友人介绍你最喜爱的中国传统艺术,请根据以下图示,撰写一篇作文。
要点包括:
1. 请在给出的四种传统艺术中选出其中一种并详细介绍 (至少3点);
2. 须全面反映图文信息;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 词数80左右。
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【审题构思】
拿到题目先明确三点:写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。
从内容上看,图示给出了四个明确的写作要点:选择哪一种艺术、这种艺术是什么、如何喜欢上它、对它的期待是什么,缺一不可。从时态上看,介绍艺术本身用一般现在时,回忆如何喜欢上它需要用一般过去时,两种时态需要准确切换。从结构上看,这篇短文适合分成三个段落:先点明选择的艺术并介绍其基本特征(是什么),再讲述与这门艺术结缘的故事(如何喜欢上),最后表达对这门艺术未来的期待。
【范文欣赏】
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art
Among all the four traditional Chinese arts, Chinese calligraphy holds a special place in my heart.
It is a special art form using a brush to create beautiful characters on paper. It carries deep meanings and the artist's feelings. I got interested in it when I saw a calligrapher's work at a show.
I expect more people around the world can enjoy its beauty. Also, I hope to see more creative forms with modern styles with traditional calligraphy in the future.
【亮点解析】
开篇点题,直入中心。 "Among all the four traditional Chinese arts, Chinese calligraphy holds a special place in my heart." 这句话既回应了图示中"从四种艺术中选一种"的要求,又用"holds a special place in my heart"这个地道表达直接表明书法在作者心中的独特地位。不绕弯子,不堆砌套话。
用"是什么"带出艺术的两层内涵。 "It is a special art form using a brush to create beautiful characters on paper." 先写外在形式——用毛笔在纸上写字;紧接着"It carries deep meanings and the artist's feelings." 再写内在精神——承载深意和情感。从形式到内涵,一浅一深,逻辑层层推进,既有信息量又有思考深度。
以个人真实经历说明"如何喜欢上",四要素齐全。 "I got interested in it when I saw a calligrapher's work at a show." 一句话包含了时间(when)、起因(saw a calligrapher's work)、地点(at a show)、结果(got interested in it)。有具体场景、有具体对象,读者能想象出那个画面,感染力强。这比说"I like calligraphy because it is beautiful"要高明得多。
用两个"期待"收束全文,层次分明。 第一个期待是"more people around the world can enjoy its beauty",从传播范围的角度表达希望——让更多人欣赏;第二个期待是"see more creative forms with modern styles with traditional calligraphy",从艺术发展的角度表达希望——传统与现代结合。前者着眼"广度",后者着眼"深度",两个期待一外一内,相得益彰。
结尾简洁不拖沓。 没有重复前文已经说过的话,而是干净利落地以两个"期待"收住,给人意犹未尽之感。词数控制在合理范围内,每个句子都承担了传递有效信息的任务。
时态转换准确。 介绍书法本身用一般现在时("is""carries"),回忆如何喜欢上用一般过去时("got""saw"),表达期待用一般现在时("expect""hope")。三种时态各司其职,界限清晰不混乱。
五、阶梯训练
(一)句子训练
Level 1 汉译英
1. 我最喜欢的中国传统艺术是剪纸。
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2. 剪纸有超过1500年的历史。
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3. 人们用剪刀和纸剪出不同的形状。
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4. 人们用剪纸来表达他们的愿望和希望。
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5. 多么精彩的艺术啊!
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Level 2 句型仿写(参照例句完成句子)
句型 1:My favorite ... is ...(介绍最喜爱的艺术形式)
例句: My favorite traditional Chinese art is paper-cut.
(1)我最喜欢的中国传统艺术是京剧。
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(2)我最喜欢的艺术形式是书法。
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句型 2:... has a history of ... years.(描述历史)
例句: Paper-cut has a history of over 1,500 years.
(1)京剧有超过200年的历史。
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(2)剪纸有超过1500年的历史。
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句型 3:People use ... to ...(描述工具与用途)
例句: People use scissors and paper to cut out different shapes.
(1)艺术家用毛笔和墨水来创作中国画。
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(2)人们用纸和剪刀来制作剪纸。
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句型 4:Each color stands for ...(描述象征意义)
例句: Each color stands for a different type of character.
(1)红色在中国文化中代表好运。
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(2)每种颜色在京剧面具中代表不同的角色。
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句型 5:What a / an ...! / How ...!(使用感叹句)
例句: What a wonderful art it is!
(1)多么美丽的剪纸啊!
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(2)京剧的音乐多么动听啊!
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句型 6:I hope more people can ...(表达愿望)
例句: I hope more people can enjoy this great art.
(1)我希望更多的人能欣赏京剧。
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(2)我希望我们能保护和传承传统文化。
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Level 3 句子升级
要求:参照下方示例,将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。
示例:
基础句:I like paper-cut.
升级句:My favorite traditional Chinese art is paper-cut. I fell in love with it when I was a child.
1. 基础句:Paper-cut is a folk art.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
2. 基础句:The actors wear masks.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
3. 基础句:I like the music of Beijing opera.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
4. 基础句:Each color means something.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
5. 基础句:I hope people can enjoy it.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
6. 基础句:Paper-cut is beautiful.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
(二)篇章训练
1.(25-26八上·福建泉州·期末)假定你是某校学生李华,你班决定组织同学们到艺术馆参观剪纸展览。请你结合内容提示,用英语给外教史密斯先生写一封电子邮件,邀请他一同前往,欣赏中国传统艺术。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所提示的信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
Dear Mr Smith,
Our class is planning to pay a visit to the paper-cutting exhibition in the Art Museum.
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Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
Level 1 汉译英
1. My favorite traditional Chinese art is paper-cut.
2. Paper-cut has a history of over 1,500 years.
3. People use scissors and paper to cut out different shapes.
4. People use paper-cuts to express their wishes and hopes.
5. What a wonderful art it is!
Level 2 句型仿写
句型 1
(1)My favorite traditional Chinese art is Beijing opera.
(2)My favorite art form is calligraphy.
句型 2
(1)Beijing opera has a history of over 200 years.
(2)Paper-cut has a history of over 1,500 years.
句型 3
(1)Artists use brushes and ink to create Chinese paintings.
(2)People use paper and scissors to make paper-cuts.
句型 4
(1)Red stands for good luck in Chinese culture.
(2)Each color in Beijing opera masks stands for a different character.
句型 5
(1)What a beautiful paper-cut it is!
(2)How pleasant the music of Beijing opera is!
句型 6
(1)I hope more people can enjoy Beijing opera.
(2)I hope we can protect and pass on traditional culture.
Level 3 句子升级
(以下为参考升级答案,其他合理升级也可接受)
1. 升级句:Paper-cut is a very popular Chinese folk art. It has a history of over 1,500 years and is loved by many people.
2. 升级句:The actors wear colorful masks. Each color stands for a different type of character. For example, a red mask means a good person.
3. 升级句:The singing style of Beijing opera is very popular among its fans, and the traditional instruments make the music so pleasant to the ear.
4. 升级句:In Beijing opera, each color on the mask stands for a different type of character. A red mask means a good person while a white mask means a bad person.
5. 升级句:I hope more people around the world can enjoy this great art and understand the beauty of Chinese culture.
6. 升级句:Paper-cut is not only beautiful but also meaningful. It expresses people’s wishes and hopes for a better life.
篇章训练(参考范文)
1.例文
Dear Mr Smith,
Our class is planning to pay a visit to the paper-cutting exhibition in the Art Museum. Now I’d like to invite you to go with us and enjoy this special Chinese art.
Paper-cutting is a traditional Chinese art. It has a long history. It is popular during festivals because it shows people’s beautiful life, happy views and wonderful skills. I’m sure there will be plenty of creative works.
We’ll meet at our school gate at 8:00 a.m. on Saturday. And we’ll go there by bus. We will be very glad if you can join us.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图——邀请史密斯先生一同前往艺术馆参观剪纸展览;
第二步,介绍剪纸艺术,并说明集合的时间、地点和交通方式;
第三步,表达愿望或期待。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional传统的
②plenty of大量的
③creative有创造力的
[高分句型]
①It is popular during festivals because it shows people’s beautiful life, happy views and wonderful skills.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②We will be very glad if you can join us.(if引导的条件状语从句)
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