Unit 5 Period 2 Using Language（以读促写课分层作业）英语人教版选择性必修第一册

**基本信息** 练习以袁隆平事迹为主题，通过基础、进阶、高阶三层设计，实现从词块积累到思辨写作的渐进式知识巩固，培养语言能力与思维品质。 **分层设计** |层次|知识覆盖|设计特色| |----|----------|----------| |基础|核心词块/基础句型/单句升格/基础写作|通过词块填空、简单仿写夯实语言基础| |进阶|高级词块替换/长难句仿写/段落润色/真题写作|采用词块替换、复合句仿写提升表达丰富性| |高阶|思辨词块/高阶句型/语段升华/压轴写作|借助思辨词块、哲理升华训练发展批判性思维，衔接高考真题|

分层作业 Unit 5 Period 2 Using Language 一、写作核心基础词块 1. 致力于科研 ____________________ 2. 克服重重困难 ____________________ 3. 培育高产水稻 ____________________ 4. 提高粮食产量 ____________________ 5. 缓解饥饿问题 ____________________ 6. 造福全世界 ____________________ 7. 坚持不懈的精神 ____________________ 8. 树立榜样 ____________________ 二、课文黄金仿写句型 1. He devoted his entire life to agricultural research. 仿写：这位科学家毕生致力于解决粮食危机。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. His work has helped billions of people escape hunger. 仿写：他的努力极大改善了人们的生活。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. It is his perseverance that leads to his great success. 仿写：正是坚持与奉献成就了他的伟大。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 三、单句基础升格（简单句→书面句） 1. Yuan Longping worked hard. He developed hybrid rice.（非谓语合并） _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. His research is important. It helps solve food problems.（which定语从句） _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 四、逻辑段落排序 A. Therefore, his spirit deserves our learning. B. He overcame countless difficulties in research. C. Yuan Longping is a great agricultural scientist. D. His hybrid rice greatly increased grain output. 正确顺序：____________________ 五、基础微写作（80词左右 人物介绍） 主题：My Role Model — Yuan Longping 要点： 1. 介绍身份：伟大农业科学家 2. 主要贡献：培育杂交水稻、增产、缓解饥饿 3. 个人品质与启示 六、进阶高阶写作词块（替换基础表达） 1. devote oneself to → ________________（高级：投身、恪守） 2. work hard → ________________（潜心钻研） 3. solve hunger problems → ________________（缓解全球饥荒） 4. make great progress → ________________（取得突破性成就） 5. set an example → ________________（树立不朽榜样） 6. benefit people → ________________（造福全人类） 七、课文长难句精准仿写（高考高频复合句） 1. Convinced that hunger threatened mankind, Yuan Longping stuck to field research for decades. 仿写：坚信奋斗改变命运，这位青年科学家数十年坚守科研岗位。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. It was countless failures and persistent efforts that finally brought about his groundbreaking success. 仿写：正是无数次坚持与付出，让他最终实现了伟大目标。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. His achievements not only improved grain output, but also guaranteed global food security. 仿写：科技创新不仅改变生活，也推动社会不断进步。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 八、句子综合升格（简单句→满分书面句） 1. He faced many difficulties. But he never gave up his dream.（让步状语从句升级） _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. His hybrid rice is highly productive. It helps people get rid of hunger.（现在分词作结果状语） _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 九、段落润色升格 原基础段落： Yuan Longping loved his work. He studied rice for many years. He helped many people. We should learn from him. 升格改写（加入非谓语、定语从句、高级衔接）： _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 十、进阶真题式写作（80词左右 人物品质演讲稿） 假定你是李华，学校英语广播站开展 Role Models in My Heart 人物宣讲活动，请你介绍袁隆平，内容包括： 1. 毕生扎根田间科研 2. 重大贡献：高产水稻、保障粮食安全 3. 个人品质与对你的激励 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、满分思辨高阶词块 1. 怀揣消除饥饿的初心 ____________________ 2. 深耕田间、躬身实践 ____________________ 3. 突破传统农业的产能瓶颈 ____________________ 4. 守护全球粮食安全底线 ____________________ 5. 将个人理想融入人类福祉 ____________________ 6. 诠释新时代科研者的责任与担当 ____________________ 二、高阶满分句型（倒装调/辩证/名词性从句） 1. 唯有甘于平凡、扎根实践，方能成就不凡价值。（Only倒装） _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 真正伟大的科研，不在于荣誉，而在于造福苍生。（what主语从句） _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 尽管前路充满未知与失败，他始终坚守济世为民的初心。（while辩证让步） _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 三、高阶句式润色改写 原句： Yuan Longping worked hard. He helped the world fight hunger. His spirit encourages us. 满分升格（嵌套非谓语+定语从句+抽象名词升华） __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   四、思辨语段升华训练（叙事→哲理升华） 普通语段： Yuan Longping made great achievements. He never gave up. We should learn from him. 满分思辨升格示范： _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 五、压轴思辨写作 题目：Ordinary Dedication Creates Extraordinary Greatness 思辨拔高立意： 1. 伟大从不源于天赋虚名，而源于长期坚守与朴素初心 2. 扎根基层、务实实践是科研成功的根本 3. 青年应将个人梦想融入国家与人类需求，实现人生价值 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (2024新课标Ⅱ卷 英语应用文写作) 假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园开展户外美术课，请给英国笔友Chris写一封邮件分享本次经历，写作要点： 1. 介绍自己完成的画作； 2. 谈谈本次上课感想。 要求：词数80词左右，规范邮件格式。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4 / 8 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 分层作业 Unit 5 Period 2 Using Language 一、写作核心基础词块 【答案】 1. devote oneself to scientific research 2. overcome numerous difficulties 3. develop high-yield rice 4. increase grain production/output 5. relieve the problem of hunger 6. benefit the whole world 7. the spirit of perseverance 8. set a good example 二、课文黄金仿写句型 【答案】 1. The scientist devoted his whole life to solving the food crisis. 2. His efforts have greatly improved people’s lives. 3. It is perseverance and devotion that make him great. 三、单句基础升格（简单句→书面句） 【答案】 1. Working diligently all his life, Yuan Longping developed hybrid rice successfully. 2. His research, which greatly increases grain output, helps solve global food problems. 四、逻辑段落排序 【答案】C → B → D → A 五、基础微写作（80词左右 人物介绍） 【参考范文】 My Role Model — Yuan Longping Yuan Longping is a great agricultural scientist respected worldwide. He devoted his entire life to hybrid rice research. Despite countless difficulties, he finally developed high-yield rice, which has greatly increased grain production and relieved global hunger. His perseverance and selfless devotion have benefited billions of people. As students, we should learn from him, stick to our goals and make contributions to society in the future. 六、进阶高阶写作词块（替换基础表达） 【答案】 1. commit oneself to / be dedicated to 2. devote oneself to in-depth research 3. alleviate global starvation 4. achieve groundbreaking accomplishments 5. establish an eternal role model 6. bring welfare to humanity 七、课文长难句精准仿写（高考高频复合句） 【答案】 1. Convinced that hard work shapes future, the young scientist stuck to his research position for decades. 2. It was continuous perseverance and devotion that enabled him to accomplish his great dream. 3. Scientific innovation not only changes our daily life, but also promotes social progress. 八、句子综合升格（简单句→满分书面句） 【答案】 1. Although he was confronted with numerous obstacles, he never abandoned his lifelong dream. 2. His high-yield hybrid rice produces abundant harvests, effectively helping people get rid of hunger. 九、段落润色升格 【答案】 Dedicating his life to agricultural research, Yuan Longping stuck to field experiments despite numerous hardships. The hybrid rice he developed has greatly boosted grain output and relieved global starvation. His perseverance and selfless devotion have touched generations, serving as a powerful inspiration for young people. 十、进阶真题式写作（80词左右 人物品质演讲稿） 【参考范文】  Role Models in My Heart Yuan Longping is one of the most respectable scientists in the world. Dedicating his entire life to agricultural research, he stuck to field work and overcame countless difficulties. Thanks to his persistent exploration, he successfully developed high-yield hybrid rice, which greatly improved global grain production and guaranteed world food security. His spirit of perseverance, diligence and selflessness always inspires me. As students, we should learn from him, hold fast to our dreams and strive to make contributions to society in the future. Yuan’s devotion truly lights up our way forward. 一、满分思辨高阶词块 【答案】 1. bear the original intention of eliminating hunger 2. devote oneself to field practice 3. break the output bottlenecks of traditional agriculture 4. safeguard the bottom line of global food security 5. integrate personal dreams into human well-being 6. interpret the responsibility and mission of modern researchers 二、高阶满分句型（倒装调/辩证/名词性从句） 【答案】 1. Only by embracing ordinariness and rooting oneself in practice can we achieve extraordinary value. 2. What defines great scientific research is not honor, but devotion to benefiting mankind. 3. While his research journey was filled with obstacles and failures, he always stuck to his original aspiration of serving people. 三、高阶句式润色改写  【答案】 Devoting his lifetime to down-to-earth agricultural research, Yuan Longping developed hybrid rice that helped billions of people worldwide get rid of hunger, whose noble spirit of dedication serves as an everlasting inspiration to youth. 四、思辨语段升华训练（叙事→哲理升华） 【答案】  Greatness rarely arises from temporary glory or innate talent. Instead, it stems from decades of silent persistence and selfless devotion. Yuan Longping’s lifelong commitment to field research demonstrates that true greatness lies in shouldering social responsibility and dedicating personal strength to public welfare. It is ordinary dedication that creates extraordinary miracles for humanity. 五、压轴思辨写作  【参考范文】 Ordinary Dedication Creates Extraordinary Greatness Yuan Longping’s lifelong career perfectly proves that ordinary dedication can create extraordinary greatness. Rather than chasing fame or comfort, he rooted himself in fields for decades, devoting all his efforts to breaking agricultural limitations. Facing countless failures and hardships, he never abandoned his original dream of eliminating global hunger. Eventually, his persistent research brought forth hybrid rice, greatly safeguarding global food security and benefiting humanity. His story delivers a profound lesson: true greatness lies in perseverance and responsibility. As teenagers, we should integrate personal dreams into social needs. With down-to-earth efforts, we can also create value and shine in ordinary positions. (2024新课标Ⅱ卷 英语应用文写作) 【参考范文】 Dear Chris, Hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to share a wonderful outdoor art class we took in the city park last Friday. Inspired by blooming flowers and green lakeside willows, I finished a watercolor painting featuring the lake surrounded by fresh plants. Compared with indoor classes, painting outdoors lets me observe details more vividly and feel the charm of nature directly. It greatly aroused my interest in painting. Have you ever taken outdoor art lessons? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 4 / 8 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 分层作业 Unit 5 Period 2 Using Language 一、写作核心基础词块 1. 致力于科研 ____________________ 2. 克服重重困难 ____________________ 3. 培育高产水稻 ____________________ 4. 提高粮食产量 ____________________ 5. 缓解饥饿问题 ____________________ 6. 造福全世界 ____________________ 7. 坚持不懈的精神 ____________________ 8. 树立榜样 ____________________ 【答案】 1. devote oneself to scientific research 2. overcome numerous difficulties 3. develop high-yield rice 4. increase grain production/output 5. relieve the problem of hunger 6. benefit the whole world 7. the spirit of perseverance 8. set a good example 二、课文黄金仿写句型 1. He devoted his entire life to agricultural research. 仿写：这位科学家毕生致力于解决粮食危机。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. His work has helped billions of people escape hunger. 仿写：他的努力极大改善了人们的生活。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. It is his perseverance that leads to his great success. 仿写：正是坚持与奉献成就了他的伟大。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. The scientist devoted his whole life to solving the food crisis. 2. His efforts have greatly improved people’s lives. 3. It is perseverance and devotion that make him great. 三、单句基础升格（简单句→书面句） 1. Yuan Longping worked hard. He developed hybrid rice.（非谓语合并） _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. His research is important. It helps solve food problems.（which定语从句） _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. Working diligently all his life, Yuan Longping developed hybrid rice successfully. 2. His research, which greatly increases grain output, helps solve global food problems. 四、逻辑段落排序 A. Therefore, his spirit deserves our learning. B. He overcame countless difficulties in research. C. Yuan Longping is a great agricultural scientist. D. His hybrid rice greatly increased grain output. 正确顺序：____________________ 【答案】C → B → D → A 五、基础微写作（80词左右 人物介绍） 主题：My Role Model — Yuan Longping 要点： 1. 介绍身份：伟大农业科学家 2. 主要贡献：培育杂交水稻、增产、缓解饥饿 3. 个人品质与启示 【参考范文】 My Role Model — Yuan Longping Yuan Longping is a great agricultural scientist respected worldwide. He devoted his entire life to hybrid rice research. Despite countless difficulties, he finally developed high-yield rice, which has greatly increased grain production and relieved global hunger. His perseverance and selfless devotion have benefited billions of people. As students, we should learn from him, stick to our goals and make contributions to society in the future. 六、进阶高阶写作词块（替换基础表达） 1. devote oneself to → ________________（高级：投身、恪守） 2. work hard → ________________（潜心钻研） 3. solve hunger problems → ________________（缓解全球饥荒） 4. make great progress → ________________（取得突破性成就） 5. set an example → ________________（树立不朽榜样） 6. benefit people → ________________（造福全人类） 【答案】 1. commit oneself to / be dedicated to 2. devote oneself to in-depth research 3. alleviate global starvation 4. achieve groundbreaking accomplishments 5. establish an eternal role model 6. bring welfare to humanity 七、课文长难句精准仿写（高考高频复合句） 1. Convinced that hunger threatened mankind, Yuan Longping stuck to field research for decades. 仿写：坚信奋斗改变命运，这位青年科学家数十年坚守科研岗位。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. It was countless failures and persistent efforts that finally brought about his groundbreaking success. 仿写：正是无数次坚持与付出，让他最终实现了伟大目标。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. His achievements not only improved grain output, but also guaranteed global food security. 仿写：科技创新不仅改变生活，也推动社会不断进步。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. Convinced that hard work shapes future, the young scientist stuck to his research position for decades. 2. It was continuous perseverance and devotion that enabled him to accomplish his great dream. 3. Scientific innovation not only changes our daily life, but also promotes social progress. 八、句子综合升格（简单句→满分书面句） 1. He faced many difficulties. But he never gave up his dream.（让步状语从句升级） _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. His hybrid rice is highly productive. It helps people get rid of hunger.（现在分词作结果状语） _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. Although he was confronted with numerous obstacles, he never abandoned his lifelong dream. 2. His high-yield hybrid rice produces abundant harvests, effectively helping people get rid of hunger. 九、段落润色升格 原基础段落： Yuan Longping loved his work. He studied rice for many years. He helped many people. We should learn from him. 升格改写（加入非谓语、定语从句、高级衔接）： _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dedicating his life to agricultural research, Yuan Longping stuck to field experiments despite numerous hardships. The hybrid rice he developed has greatly boosted grain output and relieved global starvation. His perseverance and selfless devotion have touched generations, serving as a powerful inspiration for young people. 十、进阶真题式写作（80词左右 人物品质演讲稿） 假定你是李华，学校英语广播站开展 Role Models in My Heart 人物宣讲活动，请你介绍袁隆平，内容包括： 1. 毕生扎根田间科研 2. 重大贡献：高产水稻、保障粮食安全 3. 个人品质与对你的激励 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】  Role Models in My Heart Yuan Longping is one of the most respectable scientists in the world. Dedicating his entire life to agricultural research, he stuck to field work and overcame countless difficulties. Thanks to his persistent exploration, he successfully developed high-yield hybrid rice, which greatly improved global grain production and guaranteed world food security. His spirit of perseverance, diligence and selflessness always inspires me. As students, we should learn from him, hold fast to our dreams and strive to make contributions to society in the future. Yuan’s devotion truly lights up our way forward. 一、满分思辨高阶词块 1. 怀揣消除饥饿的初心 ____________________ 2. 深耕田间、躬身实践 ____________________ 3. 突破传统农业的产能瓶颈 ____________________ 4. 守护全球粮食安全底线 ____________________ 5. 将个人理想融入人类福祉 ____________________ 6. 诠释新时代科研者的责任与担当 ____________________ 【答案】 1. bear the original intention of eliminating hunger 2. devote oneself to field practice 3. break the output bottlenecks of traditional agriculture 4. safeguard the bottom line of global food security 5. integrate personal dreams into human well-being 6. interpret the responsibility and mission of modern researchers 二、高阶满分句型（倒装调/辩证/名词性从句） 1. 唯有甘于平凡、扎根实践，方能成就不凡价值。（Only倒装） _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 真正伟大的科研，不在于荣誉，而在于造福苍生。（what主语从句） _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 尽管前路充满未知与失败，他始终坚守济世为民的初心。（while辩证让步） _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. Only by embracing ordinariness and rooting oneself in practice can we achieve extraordinary value. 2. What defines great scientific research is not honor, but devotion to benefiting mankind. 3. While his research journey was filled with obstacles and failures, he always stuck to his original aspiration of serving people. 三、高阶句式润色改写 原句： Yuan Longping worked hard. He helped the world fight hunger. His spirit encourages us. 满分升格（嵌套非谓语+定语从句+抽象名词升华） __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  【答案】 Devoting his lifetime to down-to-earth agricultural research, Yuan Longping developed hybrid rice that helped billions of people worldwide get rid of hunger, whose noble spirit of dedication serves as an everlasting inspiration to youth. 四、思辨语段升华训练（叙事→哲理升华） 普通语段： Yuan Longping made great achievements. He never gave up. We should learn from him. 满分思辨升格示范： _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】  Greatness rarely arises from temporary glory or innate talent. Instead, it stems from decades of silent persistence and selfless devotion. Yuan Longping’s lifelong commitment to field research demonstrates that true greatness lies in shouldering social responsibility and dedicating personal strength to public welfare. It is ordinary dedication that creates extraordinary miracles for humanity. 五、压轴思辨写作 题目：Ordinary Dedication Creates Extraordinary Greatness 思辨拔高立意： 1. 伟大从不源于天赋虚名，而源于长期坚守与朴素初心 2. 扎根基层、务实实践是科研成功的根本 3. 青年应将个人梦想融入国家与人类需求，实现人生价值 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  【参考范文】 Ordinary Dedication Creates Extraordinary Greatness Yuan Longping’s lifelong career perfectly proves that ordinary dedication can create extraordinary greatness. Rather than chasing fame or comfort, he rooted himself in fields for decades, devoting all his efforts to breaking agricultural limitations. Facing countless failures and hardships, he never abandoned his original dream of eliminating global hunger. Eventually, his persistent research brought forth hybrid rice, greatly safeguarding global food security and benefiting humanity. His story delivers a profound lesson: true greatness lies in perseverance and responsibility. As teenagers, we should integrate personal dreams into social needs. With down-to-earth efforts, we can also create value and shine in ordinary positions. (2024新课标Ⅱ卷 英语应用文写作) 假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园开展户外美术课，请给英国笔友Chris写一封邮件分享本次经历，写作要点： 1. 介绍自己完成的画作； 2. 谈谈本次上课感想。 要求：词数80词左右，规范邮件格式。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Chris, Hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to share a wonderful outdoor art class we took in the city park last Friday. Inspired by blooming flowers and green lakeside willows, I finished a watercolor painting featuring the lake surrounded by fresh plants. Compared with indoor classes, painting outdoors lets me observe details more vividly and feel the charm of nature directly. It greatly aroused my interest in painting. Have you ever taken outdoor art lessons? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 4 / 8 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $