Unit 2 Hobbies（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材译林版七年级上册

本初中英语讲义聚焦“兴趣爱好”主题写作，系统梳理从核心词汇（如piano、jogging等爱好名称，love doing sth等描述短语，learn a lot from等益处表达）、功能句式（开头句如Everyone has his hobby，中间句分析原因，结尾句总结升华）到佳句仿写的学习支架，构建从语言要素积累到语篇输出的完整脉络。 资料特色在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养，通过分类词汇表、分层句式库夯实语言基础，结合范例谋篇布局分析（如My Hobbies一文分引出话题、阐述爱好及原因、结尾互动的结构）引导逻辑组织。多样化实战任务（如介绍朋友爱好、校园生活等）覆盖不同写作情境，课中辅助教师系统教学，课后助力学生自主练习、查漏补缺，提升学习能力。

Unit 2 Hobbies单元同步写作讲义 本单元的话题是“兴趣爱好”，属于“人与自我：生活与学习”主题群中“丰富、充实、积极向上的生活”子主题。本单元的写作任务主要是介绍自己和他人的兴趣爱好，要求学生能够运用本单元所学核心词汇、语篇内容和语法知识介绍个人爱好、参与的具体活动、相关领域的榜样，阐述爱好的成因，以爱好为引领，树立职业理想。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.与爱好相关的 piano钢琴 jogging慢跑 painting绘画 paper-cutting剪纸 reading阅读 swimming游泳 science科学 drawing素描 cooking烹饪 dancing跳舞 robot机器人 football足球 2.描述爱好做某事 love (doing) sth 喜欢做某事 enjoy (doing) sth 享受做某事 like to do sth/(doing) sth 喜欢做某事/（做某事） a fan of … 是......的粉丝 be interested in ... 对......感兴趣 3.分析爱好的益处 learn a lot from ... 从……中学到很多。 help ... keep fit 帮助……保持健康。 make me feel happy/good/great 让我感到快乐/好/棒。 4.阐述参与的爱好活动 read all kinds of books 阅读各类书籍 go swimming every week 每周游泳一次 visit science museums 参观科学博物馆 take things apart and learn how they work 拆解物品并学习其工作原理 help fix things 参与物品修理 go on the internet 上网搜索 find answers to his endless questions 寻找他无穷无尽的问题的答案 meet once a week 每周聚会一次 share ideas about ... 分享关于……的想法 introduce ... to each other 相互介绍…… 句式积累 开头句： 1. Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I. 每个人都有自己的爱好，我也是。 2. My hobby is ... 我的爱好是…… 3. Just as the saying goes, “Hobbies are the key to happiness.” 俗话说，“爱好是幸福的关键。” 中间句： 1. Firstly, I think reading books is a good way to get lots of knowledge. 首先，我认为读书是获取大量知识的好方法。 2. Reading books gives me happiness. 读书让我感到快乐。 3. I was interested in this story because the clever Monkey King keeps fighting to help the weak and never gives up. 我对这个故事很感兴趣，因为机智的孙悟空始终坚持与邪恶势力斗争，帮助弱小，永不言弃。 结尾句： 1. In a word, reading has already become part of my life. 总之，阅读已成为我生活的一部分。 2. I think reading a good book is just like talking to an interesting person. 我认为读一本好书就像与一位有趣的人交谈。 3. I hope you can have a try, and you will find them helpful. 我希望你能尝试一下，你会发现它们很有帮助。 4. I hope my dream can come true.我希望我的梦想能够实现。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：He also goes on the internet to find answers to his endless questions. 仿写：我经常上网搜素信息。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：I am sure his dream can come true. 仿写：通过多年的努力，他的梦想终于实现了。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：Why is it important for us to have hobbies? 仿写：对学生们来说，养成良好的学习习惯是非常必要的。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. I often go on the internet to search for information. 2. His dream came true after many years’ hard work. 3. It is necessary for the students to develop good habits of learning. 典例 每个人都有自己的兴趣爱好，因为人的年龄，所受的教育等不同，人与人之间的兴趣爱好有很大的区别。在某种程度上，兴趣反应一个人的能力和愿望。兴趣在我们的日常生活中起着很重要的作用。作为中学生，兴趣在学习中有着重要的意义。根据表格中的内容，写一篇题为 "My Hobbies" 的短文。 Hobbies The first hobby & Reasons The second hobby & Reasons 注意: 1)内容要点供选择使用; 2)词数 80词左右。 My Hobbies _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 审题 ① 题材：本文是一篇介绍个人爱好的说明文； ② 人称、时态：要求介绍自己的爱好，人称应是第一人称；描述的是一般情况，时态应用“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 谋篇布局 要点提示:根据提示内容可以将文章分为四大部分: 第一部分：引出话题，介绍我的爱好------听音乐和打篮球。 第二部分：第一个爱好------听音乐及喜欢听音乐的原因。 第三部分：第二个爱好------打篮球及喜欢打篮球的原因。 第四部分：以提问的方式吸引读者注意，然后给读者以希望。 佳作展示 My Hobbies Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I. My hobbies are listening to music and playing basketball. My first hobby is listening to music. When I was a child, I enjoyed listening to music especially the cartoon music. Though I'm not good at it, I often lose myself in it. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it can also make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health. My second hobby is playing basketball. Playing basketball not only makes me healthy, but also makes me make a lot of friends. If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball. Do you like listening to music and playing basketball? If not, I hope you can have a try, and you will find them helpful. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇 lose myself in; 沉浸其中； calm down; 冷静下来； comfortable; 舒适； happy; 快乐； healthy; 健康； make a lot of friends结交很多朋友 not only…but also…不仅……而且…… 高分句型： 1. When I was a child, I enjoyed listening to music especially the cartoon music. 当我还是个孩子的时候，我喜欢听音乐，尤其是卡通音乐。enjoy doing sth. 表示喜欢做某事。 2. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. 当我很累的时候，它能让我感到舒服。when引导一个时间状语从句。 3. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health. 听音乐让我保持愉快的心情，对我的健康也有益。 4. I hope you can have a try, and you will find them helpful. 我希望你能尝试一下，你会发现它们很有帮助。 （一） （25-26七上·江苏苏州·期末）2025年末，“爱你老己（Love yourself, Laoji）”这句话走红网络，成为年轻人缓解压力、关爱自我的新方式。新的一年里，你打算如何更好地爱自己、照顾自己呢？请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文。 要点： 1. 你对“爱自己（love yourself）”的理解； 2. 选择两种“爱自己”的方式并说明原因（可从下图中选择，也可自行补充其他方式）。 take up a new hobby      have a healthy lifestyle   find a suitable dressing style 注意： 1. 词数80左右。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 所写内容包括以上要点，可作适当发挥； 3. 文章不得出现真实的学校、姓名等相关信息。 New Year, New Laoji Recently, the phrase “love yourself, Laoji” is very popular. I think it means ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 New Year, New Laoji Recently, the phrase “love yourself, Laoji” is very popular. I think it means caring about our own feelings and accepting who we are, rather than always seeking others’ approval. In the new year, I will love myself in two ways. First, I will take up painting as a hobby. It helps me relax and express my emotions. Second, I will keep a healthy lifestyle, like eating well and sleeping early. A healthy body brings more happiness. These small actions will make me stronger and more confident. 【详解】写作步骤 ‌[第一步：审题立意]‌ 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时和一般将来时为主 明确要点：对"爱自己"的理解（含义阐释）、两种爱自己的方式及原因说明 确定人称：第一人称（I/my/our） 注意事项：开头已给出，不计入总词数；不得出现真实学校、姓名等信息 [第二步：构思布局]‌ 三段式结构： 开头段（已给出）：引出话题+阐释"爱自己"的含义 主体段：分两点介绍爱自己的两种方式及原因 结尾段：总结展望，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开]‌ 要点一：对“爱自己”的理解‌ 含义阐释：caring about our own feelings and accepting who we are/meaning to value ourselves and be kind to ourselves/treating ourselves with patience and understanding等 对比说明：rather than always seeking others’ approval/instead of comparing with others/not putting others' needs before our own等 要点二：爱自己的方式‌ 方式选择：take up painting as a hobby/take up a new hobby/have a healthy lifestyle/find a suitable dressing style/learn to say no/keep a diary等 原因说明：It helps me relax and express my emotions/makes me feel happy and confident/improves my mood and reduces stress等 具体做法：eating well and sleeping early/doing exercise regularly/reading more books/spending time with friends等 效果升华：A healthy body brings more happiness/These small actions will make me stronger and more confident/I will become a better version of myself等 （二） （25-26七上·江西赣州·期末）为了在校园英语角展示学生课余活动，你们班英语老师以“My After-school Activities”为题向学生征文。请你根据以下提示信息写一篇英语短文投稿。 写作要点： 1. How do you usually spend your time after school? 2. What’s your favourite part of your after-school life? Why? 3. How do your after-school activities make you feel? 要求： 1．短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2．词数60—80，短文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名等信息； 3．请将内容填写在答题卡上相应位置，否则不给分。 My After-school Activities _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My After-school Activities After school, I feel a little tired, but my after-school life is fun! I often go to the playground to play sports with my friends. At home, I like reading science books. My favourite part is playing basketball with my friends. I love it because it helps me relax and keeps me healthy. It’s also a great way to make friends. In a word, these activities make me feel happy and energetic. I truly enjoy my after-school time. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：如何度过课后时间；最喜欢的部分及原因；课后活动的感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得出现真实姓名和校名；词数60-80 [第二步：构思布局] 开头段：总起课后生活，点明虽有疲惫但充满乐趣 主体段：分层介绍课后活动（操场运动、回家阅读）；最喜欢的部分（打篮球）及原因（放松、健康、交友） 结尾段：总结感受，表达对课后时间的喜爱 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：课后活动 操场活动：go to the playground/play sports/play basketball/run or jump等 在家活动：read science books/read storybooks/do homework/listen to music等 要点二：最喜欢的部分及原因 活动名称：favourite part is playing basketball/love playing football/enjoy swimming most等 原因：helps me relax/keeps me healthy/helps me make friends/makes me feel good/relieves my stress/keeps me fit/makes me strong等 要点三：感受 总结感受：make me feel happy and energetic/bring me joy and energy/make my day wonderful等 情感表达：truly enjoy my after-school time/love my after-school life等 （三） （25-26七上·江苏常州·期中）假设你是王芳，你的英国新笔友露西发来电子邮件，询问你和你的校园生活情况。请你仔细阅读邮件并回复她。 Dear Wang Fang, How are you getting on? I’m curious about you and your school life. Could you answer these questions for me? 1. What’s your hobby and why do you like it? 2. What is your school life like? 3. What’s your favorite subject and why do you like it? 4. What after-school activities do you have? 5. What’s your favorite after-school club and why do you enjoy it? Please write back to me. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Lucy 要求： 1. 不少于80词，邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名。 3. 内容包含所有要点，语句通顺，书写规范，可适当增加细节使行文连贯。 Dear Lucy, I am glad to hear from you. Let me tell you about me and my school life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ How about your school life? Please write to me soon. Yours, Wang Fang 【答案】 例文 Dear Lucy, I am glad to hear from you. Let me tell you about me and my school life. My hobby is reading. It helps me relax after a long day at school and learn many interesting things from different books. My school life is always busy but full of fun and new challenges. Among all subjects, I like English best because it allows me to talk with friends from around the world. After school, we have many activities to choose from, such as football, basketball, drawing in the art club, and more. But my favorite is the English club because I can practice speaking freely in a friendly environment and meet new friends. This really makes me feel happy and confident. How about your school life? Please write to me soon.                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours,   Wang Fang 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：电子邮件； ②时态：以一般现在时为主； ③提示：需回复邮件中提出的五个问题，内容需完整连贯，语气亲切自然，符合电子邮件格式。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开门见山表明身份并礼貌回应，简要说明回信目的； 第二步：依次回答五个问题——介绍爱好（阅读）及理由、描述学校生活（忙碌而有趣）、说明最喜欢科目（英语）及原因、列举课外活动类型、说明最喜欢的俱乐部（英语俱乐部）及参与感受； 第三步：结尾询问对方情况并表达期待回信。 [亮点词汇] ①hobby爱好 ②relax放松 ③interesting有趣的 ④friendly友好的 [高分句型] ①Among all subjects, I like English best because it allows me to talk with friends from around the world. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句) ②This really makes me feel happy and confident. (and表并列) （四） （25-26七上·江苏无锡·期中）学校英语俱乐部正举办以“My Life and Dream”为题的演讲比赛。请根据下图所提示的要点，用英语写一篇演讲稿。 注意： 1. 表达中必须包含所给的要点，省略号部分需适当发挥。 2. 词数70词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 3. 表达中请勿提及真实姓名。 My Life and Dream Hello, everyone! Let me tell you something about myself. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文        My Life and Dream Hello, everyone! Let me tell you something about myself. I’m a 13-year-old student. I’m in Grade 7, Class 7. I love playing football because it is fun. I often play it with my friends after school. My school life is busy but happy. There are so many subjects. I like Chinese best, because the Chinese language is really amazing. I have many good friends. We study and play together. My dream is to be a teacher. I will study hard for it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，写作开头已给出。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“基本情况”和“学校生活”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。 第三步，书写结语，说明未来梦想。 [亮点词汇] ①love doing sth 喜欢做某事 ②after school 放学后 ③the Chinese language 中国语言 [高分句型] ①I love playing football because it is fun. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②There are so many subjects. (There be句型) （五） （25-26七上·江苏徐州·期中）假如你是李华，英国学生Susan写了一封邮件给你。请认真阅读Susan的邮件，并写一封邮件回复她。 Dear Li Hua, I’m so happy to have you as my friend. I really want to know about you. Can you tell me something about yourself, like your age, looks, character, hobbies, school life or others? Please write back to me soon. I want to know everything about you. Yours sincerely, Susan 注意事项： 1、回复的邮件须包含所有内容要点；可适当增加细节，使行文流畅； 2、词数70左右，邮件的首尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3、不得出现真实姓名和校名。 Dear Susan， I’m very happy to hear from you. I’m happy to tell you everything about me. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ This is me. I would like to be your friend. Write to me soon. All the best, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Susan, I’m very happy to hear from you. I’m happy to tell you everything about me. I’m 13 years old, with black hair and a medium build. I’m quite outgoing and enjoy helping others. My favorite hobby is reading, especially science books. I also like playing table tennis after school. My school life is busy but interesting. I have seven classes every day. English is my favorite subject because it helps me talk with friends like you! After class, I often join the science club or play sports with my classmates. This is me. I would like to be your friend. Write to me soon.   All the best, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：主要使用一般现在时； ③提示：需包含年龄、外貌、性格、爱好、学校生活等信息。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍年龄和外貌特征； 第二步，描述性格和兴趣爱好； 第三步，说明学校生活和日常活动； 第四步，表达交友愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①medium build中等身材 ②science club科学俱乐部 ③outgoing外向的 [高分句型] ①English is my favorite subject because it helps me talk with friends like you! (because引导原因状语从句) ②After class, I often join the science club or play sports with my classmates. (并列谓语描述活动) （六） （25-26七上·江苏无锡·期中）新学期你一定认识了很多新朋友吧!请根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你最好的朋友李华。 注意： 1. 短文应包含以上思维导图中所有的信息，层次清楚，表达连贯，可以适当发挥。 2. 词数70词左右，开头结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 3. 短文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。 4. personal information 个人信息 My best friend Hello, everyone! I would like to tell you something about my best friend Li Hua. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m lucky to have a good friend like him and I have fun with him. 【答案】例文 My best friend Hello, everyone! I would like to tell you something about my best friend Li Hua. Li Hua is a 13-year-old boy with short black hair. He is kind and polite, and always smiles at others. He likes Maths best and he is good at it. He thinks it is interesting. He has six lessons every day and also takes part in after-school activities. For example, he goes to the Reading Club on Tuesday afternoons after school. Li Hua enjoys playing tennis in his free time. He wants to be a tennis player in the future. I’m lucky to have a good friend like him and I have fun with him. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：短文需完整介绍好友的个人信息、学校生活、爱好、梦想等信息，可适当增加细节，以使人物形象更鲜明。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明文章主旨，引出介绍对象，详细阐述李华的年龄、外貌、性格特点； 第二步，介绍李华的学科喜好、日常课程与课后活动； 第三步，说明李华的业余爱好与梦想，并总结对这份友谊的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②after-school activities课后活动 ③for example例如 ④in one’s free time在某人的空闲时间 ⑤in the future在将来 [高分句型] ①Li Hua is a 13-year-old boy with short black hair.（“数词 + 名词单数 + 形容词”构成复合形容词，作定语） ②He likes Maths best and he is good at it.（and表示并列） ③He thinks it is interesting.（宾语从句） （七） （25-26七上·江苏无锡·期中）爱好是校园生活里的“小乐趣”，它能让我们的课余时光更精彩。作为初中生，你的爱好是什么？请以“My Hobby and My School Life”为题，根据下面所给信息，写一篇短文。 注意事项： 1. 内容涵盖所有要点，适当拓展，全文连贯通顺。 2. 文中不得提及个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 3. 词数70左右。 My Hobby and My School Life ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Hobby and My School Life Reading is my favorite hobby because it is so interesting and meaningful. I joined the Reading Club at school last year. In the club, we often share different books with each other and talk about the stories we read. I not only learn a lot of new knowledge through reading, but I also make many friends. It makes my school life much more colorful and fun. 【详解】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据题干中的提示要点介绍自己的爱好和学校生活，可适当增加细节。写作时，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，点明自己的爱好； 第二步，介绍自己参加了什么俱乐部以及在俱乐部做什么； 第三步，表达爱好如何使校园生活更好。 [亮点词汇] ①interesting有趣的 ②share分享 ③each other彼此 ④not only...but also不但……而且 [高分句型] Reading is my favorite hobby because it’s so interesting. (动名词作主语) （八） 假如你是Li Hua，是学校英语俱乐部的一名成员，学校将举行“My hobby”为题的征文活动。请作自我介绍并结合兴趣爱好写一篇英语短文。字数（80字左右）。 Self-introduction name, age, looks, … Hobby (选其中一个来写) writing; reading, dancing; sport, … Why do you like it? …… What do you often do for your hobbies? have lessons; read books… (参考) What’s your plan for the future? scientist/dancer/football player… 写作要求： 1. 文中不得出现考生的真实学校名称； 2. 80词左右； 3. 可适当发挥。 My hobby ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: My hobby My name is Li Hua. I’m 14 years old and a member of the school English Club. I’m tall with glasses. My hobby is reading, especially English novels and magazines. I enjoy reading because it broadens my horizons and improves my English. Every day, I spend half an hour reading books. I also join the club’s weekly book discussions to share ideas. In the future, I plan to be a writer. To achieve this, I will keep reading widely and practice writing stories. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、自我介绍，包括：姓名、年龄以及外貌等； 第二步、介绍自己的爱好和原因，以及自己的日常形容，包括：每日阅读半小时和参加读书会； 第三步、介绍自己的未来计划。 [亮点词汇] ①broaden my horizons开阔我的视野 ②spend time doing sth.花时间做某事 ③in the future未来 [高分句型] I enjoy reading because it broadens my horizons and improves my English. (because引导原因状语从句) （九） 最近 Sunshine Middle School举办以“My new friend”为题的演讲比赛。假如你是Sandy，请根据表格内的信息用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你的新朋友 Millie。 Information (个人信息) 1. Age: … 2. Class: Class 1, Grade 7 3. Looks: … 4. Characters: …(至少2点并举例) Hobbies 1. be interested in sport... 2. like all the subjects, be good at... 3. love reading because... Dream She hopes...(至少一点) 要求： 1.要点齐全，表达完整，书写工整，卷面整洁； 2.省略号处需适当发挥，词数不少于80，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 3.文章条理清晰、意思连贯、语句通顺。 My new friend Hello, everyone! I’m Sandy. Let me tell you something about my new friend Millie. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One Possible Sample: My new friend Hello, everyone! I’m Sandy. Let me tell you something about my new friend Millie. Millie is 12 years old and she is in Class 1, Grade 7. She is of medium height and has long hair. She is kind and friendly. She is always ready to help others. Once, I forgot to bring my English book, and she lent hers to me. She is interested in sports and often plays basketball with us after school. She likes all the subjects and is good at Maths. She loves reading because she can learn a lot from books. Her dream is to be a teacher when she grows up. She hopes to teach students knowledge and help them grow up. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，用于介绍新朋友Millie； ②时态：时态主要采用“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点包括个人信息、外貌、性格、爱好和梦想，考生需确保涵盖所有要点，并适当发挥，使内容完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。通过“Hello, everyone! I’m Sandy. Let me tell you something about my new friend Millie.”来引出下文对Millie的介绍； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。按照提示，从年龄、班级、外貌、性格、爱好和梦想几个方面依次介绍Millie； 第三步，书写结语。以简洁的语句结束演讲，如“That’s all. Thank you!”。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②be good at擅长 ③because of由于 ④be ready to do sth.乐于做某事 ⑤want to be想成为 [高分句型] ①She hopes to be a teacher when she grows up.（when引导的时间状语从句） 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $Unit 2 Hobbies单元同步写作讲义 本单元的话题是“兴趣爱好”，属于“人与自我：生活与学习”主题群中“丰富、充实、积极向上的生活”子主题。本单元的写作任务主要是介绍自己和他人的兴趣爱好，要求学生能够运用本单元所学核心词汇、语篇内容和语法知识介绍个人爱好、参与的具体活动、相关领域的榜样，阐述爱好的成因，以爱好为引领，树立职业理想。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.与爱好相关的 piano钢琴 jogging慢跑 painting绘画 paper-cutting剪纸 reading阅读 swimming游泳 science科学 drawing素描 cooking烹饪 dancing跳舞 robot机器人 football足球 2.描述爱好做某事 love (doing) sth 喜欢做某事 enjoy (doing) sth 享受做某事 like to do sth/(doing) sth 喜欢做某事/（做某事） a fan of … 是......的粉丝 be interested in ... 对......感兴趣 3.分析爱好的益处 learn a lot from ... 从……中学到很多。 help ... keep fit 帮助……保持健康。 make me feel happy/good/great 让我感到快乐/好/棒。 4.阐述参与的爱好活动 read all kinds of books 阅读各类书籍 go swimming every week 每周游泳一次 visit science museums 参观科学博物馆 take things apart and learn how they work 拆解物品并学习其工作原理 help fix things 参与物品修理 go on the internet 上网搜索 find answers to his endless questions 寻找他无穷无尽的问题的答案 meet once a week 每周聚会一次 share ideas about ... 分享关于……的想法 introduce ... to each other 相互介绍…… 句式积累 开头句： 1. Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I. 每个人都有自己的爱好，我也是。 2. My hobby is ... 我的爱好是…… 3. Just as the saying goes, “Hobbies are the key to happiness.” 俗话说，“爱好是幸福的关键。” 中间句： 1. Firstly, I think reading books is a good way to get lots of knowledge. 首先，我认为读书是获取大量知识的好方法。 2. Reading books gives me happiness. 读书让我感到快乐。 3. I was interested in this story because the clever Monkey King keeps fighting to help the weak and never gives up. 我对这个故事很感兴趣，因为机智的孙悟空始终坚持与邪恶势力斗争，帮助弱小，永不言弃。 结尾句： 1. In a word, reading has already become part of my life. 总之，阅读已成为我生活的一部分。 2. I think reading a good book is just like talking to an interesting person. 我认为读一本好书就像与一位有趣的人交谈。 3. I hope you can have a try, and you will find them helpful. 我希望你能尝试一下，你会发现它们很有帮助。 4. I hope my dream can come true.我希望我的梦想能够实现。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：He also goes on the internet to find answers to his endless questions. 仿写：我经常上网搜素信息。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：I am sure his dream can come true. 仿写：通过多年的努力，他的梦想终于实现了。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：Why is it important for us to have hobbies? 仿写：对学生们来说，养成良好的学习习惯是非常必要的。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 典例 每个人都有自己的兴趣爱好，因为人的年龄，所受的教育等不同，人与人之间的兴趣爱好有很大的区别。在某种程度上，兴趣反应一个人的能力和愿望。兴趣在我们的日常生活中起着很重要的作用。作为中学生，兴趣在学习中有着重要的意义。根据表格中的内容，写一篇题为 "My Hobbies" 的短文。 Hobbies The first hobby & Reasons The second hobby & Reasons 注意: 1)内容要点供选择使用; 2)词数 80词左右。 My Hobbies _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 审题 ① 题材：本文是一篇介绍个人爱好的说明文； ② 人称、时态：要求介绍自己的爱好，人称应是第一人称；描述的是一般情况，时态应用“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 谋篇布局 要点提示:根据提示内容可以将文章分为四大部分: 第一部分：引出话题，介绍我的爱好------听音乐和打篮球。 第二部分：第一个爱好------听音乐及喜欢听音乐的原因。 第三部分：第二个爱好------打篮球及喜欢打篮球的原因。 第四部分：以提问的方式吸引读者注意，然后给读者以希望。 佳作展示 My Hobbies Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I. My hobbies are listening to music and playing basketball. My first hobby is listening to music. When I was a child, I enjoyed listening to music especially the cartoon music. Though I'm not good at it, I often lose myself in it. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it can also make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health. My second hobby is playing basketball. Playing basketball not only makes me healthy, but also makes me make a lot of friends. If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball. Do you like listening to music and playing basketball? If not, I hope you can have a try, and you will find them helpful. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇 lose myself in; 沉浸其中； calm down; 冷静下来； comfortable; 舒适； happy; 快乐； healthy; 健康； make a lot of friends结交很多朋友 not only…but also…不仅……而且…… 高分句型： 1. When I was a child, I enjoyed listening to music especially the cartoon music. 当我还是个孩子的时候，我喜欢听音乐，尤其是卡通音乐。enjoy doing sth. 表示喜欢做某事。 2. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. 当我很累的时候，它能让我感到舒服。when引导一个时间状语从句。 3. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health. 听音乐让我保持愉快的心情，对我的健康也有益。 4. I hope you can have a try, and you will find them helpful. 我希望你能尝试一下，你会发现它们很有帮助。 （一） （25-26七上·江苏苏州·期末）2025年末，“爱你老己（Love yourself, Laoji）”这句话走红网络，成为年轻人缓解压力、关爱自我的新方式。新的一年里，你打算如何更好地爱自己、照顾自己呢？请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文。 要点： 1. 你对“爱自己（love yourself）”的理解； 2. 选择两种“爱自己”的方式并说明原因（可从下图中选择，也可自行补充其他方式）。 take up a new hobby      have a healthy lifestyle   find a suitable dressing style 注意： 1. 词数80左右。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 所写内容包括以上要点，可作适当发挥； 3. 文章不得出现真实的学校、姓名等相关信息。 New Year, New Laoji Recently, the phrase “love yourself, Laoji” is very popular. I think it means ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） （25-26七上·江西赣州·期末）为了在校园英语角展示学生课余活动，你们班英语老师以“My After-school Activities”为题向学生征文。请你根据以下提示信息写一篇英语短文投稿。 写作要点： 1. How do you usually spend your time after school? 2. What’s your favourite part of your after-school life? Why? 3. How do your after-school activities make you feel? 要求： 1．短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2．词数60—80，短文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名等信息； 3．请将内容填写在答题卡上相应位置，否则不给分。 My After-school Activities _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） （25-26七上·江苏常州·期中）假设你是王芳，你的英国新笔友露西发来电子邮件，询问你和你的校园生活情况。请你仔细阅读邮件并回复她。 Dear Wang Fang, How are you getting on? I’m curious about you and your school life. Could you answer these questions for me? 1. What’s your hobby and why do you like it? 2. What is your school life like? 3. What’s your favorite subject and why do you like it? 4. What after-school activities do you have? 5. What’s your favorite after-school club and why do you enjoy it? Please write back to me. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Lucy 要求： 1. 不少于80词，邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名。 3. 内容包含所有要点，语句通顺，书写规范，可适当增加细节使行文连贯。 Dear Lucy, I am glad to hear from you. Let me tell you about me and my school life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ How about your school life? Please write to me soon. Yours, Wang Fang （四） （25-26七上·江苏无锡·期中）学校英语俱乐部正举办以“My Life and Dream”为题的演讲比赛。请根据下图所提示的要点，用英语写一篇演讲稿。 注意： 1. 表达中必须包含所给的要点，省略号部分需适当发挥。 2. 词数70词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 3. 表达中请勿提及真实姓名。 My Life and Dream Hello, everyone! Let me tell you something about myself. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） （25-26七上·江苏徐州·期中）假如你是李华，英国学生Susan写了一封邮件给你。请认真阅读Susan的邮件，并写一封邮件回复她。 Dear Li Hua, I’m so happy to have you as my friend. I really want to know about you. Can you tell me something about yourself, like your age, looks, character, hobbies, school life or others? Please write back to me soon. I want to know everything about you. Yours sincerely, Susan 注意事项： 1、回复的邮件须包含所有内容要点；可适当增加细节，使行文流畅； 2、词数70左右，邮件的首尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3、不得出现真实姓名和校名。 Dear Susan， I’m very happy to hear from you. I’m happy to tell you everything about me. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ This is me. I would like to be your friend. Write to me soon. All the best, Li Hua （六） （25-26七上·江苏无锡·期中）新学期你一定认识了很多新朋友吧!请根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你最好的朋友李华。 注意： 1. 短文应包含以上思维导图中所有的信息，层次清楚，表达连贯，可以适当发挥。 2. 词数70词左右，开头结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 3. 短文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。 4. personal information 个人信息 My best friend Hello, everyone! I would like to tell you something about my best friend Li Hua. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m lucky to have a good friend like him and I have fun with him. （七） （25-26七上·江苏无锡·期中）爱好是校园生活里的“小乐趣”，它能让我们的课余时光更精彩。作为初中生，你的爱好是什么？请以“My Hobby and My School Life”为题，根据下面所给信息，写一篇短文。 注意事项： 1. 内容涵盖所有要点，适当拓展，全文连贯通顺。 2. 文中不得提及个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 3. 词数70左右。 My Hobby and My School Life ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） 假如你是Li Hua，是学校英语俱乐部的一名成员，学校将举行“My hobby”为题的征文活动。请作自我介绍并结合兴趣爱好写一篇英语短文。字数（80字左右）。 Self-introduction name, age, looks, … Hobby (选其中一个来写) writing; reading, dancing; sport, … Why do you like it? …… What do you often do for your hobbies? have lessons; read books… (参考) What’s your plan for the future? scientist/dancer/football player… 写作要求： 1. 文中不得出现考生的真实学校名称； 2. 80词左右； 3. 可适当发挥。 My hobby ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （九） 最近 Sunshine Middle School举办以“My new friend”为题的演讲比赛。假如你是Sandy，请根据表格内的信息用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你的新朋友 Millie。 Information (个人信息) 1. Age: … 2. Class: Class 1, Grade 7 3. Looks: … 4. Characters: …(至少2点并举例) Hobbies 1. be interested in sport... 2. like all the subjects, be good at... 3. love reading because... Dream She hopes...(至少一点) 要求： 1.要点齐全，表达完整，书写工整，卷面整洁； 2.省略号处需适当发挥，词数不少于80，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 3.文章条理清晰、意思连贯、语句通顺。 My new friend Hello, everyone! I’m Sandy. Let me tell you something about my new friend Millie. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $