内容正文:
沪教八上Unit 2作文讲义及范文
Unit 2 Amazing Numbers (话题:奇妙的数字)
题目一:告知信(回复外国朋友关于中国学生使用数字情况的询问)
题目: (参照2025辽宁中考“回复Eric邮件”模式)
假定你是李辉,你的外国好友Eric给你发来一封邮件,想了解中国学生在日常生活中如何使用数字。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 感谢他的信任;
2. 介绍中国学生在日常生活中使用数字的情况(如做预算、看时间、测量等);
3. 愿意继续提供帮助。
注意:
· 词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
· 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
· 邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
思路精讲:
这是2025辽宁中考真题的变式应用。2025年真题考查“介绍午休情况”,本题替换为本单元话题“数字的使用”。格式完全相同,都是回复外国朋友邮件的告知信。第二段是核心得分区,要介绍至少2-3个数字使用场景,如做预算、规划旅行、看时间等。
写作要点分析:
· 要点一(感谢信任):感谢Eric的信任,表明乐意分享
· 要点二(介绍数字使用情况):这是核心内容,至少写2-3个场景,用具体例子支撑
· 要点三(愿意提供帮助):表达愿意提供更多信息的意愿
· 时态:一般现在时为主,描述日常习惯
必备句型和词组:
· Thank you for your trust.
· I’m glad to help with your study.
· Here is what I can share.
· use numbers to...
· make a budget for...
· plan their journeys
· check the time
· play an important role in
· If you need more information, feel free to ask.
· I’d be happy to assist.
高分范文:
Dear Eric,
Thank you for your trust. I’m glad to help with your study on how Chinese students use numbers in daily life. Here is what I can share.
Numbers play an important role in our daily life. Most of my classmates use numbers to make a budget for their pocket money. For example, they plan how much to spend on food, books and entertainment each week. Besides, we use numbers to plan our journeys, such as checking train timetables. Interestingly, almost all of us use numbers every day to tell the time and manage our school schedules. Without numbers, our life would be very inconvenient.
If you need more information, feel free to ask. I’d be happy to assist you further.
Yours,
Li Hui
题目二:建议信(给同学关于数学学习的建议)
题目: (参照2024辽宁中考建议信模式)
你的同学张浩在邮件中说他觉得数学很难,尤其记不住复杂的公式,感到很沮丧。请你用英语给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示理解并给予安慰;
2. 结合本单元所学,提出至少三条记忆数字和公式的方法;
3. 鼓励他并表达美好祝愿。
注意:
· 词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
· 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
· 邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
思路精讲:
建议信是辽宁中考最高频的应用文类型之一。2024年辽宁中考就曾考查“给朋友关于中文学习的建议”。本题替换为本单元“数字学习”话题。建议信要注意:开头先共情安慰,中间给出具体可操作的建议(至少3条),结尾鼓励祝福。
写作要点分析:
· 要点一(安慰):先表示理解,让同学感受到支持和鼓励
· 要点二(具体方法):至少3条建议,每条要有简单说明,可结合本单元“用数字编故事、制作思维导图、在日常中应用”等方法
· 要点三(鼓励祝福):表达相信他能进步的信心
· 结构:安慰理解→具体建议→鼓励祝福
必备句型和词组:
· I was sorry to hear that...
· have a hard time with
· Don’t worry.
· I have some ideas that might help you.
· First of all,... Besides,... Finally,...
· use numbers in your daily life
· instead of just memorizing formulas
· turn... into a short story or rhyme
· make mind maps
· be much easier to remember
· Cheer up!
· I believe you can...
高分范文:
Dear Zhang Hao,
I was sorry to hear that you are having a hard time with math. Don’t worry. I think it’s normal to feel that way sometimes. I have some ideas that might help you.
First of all, try to use numbers in your daily life. When you go shopping, you can practice calculating the total cost. This makes math more practical and fun. Besides, instead of just memorizing formulas, you can turn them into a short story or a rhyme. It will be much easier to remember. Finally, making mind maps to organize all the formulas and rules can also be a great help. These methods have really worked for me.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Cheer up! I believe you can do much better in math. Good luck with your studies!
Yours,
Li Hui
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