Unit 4 A better me 写作（专项训练）-2026-2027学年外研版（三起）英语五年级上册

**基本信息** 以“目标-原因-计划-行动-决心”五步法为核心，构建目标与自我提升主题写作的系统性训练体系，融合语言能力培养与思维逻辑训练。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |课文仿写思路|5步框架+例句|提出目标→说明原因→制定计划→具体行动→表达决心的递进式写作结构|从基础表达（目标）到逻辑拓展（原因/计划）再到情感升华（决心），形成完整写作逻辑链| |核心词汇/句型|4类词汇+4组句型|目标/计划/频率/决心的功能词汇与模板句型分类|按写作要素（目标-计划-决心）分类，建立“词汇-句型-语篇”的层级关联| |三层写作练习|3个梯度（基础/提高/挑战）|从单项目标到多维度计划的分层训练法|遵循“词→句→段”语言能力发展规律，逐步提升语篇组织与思维表达能力|

外研版五年级上英语 Unit 4 A better me 写作突破专项训练 | 教材同步版 主题：目标与自我提升 【目标】一、写作目标 能介绍自己的目标和计划，按照“我的目标—为什么重要—具体计划—努力后的期待”完成表达。 【思路】二、课文仿写思路 1. 提出目标 英文例句：I want to read more. 写法提示：开头写自己想实现的目标。 2. 说明原因 英文例句：It is important to have goals. 写法提示：说明有目标的意义。 3. 制定计划 英文例句：I’m going to work hard. 写法提示：用 be going to 写计划。 4. 写具体行动 英文例句：I’m going to go running four times a week. 写法提示：用频率和具体行动让计划更真实。 5. 表达决心 英文例句：I can make it next time. 写法提示：结尾表达坚持和信心。 【词汇】三、核心词汇 目标：goal, do better in school, read more, exercise more, learn something new 计划动作：study, work hard, go running, watch, practise, join 品质感受：strong, fast, sad, happy, excited, sure, try again 连接表达：because, but, next time, every week, tomorrow 【句型】四、参考句型 目标表达：I want to read more. / My goal is to ____. 计划表达：I’m going to work hard. / I’m going to practise every day. 频率表达：I’m going to go running four times a week. 决心表达：I can make it next time. / I’m going to try again. 【提醒】五、易错点提示 • be going to 后面用动词原形：I’m going to study。 • want to 后面用动词原形：I want to read more。 • 表示次数用 times a week：four times a week。 • he/she 后面用 is going to，I 后面用 am going to。 【组句】六、连词成句 1. want / I / read / more / to / . ____________________________________________________________ 2. going / I’m / to / work / hard / . ____________________________________________________________ 3. going / I’m / to / exercise / more / . ____________________________________________________________ 4. can / I / make / it / next time / . ____________________________________________________________ 5. go / I’m / to / running / . ____________________________________________________________ 6. important / goals / have / to / it’s / . ____________________________________________________________ 【仿写】七、写作句型仿写 1. 把 I want to read more. 中的 read 换成 exercise。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 把 I’m going to work hard. 改为“我打算每天练习”。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 根据提示词写句：learn / something new ____________________________________________________________ 4. 补全：I’m going ____ try again. ____________________________________________________________ 5. 用 because 扩写：I have a goal。 ____________________________________________________________ 6. 主题迁移：写一句你本学期的学习目标。 ____________________________________________________________ 【写作】八、三层写作练习 写作1｜我的目标（基础） 要求：写出一个目标、一个原因和一个具体行动。不少于35词。 参考词：goal, want to, read, exercise, important ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 写作2｜我的计划（提高） 要求：介绍一项计划，写出时间、频率和努力方式。不少于45词。 参考词：going to, every day, four times, practise, work hard ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 写作3｜成为更好的自己（挑战） 要求：写一段自我提升计划，包含学习、健康或交友方面的目标。不少于55词。 参考词：better, goal, first, then, try again, make it ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 【范文】九、参考范文与讲解 写作1参考范文｜我的目标 My goal is to read more. I want to learn new things. I’m going to read a book every week. It is important and useful. 范文讲解：目标、原因、行动三部分完整。 写作2参考范文｜我的计划 I want to do better in school. I’m going to study every day and ask my teacher for help. I’m also going to read more. I will work hard and try again when I have problems. 范文讲解：使用 going to 写具体计划，并表达遇到困难后的态度。 写作3参考范文｜成为更好的自己 I want to be a better me. First, I’m going to read more and study hard. Then, I’m going to exercise four times a week. I’m also going to make new friends and be kind to them. I may have problems, but I’m going to try again. I can make it! 范文讲解：用 first、then 组织多项目标，but 和 try again 表达坚持。 【小结】十、写作小结 目标与自我提升类作文要围绕主题按顺序表达，注意使用 and、because、but、then 等连接词，使内容完整、连贯。 【答案】十一、参考答案 A. 连词成句答案 1. I want to read more. 2. I’m going to work hard. 3. I’m going to exercise more. 4. I can make it next time. 5. I’m going to go running. 6. It’s important to have goals. B. 句型仿写答案 1. I want to exercise more. 2. I’m going to practise every day. 3. I want to learn something new. 4. to 5. I have a goal because I want to be better. 6. My goal is to do better in school. C. 写作练习参考答案（示例） 写作1：My goal is to read more. I’m going to read a book every week. It is useful. 写作2：I want to exercise more. I’m going to run four times a week and work hard. 写作3：I want to be a better me. First, I’m going to study hard. Then, I’m going to exercise more and be kind to my friends. I’m going to try again. 外研版五年级上册 Unit 4 A better me 写作训练 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $