Unit 3 Wonderful nature 写作（专项训练）-2026-2027学年外研版（三起）英语六年级上册

**基本信息** 以“五步法”（点明景观-补充信息-用最高级-表感受-提倡议）构建写作体系，通过词汇句型铺垫、分层练习进阶，系统培养自然主题写作的语言组织与逻辑表达能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |课文仿写思路|5步引导|按“名称-信息-特点-感受-行动”顺序写作|从基础描述到情感与倡议表达，形成完整写作逻辑链| |词汇句型|4类词汇+5组句型|分类记忆核心词汇，套用功能句型|词汇为句型服务，句型支撑写作框架，层层递进| |仿写练习|6题|替换关键词、转换句式、主题迁移|从机械仿写到灵活运用，实现知识迁移| |三层写作|3篇（基础/提高/挑战）|基础练描述，提高用数据和连接词，挑战融经历与倡议|难度梯度上升，契合语言能力与思维品质发展规律|

外研版六年级上英语 Unit 3 Wonderful nature 写作突破专项训练 | 教材同步版 主题：介绍自然奇观与保护自然 【目标】一、写作目标 能围绕“自然景观或自然奇观”写短文，按照“景观名称—基本信息—特点或数据—个人感受—保护行动”的顺序完成介绍。 【思路】二、课文仿写思路 1. 点明自然景观 英文例句：Mount Qomolangma is the world’s highest mountain. 写法提示：开头直接写景观名称和特点。 2. 补充基本信息 英文例句：The Nile is about 6,671 kilometres long. 写法提示：可以写高度、长度、面积等简单数据。 3. 使用最高级 英文例句：It is the longest river in the world. 写法提示：介绍“最……”时使用最高级。 4. 表达个人感受 英文例句：I think it is wonderful and beautiful. 写法提示：写自己看到或了解后的感受。 5. 发出保护倡议 英文例句：We need to take care of nature. 写法提示：结尾表达保护自然的行动。 【词汇】三、核心词汇 自然地貌：river, lake, forest, beach, mountain, desert, grassland, sea, hill 自然奇观：wonder, nature, earth, Mount Qomolangma, the Nile, the Antarctic Desert 特点与数据：high, long, deep, big, highest, longest, deepest, over, kilometre 旅行与保护：travel, visit, beautiful, wonderful, interested, protect, take care of 【句型】四、参考句型 介绍地点：____ is a beautiful place in nature. / There are many wonders on earth. 介绍特点：It is the highest/longest/deepest ____ in the world. 补充数据：It is about ____ kilometres long. / It is over ____ square kilometres. 表达感受：I think it is wonderful. / I want to visit it one day. 保护自然：We need to take care of nature. / We should protect the beautiful places. 【提醒】五、易错点提示 • 最高级前通常加 the：the highest mountain、the longest river。 • long 的最高级是 longest，high 的最高级是 highest，不能漏掉 -est。 • 数据后面的单位要写完整：6,671 kilometres long。 • 地点名称首字母要大写：Mount Qomolangma、the Nile。 • take care of 后接名词或代词：take care of nature；不要写成 take care nature。 【组句】六、连词成句 1. nature / wonderful / is / . ____________________________________________________________ 2. the world’s / highest / mountain / Mount Qomolangma / is / . ____________________________________________________________ 3. the Nile / how / long / is / ? ____________________________________________________________ 4. river / the / longest / is / the Nile / . ____________________________________________________________ 5. want / I / visit / it / to / one day / . ____________________________________________________________ 6. take care of / we / need to / nature / . ____________________________________________________________ 【仿写】七、写作句型仿写 1. 把 The Nile is the longest river. 中的 The Nile 换成 Mount Qomolangma，并调整名词。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 把 It is about 6,671 kilometres long. 改为“它高8848.86米”。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 根据提示词写句：beautiful / lake / China ____________________________________________________________ 4. 补全：The Changjiang River is the ____ river in Asia.（long） ____________________________________________________________ 5. 用 because 扩写：I like nature. ____________________________________________________________ 6. 主题迁移：写一句“我们应该保护自然”。 ____________________________________________________________ 【写作】八、三层写作练习 写作1｜我喜欢的自然景观（基础） 要求：选择一种自然景观，写出名称、特点和你的感受。不少于40词。 参考词：nature, mountain, lake, beautiful, high, like ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 写作2｜自然奇观介绍（提高） 要求：介绍一个自然奇观，至少写出一项数据，使用最高级和一个连接词。不少于50词。 参考词：world, highest, longest, about, because, wonderful ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 写作3｜保护自然倡议（挑战） 要求：介绍一个自然景观或旅行经历，并写出保护自然的建议。不少于60词。 参考词：visit, travel, beautiful, should, protect, take care of ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 【范文】九、参考范文与讲解 写作1参考范文｜我喜欢的自然景观 My favourite place in nature is a lake. The lake is blue and beautiful. There are green trees around it. I like sitting near the lake and watching the birds. I want to visit a beautiful lake one day. 范文讲解：先点明喜欢的自然景观，再写颜色、周边环境和活动，最后表达愿望。 写作2参考范文｜自然奇观介绍 Mount Qomolangma is the world’s highest mountain. It was 8,848.86 metres high in 2020. It is getting higher every year. I think it is wonderful and amazing because it is so high. I want to learn more about it. 范文讲解：使用 the world’s highest 和具体数据介绍珠峰，并用 because 说明感受。 写作3参考范文｜保护自然倡议 Last summer, I visited a beautiful mountain with my family. The trees were green and the air was fresh. We saw many wonderful views and took some pictures. But I also saw some rubbish on the ground. Nature is our home, so we should protect it. We should not throw rubbish and should take care of the plants and animals. 范文讲解：先写旅行经历，再写看到的问题，最后用 should 提出两条保护自然的建议，内容完整。 【小结】十、写作小结 “自然景观介绍”类作文可以按照“是什么—在哪里或有什么特点—有多高/多长/多大—我有什么感受—如何保护”的顺序来写。介绍“最……”时要使用最高级，写数据时注意数字和单位搭配。 【答案】十一、参考答案 A. 连词成句答案 1. Nature is wonderful. 2. Mount Qomolangma is the world’s highest mountain. 3. How long is the Nile? 4. The Nile is the longest river. 5. I want to visit it one day. 6. We need to take care of nature. B. 句型仿写答案 1. Mount Qomolangma is the highest mountain. 2. It is 8,848.86 metres high. 3. There is a beautiful lake in China. 4. longest 5. I like nature because it is beautiful and peaceful. 6. We should protect nature. C. 写作练习参考答案（示例） 写作1：My favourite place in nature is a mountain. It is high and beautiful. There are many trees and flowers. I like walking there. Nature is wonderful. 写作2：The Nile is the longest river in the world. It is about 6,671 kilometres long. It runs across eleven countries. I think it is important because there is little rain in Africa. 写作3：Last summer, I visited a beautiful lake. The water was clear and the trees were green. I took many pictures. We should protect nature. We should not throw rubbish and should take care of plants and animals. 外研版六年级上册 Unit 3 Wonderful nature 写作训练 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $