Unit 3 Wonderful nature 写作（专项训练）-2026-2027学年外研版（三起）英语六年级上册

外研版六年级上英语    Unit 3 Wonderful nature

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主题：介绍自然奇观与保护自然

【目标】一、写作目标

能围绕“自然景观或自然奇观”写短文，按照“景观名称—基本信息—特点或数据—个人感受—保护行动”的顺序完成介绍。

【思路】二、课文仿写思路

1. 点明自然景观

英文例句：Mount Qomolangma is the world’s highest mountain.

写法提示：开头直接写景观名称和特点。

2. 补充基本信息

英文例句：The Nile is about 6,671 kilometres long.

写法提示：可以写高度、长度、面积等简单数据。

3. 使用最高级

英文例句：It is the longest river in the world.

写法提示：介绍“最……”时使用最高级。

4. 表达个人感受

英文例句：I think it is wonderful and beautiful.

写法提示：写自己看到或了解后的感受。

5. 发出保护倡议

英文例句：We need to take care of nature.

写法提示：结尾表达保护自然的行动。

【词汇】三、核心词汇

自然地貌：river, lake, forest, beach, mountain, desert, grassland, sea, hill

自然奇观：wonder, nature, earth, Mount Qomolangma, the Nile, the Antarctic Desert

特点与数据：high, long, deep, big, highest, longest, deepest, over, kilometre

旅行与保护：travel, visit, beautiful, wonderful, interested, protect, take care of

【句型】四、参考句型

介绍地点：____ is a beautiful place in nature. / There are many wonders on earth.

介绍特点：It is the highest/longest/deepest ____ in the world.

补充数据：It is about ____ kilometres long. / It is over ____ square kilometres.

表达感受：I think it is wonderful. / I want to visit it one day.

保护自然：We need to take care of nature. / We should protect the beautiful places.

【提醒】五、易错点提示

• 最高级前通常加 the：the highest mountain、the longest river。

• long 的最高级是 longest，high 的最高级是 highest，不能漏掉 -est。

• 数据后面的单位要写完整：6,671 kilometres long。

• 地点名称首字母要大写：Mount Qomolangma、the Nile。

• take care of 后接名词或代词：take care of nature；不要写成 take care nature。

【组句】六、连词成句

1. nature / wonderful / is / .

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2. the world’s / highest / mountain / Mount Qomolangma / is / .

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3. the Nile / how / long / is / ?

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4. river / the / longest / is / the Nile / .

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5. want / I / visit / it / to / one day / .

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6. take care of / we / need to / nature / .

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【仿写】七、写作句型仿写

1. 把 The Nile is the longest river. 中的 The Nile 换成 Mount Qomolangma，并调整名词。

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2. 把 It is about 6,671 kilometres long. 改为“它高8848.86米”。