Unit 1 What do you do with money 写作（专项训练）-2026-2027学年外研版（三起）英语六年级上册

**基本信息** 围绕“合理支配零花钱”写作，构建“来源-购买-储蓄-分享-观点”五步仿写体系，分层训练提升语言表达与逻辑思维。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |课文仿写思路|5步示例|按“来源-使用-观点”顺序写作，用sometimes等连接词|从基础信息到价值判断，形成完整表达链| |核心词汇句型|4类词汇+5类句型|区分How much单复数，掌握buy/save/share用法|词汇-句型-篇章，由词到句递进| |三层写作练习|3个梯度|基础（4-5句）→提高（连接词）→挑战（完整短文）|难度递增，培养语言能力与思维品质|

外研版六年级上英语 Unit 1 What do you do with money? 写作突破专项训练 | 教材同步版 主题：合理支配零花钱 【目标】一、写作目标 能围绕“我如何使用零花钱”写短文，按照“零花钱来源或金额—购买什么—储蓄多少—如何分享—我的看法”的顺序完成表达。 【思路】二、课文仿写思路 1. 说明零花钱 英文例句：I get pocket money every week. 写法提示：先交代零花钱的来源或获得时间。 2. 介绍购买 英文例句：Sometimes I buy ice creams or crayons. 写法提示：用 sometimes 介绍偶尔购买的物品。 3. 说明储蓄 英文例句：Sometimes I save for a special day. 写法提示：用 save for 表示“为特别的日子存钱”。 4. 表达分享 英文例句：I share some money with people in need. 写法提示：说明愿意帮助他人，体现正确的金钱观。 5. 总结观点 英文例句：I make clever choices with money. 写法提示：结尾表达合理用钱的看法。 【词汇】三、核心词汇 金钱与价格：money, pocket money, coin, yuan, price 用钱方式：buy, sell, save, spend, share, give 购买物品：robot, ice cream, crayons, books, gifts 金钱观与感受：clever choice, right things, people in need, happy, useful 【句型】四、参考句型 获得零花钱：I get pocket money every week. 询问价格：How much is the robot? It’s 35 yuan. / How much are they? They’re eight yuan. 表达用途：I use my money to buy books. / I save some money for a special day. 表达习惯：Sometimes I buy ____. Sometimes I save ____. 表达观点：I think we should spend money on the right things. 【提醒】五、易错点提示 • How much is 后接单数物品，How much are 后接复数物品：How much are the books? • buy / save / share 前面有 can 或 to 时用动词原形：I can save money. / I use money to buy books。 • 表示“花钱做某事”可用 spend money on sth.，小学生写作也可用 use money to buy sth.。 • money 通常不可数，不能写成 many moneys；可说 some money 或 much money。 • Sometimes 放在句首时，后面用逗号：Sometimes, I save my money。 【组句】六、连词成句 1. do / you / what / with / money / do / ? ____________________________________________________________ 2. much / is / how / the robot / ? ____________________________________________________________ 3. save / I / some / money / . ____________________________________________________________ 4. books / use / to / I / money / buy / . ____________________________________________________________ 5. share / people in need / I / with / some money / . ____________________________________________________________ 6. clever choices / with money / make / I / . ____________________________________________________________ 【仿写】七、写作句型仿写 1. 把 I buy ice creams. 中的 ice creams 换成 books。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 把 Sometimes I save my money. 改为“有时我分享我的钱”。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 根据提示词写句：use / money / buy / a gift ____________________________________________________________ 4. 补全：How much ____ the robot? It’s 35 yuan. ____________________________________________________________ 5. 用 because 扩写：I like saving money. ____________________________________________________________ 6. 主题迁移：写一句“我会怎样帮助有需要的人”。 ____________________________________________________________ 【写作】八、三层写作练习 写作1｜我的零花钱（基础） 要求：写4—5句话，介绍你如何使用零花钱，至少写出两种用钱方式。不少于40词。 参考词：pocket money, buy, save, books, happy ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 写作2｜我的用钱计划（提高） 要求：写5—6句话，说明你打算购买、储蓄和分享什么，至少使用2个连接词。不少于50词。 参考词：first, then, sometimes, save, share, useful ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 写作3｜合理使用零花钱（挑战） 要求：写一段完整短文，说明怎样合理支配零花钱，并表达自己的金钱观。不少于60词。 参考词：get, spend, save, share, people in need, clever choice ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 【范文】九、参考范文与讲解 写作1参考范文｜我的零花钱 I get pocket money every week. Sometimes I buy books or crayons. I save some money in my saving box. I also share some money with people in need. I think I make clever choices with money. 范文讲解：按照“获得零花钱—购买—储蓄—分享—观点”展开，内容完整，句子简单清楚。 写作2参考范文｜我的用钱计划 I get 20 yuan every week. First, I use some money to buy useful books. Then, I save five yuan for a special day. Sometimes, I buy an ice cream, too. I also want to share some money with people in need. I think this is a good plan. 范文讲解：用 first、then、sometimes 组织计划，既写了购买和储蓄，也写了分享。 写作3参考范文｜合理使用零花钱 I get pocket money from my parents every week. I do not spend all of it on toys or ice creams. First, I buy the things I really need, such as books and school things. Then, I save some money for a special day. I also share some money with people in need. Money is useful, but gold is not everything. We should make clever choices with money. 范文讲解：开头交代零花钱来源，中间写具体做法，结尾结合课文故事表达“金钱不是一切”的观点，主题突出。 【小结】十、写作小结 “零花钱使用”类作文可以按照“我有多少钱—我买什么—我存多少—我是否分享—我的看法”的顺序来写。注意区分单数与复数价格问句，并用 sometimes、first、then、also 等词让文章更连贯。 【答案】十一、参考答案 A. 连词成句答案 1. What do you do with money? 2. How much is the robot? 3. I save some money. 4. I use money to buy books. 5. I share some money with people in need. 6. I make clever choices with money. B. 句型仿写答案 1. I buy books. 2. Sometimes, I share my money. 3. I use money to buy a gift. 4. is 5. I like saving money because I can buy useful things. 6. I can share some money with people in need. C. 写作练习参考答案（示例） 写作1：I get pocket money every week. I buy books and crayons. I save some money, too. I think I use my money well. 写作2：I get 20 yuan every week. First, I buy useful books. Then, I save five yuan. Sometimes, I buy an ice cream. I also share some money with people in need. 写作3：I get pocket money from my parents every week. First, I buy the things I need. Then, I save some money for a special day. I do not spend all my money on toys. I also share some money with people in need. I think we should make clever choices with money. 外研版六年级上册 Unit 1 What do you do with money? 写作训练 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $