Unit 2 Digital life（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材沪教版五四学制八年级上册

本讲义聚焦“数字生活”观点议论文写作核心知识点，构建从词汇积累（数码产品名词、优势/弊端短语、品质行动词汇）、句式积累（开头/中间/结尾句）到佳句仿写、范例赏析，再到多样实战演练（话题作文、演讲稿、调查分析等）的完整学习支架，形成输入到输出的写作训练脉络。 该资料以“人与社会（科技生活）”为主题，通过智能盲杖、消防机器人等鲜活素材和审题、谋篇布局的结构化指导，培养学生语言能力（丰富词汇句式运用）和思维品质（辩证分析利弊）。课中辅助教师高效授课，课后提供多样练习帮助学生自主巩固，提升学习能力。

Unit 2 Digital life单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与社会（科技生活）”范畴，涉及“理性探索数字科技、辩证看待智能生活”。 该单元旨在培养学生懂得认识数字科技是现代生活重要的探索过程，它既能拓宽学习与生活边界，也暗藏各类隐患，需要我们客观分辨利弊。通过了解各类数码产品、前沿数字技术，分析科技带来便利与衍生问题，撰写观点议论文，我们可以清晰梳理科技的优势、现存弊端与合理使用方案，建立理性思辨的数字认知。数字生活观点写作是为了让读者全面了解数字技术的实用价值、潜在风险、科学使用建议与个人思考。这有助于辩证看待智能时代，构建善用科技、警惕网络危害的认知基础，从而培养理性创新、自律自控、守护信息安全的宝贵品质。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.数码 & 前沿数字产品名词 laptop 笔记本；smartphone 智能手机；smart watch 智能手表；bluetooth speaker 蓝牙音箱 3D printer 3D 打印机；self-driving car 自动驾驶汽车；face recognition 人脸识别 robot waiter 服务机器人；tablet 平板；wireless earphones 无线耳机；VR headset VR 眼镜 wearable device 可穿戴设备；AI service 人工智能客服；smart walking stick 智能盲杖 2.数字生活优势短语 share knowledge 共享知识；online lessons 线上课程；save people’s lives 挽救生命 detect danger 探测危险；give directions 指引路线；break learning limits 打破学习地域限制 make daily work easier 简化日常工作；protect disabled people 便利残障人士 3.数字生活弊端短语 run out of storage 内存不足；keep freezing 频繁卡顿；shut down automatically 自动关机 leak personal information 泄露个人隐私；too much screen time 过长屏幕时间 get addicted to online games 沉迷网游；fail to connect Wi-Fi 无法联网；hidden viruses 隐藏病毒 4.品质 & 行动类核心词汇 convenient 便捷；powerful 功能强大；user-friendly 操作简单；dangerous 有风险 unhealthy 不健康；reasonable 理性的；self-controlled 自律的；safe 安全 update software 更新软件；clear useless apps 清理无用软件；protect privacy 保护隐私 句式积累 开头句： 1.Digital technology brings great convenience to us, yet it also creates many problems worth our attention. 数字科技为我们带来巨大便利，同时也产生许多值得重视的问题。 2.There is no doubt that digital life changes our world, but we need to learn to use digital products wisely. 毫无疑问数字生活改变世界，但我们必须学会理性使用数码产品。 中间句： ① 论述优势 1.Smart walking sticks can warn blind people of risks and offer useful travel information at the same time. 智能盲杖能够提醒盲人危险，同时提供出行信息。 2.Online courses let students in remote villages share high-quality teaching resources with city kids. 线上课程让乡村学生和城市孩子共享优质教学资源。 3.Firefighting robots can enter dangerous fire zones and send real-time pictures to control rooms. 消防机器人可进入危险火场，向控制室实时传输画面。 4.Digital tools break the limits of space and make knowledge open to everyone. 数字工具打破空间限制，让知识向所有人开放。 ② 论述弊端 1.Spending all spare time on digital products will take away our time for family and sports. 把所有空余时间耗在数码产品上，会挤占陪伴家人、运动的时间。 2.Some unsafe websites may steal our personal information without our notice. 部分不安全网站会在我们不知情的情况下窃取个人信息。 3.If we do not set safe passwords, our photos and messages will easily leak online. 如果不设置安全密码，我们的照片、聊天记录很容易在网上泄露。 结尾句： 1.We should control our screen time and protect our personal information online. 我们应当控制看电子屏幕时长，同时在线保护个人隐私。 2.Digital tools are just helpers; we ourselves should always be the master of our life. 数码工具只是辅助工具，人类才永远是生活的主人。 3.Only when we stay self-controlled can we fully enjoy the advantages of digital life. 唯有保持自律，我们才能充分享受数字生活带来的便利。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：A new smart stick can detect objects as soon as the blind person gets close. 仿写：智能手表一检测到异常心率，就立刻发出警报。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Digital technology makes it easier to share knowledge. 仿写：人脸识别技术让小区居民进出更安全便捷。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：In conclusion, though digital technology brings many benefits to our lives, it also causes problems, so we must learn to use it wisely. 仿写：总而言之，我们要学会自律，合理利用各类数字工具。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 典例 近年来，智能手机、平板电脑等数字工具已经成为我们日常生活中不可或缺的一部分。有人认为这些工具极大地提高了我们的生活质量，而另一些人则担心它们带来的负面影响。请写一篇不少于 60 词的短文，讨论数字工具在日常生活和学习中的利与弊，并结合个人经历或观察举例说明。 My view on digital tools ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ①题材：话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：讨论数字工具的利与弊，结合个人经历举例，词数不少于60词。 谋篇布局 开头 开门见山，指出数字工具很有用 中间 分别说明优点和缺点，并各举一例 结尾 总结提出应明智使用 佳作展示 Digital tools like smartphones are very useful. They help us study and make life easier. For example, I use apps to learn English words. However, while digital tools help me memorize English words faster, I’ve also seen friends get distracted by short videos during study time. Some students spend too much time playing games. This is bad for their eyes and study. We should use digital tools wisely to get benefits and avoid harm. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ①digital tools 数字工具 ②wisely 明智地 ③benefits 好处 高分句型： ①They help us study and make life easier.（运用了并列动词结构） ②We should use digital tools wisely to get benefits and avoid harm.（运用了不定式作目的状语） （一） 1．以“Digital Life in My Eyes”为题，描述你眼中的数字生活，包括数字生活带来的好处、存在的问题。(80词左右) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） Write at least 60 words according to the situation. 随着科技的飞速发展，数字生活 (digital life) 已成为我们日常生活中不可或缺的一部分。请分享你对数字生活的看法，以下是思维导图提示： 要求： 请根据思维导图提示扩展信息。 作文应连贯，字数不少于60字。作文标题已给出，不计入总字数。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） Write a passage at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下提示写一篇不少于60词的观点类文章) 请围绕“我的数字生活观”(My view on digital life)，写一篇观点类文章(opinion article)表达自己对数字生活的看法。 提示：请清晰地表明你的观点(支持或者反对)，给出2—3个理由支持你的观点，结构清晰，结尾有力。 My view on digital life ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） Write a speech of at least 50 words according to the given situation.（请根据以下情境，写一篇不少于50词的演讲稿，标点符号不计入词数。） 人工智能（AI）面世以来，人们的日常生活、学习、交通出行、健康、养老等方方面面发生了极大的改变。假如你是李华，最近学校英语演讲社团发起了一个以“在人工智能时代成长（Growing in an AI Era）”为题的演讲比赛。请以此为题，围绕以下两个方面写一篇演讲稿。 （1）人工智能会给人们带来哪些变化? （2）作为青少年，你会做些什么来迎接这些变化? 注意： （1）短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 （2）照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） 现在是高科技时代，智能手机的出现让我们的生活发生很大的变化，请根据下面的要点提示，以“Smartphones in My Eyes”为题，写一篇英语文章，谈谈智能手机对我们生活产生的利弊影响，并就如何正确使用手机表达自己的观点。 要点提示： 优点：look for information, watch short videos, order food, find places. . . 缺点：be bad for our eyes, get lost in games, . . . 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 2. 文章内容需包括以上要点，可适当发挥； 3. 90-100词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Smartphones in My Eyes The smartphone is one of the most important inventions in the world. It has changed people’s life greatly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 我们的生活离不开科技，数字技术给我们的生活带来了巨大的影响。 你们班举行了辩论赛“Is digital life good or bad for us?”同学们唇枪舌剑，充分阐述了数字生活的利与弊，并讨论了如何合理使用手机等数字产品，约定了使用手机的规则。请围绕“Digital Technology Around Us”为题目写一篇80左右的短文，内容包含： 要求: (1)要点齐全，注意不用逐句翻译，可适当发挥。 (2)表达清楚，语句通顺，书写规范，不能出现真实的人名和班级信息； (3)不少于80词，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词汇：eyesight  n.视力  focus on集中注意力   limit  n.限制 Digital Technology Around Us We can’t live without technology. Digital technology has a great effect on our daily lives. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） 如今，数字技术无处不在，在我们的生活中发挥着重要的作用。智能手机 (mobile phones)， 互联网 (Internet)，移动支付 (mobile payment)，共享单车 (shared bikes) 等应用带给我们的生活带来了方便快捷，同时也带来了一些问题。 请以“How to live a wise digital life”为题，写一篇英语短文，内容包括： 1. 介绍数字技术给我们的生活带来的便捷与影响； 2. 指出不合理使用带来的问题 (如沉迷电子产品、影响学习或健康等)； 3. 使用时应注意遵守的规则。 要求： 1. 至少描述要点齐全，可适当增加内容； 2. 表达清晰，语句通顺，书写规范，不能出现真实的人名和学校信息。 3.80-100词，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Nowadays, digital life plays an important part in our life. _________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） 你校近期对100名学生开展了关于使用互联网（Using the internet）的调查，结果如图所示。请你根据图表中的信息，结合自己的想法，写一篇英语短文介绍此次调查情况并表达观点。 写作要求： 1. 要点齐全，可适当拓展； 2. 不少于70词，且不出现个人真实信息； 3. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Recently, our school has done a survey about using the internet. Here are the results. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $Unit 2 Digital life单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与社会（科技生活）”范畴，涉及“理性探索数字科技、辩证看待智能生活”。 该单元旨在培养学生懂得认识数字科技是现代生活重要的探索过程，它既能拓宽学习与生活边界，也暗藏各类隐患，需要我们客观分辨利弊。通过了解各类数码产品、前沿数字技术，分析科技带来便利与衍生问题，撰写观点议论文，我们可以清晰梳理科技的优势、现存弊端与合理使用方案，建立理性思辨的数字认知。数字生活观点写作是为了让读者全面了解数字技术的实用价值、潜在风险、科学使用建议与个人思考。这有助于辩证看待智能时代，构建善用科技、警惕网络危害的认知基础，从而培养理性创新、自律自控、守护信息安全的宝贵品质。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.数码 & 前沿数字产品名词 laptop 笔记本；smartphone 智能手机；smart watch 智能手表；bluetooth speaker 蓝牙音箱 3D printer 3D 打印机；self-driving car 自动驾驶汽车；face recognition 人脸识别 robot waiter 服务机器人；tablet 平板；wireless earphones 无线耳机；VR headset VR 眼镜 wearable device 可穿戴设备；AI service 人工智能客服；smart walking stick 智能盲杖 2.数字生活优势短语 share knowledge 共享知识；online lessons 线上课程；save people’s lives 挽救生命 detect danger 探测危险；give directions 指引路线；break learning limits 打破学习地域限制 make daily work easier 简化日常工作；protect disabled people 便利残障人士 3.数字生活弊端短语 run out of storage 内存不足；keep freezing 频繁卡顿；shut down automatically 自动关机 leak personal information 泄露个人隐私；too much screen time 过长屏幕时间 get addicted to online games 沉迷网游；fail to connect Wi-Fi 无法联网；hidden viruses 隐藏病毒 4.品质 & 行动类核心词汇 convenient 便捷；powerful 功能强大；user-friendly 操作简单；dangerous 有风险 unhealthy 不健康；reasonable 理性的；self-controlled 自律的；safe 安全 update software 更新软件；clear useless apps 清理无用软件；protect privacy 保护隐私 句式积累 开头句： 1.Digital technology brings great convenience to us, yet it also creates many problems worth our attention. 数字科技为我们带来巨大便利，同时也产生许多值得重视的问题。 2.There is no doubt that digital life changes our world, but we need to learn to use digital products wisely. 毫无疑问数字生活改变世界，但我们必须学会理性使用数码产品。 中间句： ① 论述优势 1.Smart walking sticks can warn blind people of risks and offer useful travel information at the same time. 智能盲杖能够提醒盲人危险，同时提供出行信息。 2.Online courses let students in remote villages share high-quality teaching resources with city kids. 线上课程让乡村学生和城市孩子共享优质教学资源。 3.Firefighting robots can enter dangerous fire zones and send real-time pictures to control rooms. 消防机器人可进入危险火场，向控制室实时传输画面。 4.Digital tools break the limits of space and make knowledge open to everyone. 数字工具打破空间限制，让知识向所有人开放。 ② 论述弊端 1.Spending all spare time on digital products will take away our time for family and sports. 把所有空余时间耗在数码产品上，会挤占陪伴家人、运动的时间。 2.Some unsafe websites may steal our personal information without our notice. 部分不安全网站会在我们不知情的情况下窃取个人信息。 3.If we do not set safe passwords, our photos and messages will easily leak online. 如果不设置安全密码，我们的照片、聊天记录很容易在网上泄露。 结尾句： 1.We should control our screen time and protect our personal information online. 我们应当控制看电子屏幕时长，同时在线保护个人隐私。 2.Digital tools are just helpers; we ourselves should always be the master of our life. 数码工具只是辅助工具，人类才永远是生活的主人。 3.Only when we stay self-controlled can we fully enjoy the advantages of digital life. 唯有保持自律，我们才能充分享受数字生活带来的便利。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：A new smart stick can detect objects as soon as the blind person gets close. 仿写：智能手表一检测到异常心率，就立刻发出警报。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Digital technology makes it easier to share knowledge. 仿写：人脸识别技术让小区居民进出更安全便捷。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：In conclusion, though digital technology brings many benefits to our lives, it also causes problems, so we must learn to use it wisely. 仿写：总而言之，我们要学会自律，合理利用各类数字工具。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. A smart watch will send an alarm as soon as it finds unusual heart rate. 2. Face recognition makes it safer and easier for people to enter communities. 3. In conclusion, we should stay self-controlled and make good use of all digital tools. 典例 近年来，智能手机、平板电脑等数字工具已经成为我们日常生活中不可或缺的一部分。有人认为这些工具极大地提高了我们的生活质量，而另一些人则担心它们带来的负面影响。请写一篇不少于 60 词的短文，讨论数字工具在日常生活和学习中的利与弊，并结合个人经历或观察举例说明。 My view on digital tools ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ①题材：话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：讨论数字工具的利与弊，结合个人经历举例，词数不少于60词。 谋篇布局 开头 开门见山，指出数字工具很有用 中间 分别说明优点和缺点，并各举一例 结尾 总结提出应明智使用 佳作展示 Digital tools like smartphones are very useful. They help us study and make life easier. For example, I use apps to learn English words. However, while digital tools help me memorize English words faster, I’ve also seen friends get distracted by short videos during study time. Some students spend too much time playing games. This is bad for their eyes and study. We should use digital tools wisely to get benefits and avoid harm. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ①digital tools 数字工具 ②wisely 明智地 ③benefits 好处 高分句型： ①They help us study and make life easier.（运用了并列动词结构） ②We should use digital tools wisely to get benefits and avoid harm.（运用了不定式作目的状语） （一） 1．以“Digital Life in My Eyes”为题，描述你眼中的数字生活，包括数字生活带来的好处、存在的问题。(80词左右) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Digital Life in My Eyes In my eyes, digital life has both advantages and disadvantages. On one hand, it brings us a lot of convenience. We can shop online without going out, study online to learn more knowledge and keep in touch with friends easily through social media. On the other hand, there are some problems. Some people are addicted to digital devices, which affects their study and work. Also, there is a risk of personal information leakage. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：观点类议论文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：数字生活的好处、存在的问题 确定人称：第一人称（I/we） 注意事项：80词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 采用“总—分”结构： 开头段：总起句，点明数字生活兼具优缺点 主体段：分两部分阐述，先写数字生活的便利，再写存在的问题，逻辑清晰，层次分明 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：数字生活的好处 给我们带来很多便利：brings us a lot of convenience /makes our life much easier /brings great convenience to our daily life 足不出户线上购物：shop online without going out /buy things online at home /shop on the Internet without leaving home 在线学习，获取更多知识：study online to learn more knowledge /take online courses to get more information /learn more things through the Internet 通过社交媒体轻松和朋友保持联系：keep in touch with friends easily through social media /communicate with friends conveniently online /stay connected with friends easily via social apps 要点二：数字生活的问题 沉迷数字设备：be addicted to digital devices /spend too much time on electronic products /get hooked on digital tools 影响学习和工作：affects their study and work /has a bad influence on schoolwork and jobs /influences their study and work negatively 存在个人信息泄露的风险：there is a risk of personal information leakage /our private information may be leaked online /our personal data might be given away （二） Write at least 60 words according to the situation. 随着科技的飞速发展，数字生活 (digital life) 已成为我们日常生活中不可或缺的一部分。请分享你对数字生活的看法，以下是思维导图提示： 要求： 请根据思维导图提示扩展信息。 作文应连贯，字数不少于60字。作文标题已给出，不计入总字数。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Digital life has become an essential part of my daily life. I use my phone to learn online and chat with friends every day. It makes life easier. I can get information quickly and stay connected with others far away. However, too much screen time hurts my eyes and distracts me from studying. I think we should limit screen time and do more outdoor activities to keep a healthy balance. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作内容包括“我的数字生活经历”、“数字生活的优点”和“数字生活的缺点以及我的建议”；适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍我的数字生活经历； 第二步，阐述数字生活的优点； 第三步，阐述数字生活的缺点及建议。 [亮点词汇] ①essential必不可少的 ②stay connected with保持联系 ③distracts...from分散……的注意力 [高分句型] I think we should limit screen time and do more outdoor activities to keep a healthy balance. (宾语从句、不定式表目的) （三） Write a passage at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下提示写一篇不少于60词的观点类文章) 请围绕“我的数字生活观”(My view on digital life)，写一篇观点类文章(opinion article)表达自己对数字生活的看法。 提示：请清晰地表明你的观点(支持或者反对)，给出2—3个理由支持你的观点，结构清晰，结尾有力。 My view on digital life ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： My view on digital life My view on digital life is positive. Firstly, it makes our lives more convenient. We can shop, study and communicate online easily. Secondly, it provides us with rich information and fun. For example, we can learn new skills through videos. However, we should use digital tools wisely and not spend too much time on them. In short, digital life is helpful if we use it properly. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：主要运用“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应紧扣主题，包含数字生活的重要性、优势、弊端及结论，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步：引出话题，表明自己对数字生活的态度； 第二步：给出支持自己观点的理由； 第三步：书写结语，强调合理使用数字生活的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①make our lives more convenient使我们的生活更加便利 ②provide sb. with sth.为某人提供某物 ③spend time on sth.在某事上花费时间 [高分句型] In short, digital life is helpful if we use it properly.（if引导的条件状语从句） （四） Write a speech of at least 50 words according to the given situation.（请根据以下情境，写一篇不少于50词的演讲稿，标点符号不计入词数。） 人工智能（AI）面世以来，人们的日常生活、学习、交通出行、健康、养老等方方面面发生了极大的改变。假如你是李华，最近学校英语演讲社团发起了一个以“在人工智能时代成长（Growing in an AI Era）”为题的演讲比赛。请以此为题，围绕以下两个方面写一篇演讲稿。 （1）人工智能会给人们带来哪些变化? （2）作为青少年，你会做些什么来迎接这些变化? 注意： （1）短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 （2）照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Good morning, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today, I’m going to talk about growing up in the era of AI. Since AI entered our lives, there have been many changes. I’ve read many studies describing how AI tools have helped doctors detect health issues in their patients and develop effective treatments more quickly. And in my neighborhood in Jinqiao, Pudong, the government is testing AI-enabled self-driving taxis. Have you ever seen or ridden in one? Some schools are also experimenting with AI assistants. After grading our homework, they can provide very detailed feedback. We can chat with them in English to improve our speaking skills. But it’s undeniable that AI also brings challenges. People can easily become overly dependent on AI. Therefore, as teenagers, we must learn to use AI wisely. For example, we should avoid using AI for everything and not use it to do our homework. We should keep a curious mind and try to learn something new every day. It’s also important to learn to think creatively. Let’s grow together in this exciting era! Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，主题为“在人工智能时代成长”； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点包括人工智能带来的变化以及青少年应如何迎接这些变化，考生需确保涵盖这两个方面，并适当添加细节以突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图和主题。通过问候和自我介绍，引出演讲主题“在人工智能时代成长”； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从医疗、交通、教育等方面详细描述人工智能给人们带来的变化，并指出其带来的挑战；接着，从青少年的角度出发，提出如何智慧地使用人工智能，包括避免过度依赖、保持好奇心、学习新知识和培养创造性思维； 第三步，书写结语。表达对在人工智能时代共同成长的期望，并以感谢结束演讲。 [亮点词汇] ①entered our lives进入我们的生活 ②detect health issues检测健康问题 ③develop effective treatments开发有效的治疗方法 ④AI-enabled self-driving taxis人工智能自动驾驶出租车 ⑤experiment with尝试 ⑥provide very detailed feedback提供非常详细的反馈 [高分句型] ①I’ve read many studies describing how AI tools have helped doctors detect health issues in their patients and develop effective treatments more quickly.（现在分词作后置定语） ②After grading our homework, they can provide very detailed feedback.（时间状语从句） ③For example, we should avoid using AI for everything and not use it to do our homework.（并列句） （五） 现在是高科技时代，智能手机的出现让我们的生活发生很大的变化，请根据下面的要点提示，以“Smartphones in My Eyes”为题，写一篇英语文章，谈谈智能手机对我们生活产生的利弊影响，并就如何正确使用手机表达自己的观点。 要点提示： 优点：look for information, watch short videos, order food, find places. . . 缺点：be bad for our eyes, get lost in games, . . . 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 2. 文章内容需包括以上要点，可适当发挥； 3. 90-100词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Smartphones in My Eyes The smartphone is one of the most important inventions in the world. It has changed people’s life greatly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Smartphones in My Eyes The smartphone is one of the most important inventions in the world. It has changed people’s lives greatly. Smartphones bring many benefits to our daily lives. For instance, we can use them to look for information, watch interesting short videos, order food online, and find places with maps. On the other hand, smartphones have some drawbacks. Using them for a long time is bad for our eyes. Also, some people get lost in games, which may lead to poor grades and health problems. Therefore, I think we should use smartphones properly. We can limit screen time and use them mainly for study. In this way, we can make the most of smartphones without being harmed. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步:审题立意] 确定文体：议论文，主要使用一般现在时 明确要点：谈智能手机的利弊 确定人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主（I/they） 注意事项：90-100词且不能出现真实人名、校名 [第二步：构思布局] 二段式结构: 开头段：点明智能手机是重要发明，改变了人们的生活（已给出） 主体段：谈智能手机的利弊，并给出正确使用手机的观点 [第三步:要点展开] 要点一：手机的利弊 优点：look for information/watch short videos/order food/find places/shopping online/order tickets等 缺点：be bad for our eyes/get lost in games/ leak of personal information‌/poor grades and health problems/causing back pain and poor blood circulation等 要点二：发表观点use smartphones properly/ limit screen time/ use them mainly for study/finish homework first before playing/ stay away from phones when studying等 （六） 我们的生活离不开科技，数字技术给我们的生活带来了巨大的影响。 你们班举行了辩论赛“Is digital life good or bad for us?”同学们唇枪舌剑，充分阐述了数字生活的利与弊，并讨论了如何合理使用手机等数字产品，约定了使用手机的规则。请围绕“Digital Technology Around Us”为题目写一篇80左右的短文，内容包含： 要求: (1)要点齐全，注意不用逐句翻译，可适当发挥。 (2)表达清楚，语句通顺，书写规范，不能出现真实的人名和班级信息； (3)不少于80词，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词汇：eyesight  n.视力  focus on集中注意力   limit  n.限制 Digital Technology Around Us We can’t live without technology. Digital technology has a great effect on our daily lives. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Digital Technology Around Us We can’t live without technology. Digital technology has a great effect on our daily lives. It helps us keep in touch with our family and friends, and we can also make new friends. For study, we can gain rich knowledge and use many useful learning apps. Shopping also becomes easier. However, it hurts our eyesight, and we get less exercise. What’s more, many students can’t focus on studying, and spend too little time with their families. We set a time limit—no mobile phones on weekdays, and less than one hour’s use on weekends. We also need more outdoor sports, read more books and develop hobbies. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：本文是一篇材料作文，一般现在时为主； 明确要点：阐述数字生活的利与弊； 确定人称：第一人称和第三人称为主； 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称。 [第二步：构思布局] 开头段，借用文章已给开头，引出主题； 主体段，根据题干的要点，介绍数字生活的利与弊； 结尾段，分享措施并收尾。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：数字生活的利与弊 利：keep in touch with/make new friends/gain rich knowledge and use many useful learning apps/ 弊：hurts our eyesight/get less exercise/can’t focus on studying/spend too little time with their families 措施：no mobile phones/less than one hour’s use/need more outdoor sports/read more books and develop hobbies （七） 如今，数字技术无处不在，在我们的生活中发挥着重要的作用。智能手机 (mobile phones)， 互联网 (Internet)，移动支付 (mobile payment)，共享单车 (shared bikes) 等应用带给我们的生活带来了方便快捷，同时也带来了一些问题。 请以“How to live a wise digital life”为题，写一篇英语短文，内容包括： 1. 介绍数字技术给我们的生活带来的便捷与影响； 2. 指出不合理使用带来的问题 (如沉迷电子产品、影响学习或健康等)； 3. 使用时应注意遵守的规则。 要求： 1. 至少描述要点齐全，可适当增加内容； 2. 表达清晰，语句通顺，书写规范，不能出现真实的人名和学校信息。 3.80-100词，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Nowadays, digital life plays an important part in our life. _________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to live a wise digital life Nowadays, digital life plays an important part in our life. Mobile phones allow us to chat with friends easily. The Internet offers useful study materials. Mobile payment and shared bikes make our daily life faster and easier. However, overusing them causes problems. Some students spend too much time on phones and waste study time. Too much screen time is bad for the eyes and health. To live a wise digital life, we should follow some rules. Set a 30-minute limit for daily phone use after study, avoid using phones during meals or family talks, and use digital tools mainly for learning instead of playing games. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文，是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要为一般现在时； ③提示：围绕“如何过明智的数字生活”展开，介绍数字生活便利、指出过度使用问题，并提出合理建议，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题。说明数字生活在生活中很重要，列举手机、网络等带来的便利； 第二步，指出问题。说明过度使用电子产品影响学习、伤害健康； 第三步，提出建议。给出控制时长、合理使用、专注学习等具体做法。 [亮点词汇] ①digital life数字生活 ②play an important part起重要作用 ③mobile phone手机 ④chat聊天 ⑤study material学习资料 ⑥mobile payment电子支付 ⑦overuse过度使用 ⑧screen time屏幕时间 ⑨limit限制 [高分句型] Some students spend too much time on phones and waste study time.（并列句） （八） 你校近期对100名学生开展了关于使用互联网（Using the internet）的调查，结果如图所示。请你根据图表中的信息，结合自己的想法，写一篇英语短文介绍此次调查情况并表达观点。 写作要求： 1. 要点齐全，可适当拓展； 2. 不少于70词，且不出现个人真实信息； 3. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Recently, our school has done a survey about using the internet. Here are the results. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Recently, our school has done a survey about using the internet. Here are the results. 55% of the students think the internet is helpful. They often use it to look up information, develop their interests and send messages. However, 45% of them think it is bad for their health and mind. They say spending too much time online can harm their eyes and make them lose thinking skills. In my opinion, we should use the internet properly. If we control our time well, it can help us study and relax. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题； 第二步，根据题干的要点，提出正方观点和反方观点； 第三步，发表个人看法，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①be bad for对……有害 ②in my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] ①55% of the students think the internet is helpful.（省略that的宾语从句） ②If we control our time well, it can help us study and relax.（if引导的条件状语从句） $