Unit 6 Mountains and rivers（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材沪教版五四学制七年级上册

本讲义聚焦“人与自然”主题下的山水写作，构建分类词汇（国内外山川名称、自然风景名词等）、功能句式（开头、中间、结尾句模板）、佳句仿写的学习支架，帮助学生从词汇积累到篇章结构搭建，形成完整写作能力。 该资料以文化意识为核心，融入生态保护理念（如结尾句强调守护责任），通过多样化实战任务（材料作文、故事创作等）提升语言能力，借助谋篇布局指导培养思维品质。课中辅助教师系统教学，课后助力学生巩固练习，有效弥补写作短板。

Unit 6 Mountains and rivers单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与自然”范畴，涉及“探索山河风光、亲近自然、敬畏生态”。 该单元旨在培养学生懂得走近山川河流是认识世界十分重要的体验，它可以帮助我们打破视野局限、感知自然之美与文明根基。通过游览名山大川、观察江河风貌、体验山水户外活动的亲身经历，我们可以更好地理解自然馈赠、直面自然的壮阔与多变，建立尊重山水、守护生态的意识。山水游记、明信片类写作是为了让他人了解所见山河景致、游玩过程、自然带来的感悟与思考等信息。这有助于构建热爱自然、珍惜水土资源的认知基础，从而培养心怀山河、懂得保护生态、传承山水文化的宝贵品质。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.国内外山川 the Yangtze River 长江；the Yellow River 黄河；Huangpu River 黄浦江 Mount Tai 泰山；Mount Lu 庐山；Mount Qomolangma 珠穆朗玛峰；Huashan Mountain 华山 Hukou Waterfall 壶口瀑布；the Bund 外滩；Jin Mao Tower 金茂大厦 the Nile 尼罗河；the Amazon 亚马孙河；the River Thames 泰晤士河 the Rocky Mountains 落基山脉；the Jungfrau 少女峰 2.自然风景名词 & 地貌 waterfall 瀑布；lake 湖泊；stream 小溪；coast 海岸；peak 山峰 valley 山谷；source 河流源头；bank 河岸；forest 山林；mist 云雾 3.山水休闲活动 hiking 徒步登山；mountain biking 山地骑行；ice fishing 冰上垂钓 kayaking 皮划艇；boating 泛舟；climb peaks 登顶；enjoy water views 观赏水景 4.写景形容词 amazing 绝美的；beautiful 秀丽的；long 绵长；high 高耸；deep 幽深 clear 清澈；gentle 平缓；grand 壮阔；peaceful 宁静；colourful 五彩的 wide 宽阔；steep 陡峭；fresh（air）清新；endless 一望无际 5.核心动词 & 主题短语 flow into 流入；shape people’s life 塑造人们的生活；nurture cities 滋养城市 improve environment 改善环境；a mix of old and new 古今交融 lifeblood of cities 城市的生命之脉；tourist attractions 风景名胜 6.修辞 & 写作专用词组 like a silver belt 像一条银带；as clear as a mirror 像镜子一样清澈 as high as the clouds 高耸入云；purple smoke rises 紫烟升腾 flow down to the sea 奔流入海 句式积累 开头句： 1.How excited I am to stand beside the Yellow River right now! 此刻站在黄河边，我无比激动！ 2.I’m writing this card from the foot of Mount Lu to share fantastic views with you. 我在庐山脚下写下这张明信片，和你分享绝美风光。 3.Everywhere around me are rolling mountains and clear running streams. 目之所及尽是连绵青山与清澈溪流。 4.The mountain air is so fresh that I never want to leave this lovely place. 山间空气格外清新，我舍不得离开这片美景。 中间句： ① 景色描写 1.The quiet lake under the mountain is as smooth as a big round mirror. 山脚下静谧的湖面平整如大圆镜。 2.Waterfalls drop straight down, just like white silk hanging on the green peaks. 瀑布飞流直下，如同白绸悬挂青山之间。 3.The Yangtze River is not as short as the Huangpu River, it runs for thousands of miles. 长江不像黄浦江那样短小，它绵延数千里。 4.The peaks of Huashan are as steep as sharp swords. 华山山峰陡峭如利剑。 ② 感受描写 1.When I see the Lu Mountain Waterfall, Li Bai’s poem immediately comes to my mind. 看见庐山瀑布，李白的诗句瞬间浮现在脑海。 2.Standing by the great river, I truly feel how amazing our mother rivers are. 站在母亲河畔，我真切感受到江河的壮阔。 3.Walking along the river brings me peace and happiness every minute. 沿河漫步，每时每刻都感到安宁愉悦。 4.I have never seen such grand natural views before in my life. 我这辈子从未见过如此壮阔的自然风光。 结尾句： 1.I really wish you could come with me and enjoy the mountain views together. 真希望你能和我一同前来共赏山色。 2.We should protect beautiful mountains and rivers for future children. 我们应当守护大好河山，留给后代。 3.All rivers nurture cities and bring people clean water and beautiful scenery. 江河滋养城市，为人们带来净水与美景。 4.It’s our duty to keep our mother rivers clean and protect green mountains. 守护清水青山是我们每个人的责任。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：The two rivers have a lot in common. 仿写：长江与黄河都是我们的母亲河，拥有许多共同点。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Rivers flow as quietly as they come, nurturing cities along the way. 仿写：青山静静矗立，守护这片富饶的土地。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：The river turns left and right, reaching the Bohai Gulf like a silver belt. 仿写：湖面平静宽阔，像一块透亮的蓝色宝石（gem）。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 典例 Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 在我们国家众多的河流中，长江具有举足轻重的地位。为了赞美长江，学校举行了“长江”的主题活动，现向全体同学征文。请同学们根据提示写一篇短文来介绍长江。 提示： (1)长江是亚洲最长的河流，也是世界上第三长河，全长约6300千米； (2)长江发源于青海省，最后汇入太平洋； (3)长江里有各种各样的鱼。对中国来说长江非常重要； (4)我们应该保护长江，停止倾倒垃圾和排废水。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 谋篇布局 开头 表明写作意图。直接点明长江在中国以及世界举足轻重的地位 中间 具体阐述写作内容。从“长度、起源地、鱼类生物以及保护长江”等具体介绍长江 结尾 书写书面结语。表达希望长江越来越好的愿望 佳作展示 The Yangtze River The Yangtze River is the longest river in Asia and it’s also the third longest river in the world. It is about 6,300 kilometres long. It starts from Qinghai Province and goes into the Pacific Ocean. There are many kinds of fishes in the river and some of them are endangered species. People love the Yangtze River, but it has been polluted. We should try to protect it as it is very important for China. We should stop putting rubbish and pouring waste water into it. I hope it will become more and more beautiful. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ① starts from起源于 ②endangered species濒危物种 高分句型： ①The Yangtze River is the longest river in Asia and it’s also the third longest river in the world.（形容词最高级的应用） ②We should try to protect it as it is very important for China.（as引导的原因状语从句） （一） Write a story using the given words and phrases. 用所给单词和短语创作一个小故事。 单词和短语： 1. hiking     2. scenic views     3. physical activity 4. natural beauty     5. appreciate the environment    6. cherish and protect nature 要求： 1. 给故事起一个题目（如My first hiking experience）； 2. 必须用到全部所给单词和短语（词汇运用顺序不分先后，且可以重复使用）； 3. 时态以一般过去时为主； 4. 故事不少于50个词。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） Write a passage of at least 60 words about your favourite adventure activity or sport in the mountains or rivers. (围绕你最喜爱的一项冒险活动/运动——与山川或者水流相关，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Use the following points as a reference. （以下内容仅供参考） 1. 你喜欢的活动/运动的名称及原因； 2. 你的经历。 （以下词汇可供参考） ● moment  时刻 ● practice练习 ● balance  平衡 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） Write at least 50 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 在学校英语节的“最美风景”分享会上，你面向全校同学介绍一处你游览过的、令你惊叹的山脉或河流，并分享它带给你的感受。 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） 在我们国家众多的河流中，黄河具有举足轻重的地位。请根据下列提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文来介绍黄河。 About the Yellow River ⭐Basic information                             ⭐Value                             Your feelings/ideas ⭐About 5,500 kilometres                         ⭐fresh water                       ⭐ … ⭐Rise from Qinghai-Xizang Plateau(青藏高原)         ⭐Home to…                       ⭐ … ⭐Run through 9 provinces                         ⭐Beautiful views ⭐End in the Bohai Sea                             ⭐… About the Yellow River The Yellow River is one of the most amazing rivers in China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________      （五） Write a passage of at least 60 words about your favourite mountain or river attraction. (围绕你最喜欢的山川或者河流景点，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考) 1. 最喜欢的山川或者河流的名称； 2. 景色介绍。 (以下词汇可供参考) ● Li River 漓江 ● bamboo 竹子 ● natural 自然的 ● beyond description 超越描述 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 我们的祖国土地广袤，景观奇特，请以My favourite landscape为题描述一处你见过的美丽风景，可以是自然景观，如山川、湖泊；也可以是人文景观，如古镇、花园。 Main points: 1. Where is the landscape? 2. What does the place look like? 3. What activities can you do in the place? 4. What makes the place special to you? 要求：1．词数100左右； 2．语句通顺，意思连贯； 3．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） 在我们的生活中，自然景观总是以其独特的方式吸引着我们。无论是广袤的森林、宁静的湖泊，还是壮丽的山脉，都给人们带来了无尽的惊喜。现在，你校英语报刊正在以My favourite landscape为题开展征文活动、请你根据提示信息写一篇英语短文进行投稿。 提示： 1. What is it like? 2. Why do you like it? 3. What can you do to protect it? 写作要求： 1．包含提示，内容充实，可适当发挥； 2．条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 3．80词左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） 我校地理社团围绕“世界地球日”正在举办一次英语写作竞赛活动，主题是“The Most Beautiful Landscapes in My Heart”，请你以此为题，写一篇介绍中国大好河山的短文参赛，文章需包括以下要点： 1. What is the most beautiful landscape in your heart? 2. What’s special about it? 3. What can people do and see there? 4. Why do you want to recommend it? 要求： 1. 短文包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥； 2. 字数：80词左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 6 Mountains and rivers单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与自然”范畴，涉及“探索山河风光、亲近自然、敬畏生态”。 该单元旨在培养学生懂得走近山川河流是认识世界十分重要的体验，它可以帮助我们打破视野局限、感知自然之美与文明根基。通过游览名山大川、观察江河风貌、体验山水户外活动的亲身经历，我们可以更好地理解自然馈赠、直面自然的壮阔与多变，建立尊重山水、守护生态的意识。山水游记、明信片类写作是为了让他人了解所见山河景致、游玩过程、自然带来的感悟与思考等信息。这有助于构建热爱自然、珍惜水土资源的认知基础，从而培养心怀山河、懂得保护生态、传承山水文化的宝贵品质。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.国内外山川 the Yangtze River 长江；the Yellow River 黄河；Huangpu River 黄浦江 Mount Tai 泰山；Mount Lu 庐山；Mount Qomolangma 珠穆朗玛峰；Huashan Mountain 华山 Hukou Waterfall 壶口瀑布；the Bund 外滩；Jin Mao Tower 金茂大厦 the Nile 尼罗河；the Amazon 亚马孙河；the River Thames 泰晤士河 the Rocky Mountains 落基山脉；the Jungfrau 少女峰 2.自然风景名词 & 地貌 waterfall 瀑布；lake 湖泊；stream 小溪；coast 海岸；peak 山峰 valley 山谷；source 河流源头；bank 河岸；forest 山林；mist 云雾 3.山水休闲活动 hiking 徒步登山；mountain biking 山地骑行；ice fishing 冰上垂钓 kayaking 皮划艇；boating 泛舟；climb peaks 登顶；enjoy water views 观赏水景 4.写景形容词 amazing 绝美的；beautiful 秀丽的；long 绵长；high 高耸；deep 幽深 clear 清澈；gentle 平缓；grand 壮阔；peaceful 宁静；colourful 五彩的 wide 宽阔；steep 陡峭；fresh（air）清新；endless 一望无际 5.核心动词 & 主题短语 flow into 流入；shape people’s life 塑造人们的生活；nurture cities 滋养城市 improve environment 改善环境；a mix of old and new 古今交融 lifeblood of cities 城市的生命之脉；tourist attractions 风景名胜 6.修辞 & 写作专用词组 like a silver belt 像一条银带；as clear as a mirror 像镜子一样清澈 as high as the clouds 高耸入云；purple smoke rises 紫烟升腾 flow down to the sea 奔流入海 句式积累 开头句： 1.How excited I am to stand beside the Yellow River right now! 此刻站在黄河边，我无比激动！ 2.I’m writing this card from the foot of Mount Lu to share fantastic views with you. 我在庐山脚下写下这张明信片，和你分享绝美风光。 3.Everywhere around me are rolling mountains and clear running streams. 目之所及尽是连绵青山与清澈溪流。 4.The mountain air is so fresh that I never want to leave this lovely place. 山间空气格外清新，我舍不得离开这片美景。 中间句： ① 景色描写 1.The quiet lake under the mountain is as smooth as a big round mirror. 山脚下静谧的湖面平整如大圆镜。 2.Waterfalls drop straight down, just like white silk hanging on the green peaks. 瀑布飞流直下，如同白绸悬挂青山之间。 3.The Yangtze River is not as short as the Huangpu River, it runs for thousands of miles. 长江不像黄浦江那样短小，它绵延数千里。 4.The peaks of Huashan are as steep as sharp swords. 华山山峰陡峭如利剑。 ② 感受描写 1.When I see the Lu Mountain Waterfall, Li Bai’s poem immediately comes to my mind. 看见庐山瀑布，李白的诗句瞬间浮现在脑海。 2.Standing by the great river, I truly feel how amazing our mother rivers are. 站在母亲河畔，我真切感受到江河的壮阔。 3.Walking along the river brings me peace and happiness every minute. 沿河漫步，每时每刻都感到安宁愉悦。 4.I have never seen such grand natural views before in my life. 我这辈子从未见过如此壮阔的自然风光。 结尾句： 1.I really wish you could come with me and enjoy the mountain views together. 真希望你能和我一同前来共赏山色。 2.We should protect beautiful mountains and rivers for future children. 我们应当守护大好河山，留给后代。 3.All rivers nurture cities and bring people clean water and beautiful scenery. 江河滋养城市，为人们带来净水与美景。 4.It’s our duty to keep our mother rivers clean and protect green mountains. 守护清水青山是我们每个人的责任。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：The two rivers have a lot in common. 仿写：长江与黄河都是我们的母亲河，拥有许多共同点。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Rivers flow as quietly as they come, nurturing cities along the way. 仿写：青山静静矗立，守护这片富饶的土地。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：The river turns left and right, reaching the Bohai Gulf like a silver belt. 仿写：湖面平静宽阔，像一块透亮的蓝色宝石（gem）。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. The Yangtze River and the Yellow River are our mother rivers and have a lot in common. 2. Mountains stand as quietly as they appear, protecting this rich land. 3. The lake is wide and calm, like a clear blue gem. 典例 Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 在我们国家众多的河流中，长江具有举足轻重的地位。为了赞美长江，学校举行了“长江”的主题活动，现向全体同学征文。请同学们根据提示写一篇短文来介绍长江。 提示： (1)长江是亚洲最长的河流，也是世界上第三长河，全长约6300千米； (2)长江发源于青海省，最后汇入太平洋； (3)长江里有各种各样的鱼。对中国来说长江非常重要； (4)我们应该保护长江，停止倾倒垃圾和排废水。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 谋篇布局 开头 表明写作意图。直接点明长江在中国以及世界举足轻重的地位 中间 具体阐述写作内容。从“长度、起源地、鱼类生物以及保护长江”等具体介绍长江 结尾 书写书面结语。表达希望长江越来越好的愿望 佳作展示 The Yangtze River The Yangtze River is the longest river in Asia and it’s also the third longest river in the world. It is about 6,300 kilometres long. It starts from Qinghai Province and goes into the Pacific Ocean. There are many kinds of fishes in the river and some of them are endangered species. People love the Yangtze River, but it has been polluted. We should try to protect it as it is very important for China. We should stop putting rubbish and pouring waste water into it. I hope it will become more and more beautiful. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ① starts from起源于 ②endangered species濒危物种 高分句型： ①The Yangtze River is the longest river in Asia and it’s also the third longest river in the world.（形容词最高级的应用） ②We should try to protect it as it is very important for China.（as引导的原因状语从句） （一） Write a story using the given words and phrases. 用所给单词和短语创作一个小故事。 单词和短语： 1. hiking     2. scenic views     3. physical activity 4. natural beauty     5. appreciate the environment    6. cherish and protect nature 要求： 1. 给故事起一个题目（如My first hiking experience）； 2. 必须用到全部所给单词和短语（词汇运用顺序不分先后，且可以重复使用）； 3. 时态以一般过去时为主； 4. 故事不少于50个词。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】For reference: My first hiking experience Last week, my family and I went hiking for the first time. We enjoyed the scenic views of tall trees, colourful flowers and a clear stream. During our exploration, we found interesting rocks and an ancient stone bridge. Our hiking involved a lot of physical activity, which made us stronger. We were amazed by the natural beauty of mountains, waterfalls and lakes, which led us to appreciate the environment even more. It was a great adventure that taught us to cherish and protect nature. 【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇小作文； ②时态：一般过去时； ③提示：围绕“第一次徒步经历”展开，描述过程、所见及感悟。 【写作步骤】第一步：开篇点明“上周第一次和家人去徒步”这一核心事件； 第二步：详细描述徒步过程中的所见所闻，如风景、发现的事物等； 第三步：阐述徒步带来的影响与感悟，如身体更健壮、更欣赏自然等。 【亮点词汇】①scenic views 优美的景色 ②physical activity 体力活动 【高分句型】①We were amazed by the natural beauty of mountains, waterfalls and lakes, which led us to appreciate the environment even more. （which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②It was a great adventure that taught us to cherish and protect nature. （that引导的定语从句） （二） Write a passage of at least 60 words about your favourite adventure activity or sport in the mountains or rivers. (围绕你最喜爱的一项冒险活动/运动——与山川或者水流相关，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Use the following points as a reference. （以下内容仅供参考） 1. 你喜欢的活动/运动的名称及原因； 2. 你的经历。 （以下词汇可供参考） ● moment  时刻 ● practice练习 ● balance  平衡 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 范文： My favourite adventure sport is rock climbing in the mountains. I love it because it challenges both my body and mind, requiring strength, balance, and determination. One memorable experience was when I successfully climbed a steep cliff after months of practice. Standing at the top, I felt an amazing sense of achievement and freedom. The wonderful view made everything worthwhile, and it encouraged me to continue improving my skills. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：注意介绍对象为山川或河流。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题说明需要介绍的景点名称； 第二步，详细介绍原因及游览经历等。 [亮点词汇] ①challenge挑战 ②memorable experience难忘的经历 ③sense of achievement and freedom成就和自由感 [高分句型] ① I love it because it challenges both my body and mind, requiring strength, balance, and determination.（because引导原因状语从句） ②Standing at the top, I felt an amazing sense of achievement and freedom.（动词ing形式作状语） （三） Write at least 50 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 在学校英语节的“最美风景”分享会上，你面向全校同学介绍一处你游览过的、令你惊叹的山脉或河流，并分享它带给你的感受。 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello everyone. I’m very happy to share my experience with you. The Yellow River is the most amazing river I have ever visited. It is known as the Mother River of China. When I stood beside it, I saw the powerful yellow water running fast. The sound was like a great song. I felt very proud of our long history and culture. The river taught me to be strong and never give up. I will always remember this wonderful trip. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：介绍游览过的黄河，描述其景象并分享个人感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步：点明介绍对象及其地位； 第二步：描述所见所闻的具体景象； 第三步：抒发内心的感受和收获。 [亮点词汇] ①amazing令人惊叹的 ②powerful强大的 ③give up放弃 [高分句型] ①The Yellow River is the most amazing river I have ever visited. (形容词最高级和省略that的定语从句) ②The river taught me to be strong and never give up. (动词不定式作宾语补足语) （四） 在我们国家众多的河流中，黄河具有举足轻重的地位。请根据下列提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文来介绍黄河。 About the Yellow River ⭐Basic information                             ⭐Value                             Your feelings/ideas ⭐About 5,500 kilometres                         ⭐fresh water                       ⭐ … ⭐Rise from Qinghai-Xizang Plateau(青藏高原)         ⭐Home to…                       ⭐ … ⭐Run through 9 provinces                         ⭐Beautiful views ⭐End in the Bohai Sea                             ⭐… About the Yellow River The Yellow River is one of the most amazing rivers in China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： About the Yellow River The Yellow River is one of the most amazing rivers in China. It is about 5,500 kilometres long. It rises from the Qinghai-Xizang Plateau, runs through 9 provinces, and ends in the Bohai Sea. The river is very valuable. It provides fresh water for people. It is also home to Chinese civilization and has beautiful views along it. It feeds plenty of plants and animals nearby. It plays an important role in our daily life. I feel proud of this great river. We must protect it for our future. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：以“About the Yellow River”为题，介绍黄河的基本信息、价值，以及个人感受，词数80词左右 确定人称：第三人称客观叙述+第一人称表达感受 注意事项：要点齐全，语句通顺，结构清晰   [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：点明黄河是中国最壮观的河流之一 主体段：依次介绍黄河的基本信息、重要价值 结尾段：表达个人感受与保护黄河的想法   [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：基本信息 简介：about 5,500 kilometres long/rise from the Qinghai-Xizang Plateau/run through 9 provinces/end in the Bohai Sea等 要点二：重要价值 介绍价值：provide fresh water for daily use/be home to ancient Chinese civilization/have amazing beautiful views along the river等 要点三：个人感受 总结：feel deeply proud of this great river/realize we should take action to protect it well等 （五） Write a passage of at least 60 words about your favourite mountain or river attraction. (围绕你最喜欢的山川或者河流景点，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考) 1. 最喜欢的山川或者河流的名称； 2. 景色介绍。 (以下词汇可供参考) ● Li River 漓江 ● bamboo 竹子 ● natural 自然的 ● beyond description 超越描述 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: The Li River The Li River, or Li Jiang, is one of the most famous tourist attractions in Guilin. Along the riverside, you can see green hills and green bamboos. The ducks swim in the clear water and the fisherman fishes with his water bird. The most interesting way to tour the Li River is to take a boat cruise. The natural beauty of the Li River is beyond description, so you should be there to see with your own eyes and to feel with your own heart. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：注意介绍对象为山川或河流，自拟题目完成文章。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题说明需要介绍的景点名称； 第二步，详细介绍漓江的自然风光、游览方式等。 [亮点词汇] ①take a boat cruise乘船游览 ②natural beauty天然美；自然美 ③beyond description难以描述；无法形容 [高分句型] ①The ducks swim in the clear water and the fisherman fishes with his water bird. （并列复合句） ②The most interesting way to tour the Li River is to take a boat cruise.（不定式作定语、作表语） （六） 我们的祖国土地广袤，景观奇特，请以My favourite landscape为题描述一处你见过的美丽风景，可以是自然景观，如山川、湖泊；也可以是人文景观，如古镇、花园。 Main points: 1. Where is the landscape? 2. What does the place look like? 3. What activities can you do in the place? 4. What makes the place special to you? 要求：1．词数100左右； 2．语句通顺，意思连贯； 3．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My favourite landscape My favourite landscape is Huangshan Mountain in Anhui Province. When you climb the mountain, you can see breathtaking views everywhere. The clouds look like a soft blanket covering the peaks. There are many activities to do there. You can hike on the stone steps, watch the sunrise at the summit, and take photos of the beautiful scenery. The fresh air and peaceful environment make you feel relaxed. What makes Huangshan special to me is that it gives me a sense of peace and inspiration. Whenever I visit, I forget all my worries and enjoy the beauty of nature. It is truly a wonderful place. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性说明文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：自然景观（位置、景色特点、游玩活动），喜爱该景观的原因与个人感受 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：客观介绍景观，语言简洁流畅，紧扣“最喜爱的风景”主题，不偏离核心 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起点题，点明自己最喜爱的风景是安徽黄山，简单概括黄山的整体美景 主体段：介绍黄山可开展的游玩活动，描写黄山的环境优势，凸显景观的独特魅力 结尾段：阐述黄山对自己的特殊意义、游览感受，总结升华对黄山及自然之美的喜爱 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：自然景观基本信息 景色特点：breathtaking views/soft clouds covering the peaks/beautiful scenery/amazing sights/unique natural views/sea of clouds等 要点二：景观游玩活动 活动内容：hike on the stone steps/watch the sunrise at the summit/take photos of the scenery/enjoy the fresh air/sightsee/climb mountains等 要点三：喜爱景观的原因与个人感受 环境优势：fresh air/peaceful environment等 个人感受：feel relaxed/a sense of peace and inspiration/forget all worries/enjoy the beauty of nature/comfortable/ healing/refreshing等 （七） 在我们的生活中，自然景观总是以其独特的方式吸引着我们。无论是广袤的森林、宁静的湖泊，还是壮丽的山脉，都给人们带来了无尽的惊喜。现在，你校英语报刊正在以My favourite landscape为题开展征文活动、请你根据提示信息写一篇英语短文进行投稿。 提示： 1. What is it like? 2. Why do you like it? 3. What can you do to protect it? 写作要求： 1．包含提示，内容充实，可适当发挥； 2．条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 3．80词左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My favourite landscape Among all the beautiful landscapes, the forest is my favourite. It is full of tall trees and colourful flowers, and the air there is always fresh and clean. It is also home to many living things. I love the forest because it’s a fantastic place to relax and have fun. I can walk among the trees, listen to the birds sing, and enjoy the beauty of nature. Every corner in the forest has a surprise! The forest is very important. To protect it, we should keep it clean. We can also plant more trees to make it even more beautiful. By caring for the forest, we help ourselves and the animals. 【详解】写作步骤   【第一步：审题立意】 确定文体：景物描写类记叙文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：描绘景观特征、阐述喜爱理由、说明保护举措 确定人称：第一人称（I/We） 注意事项：词数80词左右，紧扣标题，行文逻辑清晰，语法表达规范   【第二步：构思布局】 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明自己最喜爱的自然景观 主体段：细致描绘景观样貌，介绍喜爱它的原因 结尾段：提出保护景观的具体做法，升华爱护自然的主题    【第三步：要点展开】 要点一：描述景观样貌 景物选择：the forest/tall trees/colourful flowers/fresh and clean air/landscape/scenery/lush/stream/peaceful 要点二：说明喜爱原因 原因概括：a fantastic place to relax and have fun/relaxation/relieve stress 具体活动：walk among the trees/listen to the birds sing/enjoy the beauty of nature/breathe/attractive/get close to nature 要点三：阐述保护措施 重要性：The forest is very important. 具体做法：keep it clean/plant more trees/care for the forest/protect/preserve/eco‑friendly/take action/resource/help ourselves and the animals （八） 我校地理社团围绕“世界地球日”正在举办一次英语写作竞赛活动，主题是“The Most Beautiful Landscapes in My Heart”，请你以此为题，写一篇介绍中国大好河山的短文参赛，文章需包括以下要点： 1. What is the most beautiful landscape in your heart? 2. What’s special about it? 3. What can people do and see there? 4. Why do you want to recommend it? 要求： 1. 短文包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥； 2. 字数：80词左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： The Most Beautiful Landscapes in My Heart In my heart, the most beautiful landscape is Guilin in Guangxi. It is famous for its peaceful Li River and the strange-shaped karst hills that rise like green teeth from the ground. People can take a bamboo raft along the river, enjoying the quiet water and the reflection of the hills. They can also cycle through the countryside to see local villages and rice fields. I recommend Guilin because its beauty is like a traditional Chinese painting. It always makes me feel calm and happy. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 明确文体：说明文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：点明心中最美景致是广西桂林，介绍当地特色山水风光，讲述游玩特色活动，说明推荐桂林的缘由以及游览带来的美好感受 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：要点完整不遗漏；语法拼写正确，语句优美流畅，景物描写生动贴切 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：直抒胸臆，表明自己心中最美的风景是广西桂林，介绍漓江与奇特喀斯特山峰的独特风貌 主体段：介绍桂林特色游玩方式，乘竹筏赏江水山影，骑行乡间观赏村落与田园风光 结尾段：表达推荐桂林的理由，称赞其景致如中式古画一般秀美，诉说此地能让人内心平和愉悦 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：点明心仪美景与特色风光 推荐的景点：the most beautiful landscape is Guilin in Guangxi/the most beautiful landscape in my heart is the West Lake in Hangzhou等 特色风光：famous for its peaceful Li River/the strange-shaped karst hills that rise like green teeth from the ground/special for its calm water, ancient bridges and willow trees that look beautiful in every season等 要点二：介绍当地游玩体验 游玩内容：take a bamboo raft/enjoy water and hill reflections/cycle through countryside/rice fields/ride bamboo boats/appreciate river views/ride bikes in villages/farmland scenery等 要点三：阐述推荐理由 理由：traditional Chinese painting/feel calm and happy/ancient Chinese artwork/bring peace and joy/it combines natural beauty with Chinese culture等 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $