Unit 5 Food we eat 写作（专项训练）-2026-2027学年人教PEP版英语五年级上册

**基本信息** 以“食物”主题为核心，构建“目标-仿写-句型-练习”四层方法体系，通过四步仿写思路与重点句型精讲，系统培养语言表达与逻辑组织能力，提升语言能力和思维品质。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作目标|4项核心目标|明确点餐、喜好、来源等表达要求|从基础功能到综合运用递进| |仿写思路|4步结构法|开头点题-选择食物-补充原因-结尾升华|情境构建到内容拓展的逻辑链| |句型精讲|5个重点句型|分“用法-替换-仿写-易错”四维度解析|从句型结构到灵活应用的迁移| |写作练习|3个梯度练习|从4句简写到8句说明，难度递增|主题聚焦到内容深化的能力提升|

人教PEP版五年级上英语 Unit 5 Food we eat 写作训练 主题：介绍想吃的食物、喜爱的食物和食物来源 一、写作目标 1. 能用 What would you like to eat? / I'd like... 进行点餐或写想吃的食物。 2. 能用 Would you like some...? / Yes, please. 补充食物选择。 3. 能用 My favourite food/fruit is... 和 Because... 说明喜好原因。 4. 能用 ... comes from... / We can cook... with... 介绍食物来源或用途。 二、课文仿写思路 本单元写作可以写“我想吃什么”“我最喜欢的食物/水果”或“一种食物从哪里来”。写食物时不要只列菜单，要补充原因、健康建议或产地。 Step 1 开头点明写作对象。可以写 I am hungry. / My favourite fruit is... / Lotus is a great plant to eat. Step 2 写食物选择。用 I'd like... / I would like... / I want some... 写想吃的主食、汤、蔬菜或甜点。 Step 3 补充原因和细节。用 Because... / It is healthy. / Vegetables are good for you. / It comes from... 写清为什么喜欢或从哪里来。 Step 4 结尾写健康提醒或感受。可以写 I like this meal. / We should eat healthy food. / There is a food for everyone. 课文可仿写内容: Oliver would like beef and rice. Mum asks him to have some salad because vegetables are good for him. Binbin likes coconuts because coconut water is nice and healthy. Lotus plants grow in lakes and many parts can be eaten. 核心词汇 食物饮品: beef, rice, chicken soup, salad, vegetables, ice cream, coconut water, tea 植物食物: coconut, lotus plant, lotus seeds, lotus roots, lotus leaves, tea leaves 描述词: hungry, healthy, delicious, beautiful, small, round, green, brown, yellow, favourite 来源和做法: come from, grow in lakes, cook meals with, cook rice in the leaves, put tea leaves in hot water 重点句型精讲 重点句型 1: What would you like to eat? 原句: What would you like to eat? 怎么用: 询问别人想吃什么时使用，适合写点餐对话。 可替换内容: eat -> drink；you -> your friend / Oliver 仿写例句: What would you like to drink? / What would your friend like to eat? 易错提醒: would like 比 want 更礼貌；句末要用问号。 重点句型 2: I'd like ... 原句: I'd like beef and rice. 怎么用: 写自己想吃或想喝什么时使用，I'd like 是 I would like 的缩写。 可替换内容: beef and rice -> chicken soup / some salad / some tea / an egg 仿写例句: I'd like some fish. / I'd like rice and vegetables. 易错提醒: 不可数名词或复数食物前常用 some；不要写 I'd like eat。 重点句型 3: Would you like some ...? 原句: Would you like some chicken soup too? 怎么用: 礼貌地询问别人还要不要某种食物时使用。 可替换内容: chicken soup -> salad / tea / rice / ice cream 仿写例句: Would you like some salad? / Would you like some tea too? 易错提醒: some 常用于希望得到肯定回答的礼貌询问；回答可写 Yes, please. / No, thanks. 重点句型 4: ... is/are good for ... 原句: Vegetables are good for you. 怎么用: 说明某种食物对身体有好处时使用，能让饮食建议更有理由。 可替换内容: Vegetables -> Fish / Fruit / Enough water；you -> our eyes / our body 仿写例句: Fruit is good for us. / Fish is good for your eyes. 易错提醒: 主语单复数要一致：Vegetables are...，Fruit is...。 重点句型 5: Where does ... come from? / ... comes from ... 原句: Where does your coconut come from? 怎么用: 介绍食物产地或来源时使用，可以写水果、茶、莲藕等。 可替换内容: your coconut -> tea / rice / my favourite fruit；Hainan -> China / lakes / farms 仿写例句: Tea comes from China. / Lotus roots come from lotus plants. 易错提醒: 单数用 comes，复数用 come；问句中 does 后动词用原形 come。 句型仿写 1. What would you like to ______? 提示：eat 或 drink。 ________________________________________________________________________ 2. I'd like ______ and ______. 提示：写两种食物。 ________________________________________________________________________ 3. Would you like some ______? 提示：礼貌询问别人要不要某种食物。 ________________________________________________________________________ 4. ______ is/are good for ______. 提示：写食物的好处。 ________________________________________________________________________ 5. My favourite ______ is ______ because ______. 提示：写喜爱的食物和原因。 ________________________________________________________________________ 6. ______ comes from ______. 提示：写一种食物的来源。 ________________________________________________________________________ 常见问题提醒 1. I'd like 后面直接接食物，不写 I'd like eat beef。 2. some 后面可以接不可数名词或复数名词，如 some rice, some vegetables。 3. favourite 前通常有 my/your/his/her，注意英式拼写 favourite。 4. come from 要注意单复数：Tea comes from China. Coconuts come from Hainan. 三、连词成句 1. would / What / like / you / to eat / ? ________________________________________________________________________ 2. like / I'd / beef / and rice / . ________________________________________________________________________ 3. some / Would / like / chicken soup / you / ? ________________________________________________________________________ 4. good / Vegetables / for / are / you / . ________________________________________________________________________ 5. fruit / your / What's / favourite / ? ________________________________________________________________________ 6. come / Where / your coconut / does / from / ? ________________________________________________________________________ 四、写作练习 练习 1: 我的晚餐 题目：My Dinner。请写 4-5 句话，介绍你想吃什么、喝什么，以及一个健康搭配。 写作提示: I am hungry. / I'd like... / I should have... / ... is good for me. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 练习 2: 我最喜欢的食物或水果 题目：My Favourite Food。请写 6-7 句话，介绍你最喜欢的食物或水果、原因、产地或吃法。 写作提示: My favourite... is... / Because... / It comes from... / We can... ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 练习 3: 介绍一种特别的食物 题目：A Special Food。请写 8 句话左右，介绍一种植物食物，如 coconut, lotus 或 tea，包括外形、来源、吃法和感受。 写作提示: It grows... / We can eat... / We can cook... / It is healthy and delicious. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 五、参考范文 范文 1: My Dinner I am hungry. I'd like beef and rice for dinner. I'd like some chicken soup too. I should also have some salad. Vegetables are good for me. I can have a little ice cream after dinner. 范文讲解 开头 I am hungry. 直接引出点餐情境，简单自然。 中间用了 I'd like... 写主食和汤，又用 should also have... 写健康搭配。 Vegetables are good for me. 说明吃沙拉的原因，不只是列食物。 结尾 a little ice cream 表示“少量”，符合课文中健康饮食的提醒。 范文 2: My Favourite Food My favourite fruit is the coconut. I like coconuts because coconut water is nice and healthy. Coconuts come from Hainan. There are many coconut trees there. We can drink coconut water. We can also cook delicious meals with coconut. I think coconuts are interesting. 范文讲解 第一句 My favourite fruit is... 直接点题，适合写喜欢的水果。 because coconut water is nice and healthy 写出喜欢的原因，比只写 I like it 更具体。 Coconuts come from Hainan. 写产地，呼应课文 Where does your coconut come from? We can drink... / We can also cook... 写两种用途，内容更丰富。 范文 3: A Special Food Lotus is a special plant. Lotus plants grow in lakes around the world. Lotus flowers are beautiful and have many colours. Lotus seeds are small and round. We can cook and eat them in different ways. We eat lotus roots too. The roots are delicious. We can also cook rice in lotus leaves. I think the lotus plant is useful and healthy. 范文讲解 开头 Lotus is a special plant. 先给出总评价，再展开介绍。 文章按 flowers, seeds, roots, leaves 的顺序写，结构清楚。 We can cook and eat them in different ways. 和 We can also cook rice in lotus leaves. 写出了吃法。 delicious, useful and healthy 这些评价词让说明文不枯燥。 这篇范文适合模仿 Read and write，难度比单纯写一顿饭更高。 六、参考答案 句型仿写参考答案 1. What would you like to eat? 2. I'd like beef and rice. 3. Would you like some salad? 4. Vegetables are good for us. 5. My favourite fruit is the coconut because it is healthy. 6. Tea comes from China. 连词成句参考答案 1. What would you like to eat? 2. I'd like beef and rice. 3. Would you like some chicken soup? 4. Vegetables are good for you. 5. What's your favourite fruit? 6. Where does your coconut come from? 写作练习参考要点 练习 1: 能写出想吃的食物、饮品和一个健康搭配。 练习 2: 能写喜爱的食物/水果、原因、产地或用途。 练习 3: 能介绍一种特别食物的外形、来源、吃法和评价。 七、写作小结 1. 我是否写清楚了食物名称？ 2. 我是否用了 I'd like... 或 My favourite... is...? 3. 我是否写出了原因，如 because it is healthy/delicious？ 4. 我是否写了食物来源或吃法？ 5. 我是否检查了 some, is/are, come/comes 的用法？ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $