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人教PEP版五年级上英语 Unit 3 Work and play 写作训练
主题:介绍课程、周末活动和学习娱乐平衡
一、写作目标
1. 能用 What do you have on...? / I have... 介绍某一天的课程。
2. 能用 What do you usually do...? / I often... / Sometimes... 介绍周末或日常活动。
3. 能用 on Mondays / at the weekend / in the evening 写清时间。
4. 能围绕 work and play 写出合理安排,并用 busy, balance, on time 等词表达感受或提醒。
二、课文仿写思路
本单元写作要把“时间 + 做什么 + 感受或原因”写清楚。写课程时注意星期前用 on;写习惯时可以加入 usually, often, sometimes, always,让安排更真实。
Step 1 开头点明主题。可以写 My favourite day is Wednesday. / I have a busy weekend. / I want a good work-play balance.
Step 2 按时间顺序写内容。写课程用 I have Chinese, maths...;写活动用 I often play football.
Step 3 加入频率副词和细节。用 usually, often, sometimes, always,再补充 with my father / for my family / in the park。
Step 4 结尾写感受或建议。可以写 I am busy, but I always do my homework on time. / Balance is important.
课文可仿写内容: John has Chinese, maths, music and PE on Wednesdays. Zhang Peng often plays football and sometimes plays Chinese chess. Sarah often cooks lunch for her family. A good schedule should have both work and play.
核心词汇
课程词: Chinese, maths, music, PE, subject, taijiquan class
时间词: Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Friday, Saturday, Sunday, at the weekend, in the evening
活动词组: play football, play Chinese chess, cook lunch, do homework, have pipa lessons, read books, visit grandparents, go running
频率和评价: usually, often, sometimes, always, busy, easy, important, on time, balance
重点句型精讲
重点句型 1: What do you have on ...?
原句: What do you have on Wednesdays?
怎么用: 询问某一天有什么课或活动时使用,适合写对话或介绍课程。
可替换内容: Wednesdays -> Mondays / Fridays / Saturdays;have -> have Chinese / have PE
仿写例句: What do you have on Mondays? / I have maths and music on Fridays.
易错提醒: 星期几前用 on;Wednesday 后面加 s 表示“每周三”。
重点句型 2: I have ...
原句: I have Chinese, maths, music and PE.
怎么用: 介绍自己某一天的课程或安排时使用,可以列举多个项目。
可替换内容: Chinese, maths, music and PE -> English and art / a pipa lesson / a football class
仿写例句: I have English and PE. / I have a piano lesson on Sundays.
易错提醒: 列举多个项目时,最后两个之间用 and;科目前通常不加 a。
重点句型 3: What do you usually do at the weekend?
原句: What do you usually do at the weekend?
怎么用: 询问周末通常做什么时使用,回答要写经常做的活动。
可替换内容: at the weekend -> on Saturdays / on Sundays / after school
仿写例句: What do you usually do on Sundays? / I usually read books at the weekend.
易错提醒: usually 放在行为动词前,如 I usually read books。
重点句型 4: I often ... Sometimes I ...
原句: I often play football. Sometimes I play Chinese chess with my father.
怎么用: 写日常习惯时使用,often 表示经常,sometimes 表示有时,句子更有变化。
可替换内容: play football -> cook lunch / read books / visit my grandparents / go running
仿写例句: I often do my homework. Sometimes I play basketball. / I often cook lunch for my family.
易错提醒: often 和 sometimes 后面接完整动作,不要只写 I often football。
重点句型 5: I am busy, but I always ...
原句: I am busy, but I always do my homework on time!
怎么用: 写自己很忙但仍能安排学习时使用,适合文章结尾。
可替换内容: do my homework on time -> read every day / take breaks / get enough sleep
仿写例句: I am busy, but I always study hard. / I am busy, but I always get enough sleep.
易错提醒: but 前后意思有转折;always 后面接动词或动词短语。
句型仿写
1. What do you have on ______? 提示:填星期几。
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2. I have ______, ______ and ______. 提示:写三门课程。
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3. I usually ______ at the weekend. 提示:写周末通常做的事。
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4. I often ______. Sometimes I ______. 提示:写两个活动。
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5. On ______, I ______ because ______. 提示:写时间、活动和原因。
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6. I am busy, but I always ______. 提示:写一个好习惯。
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常见问题提醒
1. 星期几前常用 on,如 on Wednesdays, on Saturdays。
2. usually, often, sometimes 常放在动词前:I often play football.
3. 写安排时不要只列词,要写完整句:I have music and PE.
4. work-play balance 不等于只玩或只学习,要写学习和休息都有安排。
三、连词成句
1. have / What / you / do / on Wednesdays / ?
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2. Chinese / I / maths / and / have / PE / .
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3. weekend / do / What / you / usually / at the / do / ?
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4. often / I / play football / .
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5. Sometimes / play Chinese chess / I / with my father / .
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6. busy / am / I / but / always / do my homework / on time / .
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四、写作练习
练习 1: 我最喜欢的一天
题目:My Favourite Day。请写 4-5 句话,介绍你最喜欢星期几、有什么课、为什么喜欢。
写作提示: My favourite day is... / I have... / I really like... / It is fun.
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练习 2: 我的周末活动
题目:My Weekend。请写 6-7 句话,介绍你周六和周日通常做什么,可以使用 often, usually, sometimes。
写作提示: At the weekend... / On Saturdays... / I often... / Sometimes I...
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练习 3: 我的学习与玩乐安排
题目:Work and Play。请写 8 句话左右,介绍一周或周末的学习、运动、休息安排,并说明如何保持平衡。
写作提示: I am busy, but... / I do my homework... / I play... / Balance is important.
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五、参考范文
范文 1: My Favourite Day
My favourite day is Wednesday. I have Chinese, maths, music and PE. Maths is not easy, but I like my maths teacher. Music is my favourite subject. I really like singing. Wednesday is a happy day for me.
范文讲解
开头 My favourite day is Wednesday. 直接点题,读者马上知道写哪一天。
第二句用 I have... 列出课程,紧扣课文句型。
Maths is not easy, but... 用 but 写转折,说明虽然数学不容易,但自己仍然喜欢老师。
结尾 Wednesday is a happy day for me. 写出感受,文章更完整。
范文 2: My Weekend
At the weekend, I am busy but happy. On Saturdays, I often do my homework in the morning. Sometimes I play Chinese chess with my father. On Sundays, I usually have a pipa lesson. In the afternoon, I visit my grandparents. I always read books before dinner. I have a nice weekend.
范文讲解
第一句 At the weekend... 先总写周末状态,busy but happy 有转折感。
范文按 Saturday 到 Sunday 的时间顺序写,学生容易模仿。
often, sometimes, usually, always 四个频率副词让句式有变化。
结尾 I have a nice weekend. 简单收束,适合中等难度写作。
范文 3: Work and Play
I want a good work-play balance. From Monday to Friday, I study at school and do my homework after dinner. On Tuesdays, I cook dinner because my mother works at night. On Wednesdays and Fridays, I usually read books. At the weekend, I often play football or go running with my friends. I also visit my grandparents. I am busy, but I always do my homework on time. I think balance is important.
范文讲解
开头 I want a good work-play balance. 直接点明本单元高阶主题。
文章先写工作日,再写周末,顺序清楚,信息不乱。
On Tuesdays... because... 写出原因,比单纯写 I cook dinner 更完整。
I am busy, but I always... 呼应课文 Read and write,可直接仿写。
结尾 I think balance is important. 点明观点,适合较高难度写作。
六、参考答案
句型仿写参考答案
1. What do you have on Fridays?
2. I have Chinese, music and PE.
3. I usually play football at the weekend.
4. I often read books. Sometimes I cook lunch.
5. On Tuesdays, I cook dinner because my mother works at night.
6. I am busy, but I always do my homework on time.
连词成句参考答案
1. What do you have on Wednesdays?
2. I have Chinese, maths and PE.
3. What do you usually do at the weekend?
4. I often play football.
5. Sometimes I play Chinese chess with my father.
6. I am busy, but I always do my homework on time.
写作练习参考要点
练习 1: 能写出最喜欢的一天、课程和喜欢原因。
练习 2: 能按周六、周日或上午、下午顺序写周末活动,并使用频率副词。
练习 3: 能同时写学习和玩乐安排,并表达 balance 的观点。
七、写作小结
1. 我是否写清楚了时间?
2. 我是否用了 on Mondays / at the weekend 等时间表达?
3. 我是否用了 usually, often, sometimes 或 always?
4. 我是否写出了学习和玩乐两方面安排?
5. 我是否检查了每个句子都有主语和动词?
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