Unit 7 Feel the Rhythm 音乐与人生（单元写作精练）英语新教材人教版九年级上册

Unit 7 Feel the Rhythm.音乐与人生 单元写作精练 【写作主题】 本单元的话题是“音乐”，与此相关的写作任务是介绍一首歌曲或一种乐器，也可以介绍一位著名的音乐家。写作歌曲或乐器时，首先要介绍自己是如何与该歌曲或乐器结缘的，然后介绍该歌曲或乐器是如何对自己产生影响的，最后总结其对自己的积极意义；写作时，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。写著名的音乐家首先对其作出总体评价，然后介绍其生平求学经历及音乐贡献，最后介绍其对当今社会的影响；写作时，时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。 [教材典句] Frederic Chopin (1810-1849)was one of the greatest musicians in history. I spent the next several months learning to play the guitar. Chopin was not only a great pianist,but also a respected piano teacher. ...that's why I liked Butterfly Lovers more. 【词汇积累】 词汇积累 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 ① music n. 音乐 ② musician n. 音乐家 ③ instrument n. 乐器 ④ melody n. 旋律 ⑤ lyric n. 歌词 ⑥ concert n. 音乐会 ⑦ piano n. 钢琴 ⑧ violin n. 小提琴 ⑨ folk adj. 民间的 ⑩ classical adj. 古典的 ⑪ encourage v. 鼓励 ⑫ relax v.（使）放松 ⑬ comfort n. & v. 安慰 ⑭ patience n. 耐心 ⑮ spirit n. 精神 ⑯ emotion n. 情感 ⑰ memorable adj. 难忘的 ⑱ creative adj. 富有创造力的 ⑲ treasure n. 珍宝；宝贵之物 ⑳ inspiration n. 灵感 短语积累 ① fall in love with music 爱上音乐 ② play a musical instrument 演奏乐器 ③ classical music 古典音乐 ④ folk music 民间音乐 ⑤ light music 轻音乐 ⑥ cheer sb. up 使某人振作起来 ⑦ relieve pressure 缓解压力 ⑧ touch one’s heart 触动心灵 ⑨ go through hard times 度过艰难时光 ⑩ learn from the musician 向音乐家学习 ⑪ bring sb. warmth 带给某人温暖 ⑫ express personal feelings 抒发个人情感 ⑬ a source of inspiration 灵感的源泉 ⑭ stick to one’s dream 坚守梦想 ⑮ lift one’s spirits 振奋心情 【句式积累】 开头句 ① Music has always been an important part of my daily life.（音乐一直是我日常生活中重要的一部分。） ② There is one special song that greatly influences my way of life.（有一首特别的歌曲深深影响了我的生活态度。） ③ I first fell in love with the guitar when I watched a live music show years ago.（多年前观看一场现场演出时，我初次爱上吉他。） ④ Andrea Bocelli is one of the musicians that I admire most.（安德烈・波切利是我最敬佩的音乐家之一。） ⑤ Whenever I feel upset, a special piece of music can change my mood quickly.（每当我情绪低落，一首乐曲总能迅速改变我的心情。） 中间句 ① I heard this song for the first time when I failed an important exam.（我第一次听见这首歌，是在一次重要考试失利之后。） ② Learning to play this instrument was difficult, and I once planned to give it up.（学习演奏这件乐器并不轻松，我曾经打算放弃。） ③ Its beautiful melody and warm lyrics comfort me whenever I meet difficulties.（每当我遭遇困境，它优美的旋律和温暖的歌词都会抚慰我。） ④ The musician kept chasing his music dream in spite of huge difficulties.（这位音乐家直面重重磨难，始终追逐音乐梦想。） ⑤ Music helps me forget worries and face everything in a positive way.（音乐帮我忘却烦恼，以积极心态面对一切。） ⑥ It teaches me that I need patience and courage when things go wrong.（它教会我，身处逆境时需要耐心与勇气。） ⑦ This song tells us never to lose hope no matter what trouble we meet.（这首歌告诉我们，无论遭遇什么困境，永远不要失去希望。） ⑧ Different kinds of music carry different feelings and traditional culture.（不同类型的音乐承载着不同的情感与传统文化。） ⑨ Music is a special language, and people can understand it without any words.（音乐是独特的语言，无需言语，人们便能产生共鸣。） ⑩ I often listen to music to relax myself after busy schoolwork.（繁忙的课业结束后，我常常聆听音乐放松自己。） 结尾句 ① This song will stay with me and keep guiding me to move forward.（这首歌会一直陪伴我，不断指引我奋力前行。） ② Music brings joy to my life and gives me courage to face all challenges.（音乐为我的生活增添欢乐，给予我直面挑战的勇气。） ③ I will keep enjoying music and let it light up my whole life.（我会持续热爱音乐，让音乐照亮我的整个人生。） ④ The spirit of the musician encourages me to hold on to my own dream.（这位音乐家身上的精神激励我坚守属于自己的梦想。） ⑤ I believe life would become boring without wonderful music.（我坚信，如果没有美妙的音乐，生活将会枯燥乏味。） 【谚语名句】 ① Where words fail, music speaks. 言语无法诉说之处，音乐娓娓道来。—— 安徒生 ② Life without music is a mistake. 没有音乐的人生，是一种缺憾。—— 尼采 ③ Music is the language of the soul. 音乐是灵魂的语言。—— 古希腊谚语 ④ Music washes away the dust of everyday life. 音乐洗去日常生活蒙上的尘埃。—— 奥尔巴赫 ⑤ He who loves music will never feel lonely. 心怀音乐之人，永远不会孤独。—— 德国古谚语 【原题呈现】 （25-26九年级上·江西九江·期末）音乐将世间万物带进了美好的时空，它在我们的日常生活中扮演着重要的角色，每听到音乐，我们就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。你校英语俱乐部在下周的主题例会上会对喜欢的音乐进行讨论，作为俱乐部成员，请你根据下面的提示写一篇文章和大家分享。 1. 要点提示： (1) What kinds of music do you like? And why? (描述三种不同类型的音乐及原因) (2 )Which do you like best and what have you got from it? (3) As a middle school student, are you supposed to listen to music in your spare time? What are your opinions and the reasons? 2. 写作要求： (1) 短文要包含所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； (2) 文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校； (3) 字数80-120。 My Favourite Music _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意]    确定文体：介绍性记叙文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：描述三种音乐及原因、说明最喜爱的音乐及收获并阐述中学生课余听音乐的观点与理由 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校        [第二步：构思布局]    三段式结构：    开头段：总起句点明音乐在生活中的重要性，引出下文 主体段：依次介绍三种音乐及原因、最喜欢的音乐及收获、对中学生在课余听音乐的看法与理由 结尾段：总结音乐的作用，发出合理享受音乐的倡议，升华主题  【范文欣赏】 My Favourite Music Music plays an important role in my life. I like pop music because it is lively. I also enjoy classical music which makes me calm. Besides, folk music tells beautiful stories. Among them, I like pop music best. It encourages me when I am down. As a middle school student, I think we should listen to music in spare time. It helps us relax after studying hard. However, we shouldn’t listen too loudly or too long. Music makes life colorful. Let’s enjoy music properly. 【亮点解析】 要点一：三种不同类型的音乐及原因 音乐选择：pop music/classical music/folk music/country music等 具体原因：lively/makes me calm/tells beautiful stories/happy等 要点二：最喜欢的音乐及收获 选择：pop music/country music等 收获：encourages me when I am down/makes me confident等 要点三：中学生课余听音乐的观点与理由 观点：listen to music in spare time/listen properly等 理由：helps relax after studying/shouldn’t listen too loudly or too long/balance listening to music and study properly等    【基础必做】 1.教材原句：I prefer musicians who can write their own songs, like ... 仿写：我更喜欢能打动我内心的音乐。 ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I prefer music that touches my heart. 2.教材原句：It really gave me the feeling of a horse race. 仿写：每当我听到那段旋律，它就会唤起我心中的平静。 ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Whenever I hear that melody, it brings back the feeling of peace. 3.教材原句：What kind of music do you like listening to while travelling/exercising/relaxing/...? 仿写：你最喜欢哪种乐器？为什么？ ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】What kind of musical instrument do you like best? Why? 4.教材原句：Music makes me happy when I am feeling sad, and it relaxes me when I am stressed. 仿写：学习弹钢琴让我在面对挑战时更加耐心和专注。 ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Learning to play the piano makes me more patient and focused when I face challenges. 5.I listen to light music while I study. It helps me concentrate better and improve my memory.（使用分词结构合并句子） ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Listening to light music while studying helps me concentrate better and improve my memory. 6.I went on stage. I felt confident and calm.（使用非谓语动词升格） ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I went on stage feeling confident and calm. 【提升必做】 1．（24-25九年级上·山西朔州·期末）音乐不仅能够给人们带来好的享受，还能在一定程度上疏解压力。假如你是Mike，校报正在进行有关音乐方面的征文稿，请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文，向校报投稿。 melody n. 旋律 build up confidence建立自信 purify one’s soul净化心灵 内容包括： ●What kind of music do you like? ●One experience where music helped you. ●Why do you like music? 要求： 1. 词数不少于80词； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 I like light music best because of its beautiful and gentle melody. Last month, I felt extremely nervous before a big exam. When I listened to a piece of soft music, I slowly became relaxed and calm. Finally, I did really well in that exam! I enjoy music for two reasons. Firstly, it helps build up my confidence. Secondly, it can deeply purify my soul. Listening to music not only makes me happy but also teaches me to cherish and love life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：围绕音乐类型（轻音乐）、个人经历（考试前减压）、喜爱原因（建立自信/净化心灵）展开。 [写作步骤] 第一步：说明喜爱的音乐类型及原因； 第二步：描述音乐帮助的经历（考试前听歌放松）； 第三步：总结喜爱音乐的理由。 [亮点词汇] ①because of因为 ②build up建立 ③listen to听 [高分句型] ①When I listened to a piece of soft music, I slowly became relaxed and calm.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②Listening to music not only makes me happy but also teaches me to cherish and love life.（not only...but also...并列结构） 2．（24-25九年级上·安徽六安·期末）众所周知, 音乐是我们生活中不可或缺的一部分。请根据下面提示，结合自己的生活实际，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你眼中的音乐。 1. What kind of music do you like? 2. What does music bring to you in your life? 3. What do you think of music? 要求： 1. 短文必须包括以上提示的所有要点，并适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 100词左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Music is a wonderful part of my life. I love pop music best because it is lively and fun. When I feel tired from studying, music can help me relax and forget stress. It also brings happiness to me. I often share songs with my friends, and we sing together, which makes us closer. I think music is essential for everyone because it can change moods and make life more colorful. Without music, the world will be boring. So, I always enjoy listening to music in my spare time every day. 【总体分析】①题材：材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 【写作步骤】第一步：介绍喜欢的音乐类型。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。用并列结构描述音乐带来的好处，并添加个人经历。 第三步：表达对音乐的看法，强调其重要性，并以总结句结尾。 【亮点词汇】①wonderful 精彩的 ②happiness 快乐 ③essential 不可或缺的 【高分句型】①When I feel tired from studying, music can help me relax and forget stress. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句) ②I often share songs with my friends, and we sing together, which makes us closer. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 3．（24-25九年级上·重庆永川·期末）音乐让人轻松，让人愉悦，它给你带来什么样的影响和感受呢？请以“Music in My Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容提示： 1.对音乐的认识和感受； (many kinds of music: country music, electronic music...; I think...like a magical language/my best friend...; make me feel happy/relaxed...) 2.音乐的作用和影响； (be down, cheer me up; be happy, dance to; be working hard, give me the energy to keep going; also a great way for me to learn about different cultures and make new friends...) 3. 喜欢的歌手或音乐家（国籍、音乐风格，喜欢的原因）； (One of my favorite musicians...; be from; be good at; his/her music is...) 4.其它补充。 要求：1. 80—120词； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Music in My Life Music is a magical part of my life. I think it’s like a best friend that makes me feel happy and relaxed. There are many kinds of music, such as pop music and electronic music. When I am down, it cheers me up. When I study hard, it gives me energy to keep going. One of my favorite musicians is Taylor Swift. She is from the US and good at pop songs. Her music is meaningful and inspires me. Also, music helps me learn about different cultures and make new friends. Life without music would be boring. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍对音乐的认识和感受。 第二步，介绍音乐的作用和影响。 第三步，介绍喜欢的歌手或音乐家。 [亮点词汇] ①magical神奇的 ②cheer sb. up让某人振作 ③meaningful有意义的 [高分句型] ①I think it’s like a best friend that makes me feel happy and relaxed.（省略that的定语从句）    ②When I am down, it cheers me up.（when引导的时间状语从句）    ③Her music is meaningful and inspires me.（and连接的并列结构） 4．（24-25九年级上·山东淄博·期中）音乐在人们的日常生活中起着重要的作用。不同的人喜欢不同的音乐。你喜欢哪种音乐？你为什么喜欢这种音乐？听了这种音乐你有什么感受？请你以“My Favorite Music”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。 要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；词数不少于100词，文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与本人相关的信息。 My Favorite Music ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Favorite Music Music is important in my life, and my favorite kind is pop music. Pop music is lively and easy to sing along with. I often listen to it while doing homework or resting. It helps me relax and feel happy, especially when I’m tired or stressed. I like Taylor Swift best. Her songs always cheer me up after a long day. Whenever I hear them, I feel comforted and joyful. Sometimes I can’t help singing along. Pop music is like a close friend. It makes my life more colorful and brings me a lot of pleasure. 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是话题作文； 时态：一般现在时； 提示：结合话题谈谈自己喜欢的音乐类型、原因及感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇直接点明最喜欢的音乐类型； 第二步：简要说明喜欢的原因；描述听音乐时的感受； 第三步：总结升华。 [亮点词汇] ①help sb relax帮助某人放松 ②cheer sb. up使某人振作 ③like a close friend像一个亲密的朋友 [高分句型] It helps me relax and feel happy, especially when I’m tired or stressed.（when引导的时间状语从句） 5．（24-25九年级上·辽宁抚顺·期末）音乐在我们的生活中起着十分重要的作用。请根据以下提示，以“The Role of Music”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容提示： （1）音乐可以让我们放松身心，帮助我们缓解压力。 （2）音乐可以振奋并鼓舞人心。 （3）音乐可以抚慰我们的心灵，帮助我们走出困境。 （4）音乐可以帮助我们更好地了解不同的文化。 要求： （1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。 The Role of Music ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Role of Music Music plays an important role in our lives. First, it can make us feel completely relaxed, and help reduce our pressure at work or in our lives. Second, music can cheer us up whenever we are in trouble or feel sad. What’s more, music has a comforting effect when we are worried and helps us step out of difficulty. In addition, music can be of great help in learning different cultures. In a word, music is part of our lives. We can’t live a happy life without music. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“音乐在我们生活中起着重要作用”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述音乐的作用。 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important role in在某方面起重要作用 ②make sb. do sth.使某人做某事 ③cheer sb. up使某人振作 [高分句型] What’s more, music has a comforting effect when we are worried and helps us step out of difficulty. (when引导时间状语从句) 6．（23-24九年级上·四川自贡·期末）同学们进入九年级学习后，压力可能会越来越大。听音乐是缓解压力最好的方式之一。在英语口语课上，老师让大家介绍自己最喜欢的音乐类型及最喜欢的一首歌。请你根据下面的内容提示，准备一篇80词左右的发言稿。 要点提示： 1. 你最喜欢的音乐类型及理由； 2. 介绍你最喜欢的一首歌； 3. 这首歌带给你的感受； 4. 你向大家推荐这首歌的理由。 写作要求： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥； 3. 不得使用真实姓名和校名等； 4. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总字数。 Good morning, my dear teachers and friends. It’s my honor to speak here, and today I want to talk about my favorite music and song. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【答案】 Good morning, my dear teachers and friends. It’s my honor to speak here, and today I want to talk about my favorite music and song. I like pop music best. You know, pop music is really cool. It usually has great beats and easy-to-remember words. When I listen to it, I just can’t help moving my body with the music. It makes me feel relaxed and happy. My favorite song is You Raise Me Up. It’s so amazing! Every time I feel tired or sad because of too much schoolwork, I will play this song. As soon as the music starts, it seems that all my bad feelings fly away. I recommend this song to you. It can really cheer you up when you’re in a bad mood. And it might become your favorite song too! That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：通篇采用“一般现在时”； ③提示：紧扣主题，包含诸多要点，详细阐述喜欢的音乐类型及歌曲，描述音乐特点、听歌给自己带来的影响等，推荐歌曲，突出流行音乐及特定歌曲对自己的重要意义与独特魅力。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明写作意图； 第二步，详细介绍基本信息。先是点明喜好对象——流行音乐，描述其特点 ，讲述在学习疲惫、心情低落时听这首歌的感受，歌曲给自己排忧解难； 第三步，向听众推荐歌曲、强调歌曲振作人心的作用，总结升华这首歌的价值。 [亮点词汇] ①like…best最喜欢； ②can’t help doing忍不住做……； ③because of因为； ④recommend推荐。 [高分句型] ①As soon as the music starts, it seems that all my bad feelings fly away. (as soon as引导时间状语从句) 7．（24-25九年级上·湖南长沙·期末）音乐是一杯清茶，沁人心脾；音乐是一缕阳光，暖人心魂。某英文论坛以“音乐和我”为主题向大家征帖，作为一个音乐迷的你看到了也跃跃欲试。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，分享音乐给你带来了什么，并向大家推荐你最喜欢的歌曲。 要求： 1.内容须包含提示中的要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺； 3. 词数80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I have been a music fan since I was a little girl. Over the years, music has brought so many beautiful things into my life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 I have been a music fan since I was a little girl. Over the years, music has brought so many beautiful things into my life. Music gives me energy. When I’m tired or stressed, a piece of lively music can make me refreshed and full of power. My favorite song is “You Raise Me Up” by Westlife. I like it because its lyrics are touching and the melody is beautiful. The singer’s voice is also very charming. It always makes me feel warm and encouraged whenever I listen to it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，作者讲述了自己对音乐的热爱。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③主题：作者分享了音乐在其生活中的重要性以及最喜欢的歌曲。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇表明自己是音乐迷以及音乐给自己带来美好。 第二步，阐述音乐能给自己带来能量。 第三步，介绍最喜欢的歌曲及喜欢的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①refresh使恢复精力 ②touching动人的 ③charming迷人的 ④encouraged受到鼓舞的 [高分句型] ①I have been a music fan since I was a little girl.（since引导的时间状语从句） ②When I’m tired or stressed, a piece of lively music can make me refreshed and full of power.（when引导的时间状语从句） ③I like it because its lyrics are touching and the melody is beautiful.（because引导的原因状语从句） 8．（24-25九年级上·山东济南·期中）学校英文杂志社正在举办征文活动，请你介绍你最喜欢的音乐类型。 内容包括： 1. 你最喜欢的音乐类型 （列举一项）。 2. 分享你和这种类型音乐之间发生的故事：如这种音乐曾对你有帮助和影响等。 3. 你想要和谁分享这种音乐以及简要说明原因。 参考词汇：乡村音乐country music; 流行音乐pop music; 摇滚音乐rock and roll music; 古典音乐classical music ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 I like music and I think most people like it as much as I do. Personally, I like many kinds of music, such as country music, pop music, rock-and-roll, classical music and so on. But my favorite music is classic music. For some people, they find classical music boring. However, I think classical music is beautiful and it can make me inspired. Every time I feel upset or anxious, classical music helps me calm down. Besides, it makes my life more colourful and gives me a lot of entertainment. Most importantly, it makes me relaxed. I’d like to share this kind of music with my mother. The reason is that she is a music lover. She is busy with her work all day. I think if she listens to some classical music after she gets back home, she will feel more relaxed. In a word, music plays an important role in my life. I love music. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别从你最喜欢的音乐类型是什么、这种音乐曾对你有帮助和影响等以及你想要和谁分享这种音乐等方面介绍你最喜欢的音乐类型。 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①many kinds of多种…… ②share sth with sb与某人分享某物 ③be busy with忙于 ④play an important role in在……起重要作用 [高分句型] ①Every time I feel upset or anxious, classic music helps me calm down. (Every time引导的时间状语从句) ②The reason is that she is a music lover. (表语从句) 9．（25-26九年级上·江西赣州·阶段检测）音乐有益身心, 它能让我们放松, 也能激发我们的热情。学校校刊英语专栏以“The Music I Like the Most”为题向学生征文。请你根据下列提示写一篇短文投稿, 介绍你最喜欢的音乐类型及最喜欢的一首歌。 写作要点: 1. What’s your favorite kind of music and why? 2. What’s your favorite music and why? 3. How does this music make you feel? 写作要求: 1. 短文应包括所有写作要点, 条理清晰, 行文连贯, 可适当发挥; 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息; 3. 短文不少于80词。 The Music I Like the Most __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Music I Like the Most Music plays an important role in my life. My favorite kind of music is pop music because it is lively and easy to understand. Among all the songs, I like “Yesterday Once More”best. The melody is beautiful and the lyrics are meaningful. Whenever I feel stressed or tired, listening to this song makes me feel relaxed and peaceful. It not only brings me joy but also gives me courage to face difficulties. I think music is like a friend who always stays with me. I hope everyone can find their favorite music and enjoy life. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文 时态：一般现在时为主（介绍喜好、感受） 明确要点：音乐的重要地位；介绍喜欢的音乐类型、最喜欢的歌曲以及歌曲特色；叙述歌曲带给自己的作用，并升华对音乐的理解 确定人称：第一人称I 注意事项：包括所有写作要点；不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；不少于80词。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起，点明音乐在我的生活里十分重要 主体段：介绍喜爱的音乐类型、最喜欢的歌曲，描写歌曲特点，讲述听歌带给自己的感受与力量 结尾段：升华主题，把音乐比作挚友，表达祝愿 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：总述音乐的重要地位 Music plays an important role in my life./Music makes a great difference to my life. 要点二：介绍喜欢的音乐类型、最喜欢的歌曲以及歌曲特色 类型：My favorite kind of music is pop music because it is lively and easy to understand./Pop music is my favourite. It is full of energy and simple to follow. 歌曲：Among all the songs, I like “Yesterday Once More” best./Of all the songs, “Yesterday Once More” is my favourite. 特色：The melody is beautiful and the lyrics are meaningful./It has wonderful tunes and thoughtful words. 要点三：叙述歌曲带给自己的作用，并升华对音乐的理解 作用：Whenever I feel stressed or tired, listening to this song makes me feel relaxed and peaceful./When I am under pressure or worn out, this song calms me down and helps me feel at ease. It not only brings me joy but also gives me courage to face difficulties./It brings happiness to me. What’s more, it encourages me to deal with problems. 理解：I think music is like a friend who always stays with me./To me, music is just like a faithful friend accompanying me all the time. I hope everyone can find their favorite music and enjoy life./I wish everyone could discover their favourite music and live a wonderful life. 10．（25-26九年级上·福建厦门·阶段检测）假设你是李华，最近你收到了朋友David的来信，他在信中说自己对中国的流行音乐很感兴趣，想让你给他介绍你最喜欢的一首歌。请你给David写一封80词左右的回信。 Dear Li Hua, How are you? I hope everything is going well with you. I’m writing to ask you something about Chinese pop music because I’m really interested in it. Please tell me about your favorite Chinese song, the singer of the song, the reason why you like it and how you feel when you listen to it. Could you please write back soon? Yours, David 要求： 1. 针对David的问题，从歌曲、歌手、原因、感受四个方面给出回复; 2. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 Dear David, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear David, I’m glad to hear you’re interested in Chinese pop music. My favorite song is “Qing Hua Ci” by Jay Chou. It’s a beautiful Chinese-style song that combines modern music with traditional poetic lyrics. I like it because the melody is soothing and the lyrics paint vivid pictures of classic Chinese scenery. Whenever I listen to it, I feel relaxed and inspired, as if I’m traveling through ancient China. I hope you’ll enjoy it too! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态主要使用“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括歌曲、歌手、喜欢的原因以及听歌时的感受。考生需确保不遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节以丰富内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。通过“I’m glad to hear you’re interested in Chinese pop music.”表达得知朋友对中国流行音乐感兴趣的高兴心情，并引出要介绍的歌曲； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从歌曲（“Qing Hua Ci”）、歌手（Jay Chou）、原因（melody is soothing and the lyrics paint vivid pictures of classic Chinese scenery）以及感受（feel relaxed and inspired）四个方面详细介绍了这首歌曲； 第三步，书写结语。通过“I hope you’ll enjoy it too!”表达希望朋友也能喜欢这首歌的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①combine...with...将……与……结合 ②soothing舒缓的 ③paint vivid pictures of生动描绘……的画面 [高分句型] ①It’s a beautiful Chinese-style song that combines modern music with traditional poetic lyrics.（“that”引导的定语从句） ②Whenever I listen to it, I feel relaxed and inspired, as if I’m traveling through ancient China.（“Whenever”引导的时间状语从句） $Unit 7 Feel the Rhythm.音乐与人生 单元写作精练 【写作主题】 本单元的话题是“音乐”，与此相关的写作任务是介绍一首歌曲或一种乐器，也可以介绍一位著名的音乐家。写作歌曲或乐器时，首先要介绍自己是如何与该歌曲或乐器结缘的，然后介绍该歌曲或乐器是如何对自己产生影响的，最后总结其对自己的积极意义；写作时，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。写著名的音乐家首先对其作出总体评价，然后介绍其生平求学经历及音乐贡献，最后介绍其对当今社会的影响；写作时，时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。 [教材典句] Frederic Chopin (1810-1849)was one of the greatest musicians in history. I spent the next several months learning to play the guitar. Chopin was not only a great pianist,but also a respected piano teacher. ...that's why I liked Butterfly Lovers more. 【词汇积累】 词汇积累 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 ① music n. 音乐 ② musician n. 音乐家 ③ instrument n. 乐器 ④ melody n. 旋律 ⑤ lyric n. 歌词 ⑥ concert n. 音乐会 ⑦ piano n. 钢琴 ⑧ violin n. 小提琴 ⑨ folk adj. 民间的 ⑩ classical adj. 古典的 ⑪ encourage v. 鼓励 ⑫ relax v.（使）放松 ⑬ comfort n. & v. 安慰 ⑭ patience n. 耐心 ⑮ spirit n. 精神 ⑯ emotion n. 情感 ⑰ memorable adj. 难忘的 ⑱ creative adj. 富有创造力的 ⑲ treasure n. 珍宝；宝贵之物 ⑳ inspiration n. 灵感 短语积累 ① fall in love with music 爱上音乐 ② play a musical instrument 演奏乐器 ③ classical music 古典音乐 ④ folk music 民间音乐 ⑤ light music 轻音乐 ⑥ cheer sb. up 使某人振作起来 ⑦ relieve pressure 缓解压力 ⑧ touch one’s heart 触动心灵 ⑨ go through hard times 度过艰难时光 ⑩ learn from the musician 向音乐家学习 ⑪ bring sb. warmth 带给某人温暖 ⑫ express personal feelings 抒发个人情感 ⑬ a source of inspiration 灵感的源泉 ⑭ stick to one’s dream 坚守梦想 ⑮ lift one’s spirits 振奋心情 【句式积累】 开头句 ① Music has always been an important part of my daily life.（音乐一直是我日常生活中重要的一部分。） ② There is one special song that greatly influences my way of life.（有一首特别的歌曲深深影响了我的生活态度。） ③ I first fell in love with the guitar when I watched a live music show years ago.（多年前观看一场现场演出时，我初次爱上吉他。） ④ Andrea Bocelli is one of the musicians that I admire most.（安德烈・波切利是我最敬佩的音乐家之一。） ⑤ Whenever I feel upset, a special piece of music can change my mood quickly.（每当我情绪低落，一首乐曲总能迅速改变我的心情。） 中间句 ① I heard this song for the first time when I failed an important exam.（我第一次听见这首歌，是在一次重要考试失利之后。） ② Learning to play this instrument was difficult, and I once planned to give it up.（学习演奏这件乐器并不轻松，我曾经打算放弃。） ③ Its beautiful melody and warm lyrics comfort me whenever I meet difficulties.（每当我遭遇困境，它优美的旋律和温暖的歌词都会抚慰我。） ④ The musician kept chasing his music dream in spite of huge difficulties.（这位音乐家直面重重磨难，始终追逐音乐梦想。） ⑤ Music helps me forget worries and face everything in a positive way.（音乐帮我忘却烦恼，以积极心态面对一切。） ⑥ It teaches me that I need patience and courage when things go wrong.（它教会我，身处逆境时需要耐心与勇气。） ⑦ This song tells us never to lose hope no matter what trouble we meet.（这首歌告诉我们，无论遭遇什么困境，永远不要失去希望。） ⑧ Different kinds of music carry different feelings and traditional culture.（不同类型的音乐承载着不同的情感与传统文化。） ⑨ Music is a special language, and people can understand it without any words.（音乐是独特的语言，无需言语，人们便能产生共鸣。） ⑩ I often listen to music to relax myself after busy schoolwork.（繁忙的课业结束后，我常常聆听音乐放松自己。） 结尾句 ① This song will stay with me and keep guiding me to move forward.（这首歌会一直陪伴我，不断指引我奋力前行。） ② Music brings joy to my life and gives me courage to face all challenges.（音乐为我的生活增添欢乐，给予我直面挑战的勇气。） ③ I will keep enjoying music and let it light up my whole life.（我会持续热爱音乐，让音乐照亮我的整个人生。） ④ The spirit of the musician encourages me to hold on to my own dream.（这位音乐家身上的精神激励我坚守属于自己的梦想。） ⑤ I believe life would become boring without wonderful music.（我坚信，如果没有美妙的音乐，生活将会枯燥乏味。） 【谚语名句】 ① Where words fail, music speaks. 言语无法诉说之处，音乐娓娓道来。—— 安徒生 ② Life without music is a mistake. 没有音乐的人生，是一种缺憾。—— 尼采 ③ Music is the language of the soul. 音乐是灵魂的语言。—— 古希腊谚语 ④ Music washes away the dust of everyday life. 音乐洗去日常生活蒙上的尘埃。—— 奥尔巴赫 ⑤ He who loves music will never feel lonely. 心怀音乐之人，永远不会孤独。—— 德国古谚语 【原题呈现】 （25-26九年级上·江西九江·期末）音乐将世间万物带进了美好的时空，它在我们的日常生活中扮演着重要的角色，每听到音乐，我们就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。你校英语俱乐部在下周的主题例会上会对喜欢的音乐进行讨论，作为俱乐部成员，请你根据下面的提示写一篇文章和大家分享。 1. 要点提示： (1) What kinds of music do you like? And why? (描述三种不同类型的音乐及原因) (2 )Which do you like best and what have you got from it? (3) As a middle school student, are you supposed to listen to music in your spare time? What are your opinions and the reasons? 2. 写作要求： (1) 短文要包含所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； (2) 文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校； (3) 字数80-120。 My Favourite Music _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意]    确定文体：介绍性记叙文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：描述三种音乐及原因、说明最喜爱的音乐及收获并阐述中学生课余听音乐的观点与理由 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校        [第二步：构思布局]    三段式结构：    开头段：总起句点明音乐在生活中的重要性，引出下文 主体段：依次介绍三种音乐及原因、最喜欢的音乐及收获、对中学生在课余听音乐的看法与理由 结尾段：总结音乐的作用，发出合理享受音乐的倡议，升华主题  【范文欣赏】 My Favourite Music Music plays an important role in my life. I like pop music because it is lively. I also enjoy classical music which makes me calm. Besides, folk music tells beautiful stories. Among them, I like pop music best. It encourages me when I am down. As a middle school student, I think we should listen to music in spare time. It helps us relax after studying hard. However, we shouldn’t listen too loudly or too long. Music makes life colorful. Let’s enjoy music properly. 【亮点解析】 要点一：三种不同类型的音乐及原因 音乐选择：pop music/classical music/folk music/country music等 具体原因：lively/makes me calm/tells beautiful stories/happy等 要点二：最喜欢的音乐及收获 选择：pop music/country music等 收获：encourages me when I am down/makes me confident等 要点三：中学生课余听音乐的观点与理由 观点：listen to music in spare time/listen properly等 理由：helps relax after studying/shouldn’t listen too loudly or too long/balance listening to music and study properly等    【基础必做】 1.教材原句：I prefer musicians who can write their own songs, like ... 仿写：我更喜欢能打动我内心的音乐。 ________________________________________________________________ 2.教材原句：It really gave me the feeling of a horse race. 仿写：每当我听到那段旋律，它就会唤起我心中的平静。 ________________________________________________________________ 3.教材原句：What kind of music do you like listening to while travelling/exercising/relaxing/...? 仿写：你最喜欢哪种乐器？为什么？ ________________________________________________________________ 4.教材原句：Music makes me happy when I am feeling sad, and it relaxes me when I am stressed. 仿写：学习弹钢琴让我在面对挑战时更加耐心和专注。 ________________________________________________________________ 5.I listen to light music while I study. It helps me concentrate better and improve my memory.（使用分词结构合并句子） ________________________________________________________________ 6.I went on stage. I felt confident and calm.（使用非谓语动词升格） ________________________________________________________________ 【提升必做】 1．（24-25九年级上·山西朔州·期末）音乐不仅能够给人们带来好的享受，还能在一定程度上疏解压力。假如你是Mike，校报正在进行有关音乐方面的征文稿，请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文，向校报投稿。 melody n. 旋律 build up confidence建立自信 purify one’s soul净化心灵 内容包括： ●What kind of music do you like? ●One experience where music helped you. ●Why do you like music? 要求： 1. 词数不少于80词； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（24-25九年级上·安徽六安·期末）众所周知, 音乐是我们生活中不可或缺的一部分。请根据下面提示，结合自己的生活实际，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你眼中的音乐。 1. What kind of music do you like? 2. What does music bring to you in your life? 3. What do you think of music? 要求： 1. 短文必须包括以上提示的所有要点，并适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 100词左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（24-25九年级上·重庆永川·期末）音乐让人轻松，让人愉悦，它给你带来什么样的影响和感受呢？请以“Music in My Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容提示： 1.对音乐的认识和感受； (many kinds of music: country music, electronic music...; I think...like a magical language/my best friend...; make me feel happy/relaxed...) 2.音乐的作用和影响； (be down, cheer me up; be happy, dance to; be working hard, give me the energy to keep going; also a great way for me to learn about different cultures and make new friends...) 3. 喜欢的歌手或音乐家（国籍、音乐风格，喜欢的原因）； (One of my favorite musicians...; be from; be good at; his/her music is...) 4.其它补充。 要求：1. 80—120词； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（24-25九年级上·山东淄博·期中）音乐在人们的日常生活中起着重要的作用。不同的人喜欢不同的音乐。你喜欢哪种音乐？你为什么喜欢这种音乐？听了这种音乐你有什么感受？请你以“My Favorite Music”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。 要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；词数不少于100词，文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与本人相关的信息。 My Favorite Music ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（24-25九年级上·辽宁抚顺·期末）音乐在我们的生活中起着十分重要的作用。请根据以下提示，以“The Role of Music”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容提示： （1）音乐可以让我们放松身心，帮助我们缓解压力。 （2）音乐可以振奋并鼓舞人心。 （3）音乐可以抚慰我们的心灵，帮助我们走出困境。 （4）音乐可以帮助我们更好地了解不同的文化。 要求： （1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。 The Role of Music ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（23-24九年级上·四川自贡·期末）同学们进入九年级学习后，压力可能会越来越大。听音乐是缓解压力最好的方式之一。在英语口语课上，老师让大家介绍自己最喜欢的音乐类型及最喜欢的一首歌。请你根据下面的内容提示，准备一篇80词左右的发言稿。 要点提示： 1. 你最喜欢的音乐类型及理由； 2. 介绍你最喜欢的一首歌； 3. 这首歌带给你的感受； 4. 你向大家推荐这首歌的理由。 写作要求： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥； 3. 不得使用真实姓名和校名等； 4. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总字数。 Good morning, my dear teachers and friends. It’s my honor to speak here, and today I want to talk about my favorite music and song. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening. 7．（24-25九年级上·湖南长沙·期末）音乐是一杯清茶，沁人心脾；音乐是一缕阳光，暖人心魂。某英文论坛以“音乐和我”为主题向大家征帖，作为一个音乐迷的你看到了也跃跃欲试。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，分享音乐给你带来了什么，并向大家推荐你最喜欢的歌曲。 要求： 1.内容须包含提示中的要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺； 3. 词数80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I have been a music fan since I was a little girl. Over the years, music has brought so many beautiful things into my life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（24-25九年级上·山东济南·期中）学校英文杂志社正在举办征文活动，请你介绍你最喜欢的音乐类型。 内容包括： 1. 你最喜欢的音乐类型 （列举一项）。 2. 分享你和这种类型音乐之间发生的故事：如这种音乐曾对你有帮助和影响等。 3. 你想要和谁分享这种音乐以及简要说明原因。 参考词汇：乡村音乐country music; 流行音乐pop music; 摇滚音乐rock and roll music; 古典音乐classical music ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（25-26九年级上·江西赣州·阶段检测）音乐有益身心, 它能让我们放松, 也能激发我们的热情。学校校刊英语专栏以“The Music I Like the Most”为题向学生征文。请你根据下列提示写一篇短文投稿, 介绍你最喜欢的音乐类型及最喜欢的一首歌。 写作要点: 1. What’s your favorite kind of music and why? 2. What’s your favorite music and why? 3. How does this music make you feel? 写作要求: 1. 短文应包括所有写作要点, 条理清晰, 行文连贯, 可适当发挥; 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息; 3. 短文不少于80词。 The Music I Like the Most __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（25-26九年级上·福建厦门·阶段检测）假设你是李华，最近你收到了朋友David的来信，他在信中说自己对中国的流行音乐很感兴趣，想让你给他介绍你最喜欢的一首歌。请你给David写一封80词左右的回信。 Dear Li Hua, How are you? I hope everything is going well with you. I’m writing to ask you something about Chinese pop music because I’m really interested in it. Please tell me about your favorite Chinese song, the singer of the song, the reason why you like it and how you feel when you listen to it. Could you please write back soon? Yours, David 要求： 1. 针对David的问题，从歌曲、歌手、原因、感受四个方面给出回复; 2. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 Dear David, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua $